Unit4Hands-onfun写短文（单元写作讲义）译林版2024八年级上册

Unit4Handsonfun同步写作课讲义译林版2024八年级上册⭐话题解读⭐⭐话题解读⭐Unit4的主题围绕“人与自我：动手体验活动”展开，参加实践活动、在实践中学习等是这一主题的核心内容。通过参与这类活动，我们能够锻炼自己的动手能力，培养解决问题的思维，还能从中收获乐趣与成长。在具体的英语写作中，学生应做到以下几点：准确运用与DIY活动相关的词汇和短语，清晰描述活动过程。合理使用正确的时态，一般过去时常用于叙述过去发生的DIY活动，而一般现在时可用于介绍普遍性的DIY步骤或表达个人观点。学会组织文章结构，有逻辑地呈现DIY活动的起因、经过和结果，以及自己的感受。⭐写作任务⭐⭐写作任务⭐本单元的写作任务是写有关自己的DIY活动的短文。你需要详细描述一次自己亲身参与的DIY经历，包括活动的地点、过程、使用的工具、遇到的问题及解决方法，还有活动结束后的感受等，让读者能通过你的文字，清晰地了解整个DIY活动。⭐审题指导⭐⭐审题指导⭐本单元主要话题是亲身动手实践的过程中所获得的乐趣，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与生活中的常见手工制作、家居装饰、烹饪美食等相结合。命题内容以描述一次具体的DIY活动为主，根据提示记叙或描述自己在DIY活动中的情况。写作时应注意短文内容的完整性、格式的规范性以及时态的正确运用。内容一般从以下几方面着手：WheredidyoudotheDIYactivity?（你在哪里进行的DIY活动？）Howdidyouprepareforit?（你是如何准备的？）Whatstepsdidyoufollowtodoit?（你按照什么步骤进行的？）Howdidyoufeelduringtheprocess?（在过程中你有怎样的感受？）Howdidyousolvetheproblemsyoumet?（你是如何解决遇到的问题的？）◆写作步骤步骤一：仔细审题，明确写作要求，确定要描述的DIY活动。思考活动的各个关键信息，如时间、地点、参与人员等。步骤二：列出写作提纲，按照内容要点的顺序，梳理好文章结构。可以先写活动背景引入，接着详细描述活动过程，再阐述遇到的问题及解决办法，最后表达自己的感受。步骤三：根据提纲进行写作，注意运用正确的词汇、语法和句型，书写要工整，尽量减少涂改。完成初稿后，仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误以及语句通顺度，进行修改完善。⭐写作框架⭐⭐写作框架⭐1.开头引入可用一些日常话题或问题来引出DIY活动，如：“Lastweekend,IhadanamazingexperienceofDIY.Doyouwanttoknowwhatitwas?”（上周末，我有一次奇妙的DIY经历。你想知道是什么吗？）引入话题：直接点明要讲述的DIY活动，比如：“Idecidedtomakeawoodenphotoframebymyself.”（我决定自己制作一个木质相框。）2.主体部分准备工作：“First,Iboughtsomewoodenboards,nails,andasmallsawinthehardwarestore.Then,ImeasuredthesizeofthephotoIwantedtoputintheframetodecidethesizeofthewoodenboards.”（首先，我在五金店买了一些木板、钉子和一把小锯子。然后，我测量了我想放进相框的照片的尺寸，以确定木板的大小。）制作过程：“Next,Iusedthesawtocutthewoodenboardsintotherightlength.Afterthat,Inailedthefourpiecesofwoodenboardstogethertoformaframe.Itwasabitdifficulttokeepthecornersstraight.”（接下来，我用锯子把木板锯成合适的长度。之后，我把四块木板钉在一起形成一个相框。要让角保持笔直有点困难。）遇到的问题及解决方法：“Ifoundthattheframewasalittlewobbly.So,Iaddedsometriangularwoodensupportsatthecorners,anditbecamemuchstronger.”（我发现相框有点摇晃。于是，我在角上添加了一些三角形的木质支撑，它就变得牢固多了。）表达情感：“IwassoproudofmyselfwhenIfinallyfinishedthephotoframe.Itwasnotonlyabeautifuldecorationbutalsoasymbolofmyhardworkandcreativity.”（当我最终完成这个相框时，我为自己感到无比骄傲。它不仅是一个漂亮的装饰品，也是我努力和创造力的象征。）3.结尾部分总结这次DIY活动的收获，并鼓励读者也去尝试，如：“DoingDIYactivitiesisreallyinterestingandrewarding.Whynothaveatryandcreatesomethingamazingbyyourself?”（做DIY活动真的很有趣且有意义。为什么不试试，自己创造出令人惊叹的东西呢？）⭐素材宝库⭐⭐素材宝库⭐词汇积累词汇积累DIY(doityourself)自己动手做experience经历activity活动woodenboard木板nail钉子saw锯子measure测量decorate装饰paint颜料；绘画；涂漆scissors剪刀glue胶水tape胶带frame框架model模型handicraft手工艺品process过程step步骤proud自豪的creative有创造力的fun有趣的successful成功的difficult困难的solve解决problem问题句型积累句型积累1.基础句型do...decidedtodo...我决定做……I...First,I...首先，我……I...Then,I...然后，我……I...Next,I...接下来，我……I...Afterthat,I...在那之后，我……I...Finally,I...最后，我……(7)Itwas+形容词+todosth.做某事是……的used...used...todo...