高中英语写作技巧-上海新高考英语一轮总复习（解析版）

考点14高中英语写作技巧

课前热身练

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（2023春•上海•华师大二附中校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

现在城市里有很多家庭请家政服务(housekeepingservice),请你对此现象发表你的看法。内容必须包括:

团概述城市里有很多家庭请家政服务现象

团此现象对家庭和社会产生的影响

团你对此现象的看法

【答案】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmore

andmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.

Thisphenomenonhasvariouseffectsonthefamilyandsociety.First,housekeepingcansavetimetodo

otherthings.Officeworkersincreasinglyneedthehelpofhousekeepingservicestohelpthemsavefromtedious

householdchoresanddevotethemselvestomeaningfulthings.

Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.Housekeepingcanhelpyoung

couplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.

Finally,housekeepingcanalsobringconveniencetoparents.Duetotheparticularityofwork,suchas

doctors,trafficpolicemaynotbeabletogohomeduringtheNewYear.Inthiscase,itisagoodchoicetofinda

domestichelperoroccasionallycallanhourlyworker.

Therefore,Ithinkthehousekeepingserviceisnecessary.

【导语】本文是一篇说明文。要求考生针对城市很多家庭请家政服务现象进行概述，分析这一现象对家庭

和社会产生的印象，以及考生对此的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表明：show玲indicate

产生影响：haveeffectson玲haveinfluenceon

由于：dueto玲becauseof

选择：choice玲option

2.句式拓展

原句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminga

newfamily.

拓展句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterthey

haveformedanewfamily.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,which

showsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.（SfflTthat引导同位语从句,运用了which引导非限制性

定语从句）

【高分句型2]Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.（运用了动词不定式

作宾语）

核心考点梳理

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想写好作文第一件事是准备一个祚文素材积累本|!!!把老师平时讲的、阅读翻译中遇到

的地道表达都记下来并经常复习。

（一）高考作文常考类型

1.书信类：建议信、申请信、投诉信等；议论或夹叙夹议；

2.话题类：说明、议论或夹叙夹议；

3.图表类：说明+议论；

4.漫画类：描写+议论。

（二）作文评分标准

一）评分标准

1、本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分。

2、评分时应注意的主要方面：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。

3、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中，内容和

语言两部分相加，得15分或以上者，可考虑加4-5分，15分以下者只能考虑加0、1、2、3分。

4、词数少于70,总分最多不超过10分。

档次内容语言组织结构得分

A9—109—104—520-25分

B7—87—8316-19分

C5—65—6212-15分

D3—43—417-11分

E0—20—200-6分

各档次给分要求：

内容部分

A.内容充实，主题突出，详略得当。

B.内容较充实，能表达出作文要求。

C.内容基本充实，尚能表达出作文要求。

D.漏掉或未能写清楚主要内容，有些内容与主题无关。

E.明显遗漏主要内容，严重离题。

语言部分

A.具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构正确或有些小错误，主要因为使用了较复杂结构或词汇所致。

B.具有较强的语言表达能力，语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确，错误主要因为尝试较复杂结构或词汇所

致。

C.有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

D.语法结构与词汇错误较多，影响了对内容的理解。

E.语法结构与词汇的错误很多，影响了对内容的理解。

组织结构部分

A.自然地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑。句子结构多样，词汇丰富。

B.能使用语句间连接成分，全文流畅结构紧凑。句子结构多样，词汇较丰富。

C.能使用简单的语句间连接成分，全文内容连贯。句子结构有一定的变化，词汇使用得当。

D.尚能使用语句间连接成分，语言连贯性较差，句子结构单调，词汇贫乏。

E.缺乏语句间的连接成分，语言不连贯。词不达意。

二）阅卷评分实例

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

请简要描述图片，并结合图片内容谈谈自己的想法。

7+8+5=20

Thepictureshowsaboywithaspreadpairofwings,andacouple

ofparentswithahugepairofscissors,goingtooperateontheirchild's

beautifulwings.Whatwecanseeintheparents9eyesisexpectation,in

sharpcontrastwiththesadnessintheboy's.

Thepicturejustremindsthesimilaroperationofmyown,whenIwasakidwhohadjuststartedprimary

school.Ialwaysenjoyedmyselfinthenature,whichwaswideenoughtospreadmywingsandflytothefun.

However,asmyagesgrew,myparentsstartedtopullthefeatherofffrommywings.Sincethen,Ihadno

alternativebuttoberestrictedintheroom,workinghardontheacademicsubjectsbythewindowinsteadof

settingmyselffreeintheair.Imusthaveargued,criedandshouted,butitwasofnouse.

