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B节历年真题回放2011年Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain it s intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）旅途之“余”2010年Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)2009年Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)网络的“近”与“远”X FAs is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that many people，old and young, men and women, in front of a computer and using the internet. The caption in the drawing reads: “the internet: near or far”.The purpose of the drawing is to show us that the internet has it advantages and disadvantages as a commnication tool. On the one hand, many people hold a view that internet makes us close than ever before. With the development of science and technology, computers and internet are playing an increasingly important role in our daily lives. We can achieve an immediate commuication via E-mail, QQ, MSN or ICQ. Accoriding to a recent survey conducted by Li Ming, a sociologist in Peiking University, approximately 400,000,000 people use internet in China in 2008. On the other hand, others aruge that internet makes relationship of people weak. We can often read many stories about children spending too much time on online games. Some parents even complain that they have fewer and fewer time chatting with their children. How to use modern communicating tools such as internet properly has becomes a hot issue among many people in recent years. For one thing, we should realize that internet is a big development of science and techonology and we should make full use of it. For another, we need to spend much time to commnicate with each other face to face. Only in this way can we live in a more harmonious soceity. （12 points） D XMThe drawing vividly depicts that in a circular area which can be divided into some sub-sections, there is one person in each, working or playing on a computer. Nowadays many people, especially, young fellows are tracing such fashion of life and working style. What is conveyed in the drawing is realistic and most meaningful. There are reasons accounting for this fashion. Firstly, with the rapid development of society, advances in office equipments have been made, which has led to the improvement of the working means of many people. Therefore, many people are required to expertise in the operation of computers. Some, even, have become addicted to the internet. Secondly, Internet enmeshes the world so that people assume they can gain various information on it, without stepping out of their rooms. Thirdly, some people even dont want to waste their valuable time so that they turn to Internet to gain what they want. Frankly speaking, this social phenomenon is another double-edged sword. It has both positive and negative impacts on the whole society. It is universally accepted Internet offers many benefits to humans. Some young men, on the opposite, spend most of their time in front of computers, which would lead them into poor health. Moreover, it is harmful to the establishment of peoples ability to communicate with others. To draw a conclusion, we dont deny that people should take advantage of Internet, but in a sensible way. And also parents should give proper advice to their children to form a proper outlook of surfing on Internet. 7 pointsW X H WIn the drawing, what first appears in front of us is a huge spider web, on which innumerable people are attached, like the catch of the owner of the web. What is more ironic is they are imprisoned in respective cabins, choosing contacting on line rather than communicating face to face. There is no doubt that the Internet provides us with considerable convenience. However, it drives too many individuals to be addicted to the fictional experience, and hence forget the traditional and most efficient communication method. Indifference has become a not uncommon phenomenon in the modern world. The following reasons may be contribute to the phenomenon. To begin with, people in mounting numbers, who are vividly called netters, indulge in on-line activities, because science and technology develops too fast for people to adapt to it. The Internet, in particular, moving forward with an unimaginable speed, provides people with a convenient tool of getting in touch with others, which lacks weighing its correctness. Moreover, the fierce competition also plays a role of forcing people to fear the situation, which results in peoples habit of wallowing in the unreal world. Hence, it is the high time that we highlighted the imperative of face-to-face communication between people. The joint efforts of the specialists, the netters and the educators are needed to cultivate the whole society with the essentiality. Only in this way can we expect a healthy development of the relationship among individuals. 