作文模版和第8周作文要求

1、WritingN H C EN H C E写作模式写作模式写作实践写作实践预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Such writing approaches the topic from a brief description of phenomena typical of the issue in question.Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Pattern of WritingThis part, as the main body of writing, serves to probe into deep-seated problems

2、 behind the phenomena as mentioned above.As a conclusion, the writing comes up with some constructive suggestion as to what can be done about the very issue.PhenomenaProblems behind themSuggestionBack预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Pattern of Writing写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Example abridged from the textTopic: Longin

3、g for a New Welfare SystemOutlines: 1.现行福利制度下的种种现象；现行福利制度下的种种现象；2.现行福利制度的深层问题；现行福利制度的深层问题；3.作者的建议。作者的建议。Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Pattern of Writing写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Longing for a New Welfare SystemPara. 1 Under the present welfare system, a client is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of th

4、eir livings, most clients bleed the system for more money. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.Back预习预习课文课文

5、导入导入小结小结Pattern of Writing写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Para. 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present system can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between caseworkers and clients. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises

6、 from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Pattern of Writing写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 the caseworker first and then have a long wait for the m

7、ain welfare office to approve of the repair to it. During that period I could do nothing but lie in bed. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away from welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being ques

8、tioned and accounting for every penny they have made. Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Pattern of Writing写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Para. 3 In the response to the problems above, there needs to be a lawyer who can act as a champion for the rights of clients because the system so easily lends itself to abuse. Clients

9、 like me should also fight for the interests of their own. And above all, I long for a new welfare system that will encourage clients to develop their talents without any guilt or fear. Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Writing Practice写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Dynamic Writing For More An American educationist once

10、said, “No amount of change with a cart will produce a car.” The same is true for writing in English. If our focus is merely on the target words, it is like taking apart the car to find its parts for our old cart. There will be no way to write well in English. So our best course of action is to take

11、their pattern of writing as a model to follow. That is just where our dynamic writing enters. Topic: Longing for a Purer Climate of Doing BusinessOutlines: 1. 经商中的不良现象；经商中的不良现象； 2. 商业领域的深层次问题；商业领域的深层次问题； 3. 你的建议。你的建议。 Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Writing Practice写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Longing for a Purer Cli

12、mate of Doing BusinessPara. 1 Under the present welfare system, a client is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of their livings, most clients bleed the system for more money. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every client

13、. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.Para. 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of their livings, most clients bleed the system for more money. On the other hand,

14、 caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.Para. 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced wit

15、h the worsening of competition, many businessmen bleed customers for more money. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept th

16、e reality.Para. 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of competition, many businessmen bleed customers for more money. On the other hand, customers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every businessman.

17、 For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.Para. 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of competition, many businessmen bleed customers for more money. On the other hand,

18、 customers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every businessman. For the businessmen like me who opt to do business in an honest way, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Writing Practice写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Para. 2 If taken

19、seriously, the problems with the present system can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between caseworkers and clients. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hu

20、nger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Para. 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between caseworkers and clients. That is why I have a strong fee

21、ling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Para. 2 If taken seriously, the problems with t

22、he present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for mos

23、t of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Para. 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever t

24、he customer questions the quality of a product. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Para. 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the prese

25、nt business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the customer questions the quality of a product. Another arises from the fact that this field is hit with practices of trading power for money. Eac

26、h time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Para. 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the customer

27、questions the quality of a product. Another arises from the fact that this field is hit with practices of trading power for money. Each time I want to expand my business, for example, I have to endure a lecture from Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Writing Practice写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 the caseworker first and

28、then have a long wait for the main welfare office to approve of the repair to it. During that period I could do nothing but lie in bed. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away from welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embar

29、rassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they have made. the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my application. During that period I could do nothing but lie in bed. And worst of all, there is no provision in the

30、law for a gradual shift away from welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they have made. the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of

31、my application. During that period I could do nothing but secure its approval with money. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away from welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and acco

32、unting for every penny they have made. the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my application. During that period I could do nothing but secure its approval with money. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a severe punishmen

33、t on the dishonest in doing business. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they have made. the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my ap

34、plication. During that period I could do nothing but secure its approval with money. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a severe punishment on the dishonest in doing business. If profit-minded people make money in an illegal way, they have little need to go through any legal proc

35、ess of being questioned or accounting for the money they have made illegally. Back预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结Writing Practice写作实践写作实践随随 笔笔 写作模式写作模式 Para. 3 In the response to the problems above, there needs to be a lawyer who can act as a champion for the rights of clients because the system so easily lends it

36、self to abuse. Clients like me should also fight for the interests of their own. And above all, I long for a new welfare system that will encourage clients to develop their talents without any guilt or fear. Para. 3 In the response to the problems above, there needs to be a code of rules that can le

37、ave no room for dishonesty in doing business because the the present rules so easily lend themselves to abuse. Clients like me should also fight for the interests of their own. And above all, I long for a new welfare system that will encourage clients to develop their talents without any guilt or fear. Para. 3