广东省连州市高三英语分类专题复习 读写任务课件.ppt

读写任务 2008年完形填空第二节读写任务 共1小题 满分25分 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 hi iammike ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment 1wenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme butatthecollegeineededtoknowsomebasiclifeskills suchasbalancingacheck book laundry andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatineverthoughtofinthehighschool itwasreallytoughformeatfirstandigotbadlyhomesick oncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandigotusedtothecollegelife ilovedit goodfacilities helpfulinstructors andagoodlibrary thestudents unionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek ialsogotocinemasandconcerts andoftenspendsaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs onethingithinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings iwasonthedanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground 写作内容 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动 你参加其中的 大学校园生活 讨论 听完mike的发言之后 你准备写一份发言稿 题目是 preparingmyselfforcollegelife 内容要点包括 1 以约30个词概括mike的发言要点 2 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活 内容包括 1 对中学生活的感受 2 理想的大学生活 3 中学生活和大学生活的差别 以及你打算如何适应 写作要求 1 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 参考范文 mikesaiditwastoughtoaccomplishthegeneraladjustmentbuthebegantoenjoyhimselfafterthatduetovariousactivities headvisedfreshmentobeactiveinordertomakenewfriends asfarasiamconcerned i mpreparingtoenterauniversityandleavingthehighschoolwherei vebeenstudyingforthreeyears ireallyhadagreattimeinthisschoolwhereigrewfromana vekidtoagrown up ithinkiwillabsolutelymissmylifehereandmisseverysinglepersonthatimethere butinthemeantime iamlookingforwardtomynewlifeinthecollege isometimesdaydreamthatmaybei llbumpintoahandsomeboy havefirefriendlyroommatesandbetaughtbyagroupoffabulousteachers itwouldbewonderfulifthisidealdaydreamcomeintoreality however lifeislikeaboxofchocolateandyou llneverknowwhat sinsideuntilyouopenit ofcoursethecollegelifewillgreatlydifferfrommypreviouslifeinhighschool buti manactivegirlandi lldowhatmiketaughtusto takepartinvariousactivities i msurei llmakealotofnewfriendsandwiththem iwillbeabsolutelyabletoadjustthedifferencesinashorttime 2008年考场满分作文 2007年完形填空第二节读写任务 共1小题 满分25分 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 dearari asyousleepinmyarms i mamazedathowlightyoufeel istareatyourtinybody sofragilethatasuddenwindcouldliftyouupintotheair ilovethisfeelingofprotectingyouanddreamingofallihaveinstoreforyou iintendtobringyouuptobebraveandsuccessfulinanoftendifficultsociety that swhyyourmommyandihavenamedyouari whichmeans lion it sourhopethatyouwillgrowstrongandeagerlygraspeveryopportunitytodowellforyourselfandothers beforeyoucameintotheworld wehadspentmonthsimaginingwhatyou dbelike wouldyoubeaboyoragirl wouldyoulooklikemommy daddyoryourelderbrothers anyway wewouldfindoutsoon finallyyourmother slaborcame andseveralhourslater wemetthefirsttime iheldyouhighupintheair ithenwasabletocutyourumbilicalcord 脐带 andputyouinyourmother sarms shestillhadenoughenergytoradiatethelovewhileshepressedyoutoherface