学人教版必修五Unit4Making the newsPeriod5Using languageWriting课件（31张）.ppt

2018 2019学年度人教版必修五unit4makingthenews period5usinglanguage writing 新闻报道是关于最近发生的重要而新鲜的事情的报道或评述 写好一篇高质量的新闻报道应注意以下两个方面 即新闻的题目 它是文章的眼睛 既要体现鲜明的个性 又要生动 形象 有美感 才能引人入胜 是新闻报道内容的概括和浓缩 包括五大要素 时间 地点 人物 起因和结果 导语是新闻报道的精华 也是信息传递的集中体现 是导语之后的新闻展开 补充更加充实 新闻报道由于是反映最近所发生的重要而新鲜的事 所以时态以现在时 过去时为主 篇幅一般不长 内容短小精悍 多用动词 长短句交错使用 5月1日 高二 3 班的学生志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动 送水果 打扫 聊天等 假如你是校报的英语记者 请按下列要点用英语写一则100 120个词的新闻报道 要求 1 时间 地点 人物 活动 2 老人们的反应 3 简短评论 第一步认真审题 analyzetherequirements 第二步谋篇布局 drawupanoutline 第三步联句成篇 organizethesentences 第四步锦上添花 getthearticlepolishedup 第五步查漏补缺 checkthemistakes 审主题审体裁 审人称 审时态 审要求 students time place persons activitiesreactionoftheelderlybriefevaluation didvoluntarywork aletter thethird thepasttense 标题 headline studentvolunteersbroughtsunshine whatwouldbetheheadlineofthiscomposition 导语 lead liyueandzhanghua studentsfromclassthree gradetwo sunshinenursinghomeand wentto didsomevoluntarywork 正文 body they theelderly flowersandfruits thentheystartedworkingatonce and everythingdone theysatintheyard presented with cleaningthewindows sweepingthefloor chattingwiththeelderlypeople 评语 evaluation whattheydidhasbrought toothersand theirownlives joy enriched first second then finally atlast soon immediately suddenly here there ononeside ontheotherside infrontof atthebackof nextto foronething fortheotherthing ononehand ontheotherhand but however while though otherwise because since as thanksto asaresult of aslongas solongas onconditionthat if unless though as evenif though whether who what when where ever what smore besides tomakethematterworse what sworse inaword altogether allinall ingeneral theygaveflowersandfruitstotheelderly they theelderly flowersandfruits theysaidthestudentshaddonesomuchforthemandtheywouldneverforgetthem theysaiditwas abeautifulday theywouldrememberitforever such that whentheyarrived theirarrival upon theystartedworkingatonce thewindowsand thefloor 2 theysatintheyard withtheelderlypeople 巧用分词 cleaning sweeping everythingdone chatting 名词性从句要用得妙 whattheydidhasbroughtjoytoothersandenrichedtheirownlives theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits theystartedworkingatonce cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople then everythingdone onmayday liyueandzhanghua studentsfromclassthree gradetwo wenttosunshinenursinghomeanddidsomevoluntarywork upontheirarrival liyueandzhanghuawerewarmlywelcomed andrespectfully theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits thentheystartedworkingatonce cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor everythingdone theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople whenitwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness theysaidi