2011浙江金华高三英语研讨会材料：高考英语作文教学策略

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2、urse, the greatest us of advertisements is that they help factories and business sell their products and gain profits.,Advertisements can provide us the information that we need. They can help us choose what we need in everyday life. They can tell us where something can be bought. They can save us m

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4、s a big concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact.,It is widely accepted that there is major concern around the world for exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future, though it is unlikely to be true.,very,near,big,It is widely accepted that,widely accepted,for,though,m

5、ajor,润色增加得分的依据,词汇：具体、高级,句式：紧凑、复杂,语言,He gave me information .,Somebody is sleeping in the class now. His eyes are open. Somebody is sleeping in the class now, _.,with his eyes open,The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world, and in spring time it often overflows its banks, and th

6、e lives of many people are endangered.,The Mississippi River, one of the longest rivers in the world, often overflows its banks in spring time, endangering the lives of many people.,I didnt know the students here are so smart until just now.,直到刚才我才知道武义一中的同学如此聪明。,Its not until just now that I knew th

7、e students here are so smart.,Not until just now did I know you are so smart.,There are great changes that have happened in our school. There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side of the road before. But there is a big library now. There

8、 are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library. There is a new playground in the front of the school. There are many trees in and around the school.,There is/are,Quite a few changes have taken place in our school. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. _ _ _ _,

9、_ the playground used to be, now stands another new buildingour library. _ _ there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. _have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope youll come and see it for yourself some day.,阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文?,涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点； 层次不清，段落不分； 语句不通，杂乱无章； 书写潦草，卷面不洁；,友情提示,阅