考研英语写作——何凯文版

考研英语写作考研英语写作 三段论 第一段三段论 第一段 描述图画或图表描述图画或图表 第二段第二段 解释寓意解释寓意 第三段第三段 给出评论给出评论 第一段第一段 第一句第一句 1 As is shown above 描述图画 倒装 描述图画 倒装 There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper 报纸上有一张图报纸上有一张图 画引起人们广泛的关注 画引起人们广泛的关注 描述图画注意 描述图画注意 第一步 寻找图画的中心事物 并确定中心事物的位置 第一步 寻找图画的中心事物 并确定中心事物的位置 第二部 描述中心事物 可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述 第二部 描述中心事物 可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述 第三部第三部 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物 并进行简单的描述 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物 并进行简单的描述 模式 模式 在图画中央有在图画中央有 倒装倒装 它 它 主谓一致 现在分 主谓一致 现在分 词 非限定性定语从句 词 非限定性定语从句 周围有 周围有 独立主格作状语 独立主格作状语 第二句第二句 总结总结 The picture at the fist glimpse seems to be simple but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning 这幅画初看好像很简单 但是只有具有洞察力的这幅画初看好像很简单 但是只有具有洞察力的 人才能看穿其肤浅的含义 人才能看穿其肤浅的含义 The author s real purpose is not the fact itself but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg 作者的真实目的作者的真实目的 不是图画本身 而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐不是图画本身 而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐 藏着什么 藏着什么 第二段第二段 第一句第一句 观点的提出观点的提出 1 The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题重要主题 In no country other than china it has been said is this phenomenon more obvious 2 The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon that is people tend to overlook the fact that 有有 害主题害主题 或或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题有害主题 is not only harmful but also damaging The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening up policy carried out bringing some problems at the same time with the above one being the foremost 在过去在过去 的十年间 由于改革开放政策的执行 我国的经济有了巨大的十年间 由于改革开放政策的执行 我国的经济有了巨大 的发展 但同时带来了一些问题 上面的问题是最严重的 的发展 但同时带来了一些问题 上面的问题是最严重的 或 或 In no country other than china it has been said m is this problem more serous 万能观点 万能观点 图画主题的重要性图画主题的重要性 Nothing can be compared with is not only necessary but also indispensable remains to be an integral part in 图画主题的有害性图画主题的有害性 Nothing is more harmful or damaging is not only harmful but also damaging in large measure detrimental 第二句第二句 进一步讲解人们的态度 重视进一步讲解人们的态度 重视 不重视 不重视 1 The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题有害主题 2 The public attach due attention to 重要主题重要主题 give priority to 优先考虑优先考虑 attach attention to 对对 注意注意 emphasize the importance of 强调强调 的重要性的重要性 stress the fundamental role of 强调强调 的根本作的根本作 用用 第三句第三句 对主题进行展开对主题进行展开 3 4 句 句 By doing so 十一个角度平行展开十一个角度平行展开 也可用科学论 也可用科学论 据法或举例法 据法或举例法 一一 十一个万能理由 角度 十一个万能理由 角度 物质回报 物质回报 主题主题 can provide offer people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles The industrious and insightful people will never fail to profits from benefit from doing 主题主题 时间角度时间角度 节约时间节约时间 It can make the most of one s time chance and technology 主题主题 e g Learning more western culture occupying spare time so constructively makes a person contented with no time for boredom wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon 浪费时间浪费时间 As all known the days of youth should not be friend idled away and time should be cherished but 主题主题 e g star worship wastes hours lavishes days and even squanders years which leads us to say kills an even murders youngster s prime time 效率角度效率角度 主题 主题 e g Star worship Addiction to the Internet makes people weary of other important things discourages him to learn more and finally lose their interest to learn and lead to low grades low efficiency underachievement One s energy gradually wears off and one s thought creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主题主题 方便和快捷方便和快捷 主题主题 e g Wide World Web provides people with up to date concrete and accurate and vivid information 主题主题 e g MSN and other instant messengers can shrink the distance between cities and even continents smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people 安全角度安全角度 主题主题 can secure his food and shelter 主题主题 can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury robbery assaults to traffic accidents 身心健康身心健康 主题 主题 can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems stress isolation and solitude By doing 主题主题 people stay healthy and therefore prevent heart diseases hypertension diabetes or fattiness 主题主题 can also have added benefit of increasing one s knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world 生活娱乐生活娱乐 It s a major means of entertainment that relieves one s pressure boredom stress and burden 表表 受益受益 的词组 的词组 Broaden one s mind Enrich one s experience Enhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to one s work It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information but a source of imagination as well It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy enthusiasm and charm It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious routine and monotonous life 有助成长和成功 自己和他人 有助成长和成功 自己和他人 People can obtain financial aids material support mental comfort or spiritual back from your support They can draw on experience from you Through your speeches instructions or assistance they can broaden their minds increase their income Through your encouragement they cultivate the spirit of competition participation and cooperation and finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness Though your assistance not only can they accumulate wealth but will also establish their career fit into society and even attain social status People who treat others with love sincerity sympathy enthusiasm hospitality or generosity always win respect from others It dose doesn t necessarily cultivate talent confidence self worth self reliance and dignity 文化价值观文化价值观 It cannot help people treat the world with benevolence confidence and tolerance It can sometimes intensify conflicts and tensions between nations It put harmonious human relationship in danger It cannot promote mutual understanding It can breach the friendly ties and widen the gap between people 环境保护环境保护 It means that central authority can set aside more funds to eliminate air pollution noise pollution reduce soil erosion or desertification prevent the thinness of ozone layers reduce industrial sewage and rescue the dwindling tropical jungles It government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment 社会宏观角度社会宏观角度 It can minimize inflation economic stagnation economic recession unemployment rate It can maintain social order and reduce crime rate It means that revolutionize the scientific level of a country means of co communication and quality of life It means that the authorities can allocate more funds to the construction and quality of infrastructure ranging from kindergartens hospitals medical center museums school libraries trains to highways and express ways It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education employments self realization and pursuit of material wealth 二 二 科学论据法 科学论据法 According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science CAS According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science CASS China Daily interviewed for people from four professions a surgeon a while collar worker a carpenter and a farmer The survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that 主题重要或有害主题重要或有害 三 三 举例子 举例子 Our human history has been filled with a variety of examples of with the following one being the foremost 我们人类历史上我们人类历史上 与这个话题相关的例子有很多 下面这个是最有说服力的 与这个话题相关的例子有很多 下面这个是最有说服力的 Among all the touching facts relating to that I have hoard noticed and experienced the most impressive one is 在我所在我所 听到的 看到的 经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中 最有听到的 看到的 经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中 最有 说服力的是说服力的是 第四句第四句 结尾句 结尾句 虚拟语气和利弊句 虚拟语气和利弊句 虚拟语气 虚拟语气 1 积极的主题 积极的主题 如果没有如果没有 我们可能根本做不了 我们可能根本做不了 Were there no sth never would we do sth 2 消极的主题 消极的主题 如果情况继续下去 我们将付出更加昂贵的代价 如果情况继续下去 我们将付出更加昂贵的代价 Were the situation to continue as it is we would pay the high price e g Were the tendency to continue as it is our future generation would not bother to think of excuse for us 利弊句 利弊句 1 弊大于利弊大于利 The disadvantages overshadow the ben