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湖南湘东教学联盟2026届高三11月一模联考英涪试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Eddytookhismom'shand,andsheledhimintothestreetoutsidethefamily's

littlegroceryshopinBrussels.WhenEddyopenedhiseyes,hesaw-the-

most-excitingthinjintheworld------ashinynewbicyclewithchunkyblacktyres.

Thefbur-year-oldinsistedonlearningtoriderightaway!Withhisdadsteadying

him,Eddytriedtobalancewhilepedalingasfastashecnuld.Hewobbledandfelloff

severaltimes,butwouldn'tgiveup.Soon,hecouldshifthisweighttoturnsharp

cornersandpullthebrakesgentlytoavoidobstacles.

Eddy'sdadhadbeen-akeencyclistinhis-youth,-soheoften-took-Eddyto

watch-localraces.Oneafternoon,theyspottedDad5soldracingteammate,Mar|,

bythefinishline."Stillgotthatsamespeed,huh?^^Dadsaid."I'mhopingtogofully

professionalnextyear,“Markadded.Eddy'seyeslitup."Iwanttobeaprofessional

tooJheblurtedout.

Eddytookamilkdeliveryjob,savingeverypeanyg分5短女件「动作।untilhecould

buyhisownracingbike.Everyevening,he*drideitaroundthesquare,bending

lowoverthehandlebarstocutthroughthewind<理&分询短语做件收动作、

Justafterhissixteenthbirthday,Eddycompetedinmanylocalraces,buthe

neverwonasingleone伏©・"MaybetrybeingaPEteacherinstead?"Dadsuggested.

SeeingthelookonEddy'sface几在分语做停电动作),hequicklyadded,“Buiifcycling's

whatyoulove,I'lldriveyoutoeverypractice,whateverittakej”ButEddyras

determinedtokeepracing一hefeltatalentforit,andhewantedtobethe

fastest.Sohesignedupforanotherone:aa8-lapcoursethroughtownandfields.

Daddrovehimtothestartingpointoftherace.[Theotherriderswereallolder

andtaller注^增加冲突曲."Who'sfhatskinnyboy?He'llneverfinish!^^someoftheother

riderslaughed通一步常口片交,.Evesfixedontheroadahead出京士格),|Eddybithislij,

handstighteningaroundthehandlebars抽丸土称山.人物,.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Whenthestartinggunwentoff,theotherridersrushedforwardina

group.

Paragraph2:Eddygotoffhisbike,hislegsshakyandhisbodyexhausted,yetfilled

withincrediblehappiness.

湖南湘东教学联盟2026届高三11月一模联考英涪试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Eddytookhismom'shand,andsheledhimintothestreetoutsidethefamily's

littlegroceryshopinBrussels.WhenEddyopenedhiseyes,hesaw-the-

most-excitingthingintheworld------ashinynewbicyclewithchunky(粗实的)black

tyres.

Thefour-year-oldinsistedonlearningtoriderightaway!Withhisdadsteadying

him,Eddytriedtobalancewhilepedalingasfastashecould.Hewobbled(摇晃)and

felloffseveraltimes,butwouldn'tgiveup.Soon,hecouldshifthisweighttoturn

sharpcornersandpullthebrakesgentlytoavoidobstacles.

Eddy,sdadhadbeen-akeencyclistinhis-youth,-soheoften-took-Eddyto

watch-localraces.Oneafternoon,theyspottedDad'soldracingteammate,Mark,by

thefinishline."Stillgotthatsamespeed,huh?,,Dadsaid.uI'mhopingtogofully

professionalnextyear,“Markadded.Eddy'seyeslitup."Iwanttobeaprofessional

loo,“heblurtedout.

Eddytookamilkdeliveryjob,savingeverypennyuntilhecouldbuyhisown

racingbike.Everyevening,he'drideitaroundthesquare,bendinglowoverthe

handlebars(车把)tocutthroughthewind.

Justafterhissixteenthbirthday,Eddycompetedinmanylocalraces,buthenever

wonasingleone."MaybetrybeingaPEteacherinstead?”Dadsuggested.Seeingthe

lookonEddy'sface',hequicklyadded,4iButifcycling'swhatyoulove,I'lldriveyou

toeverypractice,whateverittakes."ButEddywasdetenninedtokeepracing------he

feltatalentforit,andhewantedtobethefastest.Sohesignedupforanotherone:an

8-lapcoursethroughtov/nandfields.