andherewearetonight asiholdyouclose yousleepsopeacefully ipressmyeartoyourchestandhearyourstrength iamlisteningtothefirstbeatsofalion sheart welcometotheworld ari love daddy 写作内容 假设你就是信中的ari 父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信 今天是父亲50岁生日 你准备以写信的方式 祝贺他的生日 以下是信的内容 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好 1 以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望 2 以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩 并包括如下要点 1 读信后的感受 2 以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受 3 表达你对父亲的感激和祝福 写作要求 1 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 参考范文 deardaddy happybirthdaytoyou i vejustreadtheletteryouwrotetomewheniwasborn inyourletter youdescribedyoureagernesstoseemycomingtotheworldandexpressedyourhopeaboutmygrowingup youhopethaticangrowstrongandbraveandcanseizeeverychancetosucceed iwasdeeplytouched movedwhenireadyourletter it sthefirsttimethati verealizedyourdeepestloveforme oncewheniwasill yourushedmetothehospitalandstayedwithmethewholenight eachtimeifeltdepressed youwouldencouragemewithasmile butwhenourteacheradvisedustohelpparents to washfeet ithoughtnothingofit howsillyiwastotakeitforgrantedthatyoumakeeveryefforttobringmeupandgivemeeverything ifeelashamedthatifailedtonoticeyourtiredness unhappinessorevenillness todayisyour50thbirthday onwhichithankyouagainfromthebottomofmyheartandwishyoucouldenjoyalongandhappylife love son ari 读写任务是要求考生首先阅读一篇短文 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 要求先用约30词概括短文全文或短文某个方面的内容 再用约120词就某个主题发表观点 发表观点时题中本身有内容要点提示 具体来说 这类试题有以下几个特点 1 长度 阅读文章长度约200 250词 高考考试说明中的示例1阅读短文203词 示例2阅读短文228词 2007年高考题阅读短文240词 2008年高考题的阅读短文为187词 2 难度 较高考阅读文章或教材阅读文章更容易 一般没有生词 3 主题 与学生的学习或生活密切相关 为所有考生所熟悉 4 内容 写作内容要点明确 所有考生都有话可写 但表达方式及例证随考生而定 开放的程度较大 5 概括 可以是用约30词概括全文 也可以是概括其中的某个小段落 某个人物或某个方面 2008年高考题要求概括全文内容 而2007年高考题却只要求概括小一段内容 父亲的期望 特别提醒 从近两年高考改卷的实情来看 对字数的要求似乎是略多一些词并不影响得分 以上两年高考题的范文都是来自考场的满分作文 2008年的有221词 2007年的有202词 因此 写作时以表达思想为主 不必拘泥于字数多少 但我们建议 在平时训练中 概括部分以25 35词为宜 发表观点部分以110 150词为宜 6 短文都来自于外国网站 2008年 1 七个解题步骤 1 审题 明确题目要求 通过审题明确文章主题 写作内容 主要时态和主体人称等问题 其中主体人称 就是要确定以第几人称进行写作 2007年高考中曾有相当数量的考生在这方面出错 同学们需特别注意 2 阅读 抓住内容要点 阅读短文 找出文章的内容要点 议论文的内容要点是 论点 论据和结论 记叙文的内容要点是 时间 when 地点 where 什么人 who 做了什么事 what 结果怎么样 how 这是记叙文的五要素 3 概括 转述作者观点 用自己的话转述原文内容要点 议论文 用自己的话表达论点 论据和结论句 记叙文 用自己的话将记叙文的五要素串联起来 有时只需写出某人做了什么 结果怎样 4 过渡 引出自己观点 写了摘要后 用句过渡的话 再引出自己的观点 赞成或反对 或引出类似的故事 5 例证 论证自己观点议论文 在提出自己的观点后 就用具体的事例来论证自己的观点 记叙文 编写与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事 亲身经历或虚构 6 结论 注意前后呼应 7 润色 使其锦上添花 一查人称是否符合要求 二查语法方面的问题 包括用词 时态等方面的错误等 三查逻辑关系 看前后观点是否一致 三查是否使用一些较为高级的句型 如非谓语动词结构 with短语结构 定语从句 倒装句型 恰当的连接词 短语动词等 特别提醒 此条不强求 据近两年阅读情况 只要能用简单句表达完要写的内容 就可得该题的60 即15分 大大超过省平均分了 2 写作模板 1 标题 有时不一定要求拟标题 2 第一段 用一两句话概括所给短文内容要点 约30词 建议控制在25 35词之间 3 第二段 议论文 过渡词引出主题句 自己的观点 例证 约100词 记叙文 过渡词 与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事 约100词 4 第三段 即总结句 套语配名言来进行点题 要前后呼应 三位一体 约30词 3 套用语句 1 摘要的开头语accordingtothepassage weknow thewriterstatesthat theauthorthinks argues thestory passageisabout thewriter authortellsusaboutthestorymainlytellsusthat 2 摘要后过渡语 在写完摘要之后 