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1、写作任务之叙述经历,Woken up by a message praising her, the author felt happy all day, which made her realize the power of good words. Therefore, she advocates/ calls on/ appeals to people to say kind words to others.,Attention,审题: (1)主题;(赞扬鼓励) 赞扬 praise (admire/appreciate) (2) 经历/例子; 写特定某次事情(不能概括),主题 (3)你/他人
2、; 2. 经历用间接引语 3. 篇幅(例子不宜过长),Having read the passage, I was lost in a piece of memory about good words. There was a time when I was in agony as a consequence of the dreadfully tough ordeals that I encountered. One day, my neighbor, who was watering the flowers in her garden, praised me as a strong-min
3、ded girl and comparing me to the flowers under the sunlight. Exhausted and paralyzed as I was, I regained my energy and confidence immediately. It suddenly struck me that there was nothing could beat the obstacles but an optimistic mind. Thanks to her good words, nightmare was away from me.,From the
4、n on, I am not mean with my good words because I am firmly convinced of their power and influence. Not only can good words convey kindness and enthusiasm to others, but also represent a fantastic life style.,1. 紧扣主题 (赞扬鼓励) 赞扬 praise (admire/appreciate) 2. 选材:写经历时, 可用借鉴原文法。因为写经历就是写记叙文, 将记叙文的几个要素替换就行了
5、, 但一定要注意主题与原文故事一致。,(1) 讲述一次你赞扬他人或受到他人赞扬的经历。,Having read the passage, a prominently unforgettable memory irresistibly comes flooding into my mind. It is of no skepticism that it was the remarkably encouraging praise from my father that rebuilt my confidence. There was a time when I always did a dread
6、fully bad job while playing soccer with others and my teammates inevitably blamed our failure on me, which gave rise to my lack of confidence. However, my father patiently praised me for my fabulous performance in the past. But for his praise, I would have kept under-estimating myself.,On account of
7、 the stimulating words, I performed as a more extraordinary player for the reason that not only did it make considerable contributions to establishing my confidence but also it successfully took me to the destination of being thoroughly aware that we are expected to dig our potential and dedicate ou
8、rselves.,(1) 讲述一次你赞扬他人或受到他人赞扬的经历。,Having read the story, a piece of memory irresistibly jumps into my mind. Born with a red scar on my forehead, I always felt inferior and unsatisfied with my appearance. Therefore, I was used to covering it with my hair, burying my head and even distance myself from
9、 others. One day, when doing sports, my friend Amy happened to see my scar, making me rather embarrassed. Unexpectedly, she didnt laugh at me but gave me the sincerest and warmest compliment by saying that what a unique mark I had and that it must be left by my guardian angel! Thanks to her kind wor
10、ds, I suddenly felt relieved and even proud.,(2) 这次经历对你或他人的影响。,Undoubtedly, the generous praise left a tremendous influence on me. First and foremost, it rekindled my confidence in my study, especially when I am confronted with difficulties. In addition, I realize that praise means not only a magica
11、l crayon that paints a colorful picture of life, but an eraser that can eliminate the depression or pain. Thanks to my mothers kind words, not only can I handle my pressure with ease, but also I am inspired to praise others simultaneously (同时).,经历(主题句 +具体事例),篇幅,发表(主题句+列举),summary,It all depends.,1.
12、There is no doubt that praise is what we all desire for. Therefore, I will never be mean with my smile and praise to others, which, on many occasion, will change a lot. 2. Having experienced such an unforgettable event, I strongly approve of the idea that simple words have an incredible influence in
13、 our lives. There is no reason for us to ignore the power of praise.,(3) 适当发挥(呼吁),3. It is universally acknowledged that acquiring others praise plays a significant part in our growth. My performance ended up as a big success under my mothers encouragement and praise and all my efforts paid off at t
14、hat moment. 4. From my perspective, kind words can shorten the distance between peoples soul.,(3) 适当发挥(呼吁),1. Remarkably afraid as I was, I was reluctant to swim under such freezing cold circumstance. 2. Simple as my mothers praise was, not only did it build up my confidence, but also encouraged me
15、to face potential difficulties bravely. 3. Aimless as I was, my teacher never intended to desert me.,名词/形容词+as/though+主语+动词,4. Exhausted and depressed, a voice from my teacher came into my ears. 5. Nervous and excited, abundant preparation and practice eventually enabled me to harvest the champion.
16、6. Passionate and happy, I spare no effort to praise the people surrounding me, which will undoubtedly contribute to harmony.,形容词、过去分词表心情,7. Only by contributing ourselves to the society selflessly can our existence become significant and brilliant. 8. Despite the simple praise, not only did it stim
17、ulate my passion but also it gave me the energy to strive against(对抗) the obstacles. 9. A diversity of difficulties or failures may happen to us unavoidably (inevitably), but on no condition will I be afraid of the obstacles on count of my mothers continuous (constant) encouragement and praise.,倒装,虚
18、拟,倒装,10. It is of no skepticism that words of praise have a remarkable impact on Johns lives. Without my admirable words, John would not have made such great progress. 11. But for my Chinese teachers praise, I wouldnt have written such beautiful characters. To his credit, not only can my writing mak
19、e progress, but also I become more outgoing.,12. But for such a precious opportunity being Miss Lis student, neither would I have been praised significantly nor would I have achieved so much. Words would come into my ears and stimulates my enthusiasm for my promising future.,虚拟,倒装,13. But for his en
20、couraging words, my English learning would have been worse and worse. Only by considering his words seriously can I make progress. Without his praise, I would never have made progress(never would I have made progress).,虚拟,倒装,名词当主语,Anxiety and pressure completely took up my mind before the competition. Sorrow (bitterness) and doubts (skepticism) came flooding into my mind. 3 Hearing the words, the stone in my heart relieved and a brimful of passion came flooding into my mind. 4. My teachers kind words and the audie
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