2025年高考英语总复习分项汇编：短文改错（学生卷）

专题25短文改错

2023年短文改错

Text1

【2023年全国乙卷】LastFridaymymomdecidedtocolorhishair.Shestudiedwithallthehairproductsatthe

drugstore.Thecolorshechoosecameinaboxwhichhadapictureofawomanthathaircolorlookedjustperfect.

Momwassuresamecolorwouldlookgreatonher.Sheputthenewcoloronherhairorsatstillfor30minutes,justas

thedirectionssaying.However,insteadofthebrownishredhairshehadhopedfor,shefinalgotpurplehair.Shewent

rightintotheshowertowashingit,butitwasnouse.Atleastonethingprovedtruth:thecolorwouldn'twashout.

Test2

[2023年全国甲卷】Iusedtoafraidofinsects,butlastFriday5sbiologyclassmakeabigchangeinme.Inthat

class,MissZhao,ourbiologyteacher,showedweinsectsonstamps.Thebees,butterflyandmanyotherinsects

lookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthestamps.MissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirliving

habits.Sheevenplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsinging,whatwasfun.Now,I'vecometolovethoseofsmallliving

things.Intheevening,whenItakethewalkintheschoolgarden,thesingingofinsectsbecomemoremeaningfulto

me.

2022年短文改错

Test1

【2022年全国乙卷]Weallknowthatcyclingisagreatlyexercise.Adoctortellsmepeoplewholivesthelongestare

dancersandcyclists.Maybeitisbecausethecombinationoffreshair,smoothmovementandexercise.Whetheryou

rideabicycle,youdon'tusepetrol.Sotheyarenotproducingcarbondioxideandnotcauseairpollution.Justseehow

carshavebeentakenoverourcities.Theyoftenrunathighspeeds,whatmayputourlivesindanger.Andtherewere

trafficjams,too.Ourcitieswillbebetterplacesifwereplacecarswithbicycle.

Test2

【2022年全国甲卷】MyfatheroftentookmetohishospitalwhenIwasoffmyschool.Heshowedmehowhis

medicalinstrumentswasused.Ifeltsocloselytohim.However,afterIwenttohighschool,somehowIbecome

distantfromhim.Iwasunwillingtalkwithhimandoftendisobeyedhisruleofnotstayoutwithmyfriendstoolate.

ThedisagreementwastoosharpthatneitherhenorIknewwhattosettleit.Oneday,hetalkedwithmeorhopedto

mendourrelations.Withtheeffortsmadebyallsides,webegantounderstandeachotherbetter.

2021年短文改错

Test1

[2021年全国甲卷】Lastweekourteacheraskedustofillinaquestionnaire.Oneofthequestionsare：Who

willyougointimesoftrouble?Herearetheresults.Manystudentssaytheywilltalktotheirfriendorclassmates

becausethey'reofthesameageandcanunderstandeachother.Somewillturnouttotheirparentsorteachersfor

help.Onlyalittlechoosetodealwiththeproblemsonourown.Theiranswersalsoshowthattheydisliketalkto

others.Theykeptverymuchtothemselves.Inmyopinion,whereintrouble,weshouldseekhelpfromthosewe

trustmostly.

Test2

[2021年全国乙卷】Ilovedoinghousework.Ialwaysassistmyparentsindoingthedishaftermeals.Ialso

watertheflowersintheyardandtidyingupmyownbedroomwhatevernecessary.Inmyopinion,studentscan

benefitalotdoingsomehousework.Firstly,doinghouseworkwashelpfulforustobearesponsibleperson.Also,it

givesourparentsmoretimetodowhattheyarelikeanditimprovesthefamilyrelationship.Whafsmost,doing

houseworkcanbeaformofmentallyrelaxationfromstudy.Thafsourviewonhousework.Andhopesthiscan

inspiremorethinkingonthetopic!

2020年短文改错

Text1

【2020年新课标I]TodayItriedcookingasimplydishmyself.Ilikeeatingfryingtomatoeswitheggs,andI

thoughtitmusttobeeasytocook.Mymomtoldmehowtopreparingit.FirstIcutthetomatoesintopiecesbutput

themaside.NextIbroketheeggsintoabowlandbeatthemquicklywithchopstick.AfterthatIpouredoilintoa

panandturnedoffthestove,Iwaitedpatientlyunlesstheoilwashot.ThenIputthetomatoesandthebeaten

eggsintopantogether."Notthatway,"mymomtriedtostopusbutfailed.Shewasright.Itdidn'tturn

outasIhadwished.

Test2

[2020年新课标II]Thankyouforyourletter,whatreallymademehappy.Tmgladtoknowthatyou've

comeChinatolearnkungfuinaschoolinmyhometown.Tmsurelyyou'llhaveagoodtime.Actually,Istartto

learnkungfuwhenIwassevenyearsold,forIhavelongbeenoutofpractice.Luckily,Iwillgohomeintwo

weeksforsummervacations.ThenIcansparesometimetolearnitagain,suchthatwecanpracticetogetheron

everyday.BestofluckwithyourslearningkungfuinChina.Seeyousooner.

Test3

【2020年新课标HI]Mymomisreallyconcerningwiththehealthofeveryoneinourfamilies.Inorderto

makesurelyallofusareingoodhealth,andshemakesspecificplansforus.Forexample,everymorning,mydad

hastohavethebowlofeggsoupwhileIhadtoeatanapple.Mydaddon?tlikethesoupandIdon'tenjoyapples.I

tellmymomthatifwe'reforcedeatthings,wemaybecomeill.

