2022年高三语文读后续写话题（三）成长感悟篇 （劳动、工作、学习）语料积累

1、2022年高三语文读后续写话题（三）成长感悟篇 （劳动、工作、学习）语料积累成长感悟篇类的续写文章一般属于人与自我的主题语境。整个世界中，静止是相对的，而运动是绝对的。对于个人来说，个人的成长就是一个绝对的过程。个人成长是了解自我、完善自我、开发自我潜能的持续过程。根据新课程标准，人与自我主题语境下包括两大主题群：生活与学习；做人与做事。因此在读后续写中，个人的成长不仅涉及到知识层面上，更多涉及到情感、态度和价值观(含品德)。语篇往往是学生比较熟悉的场景：学校生活、家庭生活及工作（劳动）场景。最终的升华指向：健康的生活方式，积极的生活态度，完善的自我, 优秀的品行及更好的规划(学习, 生活和职

2、业)。按照情节的发展，语篇分为三个阶段。阶段情节重点成长前情境描写+消极情绪的累积高潮成长中成长的动机+ 过程中变化的心情。成长后成长后的收获+积极情绪(喜悦、满足和骄傲等)特别注意：成长过程中一个重要的因素就是成长的动机。成长动机的出现可能是一个偶发事件，也可能是一个关键人物的行为或影响。因此，对此类话题：1. 第一要把握语篇的主要角色，确定成长的主题。2. 要确定语篇的主旨及升华指向，并且切记一定遵循正能量原则。3. 要精准把握情绪的变化，可以通过不同的手法描绘心情。绿皮大书：同类型话题语篇读后续写典型案例分析9： In your eyes P98读后续写典型案例分析11： No crow

3、n for me P112读后续写典型案例分析13： The Rude Boy P124一、成长的环境描写：1、成长前：遇到困难/挑战1) 不能坚持做事的场景 (时间顺序)And so I promised. At first (一开始), curious to see what would happen, I did not mind doing this (我不介意这样做). But as the days went by (几天过去了) and nothing changed, it got harder and harder (这变得越来越难了) to remember to put

4、water in the cup. After a week (一周之后), I asked my grandfather if it was time to stop yet. Shaking his head no(摇头说不), he said, “Every day.” The second week was even harder (第二周更困难了), and I became regretful (开始后悔) of my promise to put water in the cup. When my grandfather came again, I tried to give i

5、t back to him (我试图还给他), but he refused to take it, saying simply the same words, “Every day.” By the third week (到了第三周), I began to forget to put water in the cup during the day. Often, I would remember only after I had been put to bed and would have to get out of bed and water it in the dark (我不得不起

6、床，在黑暗中浇水). (2022.4 青岛一模)2) 骄傲自大、破坏成功There was I, one of the most-liked guys on campus, powerful and making a difference, until my ego took over (占上风) and destroyed everything. I let all the power go to my head. My arrogance (我的傲慢) and my pride were out of control (失控). I began speaking down to my gr

7、oup members, demanding they listen to me (要求他们听我的) because I thought I knew what was best. I believed that I could accomplish this mission without any of them (没有他们我们也能完成任务) and I wanted to take credit (居功) for everything. (2022年浙江高中强基联盟)3) 生活困境搬家及父母不和Thirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did

8、I have to adapt to (不得不适应) my changing body, I also had to deal with (处理) my parents' bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move (心烦的搬家) from my country home to a crowded suburb(2022.1 T8)4) The whole classroom fell into a deadly silence (陷入死一般的沉默). (2022.3 潍坊尖子生)2、成长中：解决困难/挑战：1) 帮助同学、搭

9、建候车棚To keep Ryder protected from the bad weather (让Eyder免受恶劣天气的影响) while waiting for the bus every morning, the students in Ryder's school decided to take action (决定采取行动). They first uploaded a post (首先上传了一个帖子) on asking for an unused bus shelter but got no reply. Not being able to find one, the

10、 students from the construction class decided to take on the challenge (接受挑战) of building a customized bus shelter for him and quickly put their hands to work (投入工作). (2021.3. 济南一模)2) 父亲帮我制作自行车My dad put together (组装) all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, &quo

11、t;Your own car." Of course I knew he had some magical ability (有一些神奇的能力), but I didn't think he could make such an awesome object (如此棒的东西). He added the seat and the pedals (增加了座位和踏板) so that I would not have any problems. (2022.2 汕头一模)3) 老师与恶作剧的孩子谈心After class, I followed Miss Baugh to her

12、 office. Instead of criticizing (没有批评), she just smiled, “Well, you really got me, smart boy. But dont ever do that in our classroom (不要在我们教室那样做).” Seeing the understanding in her eyes, I was moved. (2022.3 潍坊)3、成长后：成功/收获场景描写1) At the age of five, I did not understand it fully but I got a sense of a

13、chievement (我获得了一种成就感). As I grew up, I found, deep down inside, it served me far beyond (对我的用处远超过) that little cup. I was fascinated by the whole process (我为整个过程着迷) of accepting a challenge, sticking to my goal and then achieving my goal through my own efforts (通过努力达成我的目标). Better still, I managed

