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最近几年的真题作文: Case Study1) Model One (09年1月)：Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags(一次性塑料袋) 1 Using disposable plastic bags was once such a common experience that many of us have taken them for granted. 2We have got accustomed to the flood of those convenient bags before we know where we are. 3However, the advantage of plastic shopping bags are at the expense of the environment and resources. For one thing, convenient as they are, disposable plastic bags are not suitable for effective recycling. 4Most bags go straight to the landfill垃圾, becoming the source of environment pollution. 5For another, plastic bag abuse has led to a serious waste of resources. 6In the long run, we human beings are bound to (必定) fall victim to this unwise practice. 7Luckily, China has launched a nationwide campaign against plastic bags before the situation reaches a point of no return. 8The ban on the use of those bags is undoubtedly of great significance. 9The withdrawal撤回 of plastic bags and a return to recyclable ones such as the cloth bags will help to cultivate a habit of recycling among people so as to sustain resources. 10On the other hand, it is also a good approach to a decrease in pollution. 11By doing so, we can build an environment-friendly society.1观察发现：共11句话：主语部分：8句话中含有与主题相关的短语（即主题的不同变体表达方式）1句话中的主语用了we1句话中的形式主语用了it1句话中的形式主语用了除人代词和主题短语以外的名词China结论：经常点题：（变换表达方式），避免全文只用人称代词I, you, he or she Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags(一次性塑料袋)Using disposable plastic bags动名词词组（通过主语点题）the advantage of plastic shopping bags 名词词组（通过主语点题）disposable plastic bags（名词词组通过主语点题）Most bags （名词词组通过主语点题）plastic bag abuse（名词词组通过主语点题）against plastic bags （通过状语点题）The ban on the use of those bags（名词词组通过主语点题）The withdrawal撤回 of plastic bags and a return to recyclable ones （名词词组通过主语点题）2 衔接连贯：2.1 从句用了4句，引导词为that 和 before As；单句用了6句并列句用了1句结论：句子单句，并列句，复合句错落有致2.2 句间连贯：However,For one thing, For another,In the long run,Luckily,On the other hand,By doing so, 2)Model Two: (08年6月)：Recreational Activities 1Last two decades have witnessed a boom in recreational activities.（单句） 2From sports games to fashion shows, from outdoor expeditions(远征) to computer games, people find themselves partying every day.（单句） 3To some extent, recreation has become a must in their life.（单句） 4 Recreational activities, beyond all doubt, can help people get refreshed both in mind and body.（单句） 5To a football fan, nothing serves as a better escape after a days tiring work than a game, which in turn improves his team work spirit and communication skills.（复句） 6Furthermore, people can broaden their horizons while admiring the colorful world through a wealth of activities.（复句）7 However, recreation may also involve some negative aspects when one is addicted to a certain kind of pastime and carries it to extremes.（复句） 8Its no news that some school children are obsessed with computer games to a point where their study is completely brushed aside.（复句） 9As a college student, I believe recreational activities can enrich my knowledge of the world as well as relieve my burden of study provided that work and play are balanced. （复句）10 What is to be kept in mind is that it is we that should control recreation, but not recreation that should control us. （复句）1观察发现：共10句话：主语部分：第一句Last two decades（名词短语）第二句 people （名词）第三句recreation （主题名词）第四句Recreational activities,（主题名词短语）第五句nothing（代词）第六句people（名词）第七句recreation （主题名词）第八句It（代词形势主语）第九句I（人称代词）第十句What is to be kept in mind（主语从句）主语部分：1句话中用了人称代词I 1句话中用了物主代词nothing1句话中用了形式主语用了it6句话中用了名词或名词短语1句话中用了主语从句结论1：变换着用主语包括单个名词；代词（人称代词；物主代词）；名词词组；非谓语（v-ing/to do）主语从句结论2：经常点题：（变换表达方式），避免全文只用人称代词I, you, he or she 2 衔接连贯：2.1 共十个句子 单句用了4句 复句用了从句用了6句，引导词为 provided thatproviding thatassuming thatsuppose thatsupposing thatif (条件)while(时间)when （时间）that（关系代词）which （关系代词）What（关系代词）结论：句子单句，并列句，复合句错落有致2.2 句间连贯：To some extent,Furthermore,However,3)Model Three: (08年1月)：What Electives to Choose? Most universities provide for their students various electives ranging from classical music to modern economics. This practice, a good way to expand students horizons and allow them easy access to new fields, enjoys great popularity among students. There is no doubt that different electives appeal to different groups of students. It all depends. Some of them choose to sit in a classical literature class or an oil painting class out of interest. These courses are believed to help to fulfill their hearts desire and contribute greatly to their well-rounded development. On the other hand, some electives concerning useful work skills are embraced包括, out of necessity, by students in large number. Their choice of electives cater to 适合，迎合 the needs of society. Such courses as computer and spoken English may equip them with necessary skills and help them hold superiority over others. In my case, I tend to learn photography and French as well. The former is something I cherish a passion for while the latter is a useful skill to qualify myself for future work. These courses are bound to benefit both my academic life and my future career.4)Model Four (07年6月)：Welcome to Our Club Welcome to the Cycling Club, a student club combining sports with social practice. Since its birth in 2000, a great variety of activities have been carried out. From cycling to the suburbs on weekends to going on expeditions by bicycle during long vacations, we enjoy the beauty of nature and make social investigations throughout the country. Is cycling a single sport? Far from it, we firmly believe it helps to develop our personality, team spirit and sense of responsibility in society. As a kind of sport, cycling contributes to our growth both physically and mentally. As a medium of communication, the club sees its members share hardship on the journey. As a carrier of culture, cycling provides us with opportunities to experience real life and engage ourselves in social activities. Small wonder our club has been enjoying increasing popularity on this campus. Come to join us in cycling and youll have a fantastic college life. Please feel free to contact us by calling 12345678 for your application. Terrific journeys are waiting for you.5)Model Five (07年1月)：Spring Festival Gala on CCTVSince its very advent出现, CCTVs Spring Festival Gala has made every effort to present grand parties to its gigantic 巨大的audience with a galaxy大批 of stars and wonderful performances. It has become a custom for millions of Chinese people to sit through the variety show following the traditional family reunion feast. They simply cannot step into the new year without the gala, which seems as indispensable to the New Years Eve celebration as firecrackers. With the passage of years, however, a growing number of people begin to view the gala as “chicken rib”骨架, unappealing and worthless, when people can feast themselves on other evening entertainment. Some even throwing away the show, which fails to give its increasingly demanding and diverse不同的audience a convincing excuse to be rooted in the sofa and stay glued 似胶水粘住to the TV. To my eye, the existence of the gala is still justifiable. For one thing, with the variety show characteristics of Chinese tradition aired 播送both home and abroad, it provides the Chinese people, especially those overseas, with a good opportunity to establish their cultural identity on this unique evening. For instance, the gala, a rare occasion of gathering of those performers, is undoubtedly a treat for those in the remote or poverty-stricken areas. 6)Model Six (06年6月)：On Students Selecting Lectures In recent years, students in some college are entitled to the choice of their lectures for certain courses. This practice has enjoyed great popularity since it was introduced. When selecting teachers, most students will take the following factors into account. In the first place, lectures with impressive academic background and rich working experience are preferable because exposure to inspiring lec