高考英语基础写作人物介绍辅导

基础写作系列之三,如何写人物介绍,March 7th,2007,1.例文：假如你叫李明，你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容如下 （1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人 （2）为了国家，弃医从文。 （3）著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。 （4）小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如阿Q正传、祝福这两部影片。 （5）一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。 参考词汇：阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q 祝福：The New Years Sacrifice 注意： 1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出，不算字数。 评分标准 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun ._. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming,审题的步骤是什么？,、 、 、 、 、,文体,主体时态,人称,信息点整合,不要打草稿，但应有提纲,人物简介的一般步骤： Give the right order,( )教育：education ( )外貌性格appearance ,character ( )生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) ( )评估evaluation ( )概况age, sex, birth-place, background,概,貌,育,平,估,平（估）菇,概貌（盖帽）,概,貌,育,平,估,介绍人物步骤记忆技巧：,1.A. 概况 : 译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一 1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. B.外貌,性格: 译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发,* 语法，句法高分tips,尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.,巧用with做定语,C. 教育经历： 1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree. D生平： 1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. 2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.,注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼,尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,E评估： 1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him . 2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man. 3）Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.,注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,生词大扫荡：,Group work:,In groups of 4 or 5, write the composition in ten minutes: Correct with your partners (How to correct?) 1、是否恰好五句话？ 、是否每句都含必要信息？ 、可否自由发挥？ 、pants纠错原则： 1)pattern 2)agreement 3)number 4)tense 5)spelling,Who will be volunteer to show your composition to the class?,Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember them with your partner,Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-Known Chinese writer, a thinker, and translator, but also the father of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will benefit a lot. Yours,2.仿写：假如你叫白云，从广告上得知广州某公司需要工程师。写信应聘。要求内容包含如下要点。 (1) 姓名：白云，出生于广州市越秀区，年龄27岁。 (2) 2001年毕业于中山大学，后来留学英国伦敦大学。 (3) 2005年数学方面成果显著，获博士学位。 (4) 英国一家公司想用高薪聘用他，但拒绝了。 (5) 为了报效祖国，于2006年毅然回国。（6）有数学天赋。 注意： 1）介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。文章首位已经给出，不算字数。 写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 评分标准 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性。,牛刀小试；Now comes your tern!,Dear Sir, How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. . I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Baiyun,Im Bai Yun, born in Yuexiu District, Guangzhou City, aged 27.After I graduated from Zhongshan University in 2001, I was sent to London University in the UK .Through hard work for 4 years, I achieved extraordinary achievement on maths because of my gift for maths and received a doctors degree. A British company tried hard to invite me with a good offer of salary, but I refused it. To devote myself to our China, I came back this year without any hesitation in 2006.,基础写作注意事项：,1）能写几句就写几句，不留空白 2）主要评分要素包括内容的完整性和连贯性、句子结果的正确性。 3）每句占2.5分，每0.5分为一档 4）连贯性共占2.5分 5）多写或少写一个句子，扣一分，决不要自我发挥。 6）文不对题给0分，写出相关短语给0.5分。 7）每个句子要含有表中的信息，否则该句不得分。 8）不要生搬硬套，强加关联词。,注意“三写”，在规定的时间内完成,Home work,Thank you,； 杉德哆啦云 哆啦云 哆啦云官网 gwh85iyc 各个地方的牛牛，根据各个地方的风俗有所不同，四川地方的牛牛， 跟其他地方的牛牛打法上相同 牛牛游戏下载 牛牛游戏下载 hwh91jyd 各个地方的牛牛，根据各个地方的风俗有所不同，四川地方的牛牛，跟其他地方的牛牛打法上相同 跑过去，接过门帘子，推宝音进屋：“半夜又凉了一层，看吹着您！”“正是凉了，怕你穿得不够呢。”宝音把乐韵的手放进自己怀里捂着。乐韵告饶：“奶奶哟！奴婢风地里喝凉水都比您暖和，您省省吧！”“谁是你奶奶！”宝音啐了她一口，撩起她的刘海，左右相相，啧啧道，“磕成这样，她真舍得不拦你！”洛月从绣绷里抬起头来，眨眨眼睛，也觉那一块青紫可怜。忙去拿香油来给乐韵揉。乐韵忽“嘘”了一声，蹑起脚尖，悄悄掀起通里间的帘子。宝音问：“你找飘儿？”乐韵“嗯”了一声：“今天是她值夜罢？别叫她听着！”“飘儿睡了，”洛月道，“我从凌晨起叫她帮忙刺绣，一直做到掌灯，她吃完饭就睡死了，我打发她睡回去。”想起那孩子一边吃晚饭，一边就打起瞌睡来的样子，忍不住微微笑。第六十章 早露用心在宴前(4) 乐韵可没洛月这么心慈，还是往右侧厢房小丫头睡的房间确认一遍，回来放心咬牙道：“那小蹄子，回头空出手来得好好拾掇拾掇她！扒着碗里想翻碗底的。反了天了她！”明秀最早是想收买飘儿为内奸，飘儿应是应了，心里存不住事，见天儿恍恍惚惚的，被乐韵看出破绽来，旁敲侧击，打听了个大概，报于宝音，宝音与之定下这将计就计的妙策，先叫乐韵往家里赚一笔汤药钱。香油拿来了，宝音亲自把乐韵拉在床沿儿上，拂起她的刘海，用手掌压住。倒些香油在手里，花大力气揉热了，往乐韵额头上揉。宝音又撩起乐韵的膝盖看看，亏她防着，裤子那部位已经垫了些厚布进去，因要硬石板地上膝行向前给明秀求情，膝盖上吃的力大，还是磕青了。乐韵笑道：“不妨不妨，跪她一跪，有那么多钱哪！”一时满屋皆笑。宝音院里的情报，通过乐韵，源源不断的送往明秀那里。明秀交给福珞斟酌，一边还提点几句：“她想用棣棠配蕉花作桌上花，图的不过是鲜艳气派，你用数尺高的大蓟配翠菊、杜鹃之属，岂不稳稳压过她，左右那些花，外头先买些来，咱们家暖房里都养得住，慢慢搭配不妨。