广东省2012届高三英语二轮复习 专题训练 写作（5）

用心 爱心 专心1 广东省广东省 20122012 届高三英语二轮复习专题训练 写作 届高三英语二轮复习专题训练 写作 5 5 第一节 基础写作 写作内容写作内容 你的笔友 William 回复你的电子邮件告诉你英国高中生课余时间可以打工 其内容要 点如下 英国高中生英国高中生1 可以打工 每天不超过三小时 晚上不得迟于七点 2 一星期 18 小时以内 WilliamWilliam 的看法的看法 1 可获得生活中一些技能 如填表 应对面试和与人相处 2 增强自信和独立性 学会如何理财 3 有利学习和工作责任心 写作内容写作内容 假设你是李华 请根据以上信息 以 William 的口吻将这些信息转写成一封信 内容包 括 1 英国 15 岁以上的高中生课余可以打工 2 高中生课余打工的时限规定 3 你 William 的看法 写作要求写作要求 1 只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容 2 开头和结尾已写出 不讲入总句数 Li Hua Very glad to have received your email Now I ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days 用心 爱心 专心2 Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply Yours William Dickens 评分标准 评分标准 句子结构的准确性和复杂度 信息内容的完整性和连贯性 基础写作基础写作参考范文 one possible version 高考资源网 Li Hua Very glad to have received your email Now I ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days In the UK any secondary student over 15 years old can get a job legally in his unlimited time Students who can work as long as they work no more than three hours a day and 18 hours a week during the school year can t work past 7 00 pm during school year I guess first of all jobs can teach teenagers work skills they will need their whole lives such as how to fill out an application how to interview well and how to get along with co workers and superiors What s more jobs can help us teens not only feel more confident and independent but also develop a sense of responsibility for our courses and work The most important of all Jobs help us teens learn to manage our money in our life Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply Yours William Dickens 第二节第二节 读写任务读写任务 阅读下面的短文 然后按照要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文 For many years scientists have warned that smoking tobacco is bad for 用心 爱心 专心3 health Yet people around the world continue to smoke The World Health Organization estimates that more than four million people die each year from the effects of smoking That number is increasing Scientists have identified more than forty chemicals in tobacco smoke that cause cancer in humans and animals Nicotine 尼古丁 is the major poison in cigarettes that gives pleasure to smokers The American Cancer Society says nicotine can kill a person when taken in large amounts It does this by stopping the muscles used for breathing Also studies have found that nicotine can be as harmful as alcohol or the illegal drugs So experts say it is better never to start smoking and become dependent on nicotine than it is to smoke with the idea of stopping later Smoking tobacco is the leading cause of lung disease Smoking also has been linked to heart disease stroke and many kinds of cancer American government health experts say smoking affects not only the smoker Tobacco smoke also affects the health of people who do not smoke Smokers may harm the health of family members and people at work Tobacco smoke causes an estimated 3 000 non smoking Americans to die of lung cancer each year Therefore it can be seen that smoking begins to cause damage immediately All cigarettes can damage the body And there is no safe way to smoke 写作内容写作内容 假设你是 Adam 你叔叔是一个烟瘾很大的人 在看了有关吸烟危害的文章后 想给叔叔 写一封信劝其戒烟 以下是信的内容 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好 1 以约 30 个词概括香烟对身体健康的伤害 2 以约 120 个词表达你对叔叔的劝告 并包括如下要点 1 对叔叔提出戒烟的具体建议 2 指出叔叔戒烟对家人的益处 3 期望叔叔能够成功地戒烟 写作要求写作要求 1 作文可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子 2 信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称 用心 爱心 专心4 评分标准评分标准 概括准确 语言规范 内容合适 篇章连贯 读写任务读写任务参考范文 one possible version 高考资源网 Dad I always find you are a heavy smoker But you may have heard about the harmful effects of cigarettes Some prison such as nicotine and tar is the cause of lung cancer Besides cigarettes can make smokers dependent on them which does great harm to people s health Therefore it is best for you to stop smoking right now To stop smoking you should carefully plan your actions for at least one week Try to stay away from people and situations that might trouble you Do not go to public places where people are smoking In the first week or two without cigarettes you probably will feel terrible Do not lose hope If you stay away from tobacco those feelings will go away in a few wee