山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+写作（20）

用心 爱心 专心1 山西省山西省 20122012 高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 写作 写作 2020 短文改错短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中 共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Friendship is very importance Everyone needs friendship In all our lives we can t live without friendship just as we can t live without air and water Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us But real friendship is no easy to come by True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other A good friend can always be a good teacher to us By his advices we are persuading to go the right way Therefore more friends we have the better we can improve ourselves 书面表达书面表达 假定你是李华 看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时 不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的 作业 针对这种现象 请你以 My opinion on copying others homework 为题谈谈你自 己的看法 注意 1 短文必须包括所有内容要点 可适当发挥 2 短文标题与开头已为你写好 不计入总词数 用心 爱心 专心2 3 词数 100 词左右 作业量大 偏难 对功课不感兴趣 懒惰主要原因 完成任务 取悦老师 抄袭不对 违反校规 要诚实 勤奋学习危害及解决办法 有困难可请教同学和老师 个人看法 短文改错短文改错 第一句 importance 改为important 第四句 getting 改为 get kind 改为 kinds 去掉 the 第五句 no 改为 not 第六句 sincerely 改为 sincere understand 改为 understanding 第八句 advices 改为 advice persuading 改为 persuaded 用心 爱心 专心3 第九句 Therefore 后加 the 书面表达书面表达 OneOne PossiblePossible VersionVersion My opinion on copying others homework It is known to us all that some students copy others homework On one hand we students have to do a large amount of homework both at home and at school It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out On the other hand lazy and uninterested in their lessons some students copy others homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers In a word copying others homework is a bad habit For one thing it s against the rules of the school We should be honest and work hard to achieve high grades If we have difficulties we can turn to our teachers and our classmates for help For another copying others homework too often we will lose the ability that can help us to think As far as I m concerned it s for our own