我用……来做……(9)Ifoundit+形容词+todosth.我发现做某事……(10)Iamhappy/sad/...that...我很高兴/难过……某事2.升级句型(1)Notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……(2)Ittookme+时间+todosth.做某事花费了我……时间(3)Whiledoing...,I...当做……的时候，我……(4)AssoonasI...,I...我一……就……(5)Withthehelpof...,I...在……的帮助下，我……(6)Bydoing...,Ilearned...通过做……，我学到了……(7)What'smore,...而且，……(8)Inaddition,...此外，……(9)Itseemsthat...似乎……(10)Ican'twaittodosth.我迫不及待地做某事3.高分句型(1)Itwasachallengingbutrewardingexperienceforme.对我来说，这是一次具有挑战性但很有意义的经历。(2)Themostdifficultpartwasthat...最困难的部分是……(3)ThroughthisDIYactivity,Inotonlyimprovedmypracticalskillsbutalsoenhancedmyproblemsolvingability.通过这次DIY活动，我不仅提高了我的实践技能，还增强了我的解决问题的能力。(4)Whatmadeitevenmorespecialwasthat...让它更加特别的是……(5)Iwasdeeplyimpressedby...我对……印象深刻(6)DespitethedifficultiesImet,Imanagedto...尽管我遇到了困难，我还是设法……(7)Itturnedoutthat...结果是……(8)ThisDIYprojecttaughtmetheimportanceof...这个DIY项目教会了我……的重要性(9)Irealizedthatwithpatienceandperseverance,IcouldachieveanythingIsetmymindto.我意识到，有了耐心和毅力，我可以实现任何我下定决心要做的事情。(10)Lookingbackonthisexperience,Ifeelasenseofacplishment.回顾这次经历，我有一种成就感。谚语名句谚语名句Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.经验是智慧之母。Theshortestanswerisdoing.最简短的回答就是行动。Allthingsintheirbeingaregoodforsomething.天生我材必有用。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。Creativitytakescourage.创造力需要勇气。Ifatfirstyoudon'tsucceed,try,tryagain.如果一开始你没有成功，尝试，再尝试。Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninetyninepercentperspiration.天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.求知无坦途。Learningbydoing.做中学。Themoreyoudo,themoreyoucando.你做得越多，你能做的就越多。Donot,foronerepulse,giveupthepurposethatyouresolvedtoeffect.不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想达到的目的。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行动胜于言语。Hewhowouldclimbtheladdermustbeginatthebottom.千里之行始于足下。Todoistobe.活着就是奋斗。Laborisoftenthefatherofpleasure.劳动常常是快乐之父。Byworkingfaithfullyeighthoursadayyoumayeventuallygettobebossandworktwelvehoursaday.每天忠诚地工作八小时，最终你可能会成为每天工作十二小时的老板。Withouthardwork,nothinggrowsbutweeds.不辛勤劳动，除了杂草长不出别的东西。Workbanishesthosethreegreatevils:boredom,vice,andpoverty.工作撵跑三个魔鬼：无聊、堕落和贫穷。写作模板写作模板Lastweekend/Someday,IdecidedtodoaDIYactivity.Itwasreallyanunforgettableexperience.IdidthisDIYactivityathome/inthegarden/...（地点）.First,IpreparedallthethingsIneeded,suchas...（列举准备的工具和材料）.Then,Istartedtheprocess.First,I...（描述第一步）.Next,I...（描述第二步）.Afterthat,I...（描述第三步）.Duringtheprocess,Imetsomeproblems.Forexample,Ifoundthat...（说明遇到的问题）.ButIdidn'tgiveup.Ithoughthardandfinallycameupwithasolution.I...（描述解决问题的方法）.Finally,IfinishedmyDIYworksuccessfully.Itlooked...（描述成品的样子）.Iwassoproudofmyself.Throughthisactivity,Ilearnedthat...（总结自己从这次活动中学到的东西）.ItwasreallyameaningfulandinterestingDIYexperience.IhopeIcanhavemorechancestodoDIYactivitiesinthefuture.