Atthatpoint,IcouldjusttellthatIfeelsobounded.IthoughtIwasnotdoingbadinschoolsoIshouldearn

mytimeofplaying.Itdidn'tnecessarilymeanplayinggamesorotherthings,butthefreedomtofollowmy

interestanddevelopthembeforeitwastoolate.SoIcantotallyunderstandtheboyinthepicture,andwishhima

brightfuture.

7+6+3=16

Thiscriticalpicturedescribesaphenomenonthatparentsarecuttingtheirchild'swings,whichimplysthat

nowadaysmoreandmoreparentsarekillingtheirchild'screativityandfreedom,ignoringthattheirchild5s

disappointmentandsadness,inordertomaketheirchildaso-called“great“student.

Ihavealsoexperiencedthisbefore,onceIwasinthejuniorhighschool.Oneday,ourteachertoldusthatour

schoolisgoingtoorganizesomeclubactivitiesonFridayafternoon,includingsomeacademicclubsandsome

clubswhichaftergreatopportunitiestotakepartinsocialactivities.AsIwasastudentwhowasinteretedinsocial

activities,Iwasdyingfortakingpartinaclublikethelaterone.But,myparentsdon'tagreewithme,they

thoughtthatthechieftaskofastudentislearningsotheyforcedmetojoinanacademicclub.

Iwassodisappointedatthetime,becauseIfoundthatIdon'thavetherighttomakemyownchoice,notto

saycreatesomethingIlike.ButIdon'thavetheforcetorejectmyparentsdecision,andIfoundmyselfbecomea

followerofmyparents.

Thesethigsarecommoninourreallife,eventoday;manyparentsstillimposetheirownopinionsontheir

child.Thiscanhaveabadinfluenceonoursocietyandourgenerationmaylackofcreativity,sowhydon'twe

stopit?

6+6+2=14

Asisvividlyshowedinthepicture,acouplestandsbehindtheirchildandthemencutsoffchild'swingswith

hissessioncruelly.However,thiskindofpicturelotsmerecallmypersonalmemory.

WhenIwas10yearsold,Iwasaddictedtodancingandwantedtobeadancerinthefuture.Sincemydance

teacherpraisedmeandgavemecouragetoachievemydream.ItoldmyparentsthatIhadapassionondancing

andwouldliketotakepartinadancecompetition.Neverthless,myparentrefusedmyrequestanddidn'tallowed

metodanceanymore.Needlesstosay,theythoughtthemostcrucialthingformeistoenteraexcellentcollege.

Sotheydisaggreedmyopinion.

ButasfarasIamconcerned,parentshouldencourangetheirchildrentocultivatetheirinterestratherthan

merelylearnsomeknowledgefrombooks.

5+6+2=13

Asisclearlyshowninthepicture,acoupleareshapingtheirson'swingsintotheshapetheywant.Butthe

littleboylooksreluctant.

Itcanbesimplyinferedfromthepicturethattheartistwantsparentstoallowtheirchildrentogrownaturally.

AndthafswhatIamfor,too.BecauseImyselfgotbenefitsfromthefreegrowthduringmychildhood.

WhenIwasabouteight,myparentswantedmetobeapianoist,whichwasthecommonideaofmany

parentsatthattime.However,Ididn'tlikeplayingthepianoatall.WhyshouldIstepintoafieldwhichIwasnot

interestedin?"Interestisthebestdrivingforce.SoItoldthemaboutmyopinions.Fortunately,myparents

agreedandletmechoosetheskillIwantedtolearn.IsignedupfortheNewConceptEnglish.

NeverhasanyonewonmecompletelyinEnglishevenonce!Itmustbethemagicofinterestthatmake

Englishastrongarmofmine.Whynotletchildrencultivatetheirinterestandstriveforitthemselves?Everyoneis

unique.Ifallflowersarethesame,thenaturewon'tbebeautifulanymore.

5+5+2=12

Asthepictureshows,theboyhasabeautifulwingbuthisfatherisgoingtocutitwithouthesitation.His

motherfeeldesperatebutcan'tdoanythingwithoutlookherchild.Alltheboycandoisstandthereandwaiting

forthefirstbutlastcut.