10 pointsQHAs is vividly depicted in the drawing, in front of computers and in narrow spaces are sitting many people, exchanging their views with each other by surfing the Internet. How impressive the drawing is in describing the peoples addiction to the Internet. The drawers intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be thought-provoking.It holds apparent that the cartoon is indicative of a pervasive problem with regard to Internet. When it comes to(一谈到) Internet，its great impacts and benefits cant be too estimated. It is the Internet that makes our big world become a global village. However, as a growing number of individuals are addicted to (沉溺于) the Internet, they forget doing other important work and are gradually indulged in(沉溺在) the virtual world, unwilling to go into the real society. As a consequence(因此), they close their doors and never go out as soon as they return home from work, reluctant to have any face-to-face connection even with other folks except on line. Whats worse, they become indifferent（漠不关心）to their friends, neighbours, as well as relatives.This phenomenon is harmful to us and our community too. As the pressure in life and work increases, we should learn to use proper ways to relieve it. Its time that we took some measures to improve the situation. People can be organized to hold some activities together to develop some good hobbies. Consequently, we must make full use of Internet to do everything beneficial to make our daily life both joyful and meaningful. （272 words ）14 points各档样卷第五档：19分 As illustrated in the cartoon, each person sits in their own work room. In front of them is a computer. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and communicate with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face. Their work places are placed like a net. And below the cartoon, there is a topic which says: the near and far among the Internet.From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message: with the popularity of computers, people from all over the world become nearer by using the internet to communicate with each other. Meanwhile, people also become far away from their friends. All of us accept the fact that the development of the internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance, we can buy a book on the net instead of going to a bookstore. Besides, we can communicate with our friends on the net without going out of home. But we cant ignore the other side of these: the time we spend with friends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.To my best understanding, we should use the net to communicate with each other in a proper way. It is just a tool when we really need it to serve us. If we want to keep our friendship more effectively, we should spend more time with them in our real life. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool on the net but also make our friendship stronger.评语：该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整，既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了其隐含的意思。语言流畅，措辞准确，句型结构有变化，有效使用了连接手段，内容连贯，层次分明，文章易于理解，仅有个别语言错误，字数符合要求。 第四档：15分 As is vividly depicted in the drawing above, we can see clearly that some people are very near by the computer while some people are much long with each other in the net world.What is conveyed in the picture is most thought-provoking and worth discussing among people, especially the young people. It is a mirror, reflecting the relationships between the people are altering by the Internet. Peoples opinions differ greatly on this matter. Some people believe that the Internet is very convenient for people who are living in a longer distance to keep connection with each other. Others argue that the Internet make the people living in near areas meet very little. Still others hold that peoples facing to face to communicate is reducing to a low level.It struck me that if nothing is done to solve the social phenomenon, its effect will be soon shown, which inevitably affects the development of the harmonious society. So we should regard the trend rightly. We also should take it into our accounts strictly. We should use the Net more reasonably. On no account should we make the people longer by the computer. Only in this way can we have a good generation foreseen. And a more harmonious society can be built up.评语：文章较好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容比较完整，既描述了漫画又揭示了隐含的意思，使用了比较丰富的句型结构和词语，使用了一定的连接手段，语言基本通顺，文章结构完整，层次清晰，易于理解，但是有一定数量的语言错误。 第三档：11分 As the picture vividly depict that internet like a net connect different people in the world. You can communicate with your friends. No matter where they live in, the distance no longer an obstacle in our communication.The picture reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that people in a mounting numbers use internet shopping, work, study and chatting with friends in order to meet each other face and face. There are somewhat reasonable, but you weighing in mind, you can find that distance between our spirit longer than before. On the Internet we can not know each other very well, because some people dont use their real name, even tell lies on internet. On the conterary, if we meet each other face and face, its better for communication.Internet make the obstacle of distance vanished, benefit us a lot, we can chating with our friends who live in a city that far from us. However, we should take that serious internet make the distance of our spirit longer than before, internet is a double-edge sword.评语：该文包含多数内容要点；语法结构与词汇基本能够满足任务要求；有一些严重语法与用词错误，但不影响理解；内容较连贯，层次较清晰。但是第三部分主要是对第二部分的总结，评论简单。 第二档：7分 As can be seen from the picture, many people are sitting in the front of a computers, who are basing in typing on the keyboard, but they dont immediate communicate with each other though they live near. It looks like a bit pot, everyone has its space, and the computer is necessary for them.It goes without saying that this picture aims at reavling a common phenomenon in our daily life, that is internet brings conviences to us, also brings the distance for each other. Nowadays, we must believe that our development can not leave the using of internet. We do any things through the computer instead of saying “hello” to our families or colleagues face to face.In my opinion, we must realize the importance of the internet and also pay more attentions to communicate with each other face to face. Do not make the computer make a distant between us.