高考英语写作专项训练二十五.ppt

1、,2. In the middle of the road, the girl stopped to look at her skirt. She was silly. She looked at her new skirt.,In the middle of the road, the silly girl stopped to look at her new skirt.,3. A truck turned round the corner. The truck turned suddenly. The truck was big.,Suddenly, a big truck turned

2、 round the corner.,4. A woman on the sidewalk let out a scream. The woman was terrified. The scream was loud.,A terrified woman on the sidewalk let out a loud scream.,5. The scream woke the girl up. The scream was loud. The girl was absent-minded.,The loud scream woke up the absent-minded girl.,6. T

3、he truck stopped just in front of the girl. The girl was frightened.,The truck stopped just in front of the frightened girl.,A girl was crossing a road. The girl was pretty. The road was wide. In the middle of the road, the girl stopped to look at her skirt. She was silly. She looked at her new skir

4、t. A truck turned round the corner. The truck turned suddenly. The truck was big. A woman on the sidewalk let out a scream. The woman was terrified. The scream was loud. The scream woke the girl up. The scream was loud. The girl was absent-minded. The truck stopped just in front of the girl. The gir

5、l was frightened.,A pretty girl was crossing a wide road. In the middle of the road, the silly girl stopped to look at her new skirt. Suddenly, a big truck turned round the corner. A terrified woman on the sidewalk let out a loud scream. The loud scream woke up the absent-minded girl. The truck stop

6、ped just in front of the frightened girl.,An old man was standing by the door. The conductor asked the young man to give his seat to the old man. The young man pretended to have fallen asleep. I felt sorry for the old man and angry with the young man. The young man should be ashamed of himself and l

7、earn to respect old people. (57),The bus was not crowded. When I got on it, I saw an old man standing by the door.,Then I heard the bus conductor asking a young man to give his seat to the old man.,But he did not move. I could see that he pretended to have fallen asleep.,So I felt sorry for the old

8、man and angry with the young man.,I thought the young man should be ashamed of himself and learn to respect old people. (82),I saw two women selecting shoes at the counter. I heard them talking loudly about the shoes. I heard them saying that the shoes were nice and the price was good. I saw more cu

9、stomers coming. I saw the two women talking to other customers. I heard them urging people to buy the shoes. I saw the shop owner giving the two women some money. I heard him offering them more money if he could sell more shoes.(78),Last Sunday I went shopping in Xidan Shopping Center. As I entered

10、a small shoe store,I saw two women selecting shoes at the counter.,Suddenly they raised their voice and began to talk loudly about how nice the shoes were and how low the price was.,Just then an old couple walked into the shop.,The two women showed them the shoes and urged them to buy a pair.,When t

11、he couple left the store with their shoes, I saw the shop owner give the two women some money.,He also said he would offer them more if more people bought the shoes.,(104),We went to Beidaihe to enjoy the summer. We went there by train. We stayed at Haibin Hotel. The hotel was located in Shatan Stre

12、et. We walked on the beach, collected shells, swam in the sea, watched sunrise, went steam-boating and built a campfire. We enjoyed fresh seafood. (48),Last year we went to Beidaihe to enjoy the summer.,Around 4 oclock on Friday afternoon, we got off the train at Beidaihe,a small city on the coast.,

13、We got on a bus, and it took us directly to Haibin Hotel, located in Shatan Street not far from the beach.,Supper was excellent. We all like the seafood because it was fresh and the price was good.,After supper we walked on the beach, sat on the sand, collected shells, and built a campfire.enjoyed t

14、he cool wind from the sea.,The next morning we got up early to watch the sunrise. It was so beautiful.,During the day, we went swimming in the sea or went steam-boating.,We spent a whole week there, and I enjoyed every day of it.,(119),(132),The boy wanted to become a writer, but he didnt know how t

15、o write or what to write. He found the “Magic Writer”. He suddenly had a lot of ideas and he could write on and on. His new book was soon published, but when the book was opened, the words flew into the air. The boy was surprised, and he was going to keep the book closed forever. (69),The boy wanted

