温州市普通高中高三第一次适应性考试英语试题读后续写课件

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2:Soon,I

jumpedintoweeksofpreparation.Q1：Whatistheapplicationformabout?Q2:WhatdidIprepare?Step1审题Step1审题Withthreelittlebabies,I

nevertookabreak,completelyignoringanyself-care.WhenI

wastootiredtomakemyselfdinner,I’djusteatthekids’

leftovercereal(麦片粥).I

thoughtthiswasagreatplantolosesomeweightandcalleditthe“CerealforDiet.”

Backthen,I

knewnothingaboutnutrition.Ofcourse,theCerealforDietfailed,asdidallmyotherattempts.Oneday,aftercleaningupallthemessmykidshadmade,I

wentoutforawalk.I

passedagym.I

lookedaway.Healthypeoplewentthere,butthiswasnotme.Whileturningaway,I

sawanadforasix-monthfitnesschallenge.I

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myfastwalkintheoppositedirection,butthatsignjuststayedonmymind.Step1审题Istillrememberwhatfinallymotivatedmetosignupforthechallenge.Itwasaten-minuteperiodinwhichmysonthrewhisspaghettiplatestraightup,sendingnoodlesandsauceflyingeverywhere.Assoonasmyhusbandgothome,Isaid,“You’reincharge.”Imadeabeelineforthegym,marchedstraightinandsaid,“Fixme.”AndIwasassignedayoungandfittrainer,Emily.Sheaskedwhatmygoalswereforthesix-monthchallenge.Atthatmoment,Iwasspeechless.Noticingmyembarrassment,EmilyjusthandedmetheheaviestweightsIhadinmylifeandsaid,“Okay,soinsixmonthsyouwillcompeteinabody-buildingshow.”Itriedexplaining,“No,Idon’twanttodoashow.Thatsoundsscary.”Sheignoredmyfear,andwejumpedintostrictworkoutsandnutritionplanning.Step1审题Overthenextsixmonths,Emilyforcedmetofocusonmyself–mywantsandmyneeds.Ilearnedtoseefoodasstrengthandsweatasprogress.Ilearnedhowtofuelmybodyinsteadofstarvingit,balancingproteins,carbs,andfats.Emilypushedmepastmylimits,correctingmyform,timingmybreaks,andcheeringmeonwhenIwantedtoquit.Iimprovedeverydayinthegym.Q1：Whatistheapplicationformabout?Q2:WhatdidIprepare?Abody-buildingshow.情节发展：“我”疲于照顾小孩等生活琐事而忽略了自我-看到了6个月健身挑战-在教练要求下开始饮食调整和健身锻炼最终完成自我蜕变的故事情感发展：不自信，忽略自我感受，害怕展现自我-越来越专注自我，自信展现自己。Step2DesignyourplotParagraph1:Oneday,Emilyhandedmeanapplicationform.Paragraph

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jumpedintoweeksofpreparation.犹豫/纠结/害怕，但又抱有一点希望“我”的反应“我”的决定参加健美秀转变因素Emily的鼓励/六个月健身锻炼给我信心“我”的准备具体内容经过当天比赛主旨升华专注自我，重视自己的需求，让自己变得更健康，更自信FearanddoubtStep2DesignyourplotQ1：Whatistheapplicationformabout?犹豫/纠结/害怕，但又抱有一点希望“我”的反应ThemomentIsawit/Uponseeingit,agreatsense/mixtureofhesitationandscarewashedoverme.看到它的一瞬间，畏惧和担心油然而生。FearanddoubtAnxietyanddread

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anxiousanddreadfulFearanddoubtEmotionalWordsEmotionaladjectivesEmotionalnouns喜悦happy;delighted;pleased;cheerful;joyfulhappiness;delight;joy激动excited;thrilledexcitement;thrill惊讶surprised;amazed;astonished;shockedsurprise;amazement;astonishment;shock感动moved;touchedmove;touch感谢thankful;gratefulgratitude;appreciation满意satisfied;contentsatisfaction好奇curiouscuriosity放松relaxed;relieved(宽慰的)reliefFearanddoubtEmotionalWordsEmotionaladjectivesEmotionalnouns生气、愤怒angry;annoyed;mad;furious;madanger;annoyance;fury;rage悲伤、痛苦sad;sorrowful;painful;bittersadness;sorrow;grief,pain失望、绝望disappointed;hopeless;desperatedisappointment;desperation沮丧、抑郁upset;frustrated;depressedfrustration;depression恐惧、害怕scared;frightened;

