动作描写 读后续写 课件-高三英语一轮复习

别有“动添”

立足教材

聚焦主题ContinuationWriting

SkillsfortheDescriptionofActions跟着教材来复习OurtextbooksharesbestUnit6人际关系类Li2024.11.25WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingAnvideoaboutaction

JiaBingiswaitingforShenTengwhoistheonlyhopeleftforhiscompany.BingwelcomesTengbygivinghimahug.WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingAnvideoaboutaction

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingHowtomakeyourwritingvividandattractive?

外貌（容貌、姿态、服饰、音调）神态（脸部五官表情和动作）

肢体动作描写

增加细节Toshow,nottotell1所见

3所听所说4所思所感2所做自然环境（天气、周围事物）人文环境（次要他人）描写

语言对话描写

心理内心情感活动描写where/whenwho/whatwhy/howWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingLearningObjectives

Bytheendoftheclass,wewillbeableto1.Reviewandsummarizesomeusefulskillstomakethedescriptionofactionsmorevividandexpressive；2.Applytheskillstopolishourownwriting；3.Learntocooperatewitheachotherandjoininclassactivitiestoimproveourselves.WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingPracticethemedinterpersonalrelationships

Atnoon,theclassroomwasemptywithnobodyaround.Johnny,alivelyandenergeticboy,wascompletelyoblivioustothestillnessashewasengrossedinplayingwithhisbasketball.Withacarefreespirit,hewasdashingandweavingthroughthedesksinarathercasualmanner,thebasketballbouncinginhishands.Suddenly,agreatclatterpiercedthroughthesilence.Johnnyfroze,hisheartskippingabeat.Panicfloodedhisfaceashequicklystoppedandlookeddown.Tohishorror,herealizedthathehadaccidentallyknockedofftheSally’siPodthathadbeensittingquietlyontheedgeofthetable.Ithadtumbleddowntothefloorwithasickeningthud.Withoutamoment'shesitation,hecroucheddown,hiseyeswidewithworry.HishandstrembledslightlyashereachedouttopickuptheiPod,fearingtheworst.Guiltcreptoverhimashethoughtabouthowirresponsiblehehadbeen.Theonce-cheerfulatmosphereofhissolobasketballgamehadnowbeenreplacedbyaheavysenseofdreadandremorse.Para1.Heexamineditclosely,hopingitwasn'tdamaged.Para2.However，muchtohissurprise,Sallywasnotannoyedatall.WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingObserveandcompare

Skill01葵花点穴，精准动作generalverbs→concreteverbsWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting1.Inanotherletter,FatherChristmascomplainedabouthowhecouldnotstophishelpersplayinggameswiththetoys.(B2U2)2.Shesurfaces,criesinfear,thendisappearsforever.(B2U6)3.Fromthatdayon,hefoughttoprotectsharks.Headmittedthathisbookwaswrongaboutsharks’behaviour.(B2U6)4.So,Ryanaskedhimself,“WhydosomeAfricanchildrenhavetowalktenkilometrestogetwatereveryday?”(B3U2)

5.“Itbringsintofocus.”Headded,“Thereareathousandreasonstoturnaroundandonlyonetokeepgoing.”(B3U5)6.WhenTwainrepliedthathedidn’t,thebarbertoldhimthatifhewantedtogototheeventhewouldhavetostand,astherewerenoseatsleftinthetheatre.(B4U1)Twain’sresponsewas,“That’sjustmyluck.Ialwayshavetostandwhenthatfellowlectures!”(B4U1)7.Themanwhisperedsomethinginthelion’sear,afterwhichthelionshookitsheadandwalkedawayunhappily.(B4U1)8.Lin’saudienceroaredwithlaughter.Withthislittlejoke,Linwasabletomakepeoplelaugh,whilegentlytellingoffthepresident.(B4U1)9.“Weregrettoinformyou...”(B4U2)10.Darwinexplainedthistheoryinhisbook,

