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1、假如你是杨方，你要竞选班长(class president)，请根据以下内容写一篇竞选演讲词。1. 你认为自己具备什么条件可以胜任班长工作？2. 如果当选你会为班级同学做些什么？注意：词数120个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。,审题： 1.体材：应用文-竞选演说词 2.时态和人称：第一人称，现在时 II.谋篇: 1.竞选演说词一般要求有称呼语、开头语、结束语以及拉票，表达谢意等内容。（本文开头语已给出。）,2.本文内容要点： 1） 个人所具备的竞选班长的优越条件 2) 如果当选你打算要为班级做什么 ，即竞选目标 3）表决心，拉票，表示感谢 3.段落层次： 根据三个内容要点，可分三段来写。 4

2、.注意点：该文体写作应朴实，真诚(sincere)，条理清楚，同时，话语要具有感染力（powerful），煽动性，让听众（选民）信服你，感受到你的真诚及能力。,范文 My name is Yang Fang. Im glad to have this opportunity to tell you why you should vote for me as class president. （开头语，引出话题）,I am responsible, sociable, and easy-going by nature. I like class work and enjoy serving ot

3、hers. Additionally, I have varied interests. I love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer. I am also a good listener and always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job well.(本段描述个人所具备的条件优越：responsible, sociable, easy-going, like class work ，a good listener，have var

4、ious interests, 在罗列这些优点时，既有“笼统的”responsible, sociable等“词汇”又有“具体的”例子love singing and playing the drums as well as soccer ， open to different opinions等 ，最后表明自己有信心胜任班长工作:I am confident that I can do the job well.。内容真实可信，语言具有感染力与说服力。,Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere

5、so that everyone in our class will improve their studies. For those students who are falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge between the teachers and us students. Finally, I will arrange parties to relax ourselves. （本段具体描述你的竞选目标： 1create an academ

6、ic atmosphere 2 serve as a bridge 3 arrange parties to relax ourselves ；描述时 分别用了firstly ，Secondly， Finally ，使得层次清晰，逻辑有序）,I believe I am the right person for this post and I hope to have your support and vote. Thank you! （结束语简明扼要，态度真诚，自信）,典型错误 Im a kind and outgoing people.(Im a person.) I want to se

7、rve for my class.（serve + n.） I have a kind-heart . ( a kind heart) Ill make the environment more clean.(cleaner) I also good at sports.(I am good at) Creat harmony atmosphere (harmonious atmosphere) Ill spare no pains to do things what will benefit our class.(things that will benefit our class) As

8、you known.(As you know) Ill hard working and try my best.(work hard) Ill help you when you have difficult.(difficulty) I get well with them and they are like me.(they all like me),要点1 I love our class. I enjoy class daily work. Im good at communicating with people and it can close the distance betwe

9、en teachers and students. A good relationship can make it easier for me to manage our class well. I like to be helpful . Whenever you need my help, Im always there. I have enough confidence that I can run our class perfectly because of my rich experience Ive got from my previous work.,要点2 If elected

10、, the first thing I will do is to decorate our classroom to be a nice place . Ill manage to lead our class to the top of our school.And Ill put my heart into class daily work. If I have the honor to be class president , Ill work harder not only to further improve myself but also do more things for o

11、ur class. Im supposed to let other students voice their opinions about class building and try to keep our class in order.,要点3 Im sure I would be an excellent class president. Give me a chance. I wont let you down. Im eager to get the position so that I can do more things for our teachers and classmates as well. I promise that I ll manage the class in a nice way,