Thepicturetouchedmealot.Itrecalledmydeepmemoizeinmyheart.IstillrememberwhenIwasthen

yearsold,Iwaskeenonpainting.Teachersandfriendswereflavouredofmywork.Butwiththestressfulcame

fromstudy,Ihadtoputdownmyinterestingthingsbutgotostudy.Likemanyofpeers,wearetheonlychildin

ourfamily.Parentsholdgiantexpectationsonus.Toliveuptotheirexpectation,wehadtoburyourselvesintothe

bookandextralessons.WhatIfeltthoseyearswassadnessbutIcouldn'tcompliantevenaword,orIwouldmake

themsad.

Ithinkparentsshouldn'tcutthetalentiftherekidsaregoodatsomething.Theyshouldcultivateitnotfocus

themonwhattheypaylessinteresting.

ThafsallIfeltwiththepicture.

2+4+l=7

Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,theboy'sfatherwanttocuttheboy'sdreamtomakeboyfollowthe

parents5way.AsfarasTmconcerned,thechildshouldhavetheirowndreamstoliveintheworldandgrewup.

Tobeginwith,itisgoodforchildrentohavetheirowndreams.Itistheirlifegoalandtheycanspareno

efforttochallengeallthetroublewithoutcomplaintment.

Whafsmore,children'sowndreamscanhelpthemmoveindepenceandtheycanlivehappierwithout

parents.Finally,changechildren'sdreamswillincreasethegenerationalgapbetweenchildrenandparents.

Allinall,Ithinkthatasforchildren,theyoughttofollowtheirowndreamsandforparents,theyare

essentialtoencouragetheirchildren.

Itishightimeforchildrentofollowtheirowndreams.

（三）写作步骤

—）审题

审清题目，注意不要偏题，不要遗漏内容。如下面这道题，很多同学在写的时候写完开头直接开始提

建议了，漏掉描述自己的高中学习生活，这样导致分很低，因为内容定档。所以大家一定要注意审题。

Direction：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

你的表弟Frank即将踏入高中学习，请你写一封信给他，在信中简要描述你自己的高中学习生活，

并以此给他的高中学习生活提些建议。

（建议可以包括：规划好日常生活、找到适合自己的学习方法、多参加课外活动等）

二）分段、列提纲

作文一般都分成3段，开头一主体一结尾。分好段后用中文列一个简单的中文提纲，让自己的思路更

清晰，也能节省后面的写作时间。如上面这篇作文可作如下提纲：

开头（写信背景和目的）：恭喜进入高中，分享经验。

「1.描述自己高中学习

主体--1）规划好日常生活

L2.提建议：

2）学习方法

-3）多参加课外活动

结尾（总结）：希望度过充实的3年

三）过渡词

两个方面：Foronething,Foranother/Ononehand,ontheotherhand

三个方面：

首先其次最后总结

firstandforemostadditionally/inadditionlastbutnotleasttoputitinanutshell

inthefirstplaceinthesecondplacetosumup

firstofallwhat'smoreashasbeenmentioned

tobeginwithmoreover/furthermoreinconclusion

besidestakingeverythingintoconsideration

四）遣词造句

1、运用万能单词和万能句型

|万能单词|万能单词不用并不影响句子,但用上确能给句子增添一点色彩。

词义万能单词例句

毫无疑问undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,

显然地obviously；apparentlyextracurricularactivities(apparently)playasignificant

roleinmyphysicalandmentaldevelopment.

不可否认undeniably

一定surely/definitely

万能句型使用万能句型能让简单句变成复合句，每篇文章可以用1到2句。

词义万能句型例句

毫无疑问Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodoubtthatmoreandmorepeoplewilluse

computersatjobinthefuture.

不可否认Thereisnodenyingthat...Thereisnodenyingthatourschoolnewspaperin

Noonecandenythat...Englishservesasanexcellentfoodforthoughttargeting

usstudents.

不言而喻Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthatonlywithalargeamountof

knowledgefromeveryaspectcanwecreatepractical

ideasinsteadofavaindream.

普遍认为ItisuniversallyacknowledgedItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatcertainamountof

that...playingtimeplaysanimportantroleinchildren's

growth.

不用说needlesstosayNeedlesstosay,lessclosecontactwithothersdoeshave

badeffectsonourrelationship.

＞运用以上所学知识写一个段落关于“写信给朋友提建议：如何克服考试焦虑”。句首句已给出。

Howtoovercometestanxiety?......

Howtoovercometestanxiety?Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatitis,toalargeextent,vitaland

significantforyoutomakeacarefulpreparation,consequently,someeffectivepracticeisbadlyneeded.

Additionally,noonecandenyhavingapositiveattitudeisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,whichcanmakeyou

diligentandintelligent.Lastbutnotleast,needlesstosay,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtakeadeepbreathbefore

writingthetestpaper,consideringthatitwillhelpusconcentrateonourtestandbemoreconfident.Ifyoucarry

outthesemethods,Iamsureyouwillachieveanamazingsuccessinyourtest.