⭐参考范文⭐⭐参考范文⭐（范文一）LastSunday,IdecidedtomakeaDIYbookend.Ididitinmystudy.First,Igatheredmaterialsliketwowoodenblocks,someglue,andcolorfulpaint.Istartedbypaintingthewoodenblockswithmyfavoritebluecolor.Afterthepaintdried,Icarefullygluedsomesmalldecorativestickersonthem.Then,Igluedthetwoblockstogetheratarightangle.Itwasabittrickytomakethemstayinplace.ButIheldthemfirmlyforawhileuntilthegluetookeffect.WhenIfinallyfinishedmybookend,Iwasreallyhappy.Itlookedsocuteandwasveryuseful.Iputitonmybookshelftoholdmybooks.ThroughthisDIY,Ilearnedthatpatienceisveryimportant.Itwasagreatexperience!（范文二）Imadeahandmadecardformymother'sbirthdayathomelastmonth.Ipreparedsomecoloredpaper,scissors,glue,andapen.First,Ifoldedapieceofpinkpaperinhalftoformthecardbase.Then,Iusedscissorstocutoutsomeflowershapesfromdifferentcoloredpapers.Igluedtheseflowersonthefrontofthecard.Next,Iwrotesomesweetwordstomymominsidethecardwithapen.Whilemakingthecard,Iaccidentallycutoneoftheflowershapeswrong.ButIquicklythoughtofaway.Icutanothershapetocoverthemistake.Intheend,mymomwasverysurprisedandhappywhenshereceivedthecard.IfeltproudthatIcouldmakeherhappywithmyownhands.（范文三）Lastsummervacation,ImadeaDIYpencilholderinmybedroom.Iusedanemptyplasticbottle,somecoloredtapes,andapairofscissors.Ifirstcuttheplasticbottleinhalfwiththescissors.Then,Iwrappedcolorfultapesaroundthecutparttomakeitlooknice.Afterthat,Idecoratedtheoutsideofthebottlewithsomesmallstickers.Itwasnoteasytocuttheplasticbottleevenly.ButItriedseveraltimesandfinallymadeit.Now,Iusethispencilholderonmydeskeveryday.ItisareminderofmyDIYspirit.IlearnedthatevensimplethingscanbeturnedintosomethingspecialthroughDIY.⭐写作拓展⭐⭐写作拓展⭐考情分析考情分析近三年考情示例年份卷区话题命题形式2025年江苏苏州介绍一把自制的手工扇演讲稿2023年江苏扬州介绍中国传统手工艺风筝的历史等提纲类变式提升训练变式提升训练1．DIY在年轻人中很流行，我昨天完成了我的第一个DIY作品。根据下面的提示用英文写一篇短文，题目为“MyFirstDIYWork”。提示：1.准备工作；2.制作过程；3.……要求：1.书写规范，要点齐全；2.至少补充一点内容；3.词数不少于70，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyFirstDIYWorkDIYisverypopularamongyoungpeople.IfinishedmyfirstDIYworkyesterday._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．“社”彩纷呈，团聚青春”。今年学校开办各种社团活动，丰富中学生课余生活，彰显校园不一样的精彩。假设你是张华，想申请加入其中的DIY俱乐部，请根据下图给李老师写一封英语申请信。注意事项：1.申请信须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数在90个左右，申请信首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4.申请信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；5.申请信必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。DearMr.Li,I’mZhangHuainGrade8.I’dliketojointheDIYClub.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,ZhangHua3．近几年DIY日益流行，许多学生也参与到各种DIY活动中。广义来说，DIY可以指自行整修房屋等大件，狭义上也能指可以自己手工做东西。假定你要向英语报“我的DIY故事”大赛报名投稿，介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容：Introduceyourself.IntroduceyourDIYstory.Stateyouropinion(观点)onDIY.注意：