要有过渡词或过渡句 才使上下文自然衔接 议论文的过渡语 表示赞同iagreewiththestatementthat idoagreewiththeauthor ifullysupportthestatementabovebecauseiamverysure i mforthewriter sideathat iquiteagreewiththewriter sidea ican tagreemorewithwhatthewritersaid 表示不赞同ipartlyagreewithwhatthewritersaid insomeway iagreewith but ifellsuchanattitudeisnegative andthatitcanbring somepeopleargueasifitisageneraltruththat buttobefrank icannotagreewiththem thisopinionsoundsrightbutishardlypractical whatthewritersaidsoundsreasonable but idon tagreewiththewriter sview i mstronglyagainstthewriter sidea itisdefinitelynotlikethat asamatteroffact 表达自己观点 inmyopinion asfarasiamconcerned asforme frommypersonalanglealone frommypersonalpointofview accordingtomyexperience ithinkthat 记叙文的过渡语thisstoryremindsmeofanotherstorythathappenedto thisstoryremindsmeofasimilarexperienceof ialsowentthroughsuchanexperience ihaveasimilarexperience haveasimilarexperienceas 3 总结句开头语inconclusion inshort tomakealongstoryshort ingeneral inaword inbelief onthewhole allinall 4 提高作文档次五招 1 表达精练简洁 表达不要罗嗦 若能用非谓语动词做定语或状语就不要用定语从句或状语从句 2 避免低级错误 避免语法和拼写的低级错误 避免被扣印象分 3 保证赏心悦目 注重字体的美化 保持卷面整洁 提高印象分 4 句子错落有致 根据表达需要 交叉使用将长句与短句 简单句与复杂句 5 句式多种多样 多样化句式 方能显示较强的语言功底 大大提高作文档次 用itis was that 强调句式 用作状语的介词短语开头的完全倒装句或用以onlyinthisway等开头的部分倒装句 用with的复合结构 with 宾语 宾补 作状语 用非谓语动词简化状语从句或并列结构 用what引导的名词性从句 用独立主格结构 恰当运用感叹句 被动句等 适当运用iguess however inmyopinion fortunately personally等插入语 尽量用短语代替单词来表达同样的意思 恰当使用关联词语 做到过渡自然 结构紧凑 篇章连贯 见 专题导练五 本课件只提供参考范文 试题部分我们给您提供电子稿 特别提醒 请不要将电子稿上传网上或用于别的印刷品 相互尊重 多谢合作 以下是参考范文 1 摆脱抑郁 积极面对人生 getridofdepressionteenagedepressionisarisingproblem whichwilldolotsofharmifnottreated fromthepassage weknowsomesymptomsofdepressionandadviceonreducingandcuringit nowourhighschoolstudentswillmeetmoreandmorestress mostofwhichcomefrompilesofhomework takingexaminationsandenteringkeyuniversities properstresscanserveaseffectivemotivationofstudy buttoomuchstresstendstocausedepressionamongteenagers itisoftenreportedthatsomehighstudentshaveseriousmentalproblemsandevencommitsuicidebecausetheyfailtogeteffectivepsychologicaltreatment sincelifeisunlikelytobesmooth weshouldfindourownwaystoreduceourstressandgetridofdepression suchas takingphysicalexercise listeningtomusic readinghumorousstories talkingwithfriendsandsooninourfreetime forweallknowthatout lettingourpressureisalsoveryimportanttous 2 获得成功的必备素质 it snotsodifficulttobesuccessfulinthistext thewritertellsushisexperienceofbecomingfamousinthefieldofsports throughwhichheistryingtotellusthatitisnotsodifficulttobegreat generallyspeaking mostofusareeagerforsuccessandgreatness however itisuptouswhethertobegreatornot greatpeoplecanbefoundeverywherearoundus ifweturntothemforhelpmodestly theywilldowhattheycantohelpus withthehelpofmasters wecanavoidunnecessarymistakesandtakeashortcuttobesuccessful besides ifwewanttobegreat weshouldspendalotoftimeandenergybecausewecannotachieveourgoalwithouthardwork what smore weshouldmakeplansandsticktothemandnevergiveitupuntilwebecomesuccessfulinourwork 3 今日事今日毕 don tleavetoday sworkfortomorrowthepassagearguesthatpeoplewholackdeterminationleavetoday