＞总结书信提建议的句型：

①itisbeneficial/advisable/significantforsbtodosth

②youaresupposedtodo

(3)doingsthisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,which...

(4)IfIwereyou,Iwould...

2、运用高级词汇和词组（详见教案15）

高级词汇|高级词汇指的是一些实词要用高中词汇书上的词汇,而尽量少用初中词汇。

比如我们写某事重要时不用初中学的important,而用高中词汇vital/significant/critical/crucial等。

高级词组|高级词组指写作能用词组的地方一定要用词组,词组的灵活使用是高分作文的必备条件，所以要

多积累和仿写。

比如我们写考虑某事时不用单词consider,而用词组takesthintoaccount/consideration。

3、运用高级句型（详见教案16）

高级句型|使用高级句型能让句子多样化,为作文加分的必备项！作文中要多使用从句、非谓语、强调倒装、

虚拟语气、被动语态等。

比如用定语从句写旅游的益处：Thereisnodenyingthattravelingisasignificantwaytobroadenour

horizons,whichenrichespeople'smindandexperience.

>写作中常用谚语背诵：

1.Missedchanceswillneverreturn.机不可失，失不再来。

2.Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难.

3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成.

4.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻.

5.It'snevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老.

6.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.伟业非一日之功.

7.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情.

8.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母.

9.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言.

10.Everymanhashisfaults.金无足赤，人无完人.

11.Nopains,nogains.不劳无获。

12.Nothingistoodifficulttoawillingheart.俗话说，世上无难事，只怕有心人。

五）检查

写完之后一定要留时间检查一遍，注意时态、语态、人称等。平时写作时一定要养成检查的习惯。先

自己检查，然后可以同学之间相互检查，培养自己的纠错能力，最后拿给老师检查。

当堂知识检测

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1.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学

生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：

教师是否会被人工智能取代

1.简要描述图表；

2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代;

3.你的理由。

【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificial

intelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificial

intelligence,while56%saidno.

Personallyspeaking,teacherswon'tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteaching

studentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducating

people,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelings

andwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.

Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers9labor,andcannotreplacetheroleof

teachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyare

farfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.

Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobs

thatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查,

调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章

内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

取代：replace—supersede

拥有：possess—>takepossessionof

重要的：important一significant

也就是说：thatistosay=inotherwords

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityof

education.

拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityof

education.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportant

mission,whichistoeducatepeople.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentquality

ofeducation.（运用了现在分词作状语）

2.假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节为“说说你

的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件，内容须包括：

1）你印象最深的一件事情；

2）此事对你的启发和影响。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DuringthepastthreeyearsintheGuangmingseniorhighschool,Ihavehadmanyunforgettableexperiences.

Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.Inordertowin

thecompetition,weallwentforit.Duringtheweekbeforethecompetition,wepractisedsinginginourfreetime.

Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.Thankstooureffort,wewonthe

firstprize.Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.Themovementremindedmeofanoldsaying-No

pains,nogains.Itwashardwork,butduringthecourseofpreparation,wedevelopeddeepfriendship,confidence

aswellasunderstanding!

【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自

己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事对自己的启发和影响。

【详解】1.词汇积累

难忘的：unfbrgettable^memorable

为了：inorderto一inaneffortto

困难的：hard-tough

由于：thanksto一owingto

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.

拓展句：Whenweheardtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.

【高分句型1]Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.

（运用了when引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2]Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.（运用了although

引导的让步状语从句）

3.假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了

在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“ChibsinMySchool”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：

1.对你校社团进行分类；

2.具体描述每一类社团的特色。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

ClubsinMySchool

Toenrichstudents5life,ourschoolorganizesavarietyofclubsinmyschool.Almosteverystudentinour

schoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.Generallyspeaking,theclubsinmyschool

canbeclassifiedintotwotypes:sportsclubandartclub.

Sportsclubarepopularamongstudents.Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,

whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.Sostudentstherecanmakefriends.Besides,theycannot

onlyplaysportsinfreetime,butalsotheycanlearnsomesportsskills.

Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.Also,it

providesstudentssomeknowledgeaboutart.Meanwhile,studentstherecanhavetheaccesstotheinstrument,

suchaspiano,Erhuandsoon.