1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dearsir,LetmeintroducemyselfandmyDIYstory.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Bestwishes.ADIYlover4．近年流行DIY,DIY源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为，渐渐的DIY的概念也被扩及到所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请以“MyviewonDIY”为题写一篇英语短文要求：1.词数80左右,书写工整，语句通顺，意思连贯。2.文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等个人信息。要点：*WhatdoyouthinkofDIY?*WhatDIYjobdidyouoncedo?*Whattoolsandmaterialsdidyouuse?*Wasyourworkwelldone?*WhatdoyoulearnfromDIY?MyviewonDIY________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假如你是ClairWong，在感恩节到来之际，你为妈妈亲手制作了一张卡片。●上面有你用彩色纸折叠(fold)的小星星图形，还画了一棵大树，代表妈妈，并在旁边写上“Mum,Iloveyou!”的字样。●你还画了一些红色的玫瑰以及彩色的气球来装饰卡片。●制作这张卡片花了你两天的时间，但这是你为妈妈制作的第一张卡片，你很高兴。请以“MyDIYstory”为题，写一篇英语短文来记述此事。字数在80词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．近几年DIY日益流行，许多学生也参与到各种DIY活动中。广义来说，DIY可以指自行整修房屋等大件，狭义上也能指可以自己手工做东西。假定你要向英语报“我的DIY故事”大赛报名投稿，介绍你自己的DIY经历及看法。短文中须包含以下几个方面的内容：注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dearsir,LetmeintroducemyselfandmyDIYstory._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Bestwishes,ADIYlover7．假如你是李华，你的交换生朋友Kevin很喜欢你亲手做的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括：（1）你送的礼物是什么；（2）你送此礼物的原因；（3）制作的方法或过程。注意:（1）词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。DearKevin,IamgladthatyoulikethesmallgiftImadebymyself.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua参考答案1．MyFirstDIYWorkDIYisverypopularamongyoungpeople.IfinishedmyfirstDIYworkyesterday.Lastweek,IboughtsomepaintandtwobrushesontheInternet.Beforepaintingthewalls,Ireadtheinstructionscarefully.Atfirst,Ipaintedallthewallsblue.Buttheroomlookedalittledullandboring.Atlast,Idecidedtodrawsomecolorfulfishandaboatonthewall.Therewaspainteverywhere.Ihadtospendanhourcleaningtheroom.Nowtheroomlooksreallybeautiful.IwanttoknowmoreaboutDIY.Thus,IwilltakeacourseinDIY.Iwillalsobuymorebooksaboutit.【写作解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点围绕作者第一次DIY的经历给出，包括准备材料、过程、遇到的问题及结果等，考生需注意要点齐全，可适当补充细节使文章更丰富。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题。直接表明要讲述自己第一次DIY的经历。第二步，具体阐述DIY过程。从准备材料、阅读说明、开始粉刷、发现问题、解决问题到最终结果等方面详细描述。第三步，表达感受和打算。说明自己对DIY的兴趣，并表达想要进一步了解和学习DIY的意愿。[亮点词汇]①instructions说明书②dull单调的③colorful多彩的[高分句型]①Atfirst,Ipaintedallthewallsblue.Buttheroomlookedalittledullandboring.Atlast,Idecidedtodrawsomecolorfulfishandaboatonthewall.（使用“Atfirst...But...Atlast...”结构，按照时间顺序描述了DIY过程的先后顺序和转折变化）2．DearMrLi,I’mZhangHuainGrade8.I’dliketojointheDIYClub.I’mfriendly.Iamalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.Ilikemakingthingsbymyselfinmyfreetime.IwanttojointheDIYclubbecauseI’mcrazyaboutDIYandhopetomakemorefriends.OnceImadeasandwichformymumonherbirthday.First,Ipickedapieceofbread.ThenIputsometomatosauce,hamandvegetablesonit.Atlast,Iputanotherpieceofbreadonit.MumlikedthesandwichverymuchandIfelthappy.