sworkfortomorrowandtheyachievelittlesuccessbyshowingustheexamplethatwithoutstrongwilljohnfailedtoquitsmoking inmyopinion wecan tleavetoday sworkfortomorrow becausefordifferentdayswehavedifferentthingstodo soifwefailtomakeupourmindtocompletetoday sworkandleaveitfortomorrow we llgraduallypileuptoomanythingsandwillnevergetthemdone stillmore onlythepeoplewithoutdeterminationandwill powerwillfindallkindsofexcusesforthethingstheyshouldhavedonetoday thatjohnfoundexcusesforleavingquittingsmokingfortomorrowandcouldn tmakeitinthepassageisagoodlessonforus inaddition leavingtoday sworkfortomorrowisabadhabit whichwillmakeforaperson slaziness asstudents havingalotofthingstolearnandhomeworkofdifferentsubjectstodoeveryday wecan taffordtowastetime sotheearlierweplanourtimeandgetdowntothework thebetterresultswewillget 4 依靠自己学会自立 wheniwasachild ihadtodependonmyparents butastimeflew igraduallymademydecisionsandfinishworkbymyself whenimeetdifficultiesorchallengesinlife iencouragemyselftofightagainstthem notretreat ififail inevergiveup someyoungmendon ttrytheirbesttomakethemselvesvaluabletohumanbeings theycannotgainachievementsunlesstheyseetheirweaknessandchangetheircourse theyarenothingnow andwillbenothingaslongastheylive unlesstheyaccepttheadviceoftheirparentsandteachers anddependontheirownefforts dependonyourselftheauthortellsusthatheisdisappointedatpeople sselfishnessbecausetheyarenotwillingtohelpothers butheissurethatonemustlearntodependonthemselveswhentheyaregrowingup wemiddleschoolstudentsshouldformthehabitofdependingonourselves dependonyourselfiswhatnaturesaystoeveryman parentscanhelpyou teacherscanhelpyou othersstillcanhelpyou butallthesepeopleonlyhelpyoutohelpyourself 5 永不放弃终会成功 nevergiveup tobuildaconsiderablyimpossiblebridgebetweennewyorkandlongisland johndiedandwashingtonwasbadlyinjured butwashingtontappedouthisinstructionswithhisfingeronhiswife sarmuntilthebridgewasfinallycompleted infact manyfamouspersonsintheworldlivedthroughahardtimeandgottheirachievements wecanfindlotsofexamplesinourdailylife thomasedison agreatinventor achievedhissuccessafterhundredsoffailures helenkeller agirlwhocouldn thearandseeanything madehergreateffortstoovercomeallthedifficultiesshemetwithinherlifetime andbecameafamouseducatorandwriter fromthesefacts wecanlearnthatnevergivingupwillbringyouagreatsuccess whichjohnandwashingtontaughtus iwasmovedbythestory whichshowsthatoneman sspirit andhisdeterminationshouldnotbedefeatedbycircumstances personally ithinkhardshipscannotdefeatusifwenevergiveup 6 自己动手 doitbyyourselffromthepassageweknowthatdo it yourselfexistscommonlyinourdailylife however wecannotdoeverythingbyourselves soweshouldkeepthebalancebetweencooperationanddo it yourself westudentsshouldformthegoodhabitofdo it yourselfindailylifesincewearechildren weshoulddowhatwecanonourownbutnotdependonothers athomeihelpparentswithsomehousework suchascleaningthehouse cookingmeals washingclothesanddishesandsoon nevertheless somegoalscannotbeachievedonourown instead weneedhelpandcooperationwithotherstoreachourgoals afterall wehavethelimitoftime energyandability