Daddrovehimtothestartingpointoftherace.Theotherriderswereallolderand

taller.uWho,sthatskinnyboy?He'llneverfinish!”someoftheotherriderslaughed.

Eyesfixedontheroadahead,Eddybithislip,handstighteningaroundthe

handlebars.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ParagraphI:Whenthestartinggunwentoff,theotherridersrushedforwardina

group.

Paragraph2:Eddygotoffhisbike,hislegsshakyandhisbodyexhausted,yetfilled

withincrediblehappiness.

一、类型定位与构思方向

项目内容说明

题材类型个人励志成长类/梦想追逐类

主题关键词成长、坚持、挫折与自信、父爱支持、热爱与信念

从渴望(初志)一受挫(失败)一坚持(信念)一成功(成

情感走向

长)

故事类型成长奋斗线+父子情感支持线

商考读后续写常心理成长型(innergrowth),与友情/家庭/梦想线交织的励志

见类型分类故事

要在原文基础上补全“比赛结果—心理成长―情感升华”这条

续写目标

主线,实现结构与主题的闭合。

二、续写思路与构思框架

构思步骤内容与要点

1.回顾原文基原文情节走向:Eddy的梦想——不断练习——挫折——比赛开

调端;情绪基调是“坚定+紧张+渴望成功

2.续写的重点

比赛正式开始(Paragraph1)+比赛结束后情感升华(Paragraph2)

转折

段一(高潮段):比赛过程——因境与突破(内心心理+动作张

力)

3.结构设计

段二(收束段):比赛结束——结果呈现——情感升华——主题

照应(坚持与热爱)

构思步骤内容与要点

①开枪起跑一②落后与质疑一③调整节奏、回忆父亲鼓励

4.情节层次建

一④反超关键—⑤冲线(高潮)一⑥疲惫中体悟成功的意

义(升华)

determination,encouragement,persistence,passion,breakthrough,

5.构思关键词

fulfillment

应延续原文第三人称叙述,夹杂动作描写+心理刻画,句式变化

6.语言风格

自然(短句紧张,长句情感)

三、续写思路

注意点说明

时态与原文保持一致(一般过去时为主)

人称第三人称叙述,主角仍为Eddy

语气与节奏第一段节奏紧凑、动作快;第二段节奏放缓、情感沉淀

要从“失败到成长”的内在逻辑闭环,突出“努力与热爱”胜过结果

主题延续

本身

延续原文"Dad'sencouragement,Httheotherriders'

细节承接

laughter”“Eddy'slip-biting”作为心理或动作伏笔

可使用象征意象(如风、轮、阳光、呼吸)象征速度与生命力;

巧妙设计技巧

可用内心独白照应梦想线。

四、故事山模式(StoryMountain)

阶段原文体现续写应补

1.Background(起因)小Eddy获得新自行车,热爱骑行

阶段原文体现续写应补

2.Build-up(O-)成长练习、参赛经历、一次次失败—

3.Climax(高潮)一比赛正式开始(续写段一)

4.Resolution(解决)Eddy冲线、实现突破、自我成长(续写段二)

5.Ending(结局)心理升华:体悟坚持的意义、父亲微笑支持

五、原文分析表

分析角度内容原文反应句/线索

Eddy——热爱骑行、坚毅不“hewouldn'tgiveup"/"I'lldriveyou

人物刻画

屈;Dad——支持型父亲toeverypractice”

从兴^—►坚持一►挫折一►感动“Eddybithislip”一“filledwith

情感层次

—幸福incrediblehappincss^^

比赛起点—>比赛•进行—►“Whenthestartinggunwentoff'/

关键情节点

冲刺一心灵成长“Eddygotoffhisbike…”

“pedalingasfastashecould"/“eyes

语言特色动作+心理并用,节奏感强

fixedontheroadahead”

balance,determination,dream,

关键词分析speed,happiness—►象征成长—1

与追梦精神

“Eddybithislip”/"hefeltatalentfbr

心理描写紧张、自我怀疑、坚定信念

it”

踩踏、转弯、握车把、呼吸急“shifthisweighttoturnsharpcorners”

动作描写/“handstighteningaroundthe

handlebars^^

环境描写街道、赛场、风声象征挑战“throughtownandfields”

隐含主题坚持热爱的事,不计得失;父“ifcycling'swhatyoulove…”

分析角度内容原文反应句/线索

爱无声的支撑

从被嘲笑与怀疑一通过努“Who'sthatskinnyboy?...He'llnever

情感转折

力赢得自信finish

从训练场T比赛现场T终点“Daddrovehimtothestartingpointof

空间转换

一心灵归处therace.”

