【课件】概要写作教学(必修二Unit 2Healthy eatingWorkbook (Page52))

1、SummaryWritingbased on Reading TextBuilding A McDonaldsLead in：Watch a videosaladsaladburger/hamburgerburger/hamburgerchipschipsc colakolaolakolamilkmilk shakesshakes（奶昔奶昔）ice-creamice-cream H e eA new McDonalds restaurant is going to be built your hometown. H e e1.1.What s the What s the mainmain i

2、dea of the two idea of the two passages?passages?2.2.Whats the first persons opinion?Whats the first persons opinion?3.3.Whats the second persons opinion?Whats the second persons opinion?Whether to build a McDonaldsForAgainstHe likes eating nothing but Chinese food.1.1.Guess meaning from context:Whi

3、ch of the following has the closest meaning to the phrase “nothing but” in Speech1? ( )A. B. C.Bnot at allnot at allonlyonlynot importantnot importantHe only likes eating Chinese food.to rewrite the sentence in your own wordsThere is the problem of all those cars that try to park and prevent other c

4、ars from moving quickly through our town.2 2. .paraphrase:All those cars try to park and this will cause a problem that other cars cant pass through the town quickly. H e eThe style of the article is .?A ANarrationNarration（记叙文）（记叙文）ArgumentationArgumentation（议论文）（议论文）B BC CExposition (Exposition (说

5、明文说明文) )How to Write a Summary How to Write a Summary of Argumentationof Argumentation I was excited when I heard that our community was to have its own McDonalds restaurant. I thought about all those young people who would not have to go to the next town to buy their favourite burgers and chips. Mc

6、Donalds cares about healthy eating too and works with scientists to provide food that is of high quality, safe and healthy. It is also cheap. They often provide salads as well as burgers and chips. You can also choose between cola and milk shakes （奶昔（奶昔）.Of course it also means more work for our are

7、a that needs jobs badly. McDonalds says they are interested in doing what is right for the community and being a good neighbour. So I think they will be concerned about providing parking for the cars in our main street. Many of our young people will be only too happy to work for the company. McDonal

8、ds makes a promise to the people who work for them. They say, “We value you, your growing skills and your help to the company.” I can see nothing but good if this company comes to build its restaurant in our town. I was excited when I heard that our community was to have its ownMcDonalds restaurant.

9、 I can see nothing but good if this company comes to build itsrestaurant in our town.supporting points(reasons)viewpointconclusionI was excited when I heard that our community was to have its own McDonalds restaurant. I thought about all those young people who would not have to go to the next town t

10、o buy their favourite burgers and chips. McDonalds cares about healthy eating too and works with scientists to provide food that is of high quality, safe and healthy. It is also cheap. They often provide salads as well as burgers and chips. You can also choose between cola and milk shakes （奶昔（奶昔）.Of

11、 course it also means more work for our area that needs jobs badly. McDonalds says they are interested in doing what is right for the community and being a good neighbour. So I think they will be concerned about providing parking for the cars in our main street. Many of our young people will be only

12、 too happy to work for the company. McDonalds makes a promise to the people who work for them. They say, “We value you, your growing skills and your help to the company.” I can see nothing but good if this company comes to build its restaurant in our town.supporting points (reasons)foodjobscars1.of

13、high quality, safe and healthy2. cheapprovide parking1. provide jobs 2.value their employeesThe parking for cars will be provided.McDonalds provides more jobs and promises to value the employees.连词成句连词成句The food is of high quality, safe and healthy. And it is also cheap.I was excited when I heard th

14、at our community was to have its own McDonalds restaurant. The firstThe first person person改变人称改变人称hearinghearing同义词同义词 happyhappy变非谓语变非谓语句型转化句型转化will be a McDonalds restaurant.will be a McDonalds restaurant.therethere The first person was happy when hearing that there would be a McDonald restaurant

15、. The first person was for building a McDonalds restaurant. 变简单句变简单句 I can see nothing but good if this company comes to build its restaurant in our hometown.同义词同义词改变人称改变人称 He 改变语态改变语态onlyrestaurant will be built He can see only good if the restaurant is built in their hometown.their He agrees to bu

16、ild the restaurant in their hometown. 变简单句变简单句Point1Point2Point3Forconclusionviewpoint(food)(jobs) (cars) H e e First,Second,Therefore, Last but not least,1.the third person 2. about 60 words The first person was for building a McDonalds restaurant. (viewpoint)(conclusion) The reasons are as follows

17、: 要点要点1 要点要点2 要点要点3the parking for cars will be provided. McDonalds will provide more jobs and promises to value employees. he agrees to build the restaurant in their hometown. the food is of high quality, safe and healthy. And it is alsothere will be safe, healthy and cheap food of high quality.che

18、ap.概要写作的4C原则CompleteCoherent（连贯）（连贯）Concise （精炼）（精炼）CorrectStep oneFind the topic sentence and paraphrase them Step two Mark out the key words of the supporting pointsStep threeStep fourGroup workStep oneFind the topic sentence Step twoMark out the key words of the supporting pointsStep threeParaphrase the key informationStep fourIntegrate (整合整合) and write the summary 1.Change the person(改变人称改变人称)2.Combine the sentences (合并句子合并句子)3.Use synonyms (同义词的运用同义词的运用)4. Summarize (概括概括)5.Change the voice (主被动语态转换主被动语态转换)6. Cha