OntheOriginofSpecies.(B4U5)11.Sittingbackinmyseat,Ican’tquitebelievethatI’mabouttotravelalongtherailwaythatmanyforeignexpertsclaimedwas“impossible”.(B4U6)12.Benlaterjokedthatthejobshouldhavebeenadvertisednotasthe“best”,butthe“busiestjobintheworld”!(B4U6)13.WhatIreallyadmireisthewayshehasacknowledgedthat......(B5U1)14."Poorwretch!"exclaimedEsmeralda,withanexpressionofheartfeltcompassion.(B5U1)15.Therelayintheaccentsoftheunfortunatemansosignificantanawarenessofhissadnessthatshehadnotthestrengthtoutterasyllable.(B5U1)16."Comeon,Robutt,"heshouted.Robutt,whocouldhearhimbyradio,squeakedandboundedafter.(B5U4)17.Carsonurgedpeopletomakethemselvesawareofthefactsanddosomethingaboutthesituation.(B5U6)18.Nevermind.Don'tcry.Iwillcatchhimagain.(Steppingtothefrontofthestageandaddressingtheaudience.)(B7U2)Different“says”fromtextbooks

Exercise

关键字关键字WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingcry/shout喊叫

exclaim惊叫roar咆哮whisper耳语

complain抱怨

telloff斥责大声说小声说带情绪的说reply/response回复说add补充说address致辞acknowledge承认

认可tell告诉说

inform通知说joke玩笑说admit承认utter费力地说

urge呼吁

要求claim宣布

声称explain解释说ask问道Replacetheunderlinedwords

关键字关键字1.“Help!Help!”Shesaid

.2.“I’msorry,”Hesaid,afraidtobeheardbyothers.3.“Theschoolplaywasahugesuccess,”theaudiencesaidwithlaughteratallthefunnybits.4.“It'snotfair,”she

said.5.Filledwithfury,Sheldonwasunabletosayasingleword.whisperedcried/shoutedroaredWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingcomplainedutterWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inCompletetheconversations

1.smile/grin/beamfromeartoear眉开眼笑；笑得合不拢嘴2.laughone’sheadoff大笑不止；狂笑不已3.beallsmiles=beveryhappy/friendly一脸笑意；喜滋滋的4.laughingstock笑柄；笑料5.crackasmile

露出笑脸Lead-inPresentingWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting①grineartoear②laughone’sheadoff③beallsmiles④laughingstock⑤crackasmile④laughingstock③beallsmiles①grineartoear⑤crackasmile②laughone’sheadoffMatchtheconcretemeaning

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting1.Iwokeupearlyandrushedoutofthedoorinmyeagernesstogettoknowmynewschool.(B1U1)2.WhenmyEnglishteachersteppedintotheclassroom,IwassurprisedtoseethesamemanIhadmetearlier.(B1U1)3.Iwasorganizingmywordsinmyheadwhenthegirlnexttomegavemeanudge.“It’syourturn!”(B1U1)4.HetoldusthatMaggiecouldn’tteachthatdayCOZshehadafroginherthroat.(B1U2)5.Son：(nervouslyapproachingthetable)Erm...Dad,canwetalk?(B1U3)6.Itwasmymother’sbirthdaytenyearsago,andIdecidedtosurpriseherwithhome-madescrambledeggs.Iwokeupreallyearlyandtiptoedtothekitchen.(B1U3)7.Youcouldn’thave

draggedJimmyoutof

NewYork;(B1U4)8.Slowly,andwiththecamerastillheldtomyeye,Iturned...andfroze.(B1U5)9.Withwaterfallingoffitsthick,brownhair,thebearstaredbackat

me.(B1U5)10.“Youneedn’ttryitifyoudon’twantto,”Mumsaid,butIgatheredallmycouragetotakeabiteandwasamazedtofinditwasn’tsobad.(B2U1)11.ScottFitzgerald’smostadmiredworkwillfindthemselves

gluedtotheirscreens

byepisodesofTheGreatGatsby.(B2U3)12.Jimmy,expertthoughhewas,couldn'toutraceRobutt,whodidn'tneedaspacesuit,andhadfourlegsandtendonsofsteel.Jimmycouldn'tgowrongwhileRobuttwasaround,trippinghimwhenhewastooneararock,or

