高考英语书面表达辅导讲座.ppt

1、书面表达，what do you think have effects on the marks of your compositions？1 .handwriting 2。words and expressions 3。complicated sentences 4。structure of compositions，marking rules in composition，2010高考英语高考作文评分标准(摘录)单词数在80个以下，超过120个，则从总分中减去2分。写作差，影响社交，将分数降低一级。计分时要注意的主要内容包括内容要点、词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、语言的一致性和恰当性等。一

2、致性是指文章的语义一致性和语言形式的密切联系和一定的逻辑关系。使用以下方法可以紧密连接句子：提示1:适当使用相关单词，如when、so、if、because、so that。提示2:巧妙使用有意义的词语或短语，例如first、second、third、soon、whatstmore、as a result等。提示3:正确使用切换器语句the reasons are as followws。on the contract，connection的选择，1 .通常用于添加信息的连接方包括further more、besides、moreover、in addition、what is more、As

3、 well as和either.or.not only.but also.worse still等。E.g. (NMET湖南)in his opinion，we should not only know what ，but also understand why ，2 .拐点关系中常用的连接者包括but、yet、however、in spite of、although、on the contrry、on the other hand和otherwise。E.g. (NMET湖南省though he is 34，he looks very young for his age)。it does s

4、eem ugly to meOn the contrry，I think its rather beautful。3 .因果关系中常用的连接词包括so、therefore、as a result、due to、thanks to、therefore和since。NMET Fujian as we all know，you are what you eat。therefore，it is very important for us to form healthy eating habits。4 .条件关系中常用的连接词是as (so) long as、on condition that、if和u

5、nless等。E.g. (NMET天津)if something terrible should happen，it would be difficult for people to get out quickly，5 .时间顺序关系中常用的连接词包括afterwards、After a while、immediately、as soon as、from now on、mean、not.until等。they think that they can get more detailed information from the original。mean hile，The language in

6、 The book is possily more livly and beaut ful。task1请在以下句子的空白处写上适当的相关单词或有意义的短语。1 .Xie Ming was walking in the street _ _ _ _ _ _ _ he heard some one cry for help . 2 . he advised that I hire a car _ _ _ _ _3._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ he_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _，We can pay a visit

7、to some places of interest . 5 . I shared the cost of the gas with my friends。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _，I saved $80，when，So that/in order that，as soon asattribution子句e.g. In my opinion，cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information 2。强词组e . g . it was this young boy that hel

8、per the old granny . 3 .翻转词组e . g . 1)Only in this way can you solve this problem . 2)hardly had they got使用文章图案，4 .地方文章和郑智薰谓词e . g . they read while walking or riding on a bus . 5 . with复合结构e . g . I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in ha Nd .6.n子句e.g. Thats what I should

9、 do .7.副词子句e . g . time passed quickly before we knew it。task 2根据需要改变以下句子，使其成为一个整体：1.the man is Mr . Wang . he came to our school yesterday(归属子句)the man who came to our school yesterday is Mr . Wang . 2 . the driver escaped；He left the old man lying on the road .The driver escaped，Leaving The old ma

10、n lying on The road . 3 The meal was over。web所有went home。(使用复合结构)with the meal over，we all went home . 4 . John likes studening；He also likes playing。(否定穿着)not only does John like studening，but also he likes playing，task 3 writing practice农村儿童辍学的主要原因和你的看法，请在中国日报上写一篇稿子。原因：1，贫穷的家庭，不能上学的生孩子，他们不得不在家赚钱养家

11、。2、一些父母认为不让女孩上学是无用的。有些孩子对作业不感兴趣，不想去学校。观点：1，每个孩子都应该有受教育的机会，包括女人。2、全社会都要重视儿童教育，他们将在国家的未来发挥重要作用。要求：1，不要逐字翻译。第二，文章要连贯。3，字数100左右。Now in the country areas，There are many children out of school . most families are poor and cant afford their education . they have to stay at home andthey dont let them go to

12、school .some children are not interested in their studies and woulden like to go to school .诊断：优点1，词义；2、文章表达基本正确。缺点门不一致。处方1，使用一般文章模式；2、在每两个文章之间使用特殊单词或过多单词。now in the country areas，there are many children out of school。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _，Most families are too poor to send their children to_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _，they have no choice but to stay at home and make money。_ _ _ _ _ _，Some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _，they dont let them go to school。_ _ _ _ _，Some children are not