英语四级记叙文写作

英语四级记叙文写作英语四级记叙文写作 第一部分第一部分 记叙文题型作文写作步骤记叙文题型作文写作步骤: 要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单 分析，如：2003 年 6 月四级作文、2003 年 9 月四级作文 对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写： 第一段、总结描述：交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句 第二段、具体描述：具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因经过结果 第三段、对事件的分析：分析句 1+分析句 2+分析 3 第二部分、记叙文题型作文写作范文练习第二部分、记叙文题型作文写作范文练习 directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day my Classmate Fell Ill. 1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况； 2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的； 3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是 第三部分、范文第三部分、范文 1 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill I have a classmate named Angel, who is a lovely and bright girl. She is popular with all the classmates. One day, news came that Angel had got blood cancer. It really shocked everybody. When I saw her in the hospital, I could not help crying. She was so thin, so weak, and it seemed that only skin and bones were left. Her face was so pale. Even so, she gave us a big smile to comfort us. We decided to help her save her life. Angel s family was not very rich and could not afford the operation. All the classmates and teachers began to raise money in school. Some called the media for help. In the end, we succeeded in raising the money for the first operation. We will keep trying until Angel is cured. Many people offered as much help as they could even though they did not know Angel. I am really touched by this. There is love everywhere as long as we seek for it. 分析点评： 叙述描写型文章是近几年来四级考试中的改革之一，它与书信作文、图表作文一起改变了多年来议 论文“一统天下”的局面，促使大学英语写作朝着文体多样性、实用性方向发展。记人、记事是最 基本的写作方式，它不要求有惊天动地的情节或出神入化的手笔，只求记叙一件与自己有关系又留 下深刻印象的往事，写作时必须抓住事件发生的时间、地点、人物、原因、结果等关键要素，根据 需要或按照自己的思维方式，采用不同的写作手法，如采用顺叙、倒叙或插叙等。描述 How something happened 这类文章需要一定的英文水平，因为较细致的描述很难，而轻描淡写又不足以渲 染气氛，更难凑字数。 该篇文章的特点是： 内容上：紧扣主题。第一、二段详细叙述生的什么病、病情严重性以及师生帮助她的方式。 结构上：思路清晰，主次分明，非常有条理（coherent） 。记叙文中的五要素（Who, When, What, Why, How）都得到了详实的叙述。 语言上：逻辑性与连贯性强，句式结构丰富多样，闪光词语很多。 范文范文 2 2 A Welcome Back Celebration 1.杨玲生病，情绪低落. 2.班上同学准备 cheer her up, 举办一场欢迎 party. Yang Ling is my classmate and friend. Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month. She was depressed, sad and downhearted. She told us that so many things were working against her, and she didnt know how to change and redirect herself. The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give her a surprise and cheer her up. The next day, she came back with shoulders bent and head fallen. She was so deep in her bad mood that she didnt realize that the light in her dorm was not on. She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit up. Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise. She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room. Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears. And smile returned to her pretty face. She said “Thank you all.” heartedly. Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her. Life is so wonderful. 范文范文 3 A Witness of a Theft Incident Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)描述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事件 2)谴责这种不文明的现象并提出解决建议。 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点要求描述一次事件的经过，提纲第 2 点要求对事件进行评论， 由此可判断本文应为记叙文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：交待事件背景；描述扒窃事件的经过和最后结果；谴责这种 不文明的现象，提出解决建议。 【参考范文】 A Witness of a Theft Incident Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. The thief was so rampant that it left me a deep impression。 3 It happened during the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station. After a woman bought her ticket, she put her purse back into her bag and ready to leave, when a middle-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. She didnt feel anything unusual and went into the station. Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man. To our surprise, the thief seemed not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down. Maybe he was searching for the next target. At that time some passers-by, including me, witnessed the process. But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman。 This incident makes me feel ashamed and leaves me in deep thought. The pickpockets have posed a great threat to residents property. Undoubtedly, it is urgent to take actions to prevent such social evils. However, it cannot only depend on the police only. Instead, it needs our common efforts. We shouldnt keep silent any more. We should be aware that our forces are far beyond those thieves。 范文范文 4 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident （2003 年 6 月） 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1）车祸发生的时间及地点 2）你所见到的车祸情况 3）你对车祸原因的分析 范文欣赏范文欣赏 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident 1 My name is Li Ming. 2 I am an English major at Peking University. 3 A week ago, I saw a traffic accident on a rainy day, which still sticks in my mind. 4 It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th. 5 I was talking to my friends on the sidewalk near our university when I heard a sudden noise of clash of metal on metal. 6 It happened just at the crossing nearby. 7 A motorbike was hit by a taxi. 8 I went up and found that the motorbike was badly damaged. 9 The driver was groaning on the ground, blooding. 10 The street turned chaotic. 11 From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the motorcyclist failed to see the car coming from behind a truck. 12 On the other hand, the taxi driver was driving too fast on such a rainy day. 13 Anyway, I believe accidents may be reduced or avoided if everyone drives slowly. 语言亮点点评：语言亮点点评： a)1句中，sticks in my mind（其场面）还在我脑中 栩栩如生。类似的表述还有 sth. is vivid in mind, sb. bear sth in mind 等。 b)5句中，on the sidewalk 在人 行道上；a sudden noise of clash of metal on metal 突如其 来的金属与金属的撞击声。 c)9句中，groaning on the ground, blooding 在地上呻吟， 流着血。 d)10句中，turned chaotic 变得 混乱起来。 e)11句中，From the stopping track on the road,从路面的刹 车痕迹来看。 4 模板模板 第一段： My name is _. I am _. （自我介绍） At noon, around _oclock, _, I was _, when I was shocked by _. （事故 的发生） I saw _.（第一眼所见场景） 第二段： Soon _. （事情的发展一） I got there and found _. （事情的发展二） At the same time I saw_. （同时发生的事） It was obvious that _.（作者的推断） After a moment, _. （事情的发展三） _while _. （结局） 第三段： The above is all I saw about the accident. （概述） It is my opinion that _s, especially _. （事故原因一） Besides, _. （事故原因二） Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided or reduced if _.（总结） 写作练习写作练习： Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒，幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他(们)中毒与 脱险的过程，并呼吁要加强食品安全。 范文范文 5 A Food Poisoning Accident Last month, I 1witnessed a food poisoning accident 2happening to my classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though finally they got out of danger, this accident 3is still vivid in my mind. It was one of my classmates Julies birthday that day. In order to celebrate it, her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket near