2026年高考全国I卷+读后续写+雪夜温暖-来自陌生人的善意（+十句五定法讲解）+课件-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

雪夜温暖-来自陌生人的善意

Thekindnessofstrangers2026全国新课标I卷读后续写十句五定法情节构思与语言提升LearningobjectivesBytheendoftheclass,wewillbeableto:

1.Developaclearrecognitionoftheissuespresentinourowncontinuationwriting；

writ

2.Readforthe6elements(5w+1H)andthetheme；

3.Graspthe“十句五定法”for

continuationwriting,andbuildalogicalplotstructurethroughtypicalexamquestions.123ThreestepsTextAnalysis文本分析Plotdesign情节设计Languageexpression语言表达①EmilySanders,a25-year-oldfromDetroit,Michigan,setoutonDecember23rdwithhighhopesofreachingTorontotomeetherboyfriendforChristmas.Althoughshehadheardwarningsaboutanapproachingsnowstorm,shedidn'tgiveitmuchthought.SheassumedthatmuchlikeinMichigan,policewouldsimplydetour(使绕道)trafficaroundanyclosedsectionsofthehighway.Butthatdidn'thappen.Asthesnowcamedownmoreandmoreheavily,Emilywasdirectedoffthehighway.ShedroveonforawhileandfoundherselfonanunfamiliarroadtowardaCanadiantownWhatwasEmily’sdestinationandpurposewhenshesetoutonDecember23rd?ShewasheadingtoTorontotomeetherboyfriendforChristmas.WhydidEmilyenduponastrangeroad?Sheignoredthesnowstormwarning,andheavysnowmadeherleavethehighway,whichledhertoanunknownroad.Havingignoredasnowstormwarning,Emilygotforcedoffthehighwayandlostherway.EmilydrovetoTorontotovisitherboyfrienddespitewarningsofanapproachingsnowstorm,becauseofwhichshegotlostonanunfamiliarcountryroad.Textanalysis②Theblindingwhiteoutmadedrivingnearlyimpossible.Atonepoint,Emily'scargotstuck.Afterastruggle,shemanagedtofreethevehicleandcontinuedinchingalongthesnow-coveredroad.Asnightfell,panicsetin.WhileEmilywasdrivingonanarrowstretchofroad,hercarslidintoaditch(沟).Shetriedtocallforhelpbutfoundnosignalonherphone.Seeingnohopeofimmediaterescue,Emilydecidedtospendthenightinhercar.Shewrappedherselfinablanket,waitingformorning.Tostaywarm,sheranherengineforafewminuteseverynowandthen.Eventually,shefellasleep.WhatmadeEmilyfeelextremelydesperate?Hercarwastrapped,shehadnophonesignalandcouldnotgetanyhelpinthefreezingnight.HowdidEmilymanagetosurvivethecoldnight?Shestayedinsidethecarandturnedontheenginenowandthentofightagainstthecold.Withhercarstuckandnophonesignal,shesurvivedthenightbystayinginthecarWithhercarstuckinthesnowandnophonesignaltoseekassistance,Emilyhadnochoicebuttostayinthevehicleallnight,turningontheenginefrequentlytofightagainstthefreezingcold.Textanalysis③Emilyawoketoagentleknockonhercarwindow.StandingoutsidewereDanielandhiswifeRachel,whonoticedthestranded(被困的)vehicleontheirwayhomeandstoppedtoseeiftheycouldhelp.WhenEmilyrolleddownthewindow,Rachelaskedifshewasokayandtoldheritwasnotsafetostayovernightinthecar.Withgenuinewarmthinhervoice,RachelsaidtheycouldtakeEmilytoanearbycafetheyknew.Gratefulandrelieved,Emilyacceptedtheoffer.WhocametoEmily’srescuethenextmorning?AkindcouplecalledDanielandRachelnoticedherandcametoofferhelp.WhydidtheyadviseEmilynottoremaininthecar?Itwasunsafetostayinthevehicleovernightinsuchterribleweather.

