高三英语图表写作指导课例分析.ppt

1、高三英语写作课例,An English writing practice for students of Senior Three,考试大纲写作部分要求,2010年浙江省普通高考考试说明写作部分的要求,请你根据下面柱状图提供的信息写一篇题为heart-to-heart talks with parents的短文。短文要求如下: 1)简要描述图中信息； 2)说明原因（如忙于学习或工作、缺少共同话题） 3）你的看法. Age groups 注意: 1. 尽可能少引用数据; 2. 词数100左右。,Hours spent per week on average,Time spent in talki

2、ng with parents,（2010年考试说明样题）,下面的柱状图（bar chart）显示了某中学对100名同学（男女各半）未来的职业取向的调查情况。 boy students girl students 根据上图信息，请以“My Future Career”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文。要求如下：1. 简要描述图中的信息（不用标明数据，只概述情况）；2. 谈谈你的选择和理由。注意：文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。,（2010年杭州市高三年级第二次教学质量检测）,How to write a Composition According to Tables and Gr

3、aphs,图表作文,pie chart,bar chart,table,line graph/ curve diagram,图表,范文赏析,Study two examples of Good Writing and find the structure .,Read and find out: How is such kind of writing organized? 1)What is included in the former part ? 2）What is included in the middle? 3)What is included in the latter part?

4、,Introduce the information given in the chart generally,概要介绍,分析图表,总结概括,demonstrate what has been reflected in the table and analyze the figures or statistics.,write your own opinion , suggestion or comment,General introductionAnalysis-Conclusion 概要介绍分析图表总结概括,Summing up,How to express :,focus on lang

5、uage,The table shows (that) According to the graph, As is shown in the chart, As can be seen from the diagram It can be seen from the figures/statistics that We can see from the table/shown graph that It is clear from the figures/statistics that It is evident from the figures/statistics that,从图中可以看出

6、-,increase / rise / go up / jump / grow/soar,What words do you use to express changes?,稳定：,增加：,减少：,decrease / drop / fall / decline / reduce,remain stable / go on steadily / stay the same,描述变化程度的adv.： 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的 戏剧性的，生动的 意义重大的，重要的 明显的，急剧的 急剧升降的 稳固的，坚定不移的 渐进的，逐渐的 缓慢的，不活跃的 轻微的、略微地 稳定的,rapid/rapidly d

7、ramatic/dramatically significant/significantly sharp/sharply steep/steeply steady/steadily gradual/gradually slow/slowly slight/slightly stable/stably,描述增减变化常用的句型,Compared with/to increased by% The number of grew/rose from to An increase is shown in Then came a sharp increase of In the number remain

8、s the same/drops to There was a very slight rise/increase in 2008. There was a very steady drop (decrease / decline / fall / reduction) in 2009/ compared with that of last year.,School-age children attending school,bar graph,_how the percentage of school age children attending school in china change

9、d _1985 _ 2002.The numbers of school age children _a lot during this time. In 1985 it was just over 95.5%, but it _in the five years to about 98.5% in 1995. After that, the number continued to _and by 2002, 99% of children were attending school._that of 1985, the percentage of school age children at

10、tending school increased by more than 3%. _The reasons may _the following two aspects. For one thing, in 1986 the government made it compulsory for every school child to attend school. For another , there are more schools now-especially in the countryside where kid used to be far away form the neare

11、st school to be able to go. _ _the bar for 2010 will probably be 100% because the number of children going to school were _ throughout the period of the graph, so it will have a tendency to increase in future.,【练习】某对外发行的英文报纸对乐清群众体育现状进行了调查，请根据下列图表和所给提示，用英语写一篇报道，以便向该报投稿。 ， 说明： 参加体育活动人口比例 参加过体育活动35 影响人

12、们参加体育活动的客观原因 未参加过65 1000 3000 5000 说明： 1体质下降； 2应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性； 3.采取措施，提供人们锻炼的场地和器材(facilities)； 4字数：120140。报道的开头已给出：不计人总词数。,Learn to assess (评价),Sample： In my opinion, their writing _, and they can use _.If they could improve _，itll be much better. In brief， _.,cover the necessary content well-organi

13、zed language handwriting -,Homework,1. Reflect what you have learnt today. 2. polish your writing by sharing with other groups .,某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中 任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于80。 一、内容要点 1. 图表1中六项活动及所用时间 2. 图表2中一个数据反映的情况。3. 自己的一个看法。 二、说明： 1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。2. 可以紧扣主题的适当发挥。,Homework,假如你是某英文报特约记者，近日对本校100个学生的日常生活节能习惯作了调查。请你根据图表信息， 为该报写一篇题为“Conserving Energy in Daily Life”的英语稿。内容须包括：1. 图表信息及其反映的现象；2. 你的看法和建议。注意：词数120左右（文章已给出部