terrified；panicked;fear;terror;fright;panic;horror担心、紧张、焦虑、内疚、尴尬worried;concerned;nervous;tense;anxious;guilty；embarrassedworry;anxiety;nervousness;guilt;embarrassmentUponhearingthatnews,disappintedandupset,SongXiaobaopointedatmewithhisfingers,saying“That’llteachyou,Haiyan!”情绪动作1语言把情绪和动作链、语言、情境等结合，形成动作面回顾---动静法——情绪+动作链、语言、情境等情境动作2FearanddoubtStep3Polishyourwriting犹豫/纠结/害怕，但又抱有一点希望“我”的反应ThemomentIsawit/Uponseeingit,anxiousanddreadful,Ihesitated,staringattheforminmyhand,momentarilyunsureofwhattodo.看到它的一瞬间，焦虑和担心油然而生，我犹豫了，盯着手中的表格看了会儿，那一瞬间不知道到底该怎么做。ThemomentIsawit/Uponseeingit,agreatsense/mixtureofanxietyanddreadwashingoverme,Ihesitated,staringattheforminmyhand,momentarilyunsureofwhattodo.Now,however,alongsidethesurgeofpanic,thereemergedadifferentfeeling—astrangeyetunmistakableeagernessgrowinginsideme.FearanddoubtPracticeUponseeingtheunexpectednews,suprisedandamazed,ChenYufrozeforasecondandstaredatthescreen,saying“Heactuallymadeit!”​一看到这个出乎意料的消息，他心中涌起强烈的震惊与意外，陈宇愣了一秒，盯着屏幕，说：“他居然做到了！”FearanddoubtPracticeUponseeingtheboykickthestraycat,agreatsenseofangerandannoyancewashingoverhim,ZhangWeisteppedforwardandpulledhimback,saying“Don’thurtthecat!”​一看到那个男孩踢流浪猫，他心中涌起强烈的愤怒与不满，张伟走上前把男孩拉回来，说：“别伤害这只猫！”FearanddoubtPracticeUponhearingthenews,sorrowfulandworried,Weihongloweredhisheadandwipedhertears,saying“Grandpamustbesafe!”​一听到这个消息，她心中涌起强烈的悲伤与担忧，魏红低下头擦了擦眼泪，说：“爷爷一定要平安啊！”Fearanddoubt转变因素Emily的鼓励/六个月健身锻炼给我信心Awarmsilencesettledbesideme.ItwasEmily,hershouldergentlytouchingmine,hergazefixednotontheformbutontheresolveinmyeyes—aquietpridethatwhispered,“Youarealreadystrongerthanyouthink.”一份温暖的寂静在我身旁落定。是艾米丽，她的肩膀轻轻靠着我的，她的目光并非落在表格上，而是落在我眼中的决心上——一份安静的骄傲，仿佛在低语：“你早已比你自己想象的更强大。”人物无言的支持Awarmsilencesettledbesideme.Itwas...,her/hisshouldergentlytouchingmine,his/hergazefixednoton...buton...

—aquiet...thatwhispered,“........”Step3PolishyourwritingFearanddoubtAwarmsilencesettledbesideme.ItwasLily,hershouldergentlytouchingmine,hergazefixednotonthebustlingcrowdbutonthedistanthorizon—aquietcompanionshipthatwhispered,“I’mhere.”

一阵温暖的沉默在我身旁落下。那是Lily，她的肩膀轻轻挨着我的肩膀，她的目光并非落在喧嚣的人群上，而是凝视着远方的地平线——那是一种安静的陪伴，仿佛在低语：“有我在。”

PracticeFearanddoubtDrawingasteadyingbreath,Icommittedmynametopaper，awarethatthissignaturewasnotanentryintoacontest,butatestamenttothepersonIhadstruggledtobecome.我稳住呼吸、在纸上签下名字，意识到这个签名并非一张比赛的入场券，而是对我一路挣扎终成之人的证明。“我”的决定参加健美秀Drawingasteadyingbreath,sb.didsth.,awarethat...wasnot...,but...Step3PolishyourwritingFearanddoubtDrawingasteadyingbreath,Leotookthebasketballshot,awarethatwinningwasnotaboutoneperson,butteamwork.稳住呼吸，Leo投出了篮球，清楚获胜靠的不是单打独斗，而是团队配合。PracticeStep3PolishyourwritingFearanddoubtDespiteoccasionaltiredness,IadheredfaithfullytoEmily’strainingplanandneverskippedasingletrainingsession—pushingthroughsoremuscleswithsmall,steadyefforts.Withbalancedandnutritiousmeals,Imaintainedadiligentrecordofmydailyintake,followingeveryguidelinetotheletter.EverydropofsweatwasasteptowardthechallengeI’doncehesitatedtoembrace.

尽管偶尔感到疲惫，我仍忠实坚持艾米丽的训练计划，从未缺席过一次训练——靠着点滴稳步的努力，克服肌肉酸痛的不适。伴随着均衡营养的餐食，我认真记录每日饮食摄入，严格遵守每一条指导要求。每一滴汗水，都是向那个我曾不敢尝试的挑战迈出的一步。“我”的准备具体内容Step3PolishyourwritingFearanddoubtOntheshowday,withheadheldhigh,I

steppedontothestage,movingthrougheachposewithdeliberategrace,Emily’swordsechoinginmymind.比赛当天，我昂首挺胸地走上健美比赛的舞台，从容优雅地完成了每个动作，艾米丽的声音一直在脑海中回响。经过当天比赛With+身体部位+非谓语，sb.did,doing...,sb’swordsechoinginone’smind.Step3PolishyourwritingFearanddoubtWithfistsclenchedtightly,hecrossedthefinishlineatlast,gaspingforbreath,hisclassmates’cheersechoinginhismind.攥紧拳头，他终于冲过了终点线，大口喘着气，同学们的欢呼声在他耳边回响。PracticeStep3PolishyourwritingWith+身体部位+非谓语，sb.did,doing...,sb’swordsech