最新高中英语写作扩句

1、精品文档扩句的方法在学习扩句法之前，先对学生进行五个简单句句型，并列句和复合句的专项训练，打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基 础上，添加各种修饰成分，使句子得到扩展，即根据表达的 需求增加定语，状语，同位语等成分 ，或者举例子补充细节 内容，或者 添加谚语俗语 等。:1. We arrived in Sanya.We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly.（添力口副 词）1 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.I like to make friends with my classmates, who

2、have the same interest as mine.徐力口定语从句 ）s 3. We were happy and returned home.We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.（添力口状语从句）4. I like reading books.I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.（!过举例未卜充细节）5. We should study h

3、ard. As we all know, “Practicemakes perfect So we should study hard.（添加谚语）6. I often join in many activities. I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind.（添 加目的状语）三.具体应用试题要求：假如你是一名中学生，请以My colorful schoollife为题，写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经 给由，不计入总数。要点提示

4、：1:上课认真听讲2：课后完成作业 3:经常参加体育锻炼 4:去图书馆阅读I ma high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard.May there always be colorful life around myschool.学生的习作：I ma high school student and I understand what I mstudying for. I have been working hard.I listen to the teacher care

5、fully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library.May there always be colorful life around my school.点评：该学生能完整的写由各个要点，没有由现太大的语 法错误，表达通顺，单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够， 没有达到100个字左右，字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问 题。其次，句子的表达过于平淡无奇，没有句式多样化和使 用高级词汇，固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且，没 有使用连接词，上下文的连接不够

6、顺畅。改进方法：步骤一：列要点把要写的内容要点化，做到要点齐全。1: Listen to the teacher carefully2: finish my homework3:take part in exercise4: often read in the library步骤二：造简单句充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充，使其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性，语法是否正确，说法是否符合英语表达习惯。1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class.2: I finish my homework after clas

7、s.3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates.4: I do some reading in the school library.步骤三：扩展句子1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.（ 僧力口 目 的状语 从句）2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.（增力口定语从句）3: I

8、 often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming andplaying badminton etc.（举例说明）4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.（增力口时间状语从句）步骤四：润色句子根据高考（海南）英语作文评分细则，第五档的要 求：24-25分，至少有3个复杂句，2种从句形式，语气自然， 敬语得体，无中式英语，语言基本功扎实，

9、词汇丰富。这就 要求我们在谴词造句方面下工夫。润色句子包括词语的选择与句型的运用。”比如可以用高级词汇，短语和固定搭配 来替换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式，倒装句，it当形式主语和形式宾语，非谓语动词等，使用多种句式，使其多样化。1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.把第一句换成it当形式主语的用法，使句式多样化。）2: I take homework seriously and finish

10、 it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.（增力口了 take seriously in time两个短语，是句子更加生动 ）3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.（增加了 in order to do sth 目的状语和 different ki

11、nds of 使 句子的意思更完整。）4: Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favourite books.（使用过去分词短语当X语，再添加短语develop thehabbit of 使文章增加亮点）步骤五：连句成篇过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用，它好比一座桥梁，能将全文各句有机地联系在一起，从而使句子不再是 孤立的独立的个体。”使用表示转折，并列，递进，因果关 系等连词把句子连接起来，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构

12、紧凑”使上下文更加通顺，逻辑性更强。I ma high school student and I understand what I m studying for. I have been working hard.（原文已给）First of all（过渡词）,it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. What s more（过 渡 词），I take homework seriously and

13、 finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition（ 过渡词）,In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally（ 过 渡 词），Interested inreading books, I develop the habit of going t