Unit4Unit6期末作文专题（话题作文）课件外研版英语七年级上册

新外研七上-话题作文新外研|七上|英语|U4-U6|话题范文制作：时间：CONTENTS目录作文评分标准考试范围+话题单元话题作文解析期末综合作文解析作文评分标准PART

01作文评分标准：给分范围档次要求13-15分①书写工整,要点齐全②语句通顺，逻辑合理③语法、拼写无误④高级句式。10-12分能写出大部分要点,语句较通顺、完整,有个别语法、拼写错误,但不影响句意,书写工整。7-9分能写出部分要点,语句基本通顺、完整,有少量语法、拼写错误,但尚能达意,书写较工整。4-6分能写出个别要点,语句不够通顺、完整,语法、拼写错误较多,只有个别句子可读,书写不够工整。0-3分未能写出基本要点,语法、拼写错误多,不知所云,书写潦草。作文评分标准：结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点1.结构2.要点3.逻辑4.语法5.亮点三段式：“观点——要点——总结”要点齐全，紧扣主题，围绕中心逻辑通顺，使用适当的衔接词语法正确，确保句子结构，语法正确加入亮点，高级的词汇、词组、句型考试范围+话题PART

02考试范围+话题:Unit4Timetocelebrate角度1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节主题：节假日角度2：介绍你最喜欢的中国节日以及原因-国庆节角度3：向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的传统节日-春节角度4：介绍节日身边的“责任之星”以及节日工作经历考试范围+话题:Unit5Fantasticfriends主题：神奇的动物角度1：根据所给信息介绍大熊猫并呼吁保护大熊猫角度2：写一篇关于保护濒危动物的文章角度3：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因角度4：介绍野生动物的生存现状并呼吁大家保护动物考试范围+话题:Unit6Thepowerofplants角度1：介绍中国的茶文化主题：植物的力量角度2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物角度3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施角度4：介绍植物的重要性并呼吁大家保护植物单元话题作文解析PART

03U4范文1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节

你的英国朋友Michael想了解中国的传统节日。请你根据以下要点和要求，以“The

Mid-Autumn

Festival”为题，写一篇英语短文向他介绍该节日。要点：（1）When

is

the

festival

celebrated?（2）What

activities

do

people

do

during

the

festival?（3）How

do

you

like

it?

要求：（1）文章应包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；（2）词数不少于90。

审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一、三人称一般现在时The

Mid-Autumn

Festival

The

Mid-Autumn

Festival

is

one

of

the

most

important

traditionalfestivals

in

China.It

takes

place

on

the

fifteenth

day

of

the

eighth

lunar

month.(介绍中秋节的基本情况)

During

this

festival,

people

usually

get

together

with

their

families

for

a

big

dinner.

Eating

moon

cakes

is

a

must

duringthe

festival.

Its

round

shape

stands

for

family

reunions.

At

night,

people

always

enjoy

the

full

moon.

It

makes

them

thinkof

their

relatives

and

friends.(描述人们的庆祝活动)I

really

like

the

festival,

not

only

because

I

can

enjoy

the

delicious

moon

cakes,

but

because

I

can

have

a

family

reunion.

It

always

makes

me

feel

warm

in

my

heart.(表达个人感受)U4范文1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节U4范文2：介绍你最喜欢的中国节日以及原因-国庆节。中国有很多节日,如春节、中秋节和端午节等。请参考以下思维导图,以“MyFavouriteChineseFestiva!”为题,写一篇英语短文。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一、三人称一般现在时MyfavoriteChinesefestivalTherearemanyfestivalsinChina.Ofallthefestivals,IlikeNationalDaybest.It'son1stOctobereveryyear.(引出最喜欢的节日以及时间)WhenNationalDaycomes,wehaveaseven-dayholiday.It'satimeformetohavefunwithmyfamily.Icangooutwithmyparentstovisitsomeplacesofinterest.AndoneimportantthingisthatIcanfeeltheloveforChinafromeveryone.Itisreallytouching.(人们如何庆祝)NationalDayisadayforChinesepeopletocelebratethebirthdayofChina.Wecanseethecountryisgettingbetterandbetter.Andweshouldworkhardtomakeourcountrystronger.(喜欢的原因)U4范文2：介绍你最喜欢的中国节日以及原因-国庆节。U4范文3：向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的传统节日-春节。假设你叫李伟，你的美国笔友汤姆想了解中国的传统节日。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的传统节日。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一、三人称一般现在时DearTom，Iamgladtohearfromyou.LetmetellyousomethingaboutmyfavouritetraditionalChinesefestival.

