2018届高三英语二轮复习专题六书面表达第六讲怎样赢得“大满分”_衔接要“巧”过渡要“妙”练习.docx

第六讲怎样赢得“大满分”衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。写作技法指导启创造良好开端常用开头词汇表示“启”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first, firstly，first of all，at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to 等。First, I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship.First of all, we must make full use of every 45minute lesson.Nowadays/Recently, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute.To begin/start with, smoking should be banned in public areas.Generally speaking, the more you practise, the more skillfully you can write in English.常用开头句式As the proverb says/As the saying goes，“Time is money.”As can be seen from the table, nearly everyone owns one mobile phone in China.With the development of the Internet, computers play an important role in peoples life.It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.It is believed that health is above wealth.It is well known that an elephant is a very kind and gentle animal.Im excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine.满分作文选粹Im Li Hua. Im writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting art exhibition.(2017全国卷)First of all, Id like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class.(全国卷)As is known to all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt.(湖南卷)承顺势承上启下常用顺承词汇表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, whats more, furthermore，moreover, whats worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time 等。Also, do let me know if you need more information.Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.Besides, developing a good habit of learning can help you improve your learning effectively.Whats more, good books can help us to develop good characters.In addition, we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.Meanwhile/At the same time, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.常用顺承句式Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the world.What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife.As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.满分作文选粹In addition, there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot.(2017全国卷)Worse still, I dont even know much about the word and format of the enclosure.(2016全国卷)Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. (2016江苏卷)After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. (2016浙江卷)As far as Im concerned, every summer I stay at my uncles house in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there. (2016四川卷)Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.(2015陕西卷)Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. (北京卷)转巧妙转折过渡常用转折过渡词汇表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of 等。But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents.However, not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary, the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth.Contrary to what I had originally said, the trip turned out to be fun.常用转折句式Whatever/No matter what you say, he wont believe you.Whether you believe it or not, it is true.As a matter of fact, I didnt agree with you.满分作文选粹However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.(2016浙江卷)In spite of the largescale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.(2015江苏卷)Otherwise, well have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. (重庆卷)But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. (北京卷)合完美结束全文常用结尾词汇表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally, last but not least, in short ，in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general 等。All in all, traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. On the whole, I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because its the mother of success.To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and healthily. 常用结尾句式Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.Only with combined efforts can we expect our hometown to take on a new look in the near future.We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have selfconfidence if you want to achieve something.满分作文选粹In a word, I like everything in spring, especially the feelings bathed in the rain and sunshine. (2016四川卷)In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if immoral, and cannot be trusted.(2016江苏卷)Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards online voting. (2016江苏卷)Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.(2015安徽卷)I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. (2015陕西卷)Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students. (江西卷)So, its safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily communication.(江苏卷)应用落实体验A(2017长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：1开车出行的好处；2开车出行带来的问题；3你的观点和建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam，_Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua考生作文Dear_Sir/Madam，With the development of economy, more and more families own cars, which makes the life easier, quicker and more convenient.Besides, it can save them a lot of time. So this is why so many people prefer to drive cars when going out. But just as every coin has two sides, the popularity of driving cars results in many problems. For example, too many cars can cause traffic problems. Whats worse/To make matters worse/Worse still，air pollution is becoming worse and worse.Personally/In my opinion/As far as Im concerned，as a useful traffic tool, cars should be used occasionally. If possible，we can take public transport or go out by bike or on foot.Looking_forward_to_your_reply.Yours，Li_Hua我来提升将文中加黑的衔接词升级1BesidesIn_addition/Whats_more/Moreover2SoTherefore3ButHowever4For exampleFor_instance积累练习将下列衔接词进行升级1in my viewin_my_point_of_view2because ofon_account_of/due_to/owing_to/thanks_to3becausein_that4as soon asthe_moment/immediately/on_(upon)动名词5ifproviding/provided/supposing/suppose/on_condition_that6althoughdespite/in_spite_ofB(2017青岛模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1付出才有回报；2收获自信和友谊；3感激之情。