儿童时期T少年时期T比赛

时间过渡“Justafterhissixteenthbirthday...M

当下一成长收束

六、伏笔与冲突线索解析

项目内容

伏笔1“Dadhadbeenakeencyclist”一父亲角色将成为精神支柱

伏笔2“Hewouldn'tgiveup”—>暗示比赛中坚持到最后

冲突点外部:他人嘲笑“skinnyboy”;内部:自我怀疑vs梦想信念

隐含线

“bithisHp'"'eyesfixedontheroad”象征克服内心恐惧

解决方通过毅力与父亲的鼓励,实现突破——即使结果不是冠军,也达成“心

案灵胜利''

七、续写设计

设计要素写作技巧

使用短句、动态动词(pedal,gasp,overtake,pushforward)

L比赛过程紧张感

营造速度感

2.心理描写深化用内心独白或回忆父亲话语(如"It'snotaboulwinning,it's

设计要素写作技巧

aboutriding.,,)

3.比赛结尾的象征风吹脸庞、阳光洒落、父亲微笑一象征成长完成

4.结尾呼应题旨用“incrediblehappiness”收束,点题“坚持的快乐”

开头“Dadsteadyinghim"j结尾"Dadwaitingwithopenarms”

5.情节闭合技巧

形成首尾呼应

八、动作环境心理描写

动作描写

Eddytightenedhisgriponthehandlebars,determinationflashinginhiseyes.

埃迪紧紧握住车把,眼中闪烁着坚定的光。

Heleanedforward,feelingthecoldwindwhipacrosshisface.

他身体前倾,感受着冷风掠过面颊。

Hislegsburnedwithpain,yetherefusedtoslowdown.

他的大腿如火灼般疼痛,但他拒绝放慢速度。

Thewheelsslicedthroughthemorningairlikeanows.

车轮如箭一般劈开清晨的空气。

Hepushedhimselfbeyondhislimits,heartpoundinginhischest.

他逼迫自己超越极限,心脏在胸腔中剧烈跳动。

Sweattrickleddownhisforehead,blurringhissight.

汗水顺着额头流下,模糊了视线。

Eddystumbledoffhisbike,gaspingforbreath.

埃迪踉跄着下了车,大口喘气。

Heclenchedhisfists,fightingtheurgetogiveup.

他握紧拳头,抵抗着放弃的冲动。

Thecrowdburstintoapplauseashecrossedthefinishline.

当他冲过终点时,人群爆发出掌声。

Hisfatherrushedforwardandpulledhimintoatighthug.

父亲冲上前去,紧紧抱住了他。

心理描写

Awaveofdoubtwashedoverhim,buthepusheditaside.

一阵怀疑袭来,但他将其抛诸脑后。

“Icandothis,"hemurmuredtohimself,teethgritted.

“我能做到。''他咬紧牙关对自己低声说道c

Hecouldhearhisfather'svoiceechoinginhismind:''Nevergiveup.M

他仿佛听见父亲的声音在脑中回荡:“永远不要放弃。”

Fearandexcitementwarredinsidehim.

恐惧与兴奋在他心中交战。

Forabriefmoment,hequestionedhisworth,thenliftedhisheadagain.

一度他怀疑自己的价值,但很快又抬起头。

Eachheartbeatdrummedinhisears,remindinghimofwhathefoughtfor.

每一次心跳都在耳边敲响,提醒他为何而战。

Thelaughterfromtheotherridersstunghispride.

其他车手的潮笑刺痛了他的自尊。

Hedrewstrengthfromthememoryofhisyoungerselffallingbutnever

quitting.

他从自己儿时摔倒却不放弃的记忆中汲取力量。

Asenseoffreedomfloodedhischestashekeptmovingforward.