Allthestudentsinmyschoolliketheclubs.SoIthinktheclubsareverysignificant.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“ClubsinMySchool”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含学生

对校社团进行分类，并具体描述每一类社团的特色。

【详解】1.词汇积累

等等：andsoon一andthelike

此外：Besides-Inaddition

机会：chance一opportunity

同时：Meanwhile-Atthesametime

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.

拓展句：Artclubwhichincludesmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.

【高分句型1]Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.

（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedby

studentswiththesameinterest.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

学校学生会准备为文学社、英语社、体育社、艺术社等各社团招募新成员。假如你是其中一个社团的负责

人，请你写一篇宣传稿介绍你们社团的情况。文章必须包括：

•简单介绍你们社团的特色或优势

•简要描述你们社团的发展规划

【答案】I'mLiHua,theorganizeroftheEnglishclub.Ifoundedthisclubtoincreasestudents5interestinEnglish

andimprovestudents9oralEnglishskills.

WehaveEnglishclubgameseveryweekend.Studentscanplayfreely,thusimprovingtheirconfidencein

learningEnglish.Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometo

watchandshowtheirinterestin.Inaddition,wealsoinvitesometeacherstoguideusonhowtoperformEnglish

dramaseverytwoweeks.Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpand

students5Englishknowledge.

Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.Looking

forwardtoyourjoiningus.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为学校其中一个社团的负责人，写一篇宣传稿介绍社团的

情况，简单介绍社团的特色或优势，并描述社团的发展规划。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：fbund—setup

有兴趣：showinterestin—beinterestedin

此外：inaddition—>besides

继续：continue一goon

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents9English

knowledge.

拓展句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities,whichwillexpandstudents'

Englishknowledge.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswill

cometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.

（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

5.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校准备开展“发现春天”的社会实践活动，并在校园网上征集大家的意见，

请你发贴简要阐述你的设计方案。内容需要包括：

1）活动线路与内容。

2）推荐理由。

【答案】DearSir/Madame,

Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled"'DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedto

presentmydesign.

Itismysuggestionthatallteachersandstudentstakepartinoutdoorhiking.Therouteisfromourschoolto

BeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.Allstudentsarerequiredtotakeaplasticbagto

pickuprubbishthrownbytouristsonthewayandinBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagestudentscanvisitthevillageto

buyhand-madearticlesmadebycraftsmenandenrichthemwithcolorfullocalculture.

AsfarasI'mconcerned,tostartwith,it'sabetterchoicetohelpstudentsdevelopakindofbearinghardships

spiritwhichishelpfulfortheirfuturelife.Besides,Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundto

raisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.Inaddition,allstudentsneedanoccasiontoescapeforawhile

fromtheirhardstudyandhaveagoodrest.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.

Yours,

LiMing

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇意见征集，要求考生以李明的身份为学校即将开展的“发现春天”社会实践活

动建言献策，并阐述你的设计方案。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非常：very一morethan

参力口：takepartin一participatein

购买：buy一purchase

有益的：behelpfid一bebeneficial

2.句式拓展

并列句变简单句

原句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillageanditisthirtykilometerslong.

拓展句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled"'DiscoveringSpring”,I

amverydelightedtopresentmydesign.（现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型21Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironment

protection.（被动语态、非谓语动词短语）

课后巩固提高

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6.Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问

卷调查，结果如下表所示，写一篇调查报告，内容须包括：

1）对调查结果的简单描述；

2）对数据的原因分析；

3）你的看法。

1博物馆免费情况下会考虑67.86%

2免费才去3.57%

3持无所谓态度28.57%

【答案】Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe"freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums"amongsenior

highschoolstudents.

Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.

3.57%ofstudentswentforfree.28.57%holdtheindifferentattitude.Butwhataccountsforthehugegapbetween

students?Inmyopinion,67.86%ofthestudentsmayliketostudybutthefamilyconditionsarenotgood,thereis

nosuchexpenditure,sotheywillconsiderfreeofcharge.3.57%ofstudentsarenotinterestedinmuseums

becausetheydonotlovestudying,soitisfreeforthemtogo.However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferent

becausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseumstoincreasetheirknowledge.Theywillgo

thereanyway.

Personally,undertheconditionoffree,studentsshouldvisitthereregularlytolearnsomeextracurricular

knowledge,whichwillbeofgreathelptoenrichtheirexperience,broadenourknowledgeandmakeusa

knowledgeableperson.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了

一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查，结果如下表所示，写一篇调查报告，内容须包括：对调查结

果的简单描述；对数据的原因分析；你的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

免费：freeofcharge—fbrfree^fbrnothing

有益的：beofgreathelp一behelpful

就个人而言：person