二、应用文写作分类突破

♦二、应用文写作分类突破♦突破1:邀请信【语料储备】【句式建模】1.篇首——开篇明义①我代表我校,写这封信是为了诚挚地邀请你来参加我们学校的英语日活动。Onbehalfofourschool,Iamwritingtoextendmyearnestinvitationtoyoutoparticipatein/getinvolvedin/getengagedinourschool’sEnglishDayprogram.

②为了丰富学生的课余生活,学校定于下周六在学校礼堂举办校园音乐节。Inordertoenrich/Withthepurposeofenrichingstudents’after-schoollife,theSchoolMusicFestivalisscheduled/willbeheldnextSaturdayintheschoolhallbyourschool.

2.篇中——邀请理由①本次活动的一些细节如下。Somedetailedinformationoftheprogramisasfollows.

②一年一度的传统文化节包含了各种各样的活动,包括文艺演出和动手实践活动,比如剪纸、包饺子等。TheAnnualTraditionalCultureFestivalcoversawidevarietyofactivities,rangingfromartisticperformancestohands-onactivities,suchas/includingpapercuttingandmakingdumplings.

③这个活动不仅增进我们之间的相互了解,而且能让我们对中国传统文化有更加深入的认识。Thisactivitynotonlyenhances/promotesmutualunderstandingbetweenusbutalsoallowsustohaveadeeperinsightintotraditionalChineseculture.

3.篇尾——期待回复①如果你能尽早确认参加,我将不胜感激。I’dappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.

②你的参与必将给我们带来更多快乐。Yourparticipationwillsurelyaddtoourenjoyment.