一种自由的感觉涌上胸口。

Exhaustedbutproud,hefelttearswellupinhiseyes.

精疲力竭却无比自豪,泪水在他眼中涌动c

环境描写

Theearlymorningairwascrispandelectricwithtension.

清晨的空气清冽而充满紧张的气息。

Theroadwoundthroughquietfieldsandechoingstreets.

赛道蜿蜒穿过寂静的田野与回响的街道。

Sunlightglimmeredonthemetalframesofthebicycles.

阳光在车架金属上闪烁。

Alowhumofexcitementrippledthroughthecrowd.

一阵低低的兴奋嗡呜在人群中荡漾开来。

Dustswirledaroundthewheels,catchingthegoldenlight.

灰尘在车轮周围飞扬,映着金色的光。

Thescentoffreshlycutgrassfilledthecountrysideair.

乡间弥漫着新割草的清香。

Theskystretchedendlessly,asifechoingtheboy'sboundlessdream.

天空无边无际,仿佛映照出少年的无尽梦想。

Windwhistledpasthisears,singingtherhythmofspeed.

风从耳边呼啸而过,奏出速度的节奏。

Behindhim,thecheersroselikewaves,urginghimonward.

身后欢呼声如浪潮般高涨,推动他向前。

Thefinishlineglowedfaintlyinthedistance,likeapromisewaitingtobe

fulfilled.

远处的终点线隐隐闪光,仿佛一个即将实现的诺言。

情绪类

普通词高级替换示例

delighted/thrilled/elated/ovcijoycd/Hefeltfulfilledafterthe

happy

fulfilledrace.

heartbroken/miserable/sorrowful/Helookeddowncastafter

sad

downcast/gloomylosing.

furious/outraged/irritated/resentful/Hegrewresentfulofthe

angry

indignantlaughter.

terrified/petrified/uneasy/anxious/Hefeltuneasyatthestarting

scared

fearfulline.

surprisedastonished/amazed/stunned/takenaback/Hewasastonishedbyhis1

普通词高级替换示例

dumbfoundedownspeed.

动作类

普通词高级替换示例

Hesprintedaheadwithallhis

rundash/sprint/race/bolt/dart

strength.

lookglance/gaze/stare/peer/glareHegazedatthefinishline.

murmur/whisper/remark/mutter/

say'THmakeit,“hemuttered.

exclaim

holdgrasp/clutch/seize/grip/claspHegrippedthehandlebarstightly.

fallstumble/collapse/tumble/slip/tripHestumbledoffhisbike.

心理类

普通词高级替换示例

Heponderedhisfather's

thinkponder/reflect/recall/contemplate/consider

words.

desire/longfor/yearnfbr/aspireto/beeagerHeyearnedtoprove

want

tohimself.

strive/struggle/attempt/endeavor/exert

tryHestrivedtokeeppace.

oneself

befondof/bepassionateabout/beobsessedHewaspassionateabout

like

with/admire/bedevotedtocycling.

havefaithin/beconvincedof/trust/beHehadfaithinhis

believe

confidentin/holdontodream.

核心固定搭配&词法解析

bedeterminedtodosth—决心做某事

词,性:adj.+infinitive

近义:beresolvedto/makeupone'smindto

反义:hesitateto

伊J句:Eddywasdeterminedtofinishtheracenomatterwhat./She

madeuphermindtochaseherdream.

biteone'slip咬嘴唇(表示紧张、克制)

表示心理压抑与坚持

同义表达:clenchone'sjaw/holdbacktears

例句:Hebithisliptostopthefear./Sheclenchedherjaw,refusing

tocry.

befilledwith+emotion—充满某种情绪

常见搭配:filledwithjoy/excitement/anxiety

例句:Hisheartwasfilledwithpride./Theairwasfilledwith

tension.

pushoneselftothelimit一把自己逼到极限

近义:goallout/giveone'sall/exhaustoneself

例句:Hepushedhimselftothelimit,refusingtoquit.

burstintoapplause/laughter/tears突然爆发

burstini。(名词);burstout(doing)

例句:Thecrowdburstintoapplause./Sheburstoutcrying.

drawstrengthfrom—从....中汲取力量

同义:gainstrength/beinspiredby

例句:Hedrewstrengthfromhisfather^words.

inthefaceof一面对(困难、危险)

伊|句:Heshowedcourageinthefaceoffailure.

againstallodds—尽管困难重重

例句:Eddysucceededagainstallodds.

cometorealizethat...一意识到....

