Unit 2 Healthy eating 有关减肥的写作 Writing.ppt

1、Writing,Unit 2 Healthy eating,词汇训练,1. nutrition nutritious energy 2. usual unusual common 3. patient impatient proper 4. help helpful harm 5. hard difficult healthy 6. healthy sick fat,energetic,uncommon,improper,harmful,fit,thin/slim,词汇训练,1. 节食 2. 渴望减肥 3. 挑食 4. 养成健康的饮食习惯 5. 对环境造成危害,go/be on a diet,

2、be dying to/eager to lose weight 或 desire to lose weight,be particular about food,form/develop healthy eating habits,do harm/damage to the environment,完成句子,1. 多吃蔬菜对我们的健康有益。 1) Eating more vegetables _ our health. 2) Eating more vegetables _ our health.,is helpful to /is good for /does good to /is be

3、neficial to,is of help /benefit to,完成句子,2. 运动不仅能让我们精力充沛， 还能让我们身体健康。 1) Doing exercise can make us _ _. 2) Doing exercise not only _， but also _.,healthy/fit as well as energetic,makes us energetic keeps us healthy/fit,完成句子,3. 只有我们养成健康的饮食习惯， 我们才能保持健康。 1) _， and we can _. 2) _ if we _ can we _.,Form/D

4、evelop healthy eating habits keep healthy/fit,Only form/develop healthy eating habits keep healthy/fit,完成句子,4. 据报道， 越来越多的女生节食减肥。 1) _， more and more girls _ to _. 2) _ more and more girls try to _ by _.,As is reported go/are on a diet lose weight,It is reported that lose weight going on a diet,范文赏析,

5、以下是关于减肥的一些资料。,范文赏析,【写作内容】 不少年轻女孩热衷于减肥，根据以上表格写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 1. 介绍不当的减肥方法及其后果； 2. 推荐正确的减肥方法。 【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。,范文赏析,引出现象：用定语从句引出话题, As is widely known, lots of people， especially young girls, are dying to lose weight. However, the methods they use, such as taking pills,

6、having operations, going on strict diets and exercising in a crazy way, are improper.,深入分析：现象+后果 以However引出不当的方法,范文赏析,用not only.， but also. 的结构引出后果, These methods may not only lead to a lack of nutrition， but also lead to diseases and even sudden death. Actually, the right way to lose weight is to f

7、orm healthy eating habits like eating less snacks but more fruit and vegetables. Besides, a proper amount of exercise can also be of great benefit.,推荐方法：主系表的简单句， 不定式短语作定语和表语,简单句,lose weight be dying to do sth. go on a diet a lack of sth. lead to sth. form a. habit,好词,1) As is widely known，. 2) These

8、 methods may not only.， but also. 3) Actually， the right way to lose weight is to.,好句,方法指导,1. 认真审题，确定文体及时态 (本文文体属议论文，时态用一般现在时)； 2. 根据【写作内容】整理出信息点； 3. 根据信息点，用各种句子结构连词成句； 4. 最后通读并润色修改文章。看要点是否齐全， 文章的时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否完整等。,句型训练,1. Some girls skip breakfast every morning. Some children eat too much every d

9、ay. (用适当的连接词连接句子) 2. It is known to us all that slimming pills are harmful to our health. (用定语从句改写句子),Some girls skip breakfast every morning， while some children eat too much every day.,As is known to us all， slimming pills are harmful to our health.,句型训练,3. The girl is in perfect shape now. She us

10、ed to run half an hour a day. (用定语从句合并句子) 4. She decides not to eat dessert before bed. She can be slim again. (用合适的连接词连接句子),The girl， who used to run half an hour a day， is in perfect shape now.,She decides not to eat dessert before bed so that she can be slim again.,改写短文,Some students who stay up

11、late into night choose not to have breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed in the morning. Besides, some schoolgirls want to keep slim so they often go to school without having breakfast. As a result, these students are likely to feel sleepy in class and have poor memories, which

12、makes it hard for them to do well in exams. In fact, breakfast plays an important part because it can provide 30 percent of a whole days energy. Therefore, it is a must that we have breakfast every morning.,基础写作,However, bad eating habits arent uncommon among us students, such as often going to school without having breakfast, preferring snacks to meals, being particular about food and sometimes eating or drinking too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, wed better have meals regularly, and it would be better if theyre various healthy diets, whic