Acouplefoundthestrandedvehicleandvolunteeredtotakehertoacafe,whichsheacceptedgratefullyAcoupleknockedatEmily’swindow,warneditwasunsafetostayinthecar,andofferedtotakehertoanearbycafe,whichshegratefullyaccepted.Textanalysis④Inthecafe,thecoupleboughtEmilyahotchocolateandlistenedpatientlyassheexplainedherdesperatesituation:shewasaboutahundredmilesfromherdestination,hercarwascompletelystuck,andherentireholidayplancouldberuined.WhatwasEmily’sbiggestworryatthatmoment?HercarwasstuckandshewasafraidherChristmastripwouldberuined.WhatwouldthecoupleprobablydonexttohelpEmily?Theywouldworkoutapracticalplantohelphercontinueherjourney.Atthecafe,EmilyrecountedherdesperatesituationAtthecafe,Emilyexplainedherruinedtravelplan,andthecouplemightwellpresentahelpfulsolution.TextanalysisForeshadowingsEchoesinContinuationPara.2...Atonepoint,Emily'scargotstuck.Afterastruggle,..inchingalongthesnow-coveredroad.Asnightfell,panicsetin.WhileEmilywasdrivingonanarrowstretchofroad,hercarslidintoaditch(沟).Para.2Shetriedtocallforhelpbutfoundnosignalonherphone.Para.4shewasaboutahundredmilesfromherdestination,hercarwascompletelystuck,andherentireholidayplancouldberuined.1.Sheadoptedthecouple’sproposalandtookatraintomeetherboyfriend.2.ThecoupleandotherpeopleworkedtogethertogetthecaroutoftheditchandhercarfinallystoodsafeandsoundintheirgarageSpottingherphone’sdeadsignal,thecoupleofferedtheirswithouthesitation,allowinghertoupdateherboyfriendontheshiftedschedule.”Shefinallysucceededtomeetherboyfriendandherholidayplanwentasscheduled.Foreshadowings&Echoes伏笔TextanalysisConflicts-solutionsP1

Althoughshehadheardwarningsaboutanapproachingsnowstorm,

shedidn’tgiveitmuchthought.......Asthesnowcamedownmoreandmoreheavily,Emilywasdirectedoffthehighway.ShedroveonforawhileandfoundherselfonanunfamiliarroadtowardaCanadiantown.P2

WhileEmilywasdrivingonanarrowstretchofroad,

hercarslidintoaditch(沟).P3Emilyawoketoagentleknockonhercarwindow.......Withgenuinewarmthinhervoice,RachelsaidtheycouldtakeEmilytoanearbycafetheyknew.Gratefulandrelieved,Emilyacceptedtheoffer.P4......assheexplainedherdesperatesituation:shewasaboutahundredmilesfromherdestination,hercarwascompletelystuck,andherentireholidayplancouldberuined.DanielandRachelsuggestedthatEmilycontinueherjourneybytrain.Threedayslater,Emilyreturnedtogethercar.Conflict:Emily’scargotstuckinaditchandherplantomeetherboyfriendforChristmascouldfail.Solution:Emilytookatraintomeetherboyfriend.DanielandRachelhelpedtogethercaroutoftheditch.TextanalysisMainplotHavingignoredasnowstormwarning,Emilygotforcedoffthehighwayandlostherway.

Acouplefoundthetrappedvehicleandvolunteeredtotakehertoacafe,whichsheacceptedgratefullyAtthecafe,EmilyrecountedherdesperatesituationWithhercarstuckandnophonesignal,shesurvivedthefreezingnightbystayinginthecar.Para2:Threedayslater,Emilyreturnedtogethercar.Para1:DanielandRachelsuggestedthatEmilycontinueherjourneybytrain.Textanalysis1.同位语

EmilySanders,a25-year-oldfromDetroit,Michigan,

setoutonDecember23rdwithhighhopesofreachingTorontotomeetherboyfriendforChristmas.25岁的艾米丽·桑德斯来自密歇根州底特律，12月23日她满怀希望地出发，前往多伦多与男友共度圣诞。2.让步状语从句