Butheinsistsonuseatinghealthyfood.Understandinghergoodintentions,Ieatallthefoodwhatisprovided

byMomwithappreciation.

2019年短文改错

Text1

【2019年全国卷IIIbecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.Oneafternoonwhere

Iwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmost

hitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryone'ssurprising,theballwentintothe

net.Allthefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromnowon,I

startedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.

Text2

【2019年全国卷II】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:L每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

SinceIwasakid,I'veconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniform

lookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthefivegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoo

much.WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmggoalordecidedtobeadoctor.Theyweretwo

reasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasamazingatthefactthatasickpersoncouldfeelmuchmorebetterafter

seeingadoctor.AndtheotheristhatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.

Test3

[2019年全国卷HI]Onourwaytothehouse,itwasraining61hardthatwecouldn'thelpwondering

howlongitwouldtake62(get)there.ItwasinthemiddleofPearlCity.

Wewerefirstgreetedwiththebarkingbyapack63dogs,seventobeexact.Theywerewelltrainedby

theirmasters64hadgreatexperiencewithcaringfortheseanimals.Ourhostssharedmanyoftheir

experiencesand65(recommend)wonderfulplacestoeat,shop,andvisit.Forbreakfast,wewereabletoeat

papaya(木瓜)andotherfruitsfromtheirtreesinthebackyard.

Whentheywerefreefromwork,theyinvitedustolocaleventsandletusknowofaninteresting

66(compete)towatch,togetherwiththestorybehindit.Theyalsosharedwithusmany

67(tradition)storiesaboutHawaiithatwere68(huge)popularwithtourists.Onthelastdayofour

week-longstay,we69(invite)toattendaprivateconcertonabeautifulfarmontheNorthShoreunderthestars,

70(listen)tomusiciansandmeetinginterestinglocals.

Test4

【2019年全国卷in】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I*vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,it

requiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafe

haveaspecialthemesuchaslike"TangDynasty".Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistorical

environmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesin

manydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.

2018年短文改错

Test1

[2018年全国I卷】Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmy

grandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,

ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensof

chicken.Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotby

sellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendof

ourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.

Afind

Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwentto-----countrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.I

thefound

another

abigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,and

other

herechicken

animals.LastwinterwhenIwent-------again,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensof-------------.They

therechickens

/\which

alsohadasmallpond—或------theyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotby

inwhere

sellhappily

----------thefish.Ifeltthattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplanned

selling-------------------happy

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toreturnICH^everytwoyears,-----heagreed,

and

Test2

【2018年全国口卷】WhenIwaslittle,Friday'snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycard

gamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedto

watchingthem,myparentswouldnottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.

Still1unwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn'trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntil1enteredhigh

school.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.

Test3

团2018团全国III卷回ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittosee

whowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartin

theclassactivity,otherswerenervousandanxious.IhaddonemyselfhomeworkbutIwasshy.Iwasafraidthatto

speakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,"The

classroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludeleaningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell,"Immediate,Iraised

myhand.

2017年短文改错

Test1

[2017年新课标I卷】Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istill

rememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor'sorders,so

onceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeating

theword,”Speedup!"”Slowdown!”"Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytell

whichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoa

suddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.

Test2

[2017年新课标II卷】Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakes

themaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetables

intheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.

Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.

Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!

Test3

【2017年新课标HI卷】WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnot

onlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmy

secondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethe

thingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudying

differencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoften

bringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.

2016年短文改错

Test1

【2016年新课标I卷】MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,butthe

restaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowait

outside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesor

highqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.

Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

Test2

[2016年新课标II卷]Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringthe

holiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisno

needtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroaden

yourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterest

nearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.

Test3

[2016年新课标HI卷】Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealso

thebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.

However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,I

evenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwas

independentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstill

wanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.

Test4

[2016年浙江卷]WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwell

yearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we'dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasand

pretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandthey

wouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthe

fridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingus

there.

Test5

[2016年四川卷】ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughifsawesternfestival,ifspopularinChinanow.

Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorI

plannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwent

onshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroom

andIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom'sfavoritiest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,"Happy

Mother'sDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.

2015年短文改错

Test1

[2015年新课标I卷】WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowI

amlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.

Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshave

beenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgetting

dirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailto

doso,we'lllivetoregretit.

Test2

[2015年新课标II卷】Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.

Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthe

toyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.

Awomansawhimdryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,

“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried."Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappen

again.

Test3

【2015年浙江卷】

Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsit

closetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.

Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.

Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnot

enjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethe

driversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfI

wasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.

Test4

【2015年陕西卷】Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathis

retirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtme

somebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.My

onlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.

Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,"Imighthave

toretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits."

Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!

Test5

【2015年四川卷】Hi,Janice,

It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhave

beenexperiencing.

AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.

We*vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It*sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.

AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'mafraidI'lllosetheir

friendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?

Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.

2014年短文改错

Test1

[2014年新课标I卷】Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplanted

Somecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden.Sincethen-foralltheseyears-we

hadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsare

growingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuch

thatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrow

inthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattack

problems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!

Test2

[2014年新课标II卷】Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsin

themorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretime

withafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehour

everyday.

Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroom

buildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindand

helpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

Test3

【2014年大纲卷（广西卷）】

Allofusneedfriendship.Theunderstanding76,

betweentwofriendsmeanbothofthemhavesimilar77..

ideasandtrustingeachother.Otherwise,itis78..

impossibleforhimtohelpe