Inmycountrytherearemanyfestivals.MyfavouritefestivalistheSpringFestival.ItusuallycomesinJanuaryorFebruary.（最喜欢的节日）DuringtheSpringFestival，peopledomanythings，

suchashavingabigfamilydinnerandwatchingaspecialprogrammeonTV.（活动1）Childrenoftengethongbaofromtheirparentsandgrandparents.Itmeansluckymoney.（活动2）Besides，peoplealwayswearnewclothesandvisittheirrelativesandfriends.（活动3）IhopeyoucancometoChinatocelebratetheSpringFestivalwithme.I’msureyouwillhaveagoodtime！（发出邀请）

Bestwishes！Yours，LiWeiU4范文4：介绍节日身边的“责任之星”以及节日工作经历。

有这样一群人，他们放弃了过节与家人团圆的机会，坚守在各个岗位。这些人是“白衣天使”、人民子弟兵、警察、科学家……假如你是李华，你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“TheStarofDutyAroundUs”为题，根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英文短文参赛。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时The

Star

of

Duty

Around

Us Wehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Thestarofdutyinmyheartismyuncle.（人物）Heworksasapoliceman.（职业）Asapoliceman,heoftenstandsbytoprotectpeople.（职责）

Duringfestivals，hedoesn’thaveabreakfromwork.Sometimes，heevenstaysupwithoutanybreaksatnight.（经历1）Hisdaughterisonlythreeyearsold，buthehaslittletimetobewithhisdaughteratfestivals.Hegivesuphisfamilytimetoanswerthecallofduty.（经历2）

Ithinkmyuncleisagreatman.Hisworkbringspeoplesafetyandhappiness，soheisthestarofdutyinmyheart.（评价）U5范文1：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时假设你是约翰，

本周英语角的话题是

“MyFavouriteAnimal”。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，分享你最喜欢的动物。U5范文1：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因MyFavouriteAnimalByJohnMyfavouriteanimalistheelephant.（最喜欢的动物）Elephantsareverybigandsmart.Theynevergetlost.（特征1）Theylikeeatinggrass，fruitandvegetables.（特征2）What’smore,theyalwaysliveingroups.（特征3）Ilikeelephantsbecausetheyarealwaysfriendlytopeople.（喜欢的原因1）Thereareseveralelephantsinthezoonearmyhome.Ioftengotheretoseethem.Andtheyalwaysbringpeoplemuchfun.（喜欢的原因2）

U5范文2：写一篇关于保护濒危动物的文章

2025年3月3日是第12个世界野生动植物日，我国的主题为“加大物种保护投入力度，

共建地球生命共同体”。假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语报“人与自然”栏目正在以保护濒危动物猎豹为话题征文，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文给该专栏投稿。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时

Cheetahsareoneofthefastestanimalsonland.Theyhaveyellow-brownishfurandmainlyliveinsomeplacesofAfrica.（介绍1）Theyfeedonotheranimals，

suchasdeerandfish.（介绍2）

Nowadays，

thenumberofcheetahsisgettingsmallerandsmaller.（猎豹现状）Theydon’thaveenoughfoodtoeat.（原因1）Besides，theydon’thaveenoughplacestolivein.（原因2）

What’smore，peopleoftenkillthemfortheirfur.（原因3）

Asaresult，cheetahsareindangernow.

Let’stryourbesttoprotectcheetahs.（呼吁）U5范文2：写一篇关于保护濒危动物的文章U5范文3：根据所给信息介绍大熊猫并呼吁保护大熊猫

假如你是李华，来自合肥。你校正在进行“动物周”活动，请你根据下表提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们介绍大熊猫，让更多的人了解大熊猫、保护大熊猫。外貌黑白相间特点可爱、强壮，爱吃竹子栖息地中国四川、陕西等地濒危原因内因：幼崽不易存活外因：人类破坏其生存环境保护措施停止砍伐树木、建立自然保护区现状数量增长，现在野外约1

900只审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时U5范文3：根据所给信息介绍大熊猫并呼吁保护大熊猫PandasHello,

everyone.

I’m

Li

Hua,

a

student

from

Hefei.I

will

give

a

report

about

pandas.(引出话题)Pandas

are

my

favourite

animal.

They

are

black

and

white.

They

like

climbing

trees

and

eating

bamboo.

They

are

cute

but

strong.

They

mainly

live

in

Sichuan

and

Shaanxi

of

China.

Some

people

cut

down

forests

and

pandas

lost

their

homes.

Besides,

pandas

have

few

babies.

As

a

result,

they

were

in

danger.(详细介绍大熊猫)To

protect

pandas,

China

has

built

many

nature

reserves.

People

stop

cuttingdown

trees

and

try

their

best

to

protect

pandas.

The

number

of

pandas

begins

to

grow.

Now

there

are

about

1,900

pandas

in

the

wild.

How

amazing!(保护措施)Pandas

are

important

to

nature.