Althoughshehadheardwarningsaboutanapproachingsnowstorm,shedidn'tgiveitmuchthought.虽然她听说了暴风雪即将来临的警告，但她并没有太当回事。3.宾语从句SheassumedthatmuchlikeinMichigan,policewouldsimplydetourtrafficaroundanyclosedsectionsofthehighway.她以为，就像在密歇根那样，警察会简单地让车辆绕行高速公路上任何封闭的路段。4.find+oneself+介词短语–ShedroveonforawhileandfoundherselfonanunfamiliarroadtowardaCanadiantown.她继续开了一会儿，发现自己身处一条通往某个加拿大小镇的陌生道路上。5.不定式作宾语+动名词作宾语

Afterastruggle,shemanagedtofreethevehicleandcontinuedinchingalongthesnow-coveredroad.经过一番挣扎，她设法将车挣脱出来，继续在积雪的道路上缓慢爬行。6.时间状语从句

Asnightfell,

panicsetin.随着夜幕降临，恐慌开始蔓延。7.时间状语从句（进行时）WhileEmilywasdrivingonanarrowstretchofroad,hercarslidintoaditch.当艾米丽在一段狭窄的道路上行驶时，她的车滑入了一条沟里。续写原文优美句子赏析Textanalysis8.现在分词短语作伴随状语

Shewrappedherselfinablanket,waitingformorning.她用毯子裹住自己，等待天亮。9.不定式作目的状语Tostaywarm,sheranherengineforafewminuteseverynowandthen.为了保暖，她时不时地发动引擎几分钟。10.awaketo+名词

Emilyawoketoagentleknockonhercarwindow.艾米丽在轻轻的敲车窗声中醒来。11.完全倒装+定语从句+宾语从句

StandingoutsidewereDanielandhiswifeRachel,whonoticedthestrandedvehicleontheirwayhomeandstoppedtoseeiftheycouldhelp.站在外面的是丹尼尔和他的妻子瑞秋，他们在回家的路上注意到了这辆被困的车辆，便停下来看看是否能帮忙。12.时间状语从句+宾语从句+形式主语

WhenEmilyrolleddownthewindow,Rachelaskedifshewasokayandtoldheritwasnotsafetostayovernightinthecar.当艾米丽摇下车窗时，瑞秋问她是否还好，并告诉她留在车里过夜不安全。13.with+名词+介词短语（伴随状语）

Withgenuinewarmthinhervoice,RachelsaidtheycouldtakeEmilytoanearbycafetheyknew.瑞秋声音中带着真诚的温暖，说她可以带艾米丽去附近一家他们熟悉的咖啡馆。14.形容词短语作状语Gratefulandrelieved,Emilyacceptedtheoffer.感激而宽慰地，艾米丽接受了这个提议。续写原文优美句子赏析Textanalysis十句五定法Task4:Createplotaccordingtogivensentencesandthewritingskill“十句五定法”.根据给定的句子和写作技巧“十句五定法”创设合理的情节。“十句五定”通常指10句话中5句的位置及内容已定，并不限于文章是10句话。Para.1Para.2PlotDesign第一定：衔接para.1首句

（无灵主语+时间状语从句）第二定：衔接para.2首句（with复合结构）第三定：衔接para.2首句（独立主格结构）第四定：结局(正能量)（非谓语+宾语从句）第五定：主题升华（强调句）第1句：细节描写（Adj.状+定从）第2句：细节描写（非谓语+同位语）第3句：

细节描写（半倒装）第4句：细节描写（全倒装）第5句：细节描写（动作链+独立主格）剩下的五句补齐细节：Action-Response行为-回应原则

所见，所闻Conflict—Solution冲突--解决原则

所说，所做Negative—Positive消极--积极原则

所思适当用上衔接词：immediately,withouthesitation,then,afterawhile,onarrival,withalltheworkdone,however,instead,on/upondoing…..十句五定法para.11衔接para.1提示句（接着para.1首句往下写）2345衔接para.2提示句（根据para.2首句倒推写）para.26衔接、提示句（接着para.2首句往下写）789

结尾（正能量）10

升华主题Plot剩余五句补齐细节情绪动作心理语言环境描写Para.1:

DanielandRachelsuggestedthatEmilycontinueherjourneybytrain.Para.2:Threedayslater,Emilyreturnedtogethercar.衔接1Q1回应首句HowdidEmilyfeelaboutherstrandedcar?1句过渡1Q2.

