第5课时　七年级下册　Units 9～12 高频话题写作

1、高频话题写作旅行【命题探索】本学段的高频写作话题是“校园旅行。写作内容主要涉及学校组织的旅行活动 ,包括郊游 ,远足 ,参观博物馆等活动。作文中强调对地点、环境、距离、空间、交通、建筑等的描写 ,并描述自己的感受。此类作文通常以要点提示、方位图提示、数表提示等方式来考查 ,且文体为记叙文、应用文等。【写作积累】话题词汇积累地点：zoo, neighborhood, far, in the countryside, science museum交通：walk, turn, along, near, across, cross, go down, by train, slow, fast天气：wa

2、rm and sunny, cool and cloudy, sunshine, weather, hot相关：visit, see, have fun, have a great time, noisy, feed, sounds good, take photos, exciting, boring, guide重点句型仿写1I'm having a great time visiting my uncle in America.我在美国看望我的叔叔 ,玩得非常开心。句式仿写：我在乡下看望我的叔叔 ,玩得非常开心。I'm having a great time my unc

3、le 2He also told me that it was important not to go near a snake.他还告诉我说不要靠近蛇很重要。句式仿写：我们的老师说 ,学习的时候不要懒惰是重要的。Our teacher says it is important lazy in learning.【典例剖析】上周三上午 ,你们学校组织爬山活动。请根据下面的图画写一篇日记 ,表达爬山的经过。词数100左右。审题谋篇(1)时态：使用一般过去时(2)人称：使用第三人称和第一人称(3)模板高分范文Our school trip, on last Wednesday morning, w

4、as climbing the mountain in the east of our school.It was a sunny day. We met at the school gate and began our trip at 8：00. At the beginning, we walked very fast. No one wanted to be slower than others. One hour later we got to the top of the mountain. Everyone was excited. When we started to get d

5、own the mountain, we had to go slowly. One of the girls fell down. But she said it was OK and went on her way.We came back to school at about 10：30. We were very tired but we felt very happy. What an exciting school trip it was!【写作练兵】在英语课上 ,老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the city的话题讨论。请根据小组讨论

6、结果 ,写一篇英语短文 ,介绍两者的不同特点 ,并写出你的选择与理由。CountrysideCityrelax, fresh air ,not easy to take public transportation. exciting ,crowded, expensive. 注意：1短文必须包含记录表中的信息 ,并作适当发挥；2文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；3词数100左右 ,文章开头已给出 ,不计入总词数。In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside

7、or to the city. 参考答案写作积累1visiting; in the countryside2that; not to be写作练兵In the English class, we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city. Taking a trip to the countryside can relax you by fishing or swimming. And the fresh air might be your favorite. Yet, yo

8、u might not have many choices in transportation.Of course, a trip to the city also has its characters. If you like shopping, it's very exciting to travel back and forth in large malls.You can visit museums to broaden your mind. Nevertheless such a trip might cost much. And the traffic jam might let you down.If you're from the countryside, a trip to the city is better. There you'll learn what you've never tho