浙江中考英语总复习第三篇书面表达篇话题写作04旅行交通篇外研版.ppt

书面表达,话题写作（四）旅行交通篇,【话题点睛】旅游交通包含两个方面的话题:旅游和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等;交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。,典例分析,注意(1)短文必须包含记录表中的信息,并作适当发挥;(2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;(3)词数:80100,所给的文章开头仅供选择,不计入总词数。IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.,【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:文章主要围绕对“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”展开,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出小组的选择与理由。表中要点已列出,具体如下:(1)开门见山:交代小组讨论的话题;(2)分开阐述:城市或农村各自的优缺点;(3)最后点题:权衡利弊,做出选择。2.确定时态:一般现在时,【写作架构】,【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.到农村郊游你可以通过钓鱼或游泳来放松你自己。(relaxoneself)Takingatriptothecountrysidecanbyor.2.在大商厦里来回走也是很激动人心的。(Its+adj.todosth.)Itsverybackandforthinlargemalls.3.我认为,我喜欢到农村旅游胜于到城市旅游。(preferto)Inmyopinion,Iatriptothecountrysideatriptothecity.,relaxyourself,fishing,swimming,excitingtotravel,prefer,to,.句子升格(按括号中的要求完成句子。)1.Yourefromthecountryside.Atriptothecityisbetter.(用if改为复合句)2.Youcanlieunderthestars,enjoyingthequietnight.(改为用and连接的简单句)3.Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsights.Travelingcanbroadenourmind.(用notonlybutalso改写句子),Ifyourefromthecountryside,atriptothecityisbetter.,Youcanlieunderthestarsandenjoythequietnight.,Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsightsbutalsobroadenourmind.,【连句成文】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Takingatriptothecountrysidecanrelaxyoubyfishingorswimming.Andthefreshairmightbeyourfavourite.Yet,youmightnothavemanychoicesintransportation.Ofcourse,atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoulikeshopping,itsveryexcitingtotravelbackandforthinlargemalls.Youcanvisitmuseumstobroadenyourmind.Neverthelesssuchatripmightcostmuch.Andthetrafficjammightletyoudown.Ifyourefromthecountryside,atriptothecityisbetter.There,youlllearnwhatyouveneverthoughtof.Inmyopinion,atriptothecountrysideisbetter.There,youcanlieunderthestars,enjoyingthequietnight.,拓展积累,【相关短语】enjoythesunshine享受阳光;oneofthebiggestmountains最大的山之一;haveapicnic野餐;aseveryoneknows众所周知;befamousfor因闻名;haveagoodtrip旅途愉快;havefundoingsth.做某事很有趣;haveagoodtime玩得愉快【参考谚语】1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅游开阔思维。2.Hewhotravelsfarknowsmore.远行者见识广。3.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书,行万里路。,【旅途经历】1.Yangzhoudishesmaybeoneofthereasonswhysomanypeopleareattractedbythecity.2.Whenwestayedthere,wegotlotsofhelpfromlocalpeople.Theywereveryfriendlytous.3.Onlyinthiswaycanyouenjoyyoursummerholidayhappily.4.ItissaidthatHawaiiismorebeautifulthananyotherplaceintheworld.【旅途收获】1.Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsightsbutalsobroadenoureyestotheoutsideworld.2.Travelingislikeastory.Wecanmakefriendswithothersandgethelpandlovefromothers.3.Travelingislikeawar.,实战演练,A假如你是Lingling,学校根据下表中新西兰来温暑期交流师生的意愿,决定安排他们去100公里外的许村游玩一天。但自行车来回路程需要8-9小时,权衡利弊,需调整这项内容,请你发邮件给对方带队老师Mr.Black做好说明、沟通工作。,要求(1)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;(2)词数:110左右。开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。DearMr.Black,ImLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butImafraidwellhavetomakesomechanges._Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.Lingling,Onepossibleversion:DearMr.Black,ImLingling.Myschoolaskedustomaketheone-daytourplanforyouandwetriedtomakeitbesttoyourpreferences,butImafraidwellhavetomakesomechanges.WellvisitamountainvillagecalledXucun,whichisveryfamousforitsoldhouses,fantasticsightsanddeliciousfood.Imsureyouwilllikeit.However,itwilltakeusabout8to9hourstogoandcomebackbybike.Evenifwesetoutat7:00a.m.,wellgetthereatabout11:30.Goingaroundthebeautiful,culturalplaces,includingsomeoldhousesallwithahistoryofover500years,willtakeusatleast2to3hours.Havinglunch(localfoodanddrinks)takesanotherhour.Whatsmore,itsveryhothereinsummer.Sowethinktakingabustherewillbeamuchbetterchoice.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes.Lingling,B2017扬州为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城新形象,我市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛。请根据以下流程图提示完成一篇参赛导游词。,参考词汇SlenderWestLake瘦西湖Five-pavilionBridge五亭桥HeGarden何园double-pathcorridor复道回廊要求(1)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;(2)词数:100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。,Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoYangzhou!Imyourtourguide.Yangzhou,myhometown,liesbetweentheHuaiRiverandtheYangtzeRiver._IhopeyoullhaveaverynicestayinYangzhou.,Onepossibleversion:Ladiesandgentlemen,WelcometoYangzhou!Imyourtourguide.Yangzhou,myhometown,liesbetweentheHuaiRiverandtheYangtzeRiver.Yangzhouhasahistoryofover2,500years.Therearemanyinterestingplacestovisit,suchasSlenderWestLake,Five-pavilionBridge,HeGarden,double-pathcorridorandChinaPaper-cuttingMuseum.SlenderWestLakeisanationalparkinYangzhouCity.TheFive-pavilionBridgeisthesymboloftheSlenderWestLake.HeGardenisthebest-knownprivategardenofthelateQingDynasty.ChinaP