WhatdidDanielpromisetodo?

Q3.WhydidthecoupleoffertheirphonesandwhatdidEmilydothen?

Q4.WhatdidthecoupledotosendEmilyoff??3-4句

衔接3

回应首句

Q1.Whatchangestookplaceintheweatherthreedayslater?1句过渡2Q2.WhatdidEmilydowhenshecameback?

Q3.WhatdidEmilyfindabouthercar?

Q4.HowdidEmilyreacttotheirhelp?3-4句

主题

升华Q5.Whatisthecentraltheme?1句MaincluesConstructa

reasonable

and

logical

plot

衔接2Q5.WhathappenedafterEmilyarrivedinToronto?1句

衔接1

Scene11.Sheworriedaboutthecarbutagreedtotakethetrain.

过渡1

Scene2

2.Hepromisedtotowhercar.

3.Theylentherphonestocontactherboyfriendashersfailed.4.Theysenthertothestation,boughtaticketandlefttheiraddress.衔接2Scene3

过渡下段首句5.Shemetherboyfriend,sharedherstoryandplannedtoregainhercar.衔接3

Scene1

回应首句1.Thesnowstoppedandthesuncameout.过渡2

Scene2

2.Shevisitedthecouplewithgifts.3.Hercarwastowedbackandkeptsafe.4.Shefeltdeeplygratefultothem.主题1

Scene3

5.Shedecidedtospreadkindnesstoothers.

续写构思：5-6句Para.1:DanielandRachelsuggestedthatEmilycontinueherjourneybytrain.Para.2:Threedayslater,Emilycamebacktopickuphercar.

①Sheworriedaboutthecarbutagreedtotakethetrain.②Hepromisedtotowhercar.③Theylentherphonestocontactherboyfriendashersfailed.④Theysenthertothestation,boughtaticketandlefttheiraddress.⑤Shemetherboyfriend,sharedherstoryandplannedtogethercar.

粗线条的合理构思Constructareasonableandlogicalplot①Thesnowstoppedandthesuncameout.②Shevisitedthecouplewithgifts.③Hercarwaskeptsafeandtowedback.④Shefeltdeeplygratefultothem.⑤Shedecidedtospreadkindnesstoothers.细化的合理情节写作技巧sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsfeelings+actions

Para.1:

ThecouplesuggestedthatEmilytakeatraintomeetherboyfriend.衔接1

Scene1

2句

Sheworriedaboutthecarbutagreedtotakethetrain.

1.起初她还在为抛锚的车子忧心忡忡、犹豫不决，得知乘火车是最佳选择后，她最终答应了。①让步状语从句省略+主句+时间状语从句的省略Thoughinitiallytornbyconcernaboutherstrandedcar,sheultimatelyagreedwheninformedthatchoosingtrainservicemightbehertoppriority.②形容词短语作状语+并列句+原因状语从句Concernedaboutherbroken-downcaratfirst,shefinallymadeuphermindtotakethetrainasitwasthebestoption.③介词短语引导让步状语+主句+时间状语从句Despitebeingconcernedoverherstuckcar,shegaveherconsenteventuallyafterlearningthatatrainridewasthemostsensiblechoiceLanguageexpressionsentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsactions

2.

