2014月考I读写任务点评(1)

2013 2014月考I读写任务点评 就 ForgivenessIsImportant 的主题进行讨论 如何写好读写任务 一 紧扣主题 确定关键信息 省略替换 梳理整合 写好概括二 紧扣写作内容提示要点 做好语篇的整体规划 拓宽写作的角度 以总 分 总 式行文 写好读写任务第二部分三 把好读写任务写作质量关四 巧创高分印象 避免生硬 汉式化语言1 规范书写 整洁卷面 避免拼写 单复数 主谓不一致等低级错误2 巧用套语 使语言得体化 读写任务写作质量监控表 如何写好概括技巧1 1 抓信号词 找准主题句 2 省略替换 梳理整合技巧2 1 就相关主题预测原文内容要点 阅读验证预测 确定关键信息 2 省略替换 梳理整合 本文的概括要点 Howtoshowusthetopic anexampleofnotforgivingothersWhattotell wewillpaypriceforit3 Whatcanbeinferred forgivenessisimportant 确定原文关键信息 Thiswasagreatexampleforthepricewepayforkeepingourpainandheavynegativity Toooftenwethinkofforgivenessasagifttotheotherperson anditclearlyisforourselves 省略替换 梳理整合成概括 Thepassagemainlytellsusthatateacherusedanexampleofnotforgivingotherstoshowusthatwewouldpaypriceforit whichindicatesthatforgivenessisimportant 如何做好读后任务技巧 紧扣写作内容提示要点 按顺序做好语篇的整体规划 拓宽写作的角度 以总 分 总 的行文方式 写好读写任务的第二部分 1 为什么人们在平时相处中会产生一些误解和冲突Ican tagreemorewiththeauthor However itcan tbeavoidedthatwemayhavesomeconflictsandmisunderstandingswhenwearegettingalongwitheachotherbecauseeveryoneisuniqueandeachofushasourownthoughtandstyle Ifwedon tlearntounderstandandforgiveeachother conflictsandmisunderstandingswilllikelyoccur 2 在你周围是否有令你憎恨和难以容忍的人Tobehonest therewasatimewhenIhatedsomeofmyfriendsaroundme Ihatedwaitingforthemforhourswithoutknowingwhenonearththeywouldcome whichmademeangryandupsetabouthowtobefriendswiththem 3 你认为应该怎样和他们相处 Afterthinkingdeeply however Ilearnedtogetalongwellwitheachotherbycommunicatingwiththem Itoldthemfranklythattheirarrivinglatemademeangry Theyalsoexplainedtomewhytheywerelate InthiswayIunderstoodandforgavethem Finallywereachedanagreementthatwewouldbegoodfriends 4 是否应该宽恕他们 AsfarasIamconcerned weshouldforgiveothersforthefollowingreasons Foronething forgivenessisoneofourChinesetraditionalvirtues Foranot