评语：该文遗漏题目要点，评论不够恰当，语言错误多，有些句子内容表达不清晰，字数不够。 第一档：3分 Largely through the influence of many people from different points of the world. The old, the young and the student, they use the computers to constant with another body.Some people use computer to leare new knowledge, such as the students. Some people use the computer to help them to complete their work. Such as the tank workers. While some people use the computer to play games. For example, some old person like to play game on computer.Many people on computer is on Monday to Friday. But the player people is everyday more or less. So the world is like a family. Since the computer with us is to enable our to share in a common life we cannot help considering whether or not we are forming the powers of the lifes happy.评语：该文明显遗漏主要内容，不能反映需要表达的观点；语法与用词错误很多，妨碍理解，作者的语言运用能力差；字数不够。 1. 标题：The Age of Internet, The Effect of Internet, The Use of the Internet, Use Internet Properly, Cultivate a Healthy Outlook on Web, Controlling Communication in Internet, 21 Century and New Habits, The Photo of the IE, Walk out of Your room。 2. 典型错误：closed and far, are much long with each other, in every scope there is a computer, a computers, a bit pot, yellow informations, long or short, a cant touch net, far and nearly, goods and bads, a mind disease, peoples meat search, wab, this draw show that, a two-sides effect, speak body language, internet make their life be short and easy, 3. 原因，解决措施，举例: 78年改革开放4. 纯粹跑题，私人汽车问题，照抄翻译。5. 网络的好与坏，好处在于自己在网上交了一个网友，后来成为了自己的女朋友，不好之处在于有些网友隐瞒自己的信息，说自己长得很漂亮而实际上很难看，被对方网友杀死，引发命案。6. 大篇幅陈述网络的作用以及为什么会有这么大的作用。7. 在谈到网络的作用时，认为网络是双刃剑（double sword）, 一个钢蹦有两面。8. 图看得很清楚，能够描述，但是不知道寓意是什么，出题者在开玩笑。9. 不规范用词，esp. herere, 10. 过去住在村里，现在住在网里。11. Im in China. If I have a computer, Im in USA. 12. Use the heart to communicate 13. As lovely as I am, I think, There is a net which is not made from zhizhu,14. we dont have enough room to work or study in15. cell rooms, open your heart, 16. 图被分成了36个房间。Distance and undistance17. There is no distance between body and body.18. Though they far away, they can touch each other. 2008年Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)大作文改卷样题评分老师的经验1720漂漂亮亮1216清清楚楚911马马虎虎58稀里糊涂14一塌糊涂样题 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, two disabled men are runing fast through teamwork, although, each of them has only one leg. Obviously, it is the teamwork that makes it possible for them to go anywhere they want to.Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is becoming increasingly fierece. It is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himself. Hence people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the teamwork. In fact, it has been universally acknowleged that the ability teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of teamwork in our society. We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Every one should have the ability of teamwork. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this can our society become more harmonious to live in.评分: 19分文章解读了图片的深刻内涵, 思想内容清晰, 连贯。句型结构变化多样, 短语搭配和使用恰当, 能使用排笔句进行强调, 正确使用过渡性词语, 语言流畅, 错误极少。作者词汇量较大, 使用较准确。字数达到要求。定为五档。得19分。样题 (2)As is apparently illustrated in the drawing that two men who have only one good leg give up their stick-help, and tie their leg together, and walk together. This phenomenon is encoureging and thought-provoking.The purpose of the painter is that the team spirit is so important in every filed. Such as in work, in study, or in housework and so on. At present, people who want to finish a task dependentlywont succeed but to work together with other people will be stronger when they work together. Unfortunately, many people still ignored the great effect of team spirit. So that those people will be confronted with some difficulties in dealing with some tough task.In order to popularize the great team spirit, wed better take some drastic measures. First of all, laws and regulation in every company or other department should be set up to popularize the importance of team spirit. In addition, a long-time and nation-wide compaign should be launched to popularize the importance of team spirit in every filed. Only in this way can we finish the task smoothly and effectly.评分: 15分内容覆盖所要求的要点; 结构层次清楚。语言上, 用词和结构变化较为丰富; 有少量错误, 包括结构的、拼写的、语法的错误。定为四档, 得15分。样题 (3)As a person who has disadvantage, at his one leg, he has two sticks to step forwarth. He can do nothing but walk alone. However, if there are person of this kind, they can humble together and run, leaving the sticks behind. That is what vividly shown in the cartoon, and the Chinese words saying, “you give me a leg, I give you a leg; together we were, fighting the world” even put the meaning apparently, we still stronger if we cooperate with each other.Nevertheless, not everyone can realize the importance of cooperation. This kind of people can not hold a comprehensive and profound view about their capacity and intelligence. They therefore onftenly deal the matter longly, refuse to accept others help or advice. As a result, they have a poor efficiencity and can not reach the goal as far as others who deal the things together.It goes without saying that cooperation is vital and indispensable to no matter a person on a nation. We are in the team work, when it