例句:Hecametorealizethatvictorywasn'teverything.

lookbackon—回顾

例句:Whenhelookedbackontherace,hesmiledwithpride.

可积累生词与语料(含义、词性、近义/反义)

grit(n.)坚毅

近义:determination/perseverance

反义:cowardice/weakness

彳列句:Eddyshowedremarkablegritintherace.

exhausted(adj.)精疲力竭的

近义:worn-out/drained/fatigued

反义:energetic/refreshed

例句:Helayontheground,completelyexhausted.

mock(v.)嘲笑

近义:ridicule/sneerat/makefunof

反义:praise/compliment

例句:Othersmockedhissize,butheignoredthem.

resolve(v./n.)决心,决定

近义:determine/decide/pledge

反义:hesitate/waver

例句:Heresolvedtokeeptraining.

glimmer(v./n.)微光,闪烁

近义:shine/flicker/sparkle

反义:darken/fade

例句:Afaintglimmerofhopelituphisheart.

九、PossibleVersions(4)

Version1

Paragraph1

H'-e"thestarting女〃〃off,theotherridersrushedforward而a父roup.

Eddygrittedhisteethandpedaledhard、tryingt。keep11Pm分河祗总伴M动作、butthe

othersquicklyformedatightpackahead.Thecoolmorningairwhippedacross

hisface,名良土s,yetherefusedtoletfeartakehold.Herememberedhisfather's

voice-steady,warm,encouraging.^-*4|WhateveritlakeQ."Thatsingleline

echoedinhisheartlikeadrumbeat无灵士语切.Gradually,hefoundhisrhythm,his

bikeglidinwmoresmoothlyovertheunevenroad/戊土格加晶人物>.Astheracewenton.

hebeganovertakingoneriderafteranother.Hismusclesached,lungsburning,

buthiseyesstayedfixedonthedistantfinishlineshimmeringinsunlightg分询0

豆哥、Whenhesawtheleaderjustafewmetersahead,hisheartpoundedfaster.

“Nowornever,hewhispered,standingonhispedalsfurthefinalsprint,观疵分做伴

tt动作>.

Paragraph2

Eddynotoffhi$bike、hislegsshakyandhisbodyexhausted,yafilledwith

incrediblehappiness.Hehadcrossedthefinishlinesecond——hisbestresult

ever-butwhatthrilledhimmostwasn'tthemedal.Itwasthefeelingoffinally

racinglikehebelongedihere.Hisfatherranup,eyesshiningwithnridBu立主格利.人物).

andpulledhimintoatightembrace.uYoudidit,son,"hemurmured.Eddy

smiledthroughhistearj|,realizing见底分.短谱做.*功thatsuccesswasn7onlyabout

butaboutdaringtokeepridingwheneverythinghurt.Thelaughterof

thosewhohaddoubtedhimnolongermattered.Inthatmoment,heunderstoodthat

realstrengthgrewfrompersistence.Asthecrowdcheered,Eddysilentlypromised

himselftokeeptraining—tochasenotjusttrophies,butthejoyofnevergiving

up

原文锚点承接:“handstighteningaroundthehandlebars”t第一段首句直

接延续动作与心理。

情感线呼应:父亲的话“whateverittakes”成为内心驱动力。

结尾逻辑对应第二段首句:体力极限(exhausted)—精神满足(incredible

happiness)。

地道搭配与词汇替换

原词升级表达例句

pedalhard/raceahead/sprintHepedaledhard,cuttingthrough

runfast

forwardthewind.

Hislegsfeltdrainedofall

tiredexhausted/drained/wornout/spent

strength.

happythrilled/elated/fulfilled/oveqoyedHefeltfulfilledbyhiseffort.

keeppushon/pressforward/carryon/Hepressedforwarddespitethe

goingforgeaheadpain.

very/Hewasutterlyexhaustedbut

utterly/completely/absolutely

reallysmiling.

