中考英语写作.ppt

1、How to write English compositions书面表达写作指导,我校“阳光学生十不做” 要求学生不带手机到学校。上周校团委对九年级学生进行了抽样调查，调查结果如下表所示。请你根据表格中提供的信息写一份调查报告，并发表自己的观点。,要求：1、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整 2、词数90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入 总词数）,Model,Mobile phones are not allowed to bring to our school. Last week our school did a survey on using mobile phones at school a

2、mong Grade 9 students. Here is the result. _,我校“阳光学生十不做” 要求学生不带手机到学校。上周校团委对九年级学生进行了抽样调查，调查结果如下表所示。请你根据表格中提供的信息写一份调查报告，并发表自己的观点。,要求：1、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整 2、词数90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入 总词数）,第三和第一人称,一般现在时,Model,开头已给出,60%: unnecessary; cost much; unhealthy information; affect mind and body 30%: fashion; make friends

3、 easily; look for information on the Internet ,listen to music; relax ,not use mobile phones at school,play games; affect study ,1. 审题列点,2. 调查结果：反对、赞成的人数及原因,3. 完成自拟内容,4. 表达自己的观点,60%: unnecessary; cost much; Unhealthy information; affect mind and body；play games; affect study ,not use mobile phones a

4、t school,30%: fashion; make friends easily; look for information on the Internet ； listen to music; relax ,表达自己的观点,赞成,反对,2. 连词成句,60% of the students think its unnecessary to use mobile phones. It costs much. Some unhealthy information affects their mind and body. Playing games on the phone affects t

5、heir study. 30% of the students think its a fashion. They can make friends easily. They can look for information on the Internet. They can listen to music to relax themselves. Students shouldnt use mobile phones at school.,2. 连词成句,3. 丰富表达,1) They can make friends easily. 2) They can look for informa

6、tion on the Internet. 3) They can listen to music to relax.,1) Its adj for/of sb to do 做对某人来说 2) so/such that 如此 以至于 3) so that以便 4) I think that 5) because 6) Although/though., (yet) 7) when/if/unless 8) too to do 太 而不能 9) in order to,Useful patterns,1) They can make friends easily. 2) They can loo

7、k for information on the Internet. 3) They can listen to music to relax. 1) They say it helps them make friends easily. 2)They can search for information on the Internet when necessary. 3)They can listen to music to relax themselves when they are free.,3. 丰富表达,Passage A Last week our school did a su

8、rvey on using mobile phones at school among Grade 9 students. Here is the result. 60% of the students think it is unnecessary. It costs too much . The unhealthy information can affect the students. It is not good for us. 30% of the students think its a fashion. We can make friends easily. We can loo

9、k for the information on the Internet. We can listen to music and relax. I think it is not good to use mobile phones at school.,4. 连句成文,Passage B Last week our school did a survey on using mobile phones at school among Grade 9 students. Here is the result. 60% of the students think its unnecessary t

10、o use mobile phones because it costs a lot. Sometimes unhealthy information has a bad effect on their mind and body. Besides, playing games too much is bad for their study.,4. 连句成文,Passage B However, 30% of the students think it is a fashion to use mobile phones at school. They say it helps them mak

11、e friends easily. Also, they can search for information on the Internet when necessary. They can listen to music to relax themselves when they are free. In my opinion, its not proper for us students to use mobile phones at school.,4. 连句成文,Passage B Last week our school did a survey on using mobile p

12、hones at school among Grade 9 students. Here is the result. 60% of the students think its unnecessary to use mobile phones because it costs a lot. Sometimes unhealthy information has a bad effect on their mind and body. Besides, playing games too much is bad for their study. However, 30% of the stud

13、ents think it is a fashion to use mobile phones at school. They say it helps them make friends easily. Also, they can search for information on the Internet when necessary. They can listen to music to relax themselves when they are free. In my opinion, its not proper for us students to use mobile ph

14、ones at school.,4. 连句成文,介绍（Introduction）,正文（Main body）,结论（Conclusion）,转折：but, yet, however, or 顺序：first, second, next， finally/in the end/at last; first of all, then, after that 递进：besides, whats more, not only.but also,作文常用连接词、过渡词,因果：because, because of, therefore, so, as a result 例举：such as, like, for example, and