察觉到她的忧虑后，丹尼尔承诺一定会帮忙拖车，这让她放下了心。①现在分词完成式作状语+主句+非限制性定语从句Havingsensedherconcern,Danielassuredthathewasboundtogetthevehicletowed,whichputheratease.②形容词短语作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语Awareofherhesitation,Danielmadeacommitmenttohavinghercartowedaway,relievinghergreatconcern.③时间状语从句+宾语从句+现在分词结果状语Afterpickinguponherunease,Danielguaranteedthathewouldarrangeforatowtruck,whichgreatlycomfortedher.Para.1:过渡1

Scene2

3-4句

适当补充细节Hepromisedtotowhercar.

sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsactions

3.发现她手机没有信号，夫妻俩毫不犹豫地把手机借给了她，她得以把行程变动告知男友。①现在分词作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语Spottingherphone’sdeadsignal,thecoupleofferedtheirswithouthesitation,allowinghertoupdateherboyfriendontheshiftedschedule.②现在分词作状语+主句+结果状语从句Catchingsightofherphoneoutofservice,thekindcouplereadilyhandedovertheirphonesrightaway,contributingtomakingcontactwithherboyfriendtoinformhimofthebrandnewplan.③现在分词作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语Themomenttheynoticedherphonefailtowork,theconsideratecoupledidnothesitatetosharetheirphones,enablinghertomessageherboyfriendabouttheunexpectedmeansoftransportation.Para.1:过渡1

Scene2

3-4句

适当补充细节Theylentherphonesashersfailed,soshemessagedherboyfriend.sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsactions

4.随后，他们立刻送她到车站，帮她买好了车票，还写下了联系方式和地址方便后续联系。“艾米丽裹着他们的厚实的外套，登上了火车，心中满怀感激之情。”①副词作状语+并列谓语+现在分词伴随状语Subsequently,withoutdelay,theyswiftlydroppedheroffatthestationandpurchasedaticketforher,scribblingdowntheirnumberandaddressforthesakeofconvenientcontact.Wrappedintheirthickcoats,Emilyboardedthetrain,herheartswellingwithoverwhelminggratitude.

②副词作状语+多重并列谓语//主句+插入语+非谓语Soonafterwards,theydroveherstraighttothestationrapidly,boughtheraticketandjotteddowntheircontactinformationjusttokeepintouch.Emily,wrappedupintheirthickcoat,steppedontothetrain,overcomewithadeepsenseofthankfulness.Para.1:衔接2

Scene2

3-4句

适当补充细节Theysenthertothestation,boughtaticketandlefttheiraddress.sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsactions

4.随后，他们立刻送她到车站，帮她买好了车票，还写下了联系方式和地址方便后续联系。“艾米丽裹着他们的厚实的外套，登上了火车，心中满怀感激之情。”③高级句型+多重并列非谓语//with复合结构+主句+非谓语Theywastednotimesendinghertothestation,purchasingaticketandleavingtheiraddressforlaterconnection.Withherwarmcoatwrappedaroundher,Emilyclimbedaboardthetrain,feelingprofoundlygratefulfromthebottomofherheart.Para.1:衔接2

Scene2

3-4句

适当补充细节Theysenthertothestation,boughtaticketandlefttheiraddress.sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsactions

5.几小时后，她抵达目的地。走下站台，她立刻被男友紧紧抱住。她讲述了这段惊险的经历和夫妻俩暖心的相助，倘若没有他们无私的帮助，她的假期计划早已泡汤。她打算圣诞节后回去取自己的车。①现在分词作状语+主句+独立主格+状语从句+定语从句+简单句Hourslater,sheendedupinToronto.Steppingofftheplatform,shewasinstantlyenvelopedinherboyfriend’stightembrace,tearsofjoyandreliefwellingupinhereyesassherecountedherthrillingadventureandtheheartwarmingrescuebythekindcouple,withoutwhoseunselfishhelpherholidayplancouldhavebeenruined.SheintendedtoretrievehercarafterChristmas.Para.1:衔接2

Scene2

3-4句

适当补充细节Shemetherboyfriend,sharedherstoryandplannedtoretrievehercar.sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsactions

5.②

时间状语从句+主句+with复合结构+并列谓语Asthehoursstretchedon,thetraineventuallyrolledintoToronto.Onsteppingoutofthestation,herboyfriendgatheredherintohisarms,worrywrittenonhisface.Withtearsofjoyandreliefspringingtohereyes,shepouredoutherheart-stoppingexperienceandwasdeterminedtogethercarbacksoonafterwards.③

现在分词作状语+主句+并列谓语Hours

slippingby,shefoundherselflandinginToronto.Nosoonerhadshelefttheplatformthanherboyfriendgaveherabighugtightly.Shesharedhertoughjourneyandmadeuphermindtofetchherstrandedcarinthedaystocome.Para.1:衔接2

Scene2

3-4句

适当补充细节Shemetherboyfriend,sharedherstoryandplannedtoretrievehercar.sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsfeelings+actions

Para.2:

Threedayslater,Emilyreturnedtogethercar.衔接3

Scene1.1-2句Thesnowstoppedandthesuncameout.补充细节

1.随着大雪的停止，太阳在闪闪发光的田野上投下金色的光芒，融化了暴风雪的最后痕迹。①with复合结构作状语+主句+现在分词结果状语Withtheragingsnowceasing,thesuncastagoldenglowovertheglisteningfields,meltingthelasttracesofthesnowstorm.

②独立主格+无灵主语+现在分词结果状语+名词性从句Thehowlingsnowdyingdown,theglisteningfieldswerebathedinawarmgoldenglow,dissolvingwhatremainedoftheblizzard.③时间状语从句+无灵主语句+现在分词结果状语Asthefiercesnowendedupceasing,thesunpouredagoldenlightacrossthesparklingfields,erasingthesnowstorm’sfinalmarks.sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsfeelings+actions

2.

她提着一盒礼物前去向夫妻俩表达诚挚的谢意，来到家中，眼前的一幕让她十分惊喜：自己的车完好无损地停在车库里。①

现在分词作状语+主句+定语从句+独立主格Carryingaboxofgiftstoconveytheirheartfeltthankstothecouple,shepaidavisittotheirhousewhereshewasgreetedwithamagicalscene,hervehiclestandingsafeandsoundintheirgarage.②with复合结构作状语+主句+非谓语+独立主格Withaboxofgiftsheldinhand,sheheadedtodropinonthekindcoupletoextendhergenuinegratefulness,onlytobemetwithanextraordinarysight-hercar,perfectlyintact,wasparkedintheirgarage.Para.2:过渡2

Scene2

Shevisitedthecouplewithgifts.

1-2句适当补充细节

sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsfeelings+actions

2.

她提着一盒礼物前去向夫妻俩表达诚挚的谢意，来到家中，眼前的一幕让她十分惊喜：自己的车完好无损地停在车库里。③

不定式作目的状语+主句+定语从句Toconveyherdeepgratitude,sheheldaboxofgiftstoherchest,callingattheirhouse,wherehercarwaskeptperfectlyingoodconditionintheirgarage.Para.2:过渡2

Scene2

Shevisitedthecouplewithgifts.

1-2句适当补充细节

sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsfeelings+actions

3.

原来，夫妻俩第二天就联系了警方和拖车司机，把车从沟里拖了出来。①it作形式主语句型+宾语从句Itturnedoutthatthecouplereachedouttothepoliceandtruckdriverstotowitoutoftheditchtheverynextday.②状语从句+主句+不定式作目的状语Asithappened,thecouplecontactedthepoliceandtowtruckworkerstopullhertrappedvehicleoutoftheditchthefollowingday.③主语从句+表语从句Whatwentbeyondherexpectationswasthatthecouplemanagedtogetintouchwiththepolicetohavehercarremovedfromtheditchsoonafterhercarwasstuck.Para.2:过渡2

Scene2

Hercarwaskeptsafeandtowedback

1-2句适当补充细节

sentencepatterns+advancedandprecisewordsfeelings+actions

4.

