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2、ilephone.,Itisbrandnewwithsilvergraycoverandablackleathercoat,insidewhichstoresmanywonderfulphotosofsportsplayersinourshool.,学会用with短语和定语从句来描述事物,Thiscameraisabirthdaypresentfrommybestfriend,solosingitupsetsmealot.MynameisLiHuaTatanytime.Thankyouverymuch!,2018年11月概要写作,-visitcolleges,Itsareallygoodide

3、atovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofind

4、thetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,aloto

5、fcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwontbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsarentgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyoud

6、liketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudontlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldntknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.Itsachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcolle

7、gecounselors(倾问)，anditwontcostyouapenny!Y.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircanttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyoudliketoattend.,Itsareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybec

8、ausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,and

9、itcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.,yourdesiredcollege,keysentence,Itsareallygoodideatovisityourdesiredcollegesbeforeyoumakeadecis

10、iontoapplyforthem.Whichwordsdontneedtoberestated?colleges,applyforthem同义转换1.Itisofgreatnecessitytopayavisittoyourdreamcollegesbeforeyoureachaproperdecisontoapply.2.Itisdefinitelyworthwilevisitingcollegesbeforedecidingonidealonestoapplyfor.,amust,3.Itshighlyrecommendedtovisityourlongingcollegesbefore

11、youapply.,同义词：visit-payavisittodesired-dream/ideal/longingmakeadecision-cometoaproperdecisionreacharightdecisiondecideonidealcolleges,1.Itwillhelpalotifyoupayavisittocollegesbeforeapplication.2.Itisagoodideato.(.是一个好主意)3.Itisadvisabletopayavisittocolleges.4.Itishighlyrecommendedtopayavisitto.5.Itwou

12、ldbewisetovisitcollegesbefore.6.Itisofgreatnecessitytopayavisittocollegesinadvance.7Itwillbebeneficialifyoupayavisittocollegesinadvanceandmakeawisedecision.,复习“建议”经典句型,Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouli

13、veacrossthecountrythatwontbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!KeysentenceTheresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,becausealotofcollegeapplicationswillwish/encourageyouto.,Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,becausealotofcollegeapplicationswillencourageyouto.

14、下划线直接表达成：visityourlocalcolleges改写要点句1.Youaresupposedtovisityourlocalcolleges,whichislikelytobeincludedinapplications.“应该”的表达方式1.Wearesupposedto.2.Weareadvisedto.3.Weareexpectedto.4.Wearerequiredto.5.Wearerecommendedto.,Theresnoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea,becausealotofcollegeapplication

15、swillencourageyouto.改写要点句2.Itisamustforyoutovisityourlocalcolleges,becausemanyapplicationswishyouto.3.Youarehighlyrecommendedtovisityourlocalcolleges,whichisinvolvedinmanyapplications.,Ifcampusvisitsarentgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracce

16、ptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyoudliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudontlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldntknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.本段要点与前一段要点的区别？如果不能够申请之前参观，至少要在录取通知书到来之前去参观。KeysentenceIfyoucantvisititbeforeapplication,youshoulddoitbeforetheacceptanc

17、elettersarrive.,Ifyoucantvisititbeforeapplication,youshoulddoitbeforetheacceptancelettersarrive.改写要点句1.Ifyoucantvisititbeforeapplication,youaresupposedtomakeitbeforebeingadmitted.2.Anyway,ifyoucantmakeitbeforeapplication,itisacceptabletodoitbeforeyoureceivetheadmissionletter.,Now,iftimeandmoneyarema

18、kingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.Itsachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(倾问)，anditwontcostyouapenny!Y.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircanttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwil

19、lhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyoudliketoattend.KeysentenceIfyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecision.,Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecision.改写要点句1.Ifyouareshorto

20、ftimeandmoney,visitingonlinecollegefairsisbeneficialforyoutomakeawisedecision.2.Ifyoulacktimeandmoney,itisapracticalwaytogaininformationfromonlinecollegefairstohelpyoureachawisedecison.,Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecision.综合全文，helpyoumakeanin

21、formeddecision这一目的可以替换成helpyoubetterunderstandcolleges.,AnewkeysentenceIfyouareshortoftimeandmoney,checkingouttheonlinecollegefairswillhelpyoubetterunderstandcolleges.改写要点句1.Ifyoulackmoneyandtime,visitingonlinecollegefairsisagoodalternativetohelpyoubetterunderstandcolleges.2.Inthesituationwherestude

22、ntsareshortoftimeandmoney,visitingonlinecollegefairsisahelpfulapproachtohavingabetterunderstandingofcolleges.,文章结构,第一段：全文mainidea:visitcolleges连接词：Undoubtedly；Actually；Particularly第二段：事实：必须要visitlocalcolleges连接词：However;第三段：退一步：至少要在录取前visit连接词：Stepbackagain第四段：再退一步：可以网上了解信息,theproblemsinwriting,Fors

23、tudentswhoareshortofmoneyandtime,registeringonlineisagoodalternativetohelpyoubetterunderstandschools.1.整篇文章，人称始终保持一致！Forstudentswhoareshortofmoneyandtime,visitingonlinecollegefairsisagoodalternativetohelpthembetterunderstandschools.,参考范文1(第二人称),Applyingtocollegesisanimportantdecisioninyourlife,soyou

24、shouldvisitthecollegesyouwanttoattendinadvance,especiallywhentheyarenearwhereyoulive.However,ifyoucantmakeitbeforeapplication,youshoulddoitbeforetheacceptancelettersarrive.Stepbackagain,ifyoudohavenotimeormoneyforit,visitingtheonlinecollegefairscanalsohelpyoumakethewisedecision.,参考范文2(you),Itisofgre

25、atnecessitytopayavisittocollegesbeforedecidingonanidealonewhenapplyingforacollege.Particularly,itisamusttovisityourlocalcolleges,becausemanyapplicationsencourageit.However,ifyoucantmakeitbeforeapplication,itisacceptabletodoitbeforeadmissionletter.Stepbackagain,inthesituationwhereyoulacktimeandmoney,visitingonlinecollegefairsis