【话题词汇】常用词汇话题示例相关表达(1)invite/invitation(邀请)(2)make/deliveraspeech(做演讲)(3)judge(评委)(4)celebration(庆典)(5)honor/privilege(荣幸)(6)arrangement(安排)(7)presence(出席)(8)activity(活动)(9)sharejoy(分享快乐)(10)acceptone’sinvitation(接受某人的邀请)(11)onbehalfof(代表)(12)participatein/takepartin/joinin(参加)(13)lookforwardto/eagerlyawait(期待)(14)atone’searliestconvenience/assoonaspossible(尽快)(15)appreciate/begrateful/bethankfulfor(感激)你校即将迎来100周年校庆,你作为学生会代表邀请校友们参加。内容包括:1.告知活动安排;2.期待广泛参与。(1)100周年校庆纪念活动theschool’s100thanniversarycelebrations(2)表示热烈欢迎extendawarm/anenthusiasticwelcometo(3)风景如画的校园picturesquecampus/breathtakingsceneryaroundcampus(4)精彩的表演spectacularperformance(5)多才多艺的师生versatileteachersandstudents(6)教育讲座论坛EducationalSeminarForum你校交换生Tom曾在程序设计竞赛中获奖,你打算邀请他加入你的团队。请根据以下要点给他写一封邀请信,内容包括:1.邀请原因;2.加入的意义。(1)专业知识和经验expertiseandexperience(2)完美地满足需求perfectlymeetone’sneeds(3)我们团队的宝贵成员avaluableadditiontoourteam(4)和志同道合的人合作collaboratewithlike-mindedindividuals(5)进一步提升编程技能furtherdevelopprogrammingskills【重温真题】(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。DearCaroline,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【审题与构思】本文为一篇邀请信——邀请外教参加节目访谈。本文写作需把握以下三点:1.理解交际目的,根据双方身份把握好语气;2.介绍节目是本文的重点,需具体详细;3.告知访谈时间和话题需言简意赅,清晰明确。内容结构方面,可将信件分为三段。第一段自我介绍并说明写信目的。本题中,李华以节目负责人的身份向外教Caroline提出邀请,开头应适当做自我介绍表明身份,然后表明写信目的——邀请Caroline参加节目访谈第二段介绍节目以及告知访谈时间和话题。在介绍节目时,不要泛泛而谈,应涉及节目的具体信息,如创办时间、节目内容、受众以及受欢迎程度等。在告知访谈时间和话题时,要简洁明了,切勿花费过多笔墨赘述第三段结束信件。再次邀约,期待回复【经典范文】DearCaroline,I’mLiHua,directoroftheEnglishprogram“TalkandTalk”.Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinaninterviewofourprogram.Establishedinthe1990s,ourprogramenjoysalonghistory,bringingjoysandknowledgetothestudents.EveryMonday,ourprograminvitesnativeEnglishspeakersfromallwalksoflifetosharewithusabouttheirexperienceinChina,rangingfromtheirattitudestowardscertainissuestotheirworkandlifeinChina.Ournextinterviewwilltakeplaceat2p.m.nextMonday,thethemeofwhichwillbe“TeachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage”.Asadistinguishedforeignteacher,yourexperienceissuretobringussomuchfun.Ifthetimeandtopicworkforyou,pleasekeepusinformed.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【学生习作】DearCaroline,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.MynameisLiHuaandI’mthedirectoroftheEnglishprogram“TalkandTalk”onourcampusradiostation.OurprogramaimstoprovidestudentswithanopportunitytoimprovetheirlisteningandspeakingskillsinEnglishbylisteningtonativespeakerstalkaboutvarioustopics.Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinaninterviewrelevanttoourprogram,whichwilltakeplaceat2p.m.onMonday,revolvingthetheme“TeachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage”.Ifthethemeandtimeworkforyou,pleaseinformmeandwecanarrangethedetails.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIlookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua教师点评[得分]11分优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整;2.语言恰当,较好地达到了邀请的目的。缺点:1.文章第一段不够简洁,没有开门见山发出邀约;2.文章结构布局欠合理,将过多的信息放在了首段,导致文章头重脚轻;3.节目介绍略显单薄,角度单一。【修改与升级】DearCaroline,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I’mLiHua,directoroftheEnglishprogram“TalkandTalk”onourcampusradiostation.Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinaninterviewofourprogram.Ourprogram,whichiswell-receivedamongstudentsforyears,aimstoprovidestudentswithanopportunitytoimprovetheirlisteningandspeakingskillsinEnglishbylisteningtonativespeakerstalkaboutvarioustopics,suchasarts,music,historyandsports.Asscheduled,ournextinterviewwilltakeplaceat2p.m.nextMonday,featuring“TeachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage”.Ifthetimeandtopicworkforyou,pleaseinformmeandwecanarrangethedetails.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua教师点评[得分]14分优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整,语言恰当,很好地实现了交际目的;2.文章结构合理,主次分明。首段开门见山自我介绍并提出写信目的,第二段介绍了节目的基本情况,包括受众、节目内容以及受欢迎程度等;3.详略得当、内容充实,并恰当地使用了从句、分词等高分表达,锦上添花。【实战演练】假定你是李华,学校英语俱乐部负责人。俱乐部计划举行经典英文电影赏析会(ClassicalEnglishFilmNight),请你给美籍外教Liz写一封邮件邀请她参加。内容包括:1.赏析会的时间、地点;2.活动内容介绍;3.邀请Liz并请她推荐电影。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearLiz,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearLiz,AsthestudentinchargeoftheEnglishclubofourschool,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusinour“ClassicalEnglishFilmNight”,anactivitywhichwe’regoingtoholdnextweek.Aimingtopiquestudents’interestinEnglishlearning,theactivityisscheduledtobeheldinthelecturehallat7:00p.m.nextFriday.First,theclassicalmoviewithprofoundtheme—PrideandPrejudicewillbescreenedaimingtoarousestudents’awarenessofgenderequalityandothersocialissues.Moreover,wehaveinvitedafilmdirectortogiveabriefintroductionincludingthehistorybackgroundandthecamerawork,whichhopefullycandeepenstudents’insightofBritishcultureandfilmingtechniques.Sinceyou’reanenthusiastofclassicalfilms,wewouldappreciateitmoreifyoucouldrecommendoneortwoofyourfavorites.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua突破2:推荐信【语料储备】【句式建模】1.篇首——开篇明义①我非常愿意应你的要求再推荐一部令人印象深刻的中国电影。I’mperfectlywillingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.