asforme wecanlearntogainindependencethroughdo it yourself ifso wewillnotattachourselvestoourparentsandothers what smore do it yourselfgivesusmoreexperienceofdoingthingsandlearnthetruthoflife 7 满怀自信 超越自我 confidencemakesnolimitdeartom today ireadapassagetalkingaboutthetopicweareinterestedin let sshareit itmainlytellsusastoryofashrita whochallengeshimselftohislimitsandsetsmanyguinnessworldrecords hedrawsconclusionsthateveryone scapacityisunlimitedandcandobetterthanexpected iabsolutelyagreewithashrita sopinion ifwewanttoachievesuccess whatweneedisselfconfidence instead ifyouloseheart youreallycan tsucceed itremindsmeofanexperienceinaschoolsportsmeeting twoyearsago itookpartinthe800 meterrace becauseihadcaughtabadcoldbeforethat itseemedimpossibleformetofinishthepainstakingevent butmyclassmates cheerencouragedmenottoloseheart ieventuallyrushedtothefinishingline ilostthematch butiwasfullofjoyoffulfillment it sthecompetitionthatimpressedmealot i mverygratefulandexcitedformyperseverance fromthenon ichangedmuchfromagirllackingconfidenceintotheonewhofaceseverythingactively inmyopinion givingupmeanslosingeverything aslongasyousticktoyourstrongwillandgreatcourage successbelongstoyouforever yourstruthlywanghua 8 需要合作精神 cooperationisneededeverywherethepassagetellsusthatnowadayscooperationisneededinmanyfieldsorsituations cooperationrequiresustoworktogetherbecauseitmakespeopleunited makeourjobdoneeasilyandencourageustofacedifficulties westudentsneedcooperation firstly itcanhelpstudentstocompletethecollectivetasksefficiently secondly wecanhelpeachotherinthecourseofthetask thirdly wecanlearnfromothersanddependoneachotherifnecessary onceiwastooproudandtooindependenttoworktogetherwithothersinaproperway buteverythingchangedoneday therewasatimewhenimetwithaproblem iwasinsuchtroublethatiturnedtooneofmyclassmatesforhelp wecooperatedcloselyandintheendwemadeit itisduetocooperation cooperationisneededeverywhere butitdoesnotmeandependingonotherswhenthejobcanbedonebyyourself 9 知恩图报 begratefultothosehelpingyouoneday acranethankedtheyoungmanwhohelpedher turningintohiswifeandmakingbeautifulclothforhimtosellandgetmoney thetaleshowsthatexpressingone sgratitudeisalovelyquality ihadsuchanexperienceofhelpingothers oneevening whenamanwassadlywalkingalongthestreet ourcarpassedandhestoppeditandsaidheneededaridebadly myfatherandididasasked hefeltalittlesurprised sevendayslater wegotaletterfromtheman saying igotyourcarnumberandknewaboutyouraddresswiththepolice shelp so iwritetoyoutothankyousomuchforhelpingmesothatiwasabletomeetmydyingwifejustbeforeshepassedaway godblessyouforhelpingme infact nobodycantellwhenheisintrouble ifeverybodyjustlookson whatwillourworldbe fromthestoryabove ithink ifsoforacrane whynotforman nowadays wedoneedtheatmosphereofhelpingeachother whichwillbebeneficialtobuildingourharmonioussociety 10 要不要接受批评 weshouldacceptcriticismthispassagestatesnomatterhowcompetentweare wewillbecriticizedifwehavedonesomethingwrongbecauseweareinexperienced ourteachersandparentsmaywarnusagainstpossibletroubles sometimes however peoplereallydislikecriticism