高中英语作文道歉信解析.ppt

1、道歉信,A Letter of Apology,道歉信文体概述（Letter of apology) 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容： 1. 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。 2. 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。 3. 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。,常用语块 因某事向某人道歉 _ 2. 向说对不起 _ 3. 接受我的道歉 _ 4. 为某事原谅某人 _ 5. 并非故意做某事 _,have no intention to do sth.,apologize to

2、sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth.,say sorry to,accept my apology,forgive sb. for sth.,6. 弥补；赔偿 _ 7. 赔偿；偿还 _ 8. 给你带来不便 _ 9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _ 10. 更加小心 _,be more careful,make up for,pay for / compensate for,cause you inconvenience,cause you much trouble,11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误 _ 12. 应当受到责备 _ 13. 承担责任 _ 14.

3、 难以接受的后果 _ 15. 下不为例 _,never let it happen again,make such a stupid mistake,be to blame,be responsible for/shoulder /undertake the responsibility,an unacceptable result/consequence,写作三步曲,Step 1：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。,第一人称,一封道歉信,说理的逻辑性,一般现在时,9,3.提出补救办法,2.说明具体原因,道歉信写作4步走,写信的一般要求 1.内容要简单 对于题中所给的内容：全面 对于自己发挥的内容：简

4、单 写熟悉的，会写的！ 2.结构要清晰 开头段： 中间段： 结尾段: 3.语言要精彩： 4.注意内容之间的连接,1.表示歉意,总结提升,4.再次致歉望理解,造句能力,+高分套话,10,Basic structure and expressions 第一段:简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。 道歉的表达： I feel sorry for my failure to I am awfully sorry that I cannot I am very sorry for I am writing to express my sincere apology for my

5、5. I regret to inform you that I am unable to 6. I feel guilty for what I have done to you.,pick you up at the airport,attend your party.,my rudeness/thoughtlessness / bad manners.,11,第二段：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气 要诚恳。 1. Now let me explain what happened to me that day. 2. I had intended to 3. I am afraid wh

6、at I have done has caused much inconvenience to you. 4. I am to blame for this silly mistake. 5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.,12,第三段：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法， 希望能弥补过失，消除误会。 1. In order to remove our misunderstanding, I wou

7、ld like to invite . 2. To make up for my fault, I will 3. To compensate for your loss, I decide to . 4. I wish you could give me a chance to make up for my fault. 5. I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.,13,第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望 以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。 1. Please accept my most sincere apo

8、logy again. 2. I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again. 3. I assure you that it will never happen again. 4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies. 5.Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.,Step

9、3：写作,15,道歉信模板一 Dear Bob, I am truly sorry that _（道歉的原因）. The reason is that_（介绍的原因）.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,习作欣赏 Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book

10、 I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book. I know money cannot

11、 cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,习作欣赏 Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry

12、 to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the

13、 lost of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,第

14、一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程,第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施,第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误,习作修改(做短文改错) Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfort

15、unately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book.,borrowed,it,when,loss,I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missed book. I apolo

16、gize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,on,missing,inconvenience,carelessness,诵读经典范文 Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last we

17、ek. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read it every evening and intend to finish it next week, but unfortunately yesterday when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the loss of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am to blame. I will

18、go to your place on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missing book. I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by my carelessness. I promise that such a thing will never happen again.,第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程,第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施,第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误,诵读经典范文 Dear Sir/Mad

19、am, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read it every evening and intend to finish it next week, but unfortunately yesterday when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promi

20、se to pay for the loss of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am to blame. I will go to your place on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿) for the missing book. I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by my carelessness. I promise that such a thing wi

21、ll never happen again.,Lets take actions! Write an a letter of apology in 15 minutes.,课堂练习 假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信，要点如下： 1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。 2. 提出解决的办法。 3. 再次请求原谅。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,A good essay should be,1. complete 2. coheren

22、t 3. accurate 4. various 5. neat,Dear Bob, I am writing to make an apology to you for the fact that I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present. The CD which I

23、borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, ple

24、ase let me know. I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Homework：课外作业 假定你是李华，你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下： 1. 表示歉意。 2. 理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人照顾

25、。 3. 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,Dear Mr. Evans, I am indeed sorry to tell you that I wont be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip

26、to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.,However, I am a