②得知你渴望进一步了解我的国家,我强烈推荐《航拍中国》这部获奖纪录片。Learningthatyourferventdesiretofurtherknowaboutmycountry,IstronglyrecommendAerialChina,anaward-winningdocumentary.

2.篇中——推荐理由①他是一个全面的学生,各科成绩优异。作为一个很有潜力的男孩,他擅长解决难题。Heisanall-roundstudentwithexcellentgradesinallsubjects.Asaboywithgreatpotential,heisgood/skillfulatsolvingdifficultproblems.

②首先,餐厅配有古老的中国家具,体现了中国文化的优雅与深度,必定会给你留下深刻的印象。Firstandforemost,equippedwithancientChinesefurniture,therestaurantreflectsthegraceanddepthofChineseculture,whichwillsurelyleaveadeepimpressiononyou.

3.篇尾——表达希望①希望你能考虑我的建议。热切期待你的及时答复。Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyexpected.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.

②我希望我的推荐对你有帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。Ihopethatyoucanfindmyrecommendationbeneficial.Lookingforwardtoyourearly/promptreply.【话题词汇】常用词汇话题示例相关表达(1)recommend/recommendation(推荐)(2)suggest/suggestion(建议)(3)extraordinary(卓越的)(4)competent(能干的)(5)expertise(专业知识)(6)qualify/qualification(资格)(7)besuitablefor(适合)(8)makecontributionsto(做出贡献)(9)beresponsiblefor(负责)(10)meetthestandard(符合标准)(11)raiseone’sinterest(激发某人的兴趣)(12)beexposedto(接触)(13)beofsomehelp(有帮助)(14)takesth.intoaccount/consideration(考虑)(15)rangefrom...to...(从……到……不等)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry暑假期间来中国游学。请你给他写封信推荐一道中国美食,内容包括:1.你的推荐;2.说明理由;3.表达祝愿。(1)典型的中国美食thetypicalChinesedelicacy(2)原产于四川省originateinSichuanProvince(3)品尝一下这种美味佳肴的真味haveagenuine/anauthentictasteofthisdelicioustreat(4)去隐藏在小巷里的当地餐馆gotothelocalrestaurantshiddeninalleys(5)享受你口腔中各种味道和口感的迸发enjoytheexplosionofflavorsandtexturesinyourmouth假定你是李华。在上周的国际文化节上,你结识了喜欢中国书法的交换生Peter。你准备赠送他一本英文版《中国书法鉴赏》。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.简介该书;3.询问地址。(1)备受欢迎earnitsgreatpopularity(2)全面地描绘了中国书法的发展情况drawafullpictureofthedevelopmentofChinesecalligraphy(3)提供专业分析和有用的意见provideexpertanalysesandusefulcomments(4)加深对中国传统文化的了解deepeninsightsintotraditionalChineseculture【重温真题】(2024·浙江1月高考)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:1.介绍这项运动;2.说明推荐理由。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题与构思】本文为一篇推荐信——向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。本文写作需把握以下三点:1.理解交际目的,根据双方身份把握好语气;2.介绍课间运动是本文的重点,需具体详细;3.说明推荐理由需有理有据,清晰明确。内容结构方面,可将信件分为三段。第一段简述运动的重要性(身心健康);或者谈谈目前的现状(学生学业压力大,不爱运动,身体素质差等),因此运动刻不容缓第二段What:介绍适合课间开展的运动,如briskwalking,ropejumping,jianzikicking等,并介绍其特点。Why:推荐理由可从以下角度着手:1.从该运动本身特点出发:simpleandaccessible,lesspronetoinjury2.从运动对学生的影响出发:(注意此处不宜泛泛而谈运动的好处,而要具体结合你所推荐的运动)第三段呼应写作目的,鼓励同学们运动起来【经典范文】Currently,moststudentsloadedwithheavyschoolworkattachlittleimportancetosports,whichmightleadtosomepotentialhealthproblems.Therefore,let’smakethemostofourbreaktimeandgetmoving!Honestly,youcan’tbeatbriskwalking,aformofmoderate-intensityaerobicexercisethatinvolveswalkingatafasterpacethanusual.Itissuitableforpeopleofallfitnesslevelsandcanbedoneindividuallyoringroups.Thereasonswhybriskwalkingisagreatchoicearetoomanytobelisted.Notably,simpleandaccessible,itdoesn’trequireanyspecialequipmentortraininganditcaneasilybeincorporatedintoyourdailyroutines.Whilewalkingalone,youcaneventakeamomenttoreflectonyourselfandenjoysuchqualityme-time,whichhelpsgetridofstressandbemoreenergizedwhenyoureturntoyourstudies.Moreover,benefitstostrengthenimmunesystemandtherebyreducetheriskofserioushealthproblemscan’tbedenied.HaveIpiquedyourinterest?Let’sgetmovingforbetterhealthandwell-being.Remembertostartsmallandslowlyworkyourwaytoalongerandharderexercise.