jumpingonhimtoshowhowmuchhelovedhim,orcirclingaroundandsqueakinglowandscaredwhenJimmyhidbehindarock.whenallthetimeRobuttknewwellenoughwherehewas.(B5U4)13.Jimmyfrowned."Robuttisn'tanimitation,Dad."(B5U4)14.JimmyheldRobutttightly.(B5U4)15.AtaglanceIcandistinguishChinafromArizona.Ifonegetslostinthenight,suchknowledgeisvaluable.(B6U1)16.ThenTYLTYL

strokesthedoveshead.(B7U2)Concreteverbsfromtextbooks

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingYouact

,Iguess

generalwords(笼统词)concretewords（具体词）walktiptoe[ˈtɪptəʊ]

蹑手蹑脚地走runrushlookstare[steə(r)]

at

盯着WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingLet‘shaveagame---doandguess

generalwords(笼统词)concretewords（具体词）hug

holdsbtightlydisapprovefrownpushgivesbanudgeYouact

,Iguess

Youact

,Iguess

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingLet‘shaveagame---doandguess

generalwords(笼统词)concretewords（具体词）stopmovingfroze

watchataglancetouchstrokeYouact

,Iguess

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingObserveandcompare

Skill02化功大法，组合动作singleconcreteverb→concreteverbs’chainWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting1.AlistairrantowardsJonny,caughthimandstartedpullinghimtowardsthefinishline.(B1U3)2.Suddenly,sheispulledunderwater.Shesurfaces,criesinfear,thendisappearsforever.(B2U6)3.Treatedthisway,you’resuretofeelhurt.(B3U1)4.Approachedinthisway,yourfriendshipwillsoonberepaired.(B3U1)5.Takeadeepbreath,calmdown,andalwaysremember:thinkfirst,speaklater.(B3U1)6.Lookingthroughmynewspaper,I’mshockedbyphotosshowingthatahurricaneinAsiahasdestroyedatown.(B3U6)7.Once,havingbeeninvitedtodinneratauniversity,hewasputonthespotwhenthepresidentsuddenlyaskedhimtogiveaspeech.(B4U1)8.Inspiringotherstobelieveinthemselves,StephenCurryislivingproofthatwhatotherpeoplethinkofyoudoesnothavetoinfluencewhatyoubecome.(B4U3)9.Atlast,showingastrongwillandthesteeliestnerves,theyplayedaclosematchagainstSerbia.(B4U3)10.Sighingdeeply,hetoldmehowitwasbecomingdifficulttorunanindependentbookstore.(B5U3)11.Followinginthefootstepsofhisownteacherallthoseyearsago,MrWanghasnowpassedonhisskillstothenewmembers,whowilltakeonmanyofthefuturerepairs.(B6U2)12.Bothmenwerehappytowithdrawfromcontemporarylife,seekingaharmoniousrelationshipwithnatureinthequietnessoftheirlives.(B6U5)13.Havingsethimselfthisgoal,hewrotenovelsandshortstoriesbasedonhispersonalexperiencesoftheFirstWorldWar,theSpanishCivilWar,bullfightinganddeep-seafishing,amongstothers.(B7U1)14.IntriguedbyMayacivilisationfromaveryyoungage,15-year-oldCanadianWilliamGadourythoughthehadmadeanincrediblediscoveryfromhisstudyofancientstarcharts.(B7U5)15.Guidedbyacomputerthatwasmuchlesspowerfulthantheonesusedbytoday'saverageschoolstudents,allthreeastronautsoftheApollo11missionmadeitsafelybacktoEarth.(B7U6)Different“says”fromtextbooks

Concreteverbs’chainsfromtextbooks

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingObserveandcompareAlistairhelpedJonny.AlistairrantowardsJonny,caughthimandstartedpullinghimtowardsthefinishline.TheydefeatedSerbia.Atlast,showingastrongwillandthesteeliestnerves,theyplayedaclosematchagainstSerbiatoseizegoldinthefinal.Williamthoughthemadeadiscovery.IntriguedbyMayacivilisation,15-year-oldCanadianWilliamthoughthehadmadeanincrediblediscovery.Hewrotenovels.Havingsethimselfthisgoal,hewrotenovelsandshortstoriesbasedonhispersonalexperiences.sb+did(1),____________did(2)anddid(3)______,sb+diddoing

