读后续写微技巧之环境描写素材

读后续写微技巧之“环境描写”Part1一、动词及动词短语1.对风的描述：blow刮；roar/howl怒号/咆哮；roar呼啸；whip鞭打；kiss亲吻2.对雨的描述：beatagainst拍打；pourdown倾盆而下；fall落下；raincatsanddogs下倾盆大雨；becaughtintherain被雨淋3.对雪的描述：dance跳舞；float/fall飘落；meltaway融化；blanket裹住；becoveredwith被...覆盖4.对星星的描述：shine发光；twinkle闪耀；glitter闪烁；decorate装饰；hide躲藏bedottedwith点缀着5.对太阳的描述：comeout出来；rise升起；set落下；bebathedin沐浴在；floodin照射进来；sweatlikeapig（汗流浃背）二、形容词及形容词短语1.对风雨的描述：gentle/soft轻柔的；warm温暖的；pleasant令人愉悦的；howling呼啸的；icy/freezing冰冷的；strong/violent猛烈的；bone-chilling刺骨的；dreadful可怕的2.对雪的描述：feathery鹅毛般的；tiny极小的；pure纯洁的；clean干净的3.对星星的描述：lovely可爱的；shining/glowing亮闪闪的；pale/faint暗淡的；starless没有星星的4.对太阳的描述：warm温暖的；burning火辣辣的；hot炙热；melt融化三、名词及及名词短语thebluesky蓝天；therisingsun冉冉升起的太阳；thesettingsun落日；thefragrantflowers/rose芬香的花/玫瑰；thegreengrass青草；thesongofthebirds鸟鸣；heavyrain大雨；aheavydownpour大暴雨Part2一、时间顺序（一）黎明、清晨1.Itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。2.Thesunbegantoriseinthesky,bathingthemountainingoldenlight.太阳开始缓缓升起，把山沐浴在金光之中。（沐浴bathsth.in）3.Birdsongwelcomesinanewday,sweetchoruscamethroughthebranches,flowingintothesurroundingcountrysidelikeagreatriverofmusic.鸟鸣中迎来了新的一天，悦耳的合唱声穿过树枝，像一条流动的音乐之河流入周围的乡村。（二）中午1.Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太阳处于最高点，热浪击打在我的头上，我好像烤架下的熏肉一样。2.Inthisheat,eventhetreesappeareddefeated,withleavesdroopinglifelessly. 在这种炎热的天气里，连树木都显得萎靡不振，树叶都毫无生气地垂落着。（三）黄昏、日落1.Thesunsetlookslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落看起来像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。2.Thesettingsuncastanorangeglowoverthemountains.夕阳在山上投下橙色的光辉。（四）夜晚1.Themoonwasheldupabovethesky,shininghersmoothandcharmingmoonlight.月亮被高举在天空的上方，闪耀着她光滑而迷人的月光。2.Twinklingstarswereblinking,andfragrantbreezewasgentlyblowing.闪烁的星星眨着眼，芬芳的微风轻轻地吹着。3.Themoonsurroundedbybrightstarslitupthedarknight.月亮被明亮的星星围绕着，照亮了漆黑的夜晚。4.Theendlessblacknessconsumed/swallowedupeverything.无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。Everythinghadbeenswallowedupbythedarkness.—切都被黑暗所吞噬。5.

Dottedwithglitteringstars,theskygavethesceneafairytalequality.

