福建省2025中考英语重难题型突破话题四职业与梦想

话题四 职业与梦想考情分析福建考查角度及考查频率近8年未考全国考查角度•介绍自己的梦想及如何实现•对未来职业的选择及理由写作指导五步写作法——审列扩连查第一步细审题定要点（五审法：审主题、审人称、审文体、审时态、审要点）审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审主题：自己喜欢的职业审文体：说明文毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“Mydreamjob”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，从下面两个职业中选择一个你所喜欢的理想职业，写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。审主题：自己喜欢的职业审文体：说明文审时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主审时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主Items(条目)AteacherAscientistReasonsbegoodatcommunicatinglovekidsbeinterestedinscienceinventnewproductsHowtodothatgetagoodeducationlearnhowtoteachchildren...studyscienceharddoscienceresearch...定要点1：介绍理想职业提示：定要点1：介绍理想职业1.Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?定要点2：有此理想的原因2.Whydoyouhavesuchadream?定要点2：有此理想的原因定要点3：实现理想的做法3.Howareyougoingtodothat?定要点3：实现理想的做法注意事项：1.词数100左右。必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。Mydreamjob  Weallhavedreamjobs.第二步分段落列要点 首段（Beginning）：引出主题：介绍理想职业是什么。 中间段（Body）：陈述选择这一职业的原因并逐条阐述理由。 结尾（Ending）：如何实现梦想：具体做法。第三步扩句子精加工首段：介绍理想职业是什么[一般句]IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup.[高分句]Asforme,IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup./IdreamofbeingascientistwhenIgrowup.(asforme;dreamof)中间段：逐条阐述选择这一职业的理由【理由一】[一般句]Ihavebecomeveryinterestedinscience.[高分句]Ihavebeenveryinterestedinscienceforalongtime.(beinterestedin)【理由二】[一般句]Iwanttoinventnewproductsandhopetodiscovernewthings.[高分句]1.（不定式表目的）结尾：实现梦想的具体做法【做法一】[一般句]I’mgoingtostudysciencereallyhard.[高分句]I’mgoingtomakegreateffortstostudysciencewell.【做法二】[一般句]Iwillreadmanybooksaboutscience.[高分句]I’llreadasmanybooksaboutscienceaspossible./Booksaboutsciencewillbeonmyreadinglists.【做法三】[一般句]MydreamwillcometrueifIworkhard.[高分句]2.(Ibelieve,aslongas)首段点明自己的梦想职业时使用Asforme，使叙述自然流畅第四步连句子成短文首段点明自己的梦想职业时使用Asforme，使叙述自然流畅[优秀范文]        Mydreamjob  Weallhavedreamjobs.Asforme,IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup.Ihavebeenveryinterestedinscienceforalongtime.It’smydreamtoinventnewproductstoimprovepeople’slifeandtodiscoverthemysteriesoftheworld.Tobeascientist,Ineedtotakeactionrightnow.First,I’mgoingtomakegreateffortstostudysciencewell.Second,Iplantodoscienceresearch.Andmostimportantly,I’llreadasmanybooksaboutscienceaspossible.IfIbecomeascientist,IwillliveinBeijingwhereIcancommunicatewithmoreexperts.IbelievethataslongasIputmyheartintoit,Iwillachievemydream.介绍实现梦想的做法时使用First,Second和Andmostimportantly进行分条阐述，使文章层次分明介绍实现梦想的做法时使用First,Second和Andmostimportantly进行分条阐述，使文章层次分明正确使用定语从句，句式丰富多彩第五步查全文得高分 首先依次检查人称、时态是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。理想职业：我长大后想要成为一名工程师。IwanttobeanengineerwhenIgrowup.当提到未来职业，我最喜欢的职业是飞行员。Whenitcomestothe理想职业：我长大后想要成为一名工程师。IwanttobeanengineerwhenIgrowup.当提到未来职业，我最喜欢的职业是飞行员。Whenitcomestothefuturecareer,myfavoritejobistobeapilot.自我提升：实现梦想achieve/realizeone’sdream=makeone’sdreamcometrue梦想做某事dreamtodosth.成功做某事succeedindoingsth.尽力做某事trytodosth./makegreateffortstodosth.丰富我的学识enrichmyknowledge拓宽我的视野broadenmyhorizons学习一些生活技能learnsomelifeskills获得责任感gainasenseofresponsibility/duty名言激励：有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.心中有目标，风雨不折腰。Ifthedreamisbigenough,thefactsdon’tcount.这个世界总会给梦想家让路。Theworldalwaysmakeswayforthedreamers.实战演练［2024临沂］假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。词数100词左右。HiLiPing,  HiLiPing,  Youmentionedyourdreamjobinyourlastletter.Iʼmreallyinterestedinit.Whydidyouchooseit?What/Whoinfluencedyoutomakethedecision?Tellmeyourexperience,please.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Eric注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。时态：时态：        人称：         要点：      DearEric,  Thanksforyoure-mail.                                                            LiPing话题四职业与梦想【高分句】1．It'smydreamtoinventnewproductstoimprovepeople'slifeandtodiscoverthemysteriesoftheworld.2．IbelievemydreamwillcometrueifIworkhard./IbelievethataslongasIputmyheartintoit,Iwillachievemydream.【实战演练】时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主人称：以第一人称为主要点：梦想职业是什么(what)，为什么选择该职业(why)，谁影响你选择该职业(who)，选择该职业的经历(how)Dear__Eric，Thanks__for__your__e­mail.I'mverygladtotellyousomethingaboutmydreamjob.IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.Besides,Iwanttobeateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,myEnglishteacher.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish,andinfluencesmealot.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.Shecheeredmeupandtoldmesomeg