被/受到...，主语做某事

done

Havingdone_________,sb+did

依次发生的多个谓语动作并列做完某事以后，主语再做某事。主语做某事，同时伴随着做某事______,sb+did1234WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingObserveandcompare

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingMatchthepatterns

sb+did(1),____________did(2)anddid(3)______,sb+diddoing

被/受到...，主语做某事

done

Havingdone_________,sb+did

依次发生的多个谓语动作并列做完某事以后，主语再做某事。主语做某事，同时伴随着做某事______,sb+did1234听到荀彧的声音，曹操停止吃饭并且询问：“兖州出事了？”被曹操问话，荀彧鼓足勇气回复道：“正是。”在了解到兖州战败的消息以后，曹操

怒火中烧（getfurious）。曹操皱起眉头（frown），发出一声咆哮，并且甩出了他手里的碗。WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting1.听到荀彧的声音，曹操停止吃饭并且询问：“兖州出事了？”HearingXunYu'svoice,CaoCaostoppedeatingandasked，“IssomethingwronginYanzhou？”WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting2.被曹操问话，荀彧鼓足勇气回复道：“正是。”AskedbyCaoCao,XunYugatheredallhiscouragetoreply/response,“Yes/Exactly”.WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresenting3.在了解到兖州战败的消息以后，曹操怒火中烧（explodewithanger/getfurious）。HavinglearnedthebadnewsaboutYanzhou，CaoCaoexplodedwithanger/gotfurious.4.曹操皱起眉头（frown），发出一声咆哮(roar)，并且甩出了他手里的碗。CaoCaofrowned，letoutaroar，andthrewouthisbowlinhand.Let‘shaveagame---doandguess

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingObserveandcompare

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingObserveandcompare

CaoCaofrowned，letoutaroar，andthrewouthisbowlinhand.Withbutterfliesinhisstomach,CaoCaofrowned

immediately，letoutaroar，andthrewouthisbowlinhand.运用adv和with/in/to+n.等结构对动作进行修饰Skill03锦上添花，具化动作addadverbsandprepositionalphrasesWritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingAdverbsfromtextbooks

1.Whydon’tyoualsotakemyadviceandthinkc

(仔细地)beforejumpinginwithbothfeet?(B1U3)2.Tellhimd

(直接地)andh

(诚实地)thatyouweretalkingwithoutthinking.(B3U1)3.Sighingd

(深深地),hetoldmehowitwasbecomingdifficulttorunanindependentbookstore.(B5U3)4.Ispendhourseverydayeditingmyselfies,postingthemande

(渴望地)checkingmyphoneahundredtimesforcomments.(B6U1)5.Hewatchedheri

(专心地)whileshewasspeaking.(B6U1)6.IwenttothewoodsbecauseIwishedtolived

(刻意地),tofrontonlytheessentialfactsoflife.(B6U5)WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingPrepositionalphrasesfromtextbooks

1.Iwokeupearlyandrushedoutofthedoor

myeagernesstogettoknowmynewschool.(B1U1)2.Everyonestartedlaughing.Ilookedatthem

panic.(B1U1)3.Allovertheworldyoucanseekidsplaying

theirhearts’contentwithaballmadeofplasticbags;justlikePelédidwhenhewasaboy.(B2U3)4.Steppingoutofthestation

aheavyheart,Isuddenlyfeelafreshwindonmyface.(B2U6)5.Shelistenedtohim

profoundtenderness.(B6U1)WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingSummarize

WritingHomeworkSummaryLead-inPresentingPracticethemedinterpersonalrelationships

Atnoon,theclassroomwasemptywithnobodyaround.Johnny,alivelyandenergeticboy,wascompletelyoblivioustothestillnessashewasengrossedinplayingwithhisbasketball.Withacarefreespirit,hewasdashingandweavingthroughthedesksinarathercasualmanner,thebasketballbouncinginhishands.Suddenly,agreatclatterpiercedthroughthesilence.Johnn