【学生习作】I’dliketosuggestTaiChi,akindofChinesemartialart,forourschoolbreaks.It’saneasyexercisethatcombinesslowmovementswithdeepbreathing.WhyTaiChi?Itissuchacommonandeasysportthatyoujustwarmyourselvesandgetstarted.Everyonecanhaveatry.It’ssuitableforallstudents.Itpromotesmentalhealth,reducesstress,andenhancesphysicalfitnessandbalance.Plus,it’seasytolearnanddoesn’trequireanyspecialequipment.GiveTaiChiatry—it’saperfectwaytorefreshyourmindandbodyduringschoolhours.教师点评[得分]11分优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整;2.语言恰当,较好地达到了推荐的目的。缺点:1.文章第一段的开场过于生硬,没有实现交际目的,关键词应该是recommend而不是suggest。2.第二段的推荐理由重复啰嗦,common,easy,everyone,suitableforallstudents都是表达一个意思:“太极简单上手”。mentalhealth和reducesstress不是同等份量,前者更笼统。3.推荐理由略显单薄,句型简单。【修改与升级】Areyouwearyofstayingatyourdeskallday?It’shightimethatweshouldgetourbodymovingduringbreaks.I’dliketorecommendTaiChi,agentleChinesemartialart,forourschoolbreaks.It’saslowexercisethatcombinesflowingmovementswithdeepbreathing.WhyTaiChi?Itissuchacommonandeasysportthatyoujustwarmyourselvesandgetstarted,withnorequirementforanyspecialequipment.Ithelpstoreducestressofstudying,whichcontributestoimprovedconcentrationandmentalwell-being.Additionally,itemphasizestheunityofmindandbody,promotingflexibilityandbalance.GiveTaiChiatry—it’saperfectwaytorefreshyourmindandbodyduringschoolhours.教师点评[得分]14分优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整,语言恰当,很好地实现了交际目的;2.文章结构合理,主次分明。首段结合学生现状,呼吁大家动起来;第二段介绍了太极的基本情况,并从方便简单、有益身心健康等角度进行了推荐;3.详略得当、内容充实,并恰当地使用了从句、分词等高分表达,锦上添花。【实战演练】假定你是李华。你得知一家英国电视台的摄制队在你市拍摄中国传统美食节目,请你给他们写一封电子邮件,推荐本地一家老字号的饭店——莲香楼(LinHeungTeaHouse)。内容包括:1.欢迎节目组的到来;2.推荐该饭店的理由;3.期待节目的播出。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearSir,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearSir,IammorethandelightedtoknowthatyouareproducingaTVprogramabouttraditionalChinesefoodinourcity.WelcometoChinaandIamwritingtoyoutorecommendalocalrestaurantnamedLinHeungTeaHousewhichyoumightbeinterestedin.Withahistoryofmorethan100years,therestauranthasearneditsfameforthetraditionalanduniqueCantonesecuisine(Guangdongcuisine),amongwhichthesalt-bakedchickenandstuffedtofuarewellworthtrying.Itsspecialseasoning,featuredcookingmethods,diversifiedcookingmaterialsanddistinctiveflavorshavebeenwidelyaccepted,attractingvisitors,especiallyfoodieswhohaveagreatpassionforChinesefood.What’smore,theelegantenvironmentwithtraditionalChineseelements,aswellasitstopservicewillsurelyleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou.HopeyoucangivesomeconsiderationtomyrecommendationandIamanticipatingthebroadcastofyourprogram.Yourssincerely,LiHua突破3:告知信【语料储备】【句式建模】1.篇首——开篇明义①很高兴得知一场重要的排球比赛将在我们学校的体育场举行,我写信是为了表达我的兴奋,并告诉你一些相关的信息。Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium,I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitementandinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.