It

is

important

for

us

toprotect

them.Thanks

for

your

listening.U5范文4：介绍野生动物的生存现状并呼吁大家保护动物上周日,你和Sandy去了野生动物园,了解到很多野生动物的生存现状,你想在SchoolNewsletter上发文呼吁同学们保护野生动物。请你就下面表格中的提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文。现状无处栖息,无食可吃原因人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地,野生动物的生存空间越来越小应对措施立法并多建自然保护区(reserve)建议作为学生…审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时LastSunday,SandyandIwenttothewildlifepark.Welearntthatwildanimalshavenowheretoliveandnofoodtoeat.

(现状)That'sbecausehumanskeepcuttingdownforestsandtakinguplandandthelivingspaceforwildanimalsgetssmallerandsmaller.

(原因)Asaresult,weshouldtakeactiontoimprovetheenvironmentandprotectwildanimals.Wecanbothmakelawsandbuildmorenaturereserves.(应对措施)Asstudents,weshouldalwaysaskourparentsandrelativesnottobuyanyfurcoatsoreatthemeatofwildanimals.Weshouldtrytokeepabalancebetweenhumansandanimals.(作为学生如何做)U5范文4：介绍野生动物的生存现状并呼吁大家保护动物U6范文1：介绍中国的茶文化

作为中学生，我们应该了解茶并传播茶文化。国际友好交流学校线上论坛拟于下周五举行，本期论坛的主题为“茶文化”。假设你是论坛特邀嘉宾，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文，向国际友好交流学校介绍中国茶文化。

参考词汇：传播spread审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一人称、第三人称一般现在时ChineseTeaCulture

Teaisnotonlygoodforhealth，

（意义1）butalsoakeypartofmanycultures.（意义2）

MostChinesepeopledrinkteaatanytimeoftheday.（品茶的时间）Wecandrinkteaandchatwithourfamilyintheyardeveryweekend.It’sourwayofconnecting.（品茶的方式1）Wecanalsodrinkteawithourfriendsattheparty，（方式2）

orenjoyitonourown（方式3）.

Ihopemorepeoplecanknowaboutteacultureandspreaditaroundtheworld.（希望）U6范文1：介绍中国的茶文化U6范文2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物-棉花审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时你所在的自然社团打算发布保护植物的相关海报，你负责有关棉花这一植物的介绍，请根据所给的棉花资料卡，向同学们科普这一植物。名称棉花外形花朵白色，茎细叶阔质地柔软生长条件充足的光照，适宜的水分和养料历史五千多年用途制作衣服；制作玩具等Hi,

everyone.

Today,

we

can

see

cotton

everywhere

in

our

life.

Let’s

learn

more

about

it!(引出话题)Cotton

is

one

of

the

most

common

plants

in

the

natural

world.

It’s

as

white

as

snow

and

has

thin

stems

and

broad

leaves.

It

looks

soft

like

a

cloud.

The

growth

of

cotton

needs

enough

sunlight,

suitable

water,

and

nutrients.

Cotton

isnot

only

a

plant,

but

also

a

symbol

of

history.

It

has

a

long

history

of

over

5,000

years.

Cotton

is

more

than

a

plant

for

us.

People

use

it

in

many

ways.

We

use

it

to

make

clothes,

for

example,

T-shirts

we

wear

in

summer.It

can

also

be

used

to

fill

toys,

making

them

soft.(详细介绍棉花)It’s

no

secret

that

cotton

is

a

key

part

of

our

life.

What

a

wonderful

plant!(总结棉花的重要性，赞美棉花)U6范文2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物-棉花U6范文3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施《广州日报》收到外国读者的来信,信中说他们对广州的木棉树(kapoktree)很感兴趣,因此现在该报社在征求一篇介绍木棉树的文章,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。内容包括:1.木棉树在广州很常见;2.用途(美化城市,花能制成药等);3.保护措施(少砍树,多种树……)。注意:1.词数为60左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:fruit(n.果实),medicine(n.药)审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时U6范文3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施KapokTreesWelcometoNaturalWorld!Iamsogladtohearthatmanypeopleareinterestedinkapoktrees.KapoktreesarecommoninGuangzhou.(木棉树在广州很常见)Thekapoktreesnotonlymakethecitybeautiful,butalsohavemanyotheruses.Theirflowersareusefulinmakingmedicine.(用途)Butthenumberofkapoktreesisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.Sowearegoingtotakeactiontoprotectthem.First,weshouldcutdownfewertreesandplantmoretrees.Second,weshouldletpeopleknowabouttheimportanceofthetrees.Withtheseactions,wemayliveinabettercity.(保护措施)U6范文4：介绍植物的重要性并呼吁大家保护植物以“Theimportanceofplants”为题写一篇英语短文，从三个方面谈论一