16、 to become a famous writer.,However, he was very poor at writing.,He even found it hard to write the short compositions for his Chinese lessons,to say nothing of poems and novels.,One day, he saw a bottle of “Magic Writer” on his desk.,The words on the bottle said that if someone took the pills, he

17、would be able to write good articles.,The boy was delighted and took all of them.,Suddenly he had a lot of bright ideas and he could write on and on.,Soon his new book was published.,The boy was very excited.,But when he opened the book, the words all flew into the air.,He was surprised and couldnt

18、know why.,But he was sure for one thing he had to keep his books closed forever. (138),(117),分词短语,1. They walked down the street. They saw a robber.,Walking down the street, they saw a robber.,2. He took a large paint brush. He began the task of painting the house.,Taking a large paint brush, he beg

19、an the task of painting the house.,3. The farmers get very thirsty. They work under the hot sun.,Working under the hot sun, the farmers get very thirsty.,4. We followed a dirt track. We came to an old gold mine.,Following a dirt track, we came to an old gold mine.,5. You can find some very unusual p

20、lants. You walk through the bush.,Walking through the bush, you can find some very unusual plants.,6. _ (cook) in the kitchen, she burnt her fingers.,Cooking,7. _ (drive) too fast around a corner, he hit a car stopping by the road.,Driving,8. _ (hear) the good news, she jumped with joy.,Hearing,9. _

21、 (open) the door, I found an old man lying on the ground, dead.,Opening,10. While _ (wait) for the train, I had a long talk with Bill Clinton.,waiting,根据以下提示写一篇有关交通事故的报道。 词数100左右。 提示：（1）时间：昨天。 （2）地点：市中心大街第二拐角处。 （3）原因：卡车司机开车前饮酒过多，开 车时头晕，车失控撞翻一辆小 汽车。 （4）伤亡：4人死亡，部分人受伤。 （5）影响：市区交通中断一小时。 （6）损失：一百万。 （7）市政

22、府告诫司机要从事故中吸取教训。 参考词汇：头晕： dizzy 经济损失：economic damage 交通中断：delay the traffic,要求：至少一处用到分词短语。,A Traffic Accident,A traffic accident happened yesterday. A truck knocked a car over at the second turning. Four people died and several injured. The driver had too much wine. When he drove, he felt dizzy. He c

23、ouldnt control the truck. The accident delayed the traffic. It caused an economic damage of one billion yuan. The government warned the drivers to learn a lesson from the accident. (64),A terrible traffic accident happened in a downtown street yesterday. A speeding truck knocked a car over at the se

24、cond turning of the main street. As a result, four people were killed and several injured. It was soon found out that the truck driver had had too much wine before driving. While driving, he felt dizzy and couldnt control the truck. The accident delayed all the traffic for an hour. and caused an eco

25、nomic damage of one billion yuan. The city government warned all the drivers to learn a lesson from the accident. (93),至少一处用分词,1. 7:15, February 8, 2000 2. before the gate of the park on Park Road 3. walk along Park Road towards the east 4. drive up Third Street, make a right turn into Park Road, hi

26、t the man 5. not stop, drive off, head west along the road 6. yellow, AC864, woman,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000.,Walking along Park Road towards the east, I saw an old man come out of the park on the other side of the street.,Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street,and make a

27、 right turn into Park Road.,The next moment, the car hit the man while he was crossing the road.,He fell with a cry.,The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west.,I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864.,About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car a

28、nd took the old man to the nearest hospital.,(97),so.that.,1. His mother lives far away. He hardly ever sees her.,His mother lives so far away that he hardly ever sees her.,2. She was very excited. She could hardly say a word.,She was so excited that she could hardly say a word.,3. It is very cold o

29、utside. The pond has frozen.,It is so cold outside that the pond has frozen.,such.that.,1. It was cold. There was nobody on the street.,It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.,2. It gave her a shock. Her face turned white.,It gave her such a shock that her face turned white.,3. T

30、hey had a fierce dog. No one dare to go near their house.,They had such a fierce dog that no one dare to go near their house.,你是中学生王毅，假期去了北京姑姑家。10月3日你给在兰州的母亲写了一封信，讲述你在北京的见闻。 1、昨天和姑姑一起去少年宫听钢琴音乐会。中心大厅宏伟壮观，令你惊叹不已。 2、音乐会开始后，你仿佛置身于奇妙的世界之中。 3、最使你惊叹的是这些动听的乐曲竟是6岁至12岁儿童演奏的。 4、你对北京的生活十分满意，并准备明天去游览长城。 5、你姑姑家的地