theywillmakeexcuseswhencriticizedbecausetheyfeeltheywilllosetheirfaceiftheyadmitthattheyarewrong ortheywillrefusetocorrecttheirmistakesbecausetheythinktheirseniorsaresplittinghairs thesepeoplewillregretiftheyrefusetoacceptother scriticism asastudent toacceptcriticismisveryimportant whentheyrefusetoacceptcriticism ononehand theywillneverfindtheirshortcomings iftheydonotthinkoverotherpeople swords theywillneverknowwhatothersseeinthem ontheotherhand theywillbecomebad temperedandrude theywillnotrespecttheirseniors theseareallbadbehaviorsforusstudents 11 我们的社会需要诚实 deareditor iamareaderfromchina irecentlyreadanewsstoryinyourpaperthatreportsanatmpaysdoubletheamountofmoneywithdrawnfromcustomers accounts andtherefore manypeoplecomeandwaitinlinetodrawmoneythere asachinesereader idoadmirethegoodmannersofthegentlemenandgentleladies butidothinktheylackhonestyascitizens whichisessentialtooursociety inthispoint theybehavethesamelikesomepeopleinchina asweallknow honestyisthebestpolicy ifwewanttohaveeachother sbelief weneedshowourhonesty butactionsspeaklouderthanwords judgingfromthisreport ihavecometorealizewealllacktheawarenessofhonesty bothinchinaandtheuk inchina thereisasimilarstorywhichcausesaheatdiscussion somepeoplethinkthecustomersareinnocent whilesomebelievetheyarestealingmoney andthecourtbelievestheirbehaviorsareillegal iagreetothisopinion howaboutyouropinions yourssincerely lihua 12 同龄人之间的压力 dearamy iamwritingthislettertosharemyfeelingsandthoughtson peerpressure youtoldmeaboutyourconflictedfeelingsonthefirstschooldayafteraholiday youdon tknowwhatclothestowear whethertobethesameasyourfriendsortobeyourownperson isufferedthesameworryasyoursinchina althoughwedon thavetobeupsetaboutclothesbecauseallofusarerequiredtowearschooluniform wearelivingunderthepeerpressureinotheraspects suchas hairstyle schoolbags shoes stationeryandevenwhethertofindaboyfriend girlfriend ornot inourclass almostallthestudentswearthesamebrandofsneakers adidas nomatterrichorpoor thisphenomenongivesgreatpressuretothestudentsfrompoorfamilies andfinallymayleadtoworsestories suchas stealingordroppingoutschool soi vemadeupmymindtobeabovethepeerpressure asanoldsayinggoes followyourowncourse andletpeopletalk weshouldbemoreconfidentaboutourownstylesandtaste itisdiversitiesthatmaketheworldmorewonderful don tyouthinkso ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon yourstruly liping 13 中学生不应离家出走 don trunawayfromhomeaccordingtothepassage ourpressuresfromsurroundingsmakeusfeelveryboredandupset somepeoplewanttorunawayfromhomesothattheywon tfacesomanystresses sinceiwasachild ihavelivedwithmylovedfamilyfor18years wheniwassufferingpunishmentfrommyparents ioftenthoughtitwasunfairformeanddidn twanttospeaktothemanylonger butineverhadthedecisiontorunawayfromhome iknewclearlythatlivingalonewasnotsosimpleasiexpected what smore myparentslovemesomuch sodoi idon tthinkrunningawayisthebestofwaytosolveyourproblemsorfindyourwayout asfarasiamconcerned itisfoolishforustorunawayfromhomebecausewewon tgettherealindependenceandfreedom notuntilitistoolatewillwerealizewhatwehavedoneisv