前下植物的重要性，并呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。1.Forpeople:giveusfood,medicine...2.Foranimals:liveintheforest,eatthefruit...3.Fortheenvironment:helpcleantheair,coverthesoil,stopthewind.审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时Asweallknow,plantsareveryimportantforhumans,animalsandtheenvironment.Now,letmeintroducetheimportanceofplantstoyou.(引出主题)Forpeople,plantscanbeusedinmanyways.Wecangetalotoffoodfromplants.Someofplantscanbemadeintomedicineandclothes.(对人类的重要性)What'smore,theyarealsoimportantforanimals.Manyanimalsliveintheforestandsomeofthemfeedonplants.(对动物)

Finally,treesandotherplantshelpcleantheair,sowecanbreathethefreshaireveryday.Theycanalsocoverthesoiltostopthewindandwaterfromcarryingthesoilaway.(对环境)Inaword,plantsaresoimportantforusthatweshouldtryourbesttoprotectthem.(总结)U6范文4：介绍植物的重要性并呼吁大家保护植物期末综合作文解析PART

04期末综合作文1：你身边应该有对你来说具有特殊意义的人吧。请以“My_______”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述某个对你来说很重要的人(包括性别、年龄、外貌、性格特征等),如你的家人、朋友、老师、同学等。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第三人称一般现在时期末综合作文1：MyGrandmaTherearemanypeoplewhoarespecialtomeinmylife.Letmetellyouthemostspecialperson——Mygrandma.(引出人物)Mygrandmaisoldandherhairiswhite.Sheiskindandshelikespink.(外貌+性格)Sheisspecialtomebecausewe'relikefriends.ShealwayshelpsmeoutwhenIneedhelp.WhenIamwithmygrandma,wespendalotofhappytimetogether.Mygrandmaknowsmanythings,Sheisverysmart.Shelikeswatchingnewsandsheknowsthingsaroundtheworld.Onethingshe'sbestatiscooking.Sheoftencooksdeliciousfoodforme.IknowmygrandmalovesmeandIloveher,too.(兴趣爱好等)期末综合作文2：假如你是李华，你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动，活动主题为“我的校园生活”。征文内容要求积极向上，展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示，完成一篇征文。Whatsubjectsdoyoustudy?Whatclub(s)areyouin?Whatareyourteachersandclassmateslike?...审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一、三人称一般现在时期末综合作文2：MySchoolLifeMynameisLiHua.IamfromClass1,Grade7.NowIwouldliketosharemyschoollifewithyou.(引出主题)WehavesubjectslikeEnglish,Chinese,Maths,Historyandsoon.

Amongallthesesubjects,myfavoriteoneisEnglish.(介绍学科)Wealsohavedifferentactivitiestochoosefrom.Somestudentsliketoplaysports,whileothersprefertojoinclubs.Ienjoyreading,soIjoinintheReadingClub.(俱乐部)

Icanhavethechancetoreadmorebookswithclassmates.Peopleinmyschoolareveryfriendly.Ourteachersareverystrictbutalsoverynice.Theyusuallytakecareofusandtheyworkveryhardtohelpusmastertheknowledge.Ourclassmatesareverykind.Wehelpeachotherwhenweareintrouble.(介绍同学+老师)Ithinkmyschoollifeisverywonderful.Iloveitverymuch.期末综合作文3：假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你周日一天的生活，并谈谈感受。(1)周日早上，在公园闻花香，喂动物，听到了孩子们笑，救助了一只小猫。(2)回到家后，认真完成作业。(3)和朋友策划了一个生日派对，派对上欢声笑语。(4)人们过来帮忙。(5)你觉得…要求:(1)词数:80左右。(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一、三人称一般过去时期末综合作文3：DearDavid,Howareyou?I'dliketoshareastorywithyou.(开篇问好)OnasunnySundaymorning,Itookabreakandwenttothepark.Ismelledsomethingdifferent,amixofflowers.Ienjoyedfeedingtheanimalsandheardchildrenlaughing.Wefoundalostkittenandhelpedit.(周日上午的活动)Iworkedhardonmyschoolhomework.Itwasimportant.Afterthat,myfriendsandIplannedabirthdayparty.Wewantedtocelebrateandrelaxtogether.Attheparty,weplayedandlaughedalot.(介绍派对)Thedaywasfulloffun.Ifeltgratefulforthedayandthefriendswithme.ItwasadayIwillalwaysremember.(总结)Yours,Hua期末综合作文4：现如今，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示发一封电子邮件给你的朋友詹妮(Jenny)，介绍一下你最想保护的动物。审题：人称：___________时态：___________第一、三人称一般现在时DearJenny,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Myfavouriteanimalsarepandas.Theyarewhiteandblack.Theylikeclimbingtreesandwalkingintheforests.Theyfeedonbamboo.Theyareverycuteandlovely.(介绍最喜欢的动物)Buttheirsituationisbecomingverydifficult.Theyareindanger.First,pandasdon'thavemanybabiesandbabypandasoftendie.Second,pandaseatbamboo,butthebamboo