②我非常高兴地告知你们国际文化节将在我市举行。I’mverydelightedtotellyouthataninternationalculturalfestivalistobeheldinmycity.

2.篇中——告知信息①这一活动将于下周一举办,旨在加强跨文化交流,帮助学生提升多文化意识。Theactivity,tobeheldnextMonday,isaimedatenhancingcross-culturalcommunicationandhelpingstudentsdevelopmulticulturalawareness.

②一开始,会播放一个介绍视频,展示多种文化的和谐共存。Tobeginwith,anintroductoryvideowillbeplayedtoshowcasetheharmoniouscoexistenceofmanycultures.

③最后,活动将以精彩的表演结束,一定既富有娱乐性,又能增进我们的知识。Atlast,theactivitywillendupwithawonderfulperformance,whichwillsurelybeentertainingandinformative.

3.篇尾——期待回复如果你想更多地了解这个活动,随时联系我。Ifyouwanttolearnmoreabouttheactivity,feelfreetocontactme.【话题词汇】常用词汇话题示例相关表达(1)inform(告知)(2)provide/offer(提供)(3)request(要求)(4)confirm(确认)(5)relevant(相关的)(6)concerning(关于)(7)schedule(n.时间表v.时间定于)(8)detailthearrangement(详细说明安排)(9)inresponseto(作为回应)(10)bringsth.toone’sattention(引起某人的注意)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友David对你校的实践项目VegetableGarden非常感兴趣,请你写一封邮件告知相关情况,内容包括:1.项目内容;2.邀请体验。(1)以实践体验为特色featurehands-onexperiences(2)发展实用技能的途径anaccesstodevelopingpracticalskills(3)欣赏迷人大自然的窗口awindowforthefascinatingnature(4)播种、清理杂草、记录它们的生长并收获蔬菜sowtheseeds,cleantheweed,recordtheirgrowthandharvestthevegetables(5)实地观察doreal-fieldobservations假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家里做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。(1)重视准时性laygreatemphasisonpunctuality(2)重视餐桌礼仪attachgreatimportancetotablemanners(3)进食时不吵闹don’tmakeloudsoundwhilechewingordrinking(4)合适的礼物appropriategifts(5)展示友好showyourkindnessandfriendliness【重温真题】(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。DearChris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【审题与构思】本文为一篇告知信——告知你的队友Chris相关的比赛信息。本文写作需把握以下两点:1.理解交际目的,根据双方身份把握好语气;2.告知的内容必须真实、准确,且告知事项需简明扼要。内容结构方面,可将信件分为三段。第一段交代背景和写作目的背景:球队近期将参加比赛写作目的:告知Chris一些相关信息第二段告知的具体内容1.比赛信息:应包括相关的比赛时间、地点、对手等要求2.赛前准备:看对手的比赛视频,分析对手的特点;好好休息,补充精力迎战;赛前集训,提高队员之间的配合等第三段期盼回复【经典范文】DearChris,Gettingtheinformationthatwe’llhaveavolleyballmatchnextMonday,I’mwritingtoinformyouofsomedetailsaboutthecomingeventsothatyoucanpreparewellforit.Firstandforemost,thematchtobeheldinthesportscentrewillbeginat2p.m.,inwhichwewillplayagainstthestudentscomingfromRedStarMiddleSchool.Besides,wewillwatchthevideothatrecordedthepreviousmatchagainstcompetitorstoanalyzetheskillsofthemtomorrow,soleavesometimeinadvance.Further,inordertoprovideenoughenergyforthecomingcompetition,itisnecessaryforyoutohaveagoodrest.Tosumup,Iwishyoucouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschoolandgiveaperfectperforminthematch.Lookingforwardtoourvictoryandyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【学生习作】DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.Avolleyballmatchisgoingtobeheldinafewweeksandourteamwillparticipate.Asforthedetailedinformationofthematch,therewillbeprobablydozensofteams,whichsoundschallenging.Additionally,notonlycanthetopthreeteamseachbeawardedamedalbutalltheotherteamstakingpartinitwillgetarewardaswell.Whatwillbethemostattractiveisthatthetopthreeteamstoreceivespecialvolleyballsthathavethenameofthemostpopularvolleyballplayeronthem.Therefore,wemustdoenoughpreparationsbeforethematch,suchastrainingasmoreaswecan.SoexcitedamIthatIcan’twaittojoininit.Howaboutyou?