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,ZhangHua【写作解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍自己喜欢在空闲时间自己做东西；第二步，介绍加入DIY俱乐部的原因；第三步，最后介绍自己的DIY作品。[亮点词汇]①bereadytodosth乐意做某事②wanttodo想要做某事③atlast最后[高分句型]IwanttojointheDIYclubbecauseI’mcrazyaboutDIYandhopetomakemorefriends（because引导的原因状语从句）3．Dearsir,LetmeintroducemyselfandmyDIYstory.IamagirlinGradeEight.Iamtallandslim.Ilikecookinganddrawing.IalsolikedoingDIYverymuch.IoftendoDIYjobswhenIamfree.DIYmakesmehappy.Lastweek,Iputinalightbymyself.Atfirst,Ididn’tknowhowtodoit.ThenIsearchedtheInternetforinstructions.WhenIfinallymadeit,Icouldn’tstoplaughingandshouting.DIYmakesourlifemorecolourful.BydoingDIYwork,Ifindmyselfveryusefulinlife.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.Bestwishes.ADIYlover【写作解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：根据要点提示介绍自己的DIY经历及看法，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，表述清晰。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的基本信息；第二步，介绍自己的一次DIY经历；第三步，表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①befree有空②putin安装③couldn’tstopdoing忍不住做某事[高分句型]①IoftendoDIYjobswhenIamfree.（when引导时间状语从句）②Ididn’tknowhowtodoit.（疑问词+不定式作宾语）4．DIYisverypopularnow.IthinkDIYcanhelpimproveourabilitiesindoingsomethinganditcanmakeususelessmoney.(itcanmakeussavemoney).Myparentsneverletmedoanything.ButonMother’sDay,Iwantedtomakemymothersurprised.Iplannedtomakethecardforherbymyself.Iusedsometoolsandmaterials,suchaspaper,glue,scissorsandsoon…AlthoughIdidn’tdoitwell.Mymotherwerestillhappy.ItisveryimportantformeandIamsureDIYwillhelpmemore.Let’sDIYfromnowontomakeusactbetterinthefuture.【写作解析】题干解读：该题目要求按照所给的要点进行写作，通过回答要点中的问题形成一篇完整的文章。第一段表达对DIY的看法，第二段详细描述DIY的经历，第三段描述通过DIY学到的东西，总结全文。写作指导：本文应用第一人称进行写作，阐述看法时用一般现在时，而描述DIY的经历要用一般过去时。按照要点的顺序写作，使其条理清晰，行文流畅。5．MyDIYstoryMynameisClairWong.ThanksgivingDayising.SoIdecidedtomakeacardformymother.Iboughtthematerialsonline.ThecardhadlittlestarsthatIfoldedwithcoloredpaper.Ithadabigtreerepresentingmom.AndIwrotethewords“Mum,Iloveyou!”onit.Ialsodrewsomeredrosesandcoloredballoonstodecoratethecards.Ittookmetwodaystomakethiscard,butitwasthefirstcardIevermadeformymom,andIwashappy.【写作解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以“MyDIYstory”为题，根据所给提示，描述自己为妈妈制作卡片的过程。2.写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态主要采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。6．Dearsir,Let’sintroducemyselfandmyDIYstory.IamagirlinGradeEight.Iamtallandslim.Ilikecookinganddrawing.IalsolikedoingDIYverymuch.IoftendoDIYjobswhenIamfree.DIYmakesmehappy.Lastweek,Iputinalightbymyself.Atfirst,Ididn’tkno