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1、,Shen Rong Sarah,Writing,Mianyang No.2 Middle School,Whats the video about?,Our school trip.,Who?,My classmates and I,went on a school trip.,When ?,Last month,We went to Fule Mountain.,Where?,How did we go there?,We went there on foot.,We walked there.,How was the weather?,It was sunny.,What did you

2、 do?,How did you feel?,I felt tired but happy.,What should we think about?,I think we should think about _,who went on a school trip.,How to write a passage about school trip?,School trip,Who went on a school trip,How the weather was,How we went there,Where we went,When we went on a school trip,What

3、 we did,A letter to Jack,Dear Jack, Im writing to tell you my school trip._Yours,_Tom_,What else should we think about?,Person （人称）,We or I,Tense(时态）,The simple past tense,Text(文体）,Letter,Details(细节）,Word count/key words/beginning/ending,Structure(结构),Three paragraphs,Structure,Para1: beginning,Para

4、2: body,Para3: ending,Step 1：Outline,Step 2:Beautify it.,when/who/where,How was the weather? How did you go there? What did you do?,Feelings or comments,04:00,03:00,15,45,30,0,02:00,01:00,00:00,Correction codes:,Spelling and punctuation mistakes,Wrong sentences,Beautiful sentences,Transitional sentences,Conjunction words,？,How to write a composition?,Evaluation：,1.Person 2.Tense 3.Text 4. Details 5.Structure,Step1.Outline Step2. Beautify it.,1.Structure 2.Fluency 3. Language 4