动作描写亮点词汇:

grittedhisteeth/pedaledhard/foundhisrhythm/standingonhispedals/pulledhim

intoatightembrace

情绪描写亮点词汇:

refusedtoletfeartakehold/heartpounded/eyesshiningwithpride/smiledthrough

histears/filledwithincrediblehappiness

积累语料与同义替换

词组近义替换例句

refusetogiveHepersistedthroughevery

persist/holdon/hanginthere

UPfailure.

findone'sHefinallygotintothegroove

getintothegroove/regainfocus

rhythmoftherace.

shinewithbeamwithpride/glowwithHisfather^eyesbeamedwith

pridesatisfactionpride.

staycommitted/continueimproving/Hevowedtostaycommitted

keeptraining

worktirelesslytocycling.

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thestartin史女〃〃we/〃off、theotherridersrushed/brwardina2roup.

Eddystruggledtostaywithinsightofthem.Thefirstfewlapswereablurof

spinningwheelsandpoundinghearts,无灵主语力.Sweatstreameddownhisface,and

painshotthroughhislegslikefire.Foramoment,doubtwhisperedinhismindut*

,语的,,remindinghimcfeveryrace,a#今修的"律陶的林,hehad加st.Rntthenhnsawhi*

fathercheeringfromiheroadside.clappic。andshoutinghis分网/,做停上动作..

Somethinginsidehimlitup."You'vecometoofartostopnow,“hetoldhimself.

Takingadeepbreath,现&分可瘫语做件*动作,,heleanedlowerandpedaledfaster,wind

roaringpasthisears&立士格郎雄人物,.Hebeganclosingthegap,overtaking:theone§m分(

奴旧件处劝的hadmockedhim.Eachturnofthepedalswasanactofdefiance,

eachbreathapromisetohisdreairi/afc力主格,

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Eddy&otoffhisbike、hislegsshakyandhisbodyexhausted,yetfilledwith

incredible加ess.Hehadn'twon,buthehadfinishedstrongfaster,braver,

prouderthaneverbefore.Hisfather'swordsechoedagain:'Ifcycling^whatyou

love,rildriveyoutoeverypractic\yNow,Eddyknewwhatthatmeant-not

supportforwE〃加g,butfornevergivingup.Thesundippedlowbehindthetrees,

paintingtheskygolcL环境占用asfalherandsonloadedihebikeimoihecar."Yourode

likeachampiontoday,"Dadsaidsoftly.Eddysmiled,realizing蜕2分通摊语8件★就作)

championsweren7horn—theyweremade,onefallandoneraceatatime.

逻辑衔接说明

由“laughedat”一“mockedhim”承上启下,形成“被嘲笑一证明自己''冲突线。

第二段自然承接“hehadn'twonbutfeltproud”,与提示句情感一致°

地道搭配与词汇替换

原词升级表达示例

painache/agony/burningsensation/strainHislegsburnedinagony.

shoutyell/cryout/call/cheerHisfathercheeredhisname.

Hedidn'twinbutfinished

wintriumph/succeed/prevail/finishstrong

strong.

原词升级表达示例

content/fulfilled/gratified/II

proudHefeltdeeplyfulfilled.

accomplished

showdisplaygrit/provehisbravery/Hedisplayedgrittillthe

couragedemonstratespiritend.

动作描写亮点词汇:

leanedlower/pedaledfaster/overtaking/clapping/loadingthebike

情绪描写亮点词汇:

doubtwhispered/somethinglitup/actofdefiance/feltproud/smiledrealizing

积累语料与同义替换

词组近义表达例句

cometoofartocan'tgiveupnow/havegonethisHe'dcometoofartostop

stopfar/noturningbackhalfway.

eachturnofeveryeffort/everystep/everyEveryeffortpushedhim

thepedalsheartbeatforward.

builtthrougheffort/shapedbyChampionsarebuiltthrough

madenotborn

perseveranceperseverance.

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thestarlingoff,theotherridersrushed/hrward加a史roup.

Thenoiseofthecrowdfadedi又走behindasEddyfocusedontheroadahead.His

heartraced,notfromfear,butfromfiercedetermination.Theolderriders

surgedaheadquickly,yetEddykepthispacesteady,remcmbcrinci现。分”建语做[障时伟)

howrushingalway

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