她看到车上装点的节日饰品，埃米莉忍不住流下感激的泪水，心中暖意涌动。她坦言，若非二人及时相助，她就无法和男友共度圣诞团聚时光了。这对夫妇笑了笑，坚持说这没什么大不了的，他们只是做了每个人都应该做的事。①现在分词作状语+主句+独立主格+状语从句（含虚拟语气）//主句+非谓语+并列名从Witnessingthefestivedecorationsonhercar,Emilycouldn’tresistsheddingtearsofgratefulness,asenseofwarmthsurgingthroughherbody,assheutteredthatshewouldhavemissedtheChristmasreunionwithherboyfriendbutfortheirtimelyassistance.Thecouplecrackedasmile,insistingthatitwasnobigdealandthattheymerelydidwhatanyonewassupposedtodo.Para.2:过渡2

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她看到车上装点的节日饰品，埃米莉忍不住流下感激的泪水，心中暖意涌动。她坦言，若非二人及时相助，她就无法和男友共度圣诞团聚时光了。这对夫妇笑了笑，坚持说这没什么大不了的，他们只是做了每个人都应该做的事。②状语从句省略+主句+宾语从句//主句+名从+非谓语//非谓语+主句+非谓语+名从Whennoticingthedelicatedecorationsonhercar,Emilywastoomovedtotearstoutterasingleword.ShehighlightedthatneverwouldshehavesucceededinspendingamerryChristmaswithouttheirselflessaid.Wearingawarmsmile,thecoupleperceiveditasnobigdeal,claimingthattheyhadjustdonewhateveryhumanbeingoughttodoforanother.Para.2:过渡2

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她看到车上装点的节日饰品，埃米莉忍不住流下感激的泪水，心中暖意涌动。她坦言，若非二人及时相助，她就无法和男友共度圣诞团聚时光了。这对夫妇笑了笑，坚持说这没什么大不了的，他们只是做了每个人都应该做的事。

③介词短语作状语+主谓结构+简单句//主句+名从+虚拟语气//with复合结构+名从句Atthesightofthedecorationsonhercar,Emilystoodrootedtothespot,tearsofgratitudewellingupinhereyes.SheowedherhappyChristmasreunionentirelytothecouple.Sheacknowledgedthathaditnotbeenforthecouple’sprompthelp,shewouldn’thavebeenabletoenjoyaChristmasreunionwithherboyfriend.Withasmilespreadingacrossherface,thecouplerespondedthatitwasnothingspecial—theysimplydidwhateverypersonoughttodo.Para.2:过渡2

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5.这个难忘的圣诞节让埃米莉明白，不经意的善意行为能够战胜我们遇到的一切困境，照亮我们前行之路。从那以后，她下定决心，今后遇到身处困境的人，也要将这份善意传递下去。①

主句+宾语从句+现在分词状语+时间状语+分词省略结构ThatunforgettableChristmasleftEmilyrealizingthatrandomactsofgenerositycanconquerwhatevercomesinourway,illuminatingthewayforward.Fromthenon,sheresolvedtopayforwardsuchgoodgestureswheneverencounteringthosetrappedintrouble.②

主语从句+表语从句+状语从句省略//主句+并列结构WhatEmilygainedfromthisChristmaswasthatkindnesswithoutexpectinganythinginreturncouldbeofgreathelptoovercomeallhardshipswhenbravingatoughsituation.Sincethen,shehasbeendeterminedtodogooddeedsandlendahelpinghandtothosestuckindifficulty.Para.2:1句

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Shedecidedtospreadkindnesstoothers.

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5.这个难忘的圣诞节让埃米莉明白，不经意的善意行为能够战胜我们遇到的一切困境，照亮我们前行之路。从那以后，她下定决心，今后遇到身处困境的人，也要将这份善意传递下去。③

强调句型+主句//主句+名从句ItwasfromthismemorableChristmasexperiencethatEmilylearnedthatsmallkindnessescanguideusthroughallchallengeslyingbeforeus.Afterthat,sheresolvedtodowhatevershecouldtospreadwarmthandreachedoutherhandtoassistanyonewho