读后续写Devi的游泳课讲义2023届高考英语二轮专题复习

读后续写原题:Devilookedthroughtheobservationwindowatthekidsbelow,allwaitinginlinetogetintothepool.Sheturnedtohermotherwithafuriousfrownonherface.“Mom,they’realllittlekids!I’m15already!Thisisridiculous!"“Iknow,Devi,”

repliedhermother,

“butyou’reabeginner,too,andyouhavetostartsomewhere!"Devihadneverbeentoaswimminglessoninherlife.

BetweenschoolworkandhelpingonherGrandfather’sfarm,shehadn’thadtimeforlessons.TheclosestswimmingpoolDevihadbeentowasthealligatorpoolhermotherboughtherwhenshewasfive.NowthatDeviwasolder,hermotherhadfoundanewjobinthecity,andDevifacedanewchallenge-schoolfieldtripstothelocalpool.ThefirstdaythatDeviwentwithherclasstothepool,shehadnoideawhatshewasinfor.

Whatcouldbesodifficultaboutswimming?Deviconfidentlyslippedintothewaterandheldontothesideofthepool,expectingtobeabletotouchthebottomwithherfeet.ButwhenDeviletgoofthesideofthepool,sheslippedunderthewater-thewholepoolwasonebigdeepend!Devithrewherarmtowardthesideofthepoolandgrabbedtheledge(池壁),outofbreath.“Ireallycan'tswim!Everyone'sgoingtolaughatme!”shethoughttoherselfinapanic.Onthenextfieldtriptothepool,

Devisatonthesideonabench,paralyzedwithfear.Shehuddledwithatoweloverhershoulders,tooembarrassedtotryagain.Whenshecamehome,hermothernoticedrightawaythatDeviwasupset.“Honey,

I’vesignedyouupforAngela’sswimminglessonsatthelocalpool.

Soonyou’lllearnhowtoswimjustlikeeveryoneelse,”sheassuredDevishowingphotosofAngelawithherprize-winningstudents.Paragraph1ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirst_______________________________________________________________________________【文本解析】这也是一篇“自我成长”类的读后续写故事主人公Devi由于各种原因小时候没有学会游泳，在到了15岁时，妈妈让她去学习游泳，她很抵触，在第一次勉强下水后，差点溺水。但是妈妈给Devi报了一位很优秀游泳教练Angela的课，于是......【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“接着，轮到黛维上她的第一节课了。”可知，第一段描写黛维去上游泳课的情况。②由第二段首句内容“不久，安吉拉来到黛维坐的地方，做了自我介绍”可知，第二段可描写安吉拉老师和黛维的相处。2.续写线索：怀疑课程——看别人跳水——感到尴尬——和老师交流——尝试游泳——喜欢上游泳【名著语句与场景】1.Mrs.Marchhadagreedtothevisitrather

unwillingly,

fearingthat

Margaretwouldcomebackmorediscontentedthanwhenshewentafterexperiencingsuchwealthandease.（LittleWomen）2.Theminutes

draggedby.Theirearsseemedsharperthanusual.Harry’sseemedtobepickingupeverysighofthewind,everycrackingtwig.Whatwasgoingon?Whereweretheothers?（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）3.Nobodyexplainedtomewhat

thismeant,andbecauseshehadahardandheavyhand,whichshe

usedfreelyon

herhusbandaswellasme,IsupposedthatJoeandIwerebothbroughtupbyhand.（GreatExpectations）4.Iwasinterrorof

theyoung

manwhowantedmyheart,Iwasinterrorofthemanwiththeironchain,Iwasinterrorofmysister,whowouldsoondiscoverIhadstolenherfood.

（GreatExpectations）5.HarryfollowedFredandGeorgeoutofthelockerroomand,hopinghiskneesweren’tgoingtogiveway,walkedontothefieldto

loudcheers.（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）6.UncleVernonroared.PullingAuntPetuniaandDudleyintotheotherroom,he

castonelastterrifiedlookat

Hagridandslammedthedoorbehindthem.（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）7.Hehadapowerfulkindofacheinsidehim,

halfjoy,halfterriblesadness.（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）8.Halfterrified,halffurious,

theyactedasthoughanychairwithHarryinitwereempty.Althoughthiswasanimprovementinmanyways,itdidbecomeabitdepressingafterawhile.（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）9.Joe,

wasa

gentle,kindmanwithfairhairandweakblueeyes,whoquietlyacceptedherscolding.

（GreatExpectations）10.Andthentheyheardit—alowgrunting,andtheshufflingfootfallsofgiganticfeet.Ronpointed—attheendofapassagetotheleft,somethinghugewasmovingtowardthem.Theyshrankintotheshadowsandwatchedasit

emergedinto

apatchofmoonlight.

（HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone）11.‘Now,Pip,’

Joe

lookedfirmly

at

me,becauseheknewIwasnotgoingtoagreewithhim,‘yoursisterisafinewoman!’

（GreatExpectations）【闪光句默写】1.

黛维惊讶地得知安吉拉直到20岁才学过游泳。

2.

深受鼓舞后，德维现在重新获得了希望。

3.

她在安吉拉的陪伴下第二次进入游泳池，几个快乐的孩子漂浮在附近为她加油。

4.

黛维开始感到更放松，她的动作不那么僵硬，呼吸更平静。

5.

黛维怀着感激的心意识到她可能不是一个无所畏惧的游泳运动员，但她肯定会很开心。

答案:1.

DeviwasastonishedtobemadeawarethatAngelahadneverlearnedswimminguntilshewas20.2.

Greatlyinspired,Devinowregainedhope.3.

SheenteredthepoolasecondtimeinthecompanyofAngela,severalcheerfulkidsfloatingneartocheerheron.4.

Devibegantofeelmoreatease,hermovementlessstiffandherbreathmoreeven.5.

Withagratefulheart,Devirealizedthatshemightnotbeafearlessswimmer,butshewouldsurehavefuntrying.【下水作文】ThencamethetimeforDevitotakeherfirstlesson.

Unwillingly,

she

dragged

herselftocometothelocalpool.Thereweremanyotherswimmersinthepool,whowereswimming

freely

invariousstyles.Onthoughtofherpreviousexperience,Deviwasinterrorof

beingdrownedagain.

Justthen,therecameawaveof

delightedcheers

fromthe

littlekids.

Infectedbytheir

laughter,

Devi

cast

aenvious

glances

to

the