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you._考生作文Looking_back_to_the_National_English_Speaking_Competition_I_took_part_in_several_days_ago,_I_have_a_lot_to_share_with_you. I am very glad that Ive won the first prize in the competition and I am proud of myself. Ive established friendship and it developed my selfconfidence. I owe my success to my teachers and judges. They have helped me a lot. From the competition I have understood the meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”I owe my success to my working hard. I have made friends with students from all over our country. I have learned a lot from them. The experience is very important to us. I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience. I expect to achieve more success.段落升格作文Looking_back_to_the_National_English_Speaking_Competition_I_took_part_in_several_days_ago,_I_have_a_lot_to_share_with_you.Firstly, I feel really delighted that Ive won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “No pains, no gains”Besides, Ive established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom Ive learned a lot. More importantly, taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my selfconfidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldnt have done such an excellent job.To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.专题强化训练26书面表达(一)学生用书P127(单独成册)Passage1(2017河北石家庄高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾在你家居住。近期你校要举办以“Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories”为主题的英语征文活动。请写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：1截稿时间2月1日；2字数要求500左右；3投稿邮箱。注意：1.词数100左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David，_Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear_David，It has been half a year since you left China. Hows everything going?Recently, an activity themed “Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories” will be held in our school.Any foreign student who is enthusiastic about China can take part in it. I think you are suitable for the activity, for you used to live here and learned so much about the country. You can write about your understanding of Chinese culture as well as your personal experiences in China. You are expected to write an article about 500 words in English. Id appreciate it if you could mail your article to chinesestory126. com before February 1st.Im looking forward to your participation.Yours，Li_Hua【一句多译】Recently, our school will hold an activity whose theme is “Foreigners Tell Chinese Stories”It is suggested that any foreign student who is enthusiastic about China can participate in it.I do hope that you will be able to participate./We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your participation.Passage2(2017河南洛阳高三第一次统考)假定你是李华，你的外教Ms. Jenkins 约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chinese knot)，但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms. Jenkins，说明相关情况。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Ms. Jenkins，_Yours，Li Hua One possible version：Dear_Ms._Jenkins，I would like to offer my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so.But dont worry.Ive asked a friend of mine，Han Meimei，to go there instead.She is good at making Chinese knots.She will go to your apartment at 9：00 this Saturday morning.Please allow me to say sorry again.I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots.Wish you a good time!Yours，Li_Hua 【一句多译】Sorry not to be able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday./ Its a pity that I am not able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday.Because I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so./ Why I cant come is that I have caught a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should stay in bed for one week or so.With the help of Han Meimei，theres no doubt that you can learn how to make Chinese knots.Passage3(2017湖北八校高三第一次联考)假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower，东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1回复他的要求：2询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mark，_Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear_Mark，Im very glad to have received your letter, saying that you would take part in the winter marathon race to be held in Wuhan on December 31.It is my pleasure to arrange for your accommodation and show you around some of the famous scenic spots here after the race. Ill do my best to satisfy your need and guarantee you a pleasant journey. Just tell me the exact time of your arrival and how long you will stay in your next letter, so that I can pick you up at the airport and make a proper arrangement. By the way, wish you good luck in the marathon race!Looking forward to your early reply and your arrival.Yours，Li_Hua【一句多译】Id be very delighted to arrange for your accommodation and show you around some places of interest here after the race.Ill do what I can to meet your need and make sure that you have a pleasant journey./Ill do everything I can to satisfy your need and provide you with a pleasant journey.Passage4(2017云南高三调研)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1陪伴；2照顾；3其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter，_Yours，Li Hua One possible version：Dear_Peter，How are you getting along these days？It is normal that you can not understand why my grandparents are living with us. Here is something about it.As we all know, old people always feel lonely, so do my grandparents.Besides，when my parents are busy with their work, my grandparents will keep me company.Most importantly，they are in poor health，so they need looking after. Only in this way can we take good care of each other.Actually，in China generations are willing to live together.Caring for the old is considered as a virtue in Chinese culture.How about your culture of supporting your elders？Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li_HuaPassage5(2017湖南部分重点中学考前演练)假定你是李华，即将去美国参加一个中美文化夏令营活动。请你根据以下内容要点给你的美国朋友Mike写一封信，告知他你的美国之行。1此行的目的；2活动的内容；3你的期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike，Im writing to tell you something about my trip to America._Yours，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Mike，Im writing to tell you something about my trip to America.This summer I a