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua教师点评[得分]10分优点:1.要点齐全,内容完整;2.结构清晰,语言较恰当。缺点:1.“比赛信息”和“赛前准备”的比例分配不合理,前者占比过多,而后者则一句话简略带过。这两个要点的比重应该是一样的;2.“比赛信息”最重要的应该是时间地点和对手,本文并没有提及;3.“获得明星球员的亲笔签名”应表达为Themostexcitingpartisthatthetopfinisherswillbeawardedexclusivevolleyballs,eachsignedbyarenownedvolleyballstar.【修改与升级】DearChris,Iamthrilledtosharesomeexcitingnewswithyou.Ourvolleyballteamhasbeeninvitedtoparticipateinanupcomingtournament,whichpromisestobeanexhilaratingevent.Herearethekeydetailsofthecompetition.Thematchtobeheldinthesportscentrewillbeginat2p.m.nextFriday.Thetopthreeteamswillreceivewell-deservedmedals,andthemostexcitingpartisthatthetopfinisherswillbeawardedexclusivevolleyballs,eachsignedbyarenownedvolleyballstar.Inpreparationforthisevent,wewillintensifyourpracticesessions,focusingonbothindividualskillsandteamcoordination.Therefore,aseriesofstrategymeetingswillbeheldtodiscussourgameplanandaddressanypotentialchallenges.Pleaseletmeknowyouravailabilityfortheupcomingpracticesandstrategysessions.Iamlookingforwardtoyourenthusiasticresponse.Yourssincerely,LiHua教师点评[得分]14分优点:1.内容全面:邮件涵盖了所有关于比赛的关键信息,语言使用得当,有效地实现了沟通的目的。2.结构清晰:邮件结构合理,开头部分立即吸引了读者的注意,主体部分详细介绍了比赛的基本情况,并从多个角度强调了为比赛所做的准备。3.详略得当:内容充实,既没有冗余也不失重点,恰当地使用了从句、分词等高级语法结构,使邮件更具吸引力。【实战演练】假定你是李华,你正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容:学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearLeslie,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearLeslie,I’mdelightedtoseethegreatprogressyouhavemadeinyourChineselearningrecently.I’mwritingtoinformyouofthedetailsofournextclass.Asusual,theclasswillbegiventoyouat3p.m.thisSaturdayinmyflat.Duringthelesson,wewillhaveatasteoftheTangpoetry,aglorioustreasureintheChineseliterature,byappreciatingandrecitingtwoTangpoems,onebyLiBaiandtheotherbyDuFu,bothofwhomarerecognizedasoneofthemostoutstandingpoetsinthatera.Whenreadingthemaloud,notonlycanwefeeltheirrhythmicbeautybutwemayfeelhowthepoetsfelthundredsofyearsago.Togetbetterpreparedforthelesson,wouldyoupleasedoalittlereadinginadvanceaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynasty?Aglanceatitshistorymayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingoftheirworks.(AlittleresearchintothedynastymayshedsomelightontheprosperityofTangpoems.)Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetoaskme.Iwillbemorethangladtohelpyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua突破4:建议信【语料储备】【句式建模】1.篇首——开篇明义①关于如何学好中文,你向我寻求帮助,我将给出一些建议。YouhaveaskedmeforhelpconcerninghowtolearnChinesewell,andI’llmakesomesuggestions.

②得知你在适应新学校方面遇到困难,我特意写信给你,向你提供一些建议。Learningthatyouhavetroublefittinginyournewschool,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.

2.篇中——提出建议①你可以尝试将班级分成较小的小组,以促进协作和学生互动。它将让中国学生有机会在轻松的环境中练习英语。Youmaytrytodividetheclassintosmallergroupstopromotecollaborationandstudents’interaction,whichwillgiveChinesestudentsthechancetopracticeEnglishinalow-pressuresetting.

②强烈建议通过多阅读、多体验来丰富自己的生活。这样,我们可能会结识新朋友,不再感到孤独。It’sstronglyrecommendedtoenrichyourlifebyreadingmoreandexperiencingmore.Inthisway,wemaymakenewfriendsandwon’tfeellonelyanymore.

③此外,营造一种更加欢迎提问的氛围可能也是一种激励我们参与讨论的好方法。Additionally,creatingamorewelcomingatmospherewherequestionsareencouragedmaybeagoodmethodtomotivateustoengageindiscussions.

3.篇尾——希望采纳我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.

【话题词汇】常用词汇话题示例相关表达(1)suggest/suggestion(建议)(2)advise/advisable(建议;可行的)(3)propose/proposal(建议)(4)benefit/beneficial(好处;有益的)(5)consider/consideration(考虑)(6)encourage(鼓励)(7)havetrouble/difficultyin(在某方面遇到困难)(8)leadto/contributeto(导致)(9)taketheapproachintoconsideration(考虑这个方法)(10)hopefully(有望)假定你是李华,是你班的英语课代表。本学期初,新外教Steve想了解同学们对口语课的建议。请你代表班级给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.感兴趣的话题;2.授课方式;3.考试形式。(1)欲知becurioustoknow(2)在教学方法方面intermsofteachingapproaches(3)让我们更多地参与班级活动involvemoreofusintheclassactivities(4)评估我们能力的不同方法adifferentwaytoevaluateourcompetence(5)小组演讲、辩论或戏剧表演agrouppresentation,adebateoradramaperformance假定你是李华,你的外国朋友David最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.表达祝愿。(1)将汉语口语融入日常生活incorporatespokenChineseintoyourdailyroutine(2)报名参加汉语班或讨论组signupforaChineseclassordiscussiongroup(3)从收音机中学习一些汉语成语learnsomeChineseidiomaticphrasesfromradios(4)参加一些汉语沉浸式课程attendsomeChineseimmersionprograms(5)购买参考书籍purchasereferencebooks【重温真题】(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【审题与构思】本文为一篇建议信——你认为外教的分组方式有问题,并提出建议。本文写作需把握以下两点:1.理解交际目的;即表达诉求,提出建议,希望对方采纳;2.“说明问题”和“提出建议”的比重应该是相当的,具体的问题对应具体的建议。内容结构方面,可将信件分为三段。第一段交代背景和写作目的。背景:你认为外教的分组方式有问题写作目的:针对分组方式提出建议第二段问题和建议的具体内容。1.随机分组的弊端2.你的分组建议第三段希望采纳【经典范文】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Itisimpressiveofyourarrangementabouttheafter-classoralEnglishpracticewhichisassumedtoimproveourproficiency,butIfindsomeproblemswiththeapproach.Withreferencetoacceptablegrouping,Iamwritingtooffersomepracticaladvice.Giventhatthestudents’Englishlevelsandabilitiesareunevenandunmatchable,randompairingislikelytobringaboutsomeproblems,suchastimeschedule,relationshipandseximbalance,whichmaydiscourageourinterestinandpassionforEnglishtrainingandimposelimitationonmoreprogress.Woulditbepossibleforustopairourselvesonthebasisoflanguageproficiencyorpartnerpreference?Ithinkitwilldefinitelyhelptobuildamorerelaxingandharmoniousatmosphereallowingformoreinteractionandadvancements.Ihopemyideaswillbeofsomehelpandreallyappreciateyourtakingthetimetothinkaboutmyadvice.Yourssincerely,LiHua【学生习作】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Inmyopinion,thewayyoudividedusintogroupshassomeproblems.Firstly,twostudentsagroupmaymakeuslesseffectiveandweareunabletoobtainenoughadvice.Secondly,dividingrandomlymayleadustobeingshytoexpressourselves.Inordertosolvethepotentialproblems,Isuggestthateachgroupshouldincludethreeormorestudents.Apartfromthat,weshouldbedividedwithourfriendswhoknowuswell,sothatwecanexpressourselvesbetter.Lastbutnotleast,ademonstrationshouldbeheldinordertoshowourprogressinspokenEnglishandboostourconfidence.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua教师点评[得分]9分缺点:1.首段中,考生直接指出问题,其实不利于个人观点的表达,更不符合交际目的。从真实的交际功能出发,礼貌委婉是建议信的主要基调;2.要点分布不合理,第一段应该表明写作目的,第二段提出问题和给出建议;3.第二段结尾demonstration这个建议不相关。【修改与升级】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.ThanksforyourarrangementbutIdon’tthinkit’sagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Tobeginwith,pairingupstudentsmayleadtoreducedcommunicationwithingroup,whichcanhindertheprogressofstudents.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwellwith.Therefore,mysuggestionistoinvolve3or4studentsinagrouportoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.EveryonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Hopefully,mysuggestionscouldbeofsomehelp.Yourssincerely,LiHua教师点评[得分]13分优点:1.内容相关性:邮件内容与提出的问题紧密相关,有效地表达了对随机分组练习口语的担忧,并给出了合理的建议。2.结构合理性:邮件结构清晰,正文部分逻辑清晰,先指出问题,再提出建议,比重分配合理。3.语言准确性:邮件使用了恰当的语言表达,如“reducedcommunication”和“feeluncomfortable”,这些词汇准确地传达了学生可能的体验。【实战演练】假定你是李华,你们学校的英国交换生Jeff准备参加“外国人讲中国成语故事”比赛,他发邮件请你给予辅导。你回复邮件,内容包括:1.答应帮忙;2.提出建议;3.询问辅导时间与地点。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearJeff,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearJeff,Howareyoudoing?Havinglearntthatyouaregoingtotakepartinthe“ForeignerstellChineseidiomstory”speakingcontestandaskmeforguidance,I’mwritingtoprovideyouwithmyhelp.Firstofall,amongthousandsofprofoundidioms,you’dbetterchoosetheonethatisinstructiveandinterestingaswellassearchitsmeaningandor