点缀着闪烁的星星的天空给这一场景赋予了童话般的色彩。6.Thenightbroughtendlessdarkness,buryingtheworldunderastarlesssky.Thetemperaturedroppedandnowherewasthereacomfortingsound.夜带来无尽的黑暗，把世界埋在没有星星的天空下。气温下降了，哪儿也听不到舒适的声音。二、意象顺序（一）太阳1.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.我沐浴在阳光下，琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每寸肌肤。2.Flowerswerestartingtobloom,wakingupafteralongwinter’ssleep.Thegardenlookedsobeautifulwiththesettingsunreflectedinthewindows.花儿经过漫长的冬眠期后开始盛开,落日映照在窗户上让院子显得格外美.3.Thesunshoneonthesea,thewavesdancingandsparkling.太阳照耀在海面上，波浪起舞，闪闪发光。4.Raysofsunlightfilteredthroughthetreebranches/leaves.阳光穿过树林/树叶。5.Bathedinthegoldensunlight,thesearippledandsparkledcharmingly.大海沐浴在金色的阳光下，荡漾着迷人的波光。（二）星月1.Twinklingstarswereblinking,andfragrantbreezegentlystrokedmyhead,asifcomfortingallthetirednessalongthetrip.星星在闪烁，芬芳的微风轻轻地抚摸我的头，仿佛在安慰我一路的疲惫。2.Theskyisdottedwithnumeroustwinklingstars.天空中点缀着无数闪烁的星星。3.Themoonlitupthecloudlessskyandcastabeamoflightonthesurfaceoftheriver,whichglitteredlikemillionsofstars.月亮照亮了万里无云的天空，并且在河面上投下了一束光，像百万颗星星一样闪烁着。4.Themoonappearedforamomentandseemedtothrowmeamistyanddullglance,andburiedherselfagaininstantlyinthickcloud.月亮出现了一会儿，似乎向我投来了朦胧而暗淡的一瞥，随即又埋没在厚厚的云层里。（三）雨1.Rainandtearsmixedtogetheronmyface.Onlymyswolleneyesgaveanycluetomysadness.雨水和泪水交织在一起，只有我的红肿的眼睛能暗示出我内心的悲伤。三、地点顺序（一）山海1.Ilookedoutofthewindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.我望向窗外，蜿艇的河流，高耸的山脉，阳光明媚的海滩和深深的山谷，让我完全沉浸在它们的魅力之中。（二）荒野1.Surroundedbystrangesoundsofwildbeastsandendlessdarkness,Janewasfullofregretanddespair.被野兽奇怪的声音和无尽的黑暗包围着，Jane充满了悔恨和绝望。四、氛围顺序（一）安静祥和的环境1.Standingontheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromthebottomofheart.站在空旷的道路上，他们抬头仰望天空，从心底感受到珍贵的平和。2.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsunandburstintotearsexcitedly.他们在落日余晖中紧紧相拥，并且激动得哭了起来。3.Inaninstant,everythinghadsuddenlygonequiet.Birdsdidn’tchirp,leavesdidn’trustleandinsectsdidn’tsing.Afeelingofstillnesscreptuponme.刹那间，万物都突然寂静无声，鸟儿不再歌唱，树叶不再沙沙作响，昆虫也停止了欢唱。一种寂静的感觉悄悄向我袭来。4.Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestarsgrewbrighter.Therewaslittlewind,onlytheflamesofourfirecrackled.Itwassosilent.AsIwaslyingbeneaththestars,Ithoughtabouthowfarwehadalreadytravelled.午夜时分，天空变得更清晰了，星星也更亮了。风很小，只有我们火焰噼啪作响。太安静了。我躺在星空下，想着我们已经走了多远。5.Atdusk,wegatheredaroundwithothercampers,exchangingyummysnackswitheachotherinthecompanyoffire.Ourheartylaughterrangthroughthefields.黄昏时分，我们和其他露营者聚一起，在火的陪伴下互相交换美味的零食。我们的欢声笑语响彻田野。（二）凄惨悲凉的环境1.Shesatonthedampgrassandstaredupatthepalestarsinthevastsky,withtearsrollingdownherdirtyface.Thebone-chillingwindforcedhertocurlup.她坐在潮湿的草地上，抬头望着广阔的天空中暗淡的星星，泪水从她肮脏的脸上滚落下来。刺骨的寒风迫使她蜷缩起来。（三）风雨交加的环境1.Thewindwas

howlinghorriblyandtherainwas

pouring

down,

flappingagainstthetrees.风可怕地怒吼着，大雨倾盆而下，拍打着树枝。2.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorror

creepingupon

me.我被自然发怒的力量抓住了。一种恐惧感悄悄爬到我身上。3.Outside,thewindsblewthetreesandbeatagainstthehouse,whichmadepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.外面，风吹着树，拍打着房子，使人们无法睁开眼睛。4.ItwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterwhenschoolwasoverandIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放学的时候在下着倾盆大雨，我到家时全身都湿了。5.Therewasaheavydownpour.Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain.下了大暴雨，真不幸，汤姆在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。6.Theweatherinsummerisunpredictable.Justnow,itwassunny.Inaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andthestormbegantorain.夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。刚才还是晴空万里，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，开始了狂风暴雨。7.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling.在那个黑暗的暴风雨的夜晚，海浪拍打，狂风呼啸。（三）炙热严寒的环境1.Theweatherwassohotthattherewasnowin