31、址：北京西单163号。,用 sothat 和 suchthat,163 Xidan Beijing October 3,Dear Mum, Ive been in Aunties home for three days.,Perhaps you dont know how happy I am in Beijing these days.,Yesterday Auntie took me to a piano concert in the Central Hall of the Childrens Palace.,It was such a great and wonderful hall t

32、hat I couldnt help wondering at the beautiful lights and nice pictures.,When the concert began, I felt as if I were in a wonderful world.,What surprised me most was to find that all the pieces were played by the children from six to twelve.,The music sounded so sweet that I couldnt believe my own ea

33、rs.,Tomorrow well go to visit the Great Wall.,And Ill tell you more about the interesting things here.,Wang Yi,适当使用连接词,so besides while unless although what is worse what is more as a result however as well as instead as if all of a sudden not until so that as soon as not only but also neither nor w

34、hether or not after all first of all above all first then next finally on the other hand as long as the moment suddenly immediately because if so,Our earth _ a beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass _ the hills and it was the best home for birds and animals. _ time went on, people destroyed th

35、e forest to grow crops. _, people let their cattle eat up the grass. _ you can see a stretch of wasteland _ green hills now. _, when it rains, the _ is washed down the hills, strong _ blow away the rich soil that lies on top of the fields. We _ hope all the people will take good care of our forests

36、and plant more trees _ our environment in which we are living.,used to be,covered,As,What was worse,So,instead of,As a result,soil,winds,do,to improve,(114),满分作文 At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was walking eastward along the Park Road, taking my morning walk _. I noticed an old man

37、coming out of the City Park. He was _ crossing the street _ a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. The car was _ fast _ the old man didnt _ have time to react effectively. _ the car hit the old man hard. I thought the driver would have stopped to help, _ she didnt. _, she

38、just drove off, leaving the old man _ lying on the ground in pain. _, I noted down the details-it was a yellow car, the plate number of _ was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. _, I went over to check out the old man.,as usual,just,when,so,that,even,So,but,Instead,still,Fortunately,which,After

39、that,2001年高考书面表达 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。 注意：1、词数100左右 2、开头已为你写好 生词：减轻学习负担reduce learning load * Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again. _,Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again. I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we h

40、ad many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.,14

41、分,满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life _ . _, learning during the day was very simple. Having classes and doing homework was _ we should do. In the evening, we _ had a lot of homework to do. We could _ go to bed _ 11:30. _, _ reducing the learning load, my life has become _ intere

42、sting. I _ visit museums and computer rooms _ draw pictures _. In the evening, I _ have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I _ stay up late, _, I go to bed at about 10 p.m. _, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,since our homework has been reduced,Before that,the only thing,also,not,until,Neve

43、rtheless 然而,since,much more,often,and,in my spare time,also,no longer,on the contrary 相反,In short,Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store. I saw a foreigner buying clothes. He spoke English. The shop assistant couldnt understand him. I translated for them. They said thanks to me. I think the shop a

44、ssistant should know foreign language.,I was doing some shopping when I happened to see that a foreigner was trying to buy some clothes.,He tried what he could to make himself understood.,But,at all,Seeing this,I went up to them and,what the foreign guest said into Chinese,or how they could work in

45、such a big store without knowing any foreign language.,I like English. I listen to English broadcast. I read English materials. I practise my spoken English. I won the English competition this year and published articles. I will work harder.,I am very interested in English,In my spare time, I keep o

46、n listening to,Besides,five,every day,And,often,first place at,in our school,I often have my articles published in the English column of the school paper.,to improve my English,Outline (ABABA) Topic sentence: Support 1 contacting others in the past now Support 2 getting information once now Support

47、3 the housing conditions when they got married twenty years ago, now Conclusion:,great changes have taken place in our life.,contacted others mainly by sending them letters,we call long distance at home,listened to the radio for news and other information,we watch the news and other programs on TV,live