14、to apply it to my profession and eventually to my life (我设法把它应用到我的职业中，并最终到我的人生中). (2022.4青岛一模)2) I didn't prank 恶作剧others any longer and was more focused on my study (更专注于学习). I listened attentively in class and got actively involved in school activities (积极参加学校活动). It was no surprising when I m

15、ade significant progress (取得巨大的进步) in my academic performance. (2022.3潍坊一模)二、成长的人物描写1、成长前：背景经历(家庭、学校、工作)1) My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education (只受到八年级的教育). (2021.6浙江高考)2) A quiet man (一个寡言的人), he didn't understand my world of school activities (理解我的学校活动). From age 14, he worked. A

16、nd his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses (用来支付家庭开支). (2021.6浙江高考)2、成长中：成长动机 (关键人物品行/性格)1) 不服气父亲的要求：I thought that I would surpass anything he had accomplished (超过他所达成的一切) by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation. (2021.6浙江高考)2) 严格的老师：

17、She was the kind of teacher (她是那种老师) that just about everyone has had at least once: Scary (可怕的). (2022.3月潍坊尖子生)3) 积极的人物：He had a reputation for being super active and energetic(超级活跃和精力充沛)。3、成长后：收获 (人物品行/性格)1) 下定决心：Looking up, I promised my dad that I wouldnt let him down (我绝不会让他失望). 2) 正确认识劳动的价值：De

18、spite my concern and anxiety, Paul seemed to enjoy the process (似乎享受这个过程). Tired as he was, he still had a positive attitude (有一个积极的态度) and kept on ring no effort to earn money (继续不遗余力地赚钱). (2022.2 济南十一校联考)三、成长的情绪描写：消极积极（矛盾冲突解决路线）1、成长前的消极情绪：无助/发愁/无助/不公平/不情愿/失望1) I decided it was not fair (我觉得这不公平) t

19、hat I had to contribute my money. (21.6浙江高考)2) Reluctantly following him into the room (不情愿地跟着他进了房间), I was overwhelmed/ consumed by a mixture of disappointment and sadness (失望和悲伤混合的情绪). 伤心/生气1）I was severely depressed that day, because something unhappy had happened to me (一些不愉快的事发生在我身上) that morni

20、ng. I had been being sad since the morning and nobody realized my sadness(没有人意识到我的悲伤). It had just broken me down (让我崩溃).2）Feeling helpless and alone (感觉到无助、孤单), I couldn't eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time (我一直哭). I missed my family, my home and my pony. (2022.1 T8)3）She looked up with

21、eyes sweeping the classroom (扫视全班) with a deadly stare. (2022.3 潍坊尖子生)4）Upon hearing the news (一听到这个消息), she was depressed, disappointed and even offended, for she became the last one to get the news (最后一个得知消息的人), which made her feel like an idiot (感觉像傻瓜). (21. 8月金太阳)害怕/痛苦/紧张/压力1) The 5 minutes I ha

22、d to wait were painful (我不得不等待的这5分钟很痛苦). 2) Because of language barriers, shyness and difficulties in study (学习上的困难), she had to put up with great pressure (她不得不忍受巨大的压力).3) The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because I refused to ride it (我拒绝骑它). Honestly, I was scared to

23、 try it(我害怕尝试它). (2022.2 汕头一模)4) Afraid as I was (尽管我害怕), I made myself calm down (镇静下来) because I knew my dad would keep protecting me. (2022.1汕头一模)5) After a few violent beats in my heart (我心脏剧烈跳动了几下), I slowly raised my hand. (2022.3 潍坊尖子生)6) Miss Baugh fixed me with a stare that struck terror in

24、 my heart (让我胆战心惊). (22.3 潍坊尖子生)迷惑/尴尬1) At this moment, my heart sank and panic soon set in (我的心沉了下去，陷入了恐慌). If any of you have ever experienced that you know that it's the worst feeling (这是最糟糕的感觉) .（2022.3月燕博园定制）2) This whole thing made no sense to me at all (对我来说毫无意义). I looked at him doubtful

25、ly (adv 怀疑地). 3) Awkward and ashamed, I apologized (尴尬又羞愧), “Im sorry for being so arrogant!” (2022浙江强基联盟)4) 吃惊/惊吓：1）A great sense of shock (巨大的震惊) and scare seized me and my mind suddenly went blank (我的脑子突然一片空白). (2022.1汕头一模)2.成长中变化的心情:害怕/痛苦/紧张/压力 All of our hard work didn't make me feel confid

26、ent (我们的努力不能使我感到自信) by the time the show cameI sat at the gate and sweated it out (汗流浃背) while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with case(2022.1T8)后悔/下定决心：1）Having never gone through a more embarrassing moment (更尴尬的时刻), I decided/ determined/

27、made up my mind to earn as much as possible(我下定决心尽可能多地挣钱来还清一切) to pay off everything.3、成长后的积极情绪：感谢/感动1) So moved (如此感动) was I that I hung/lowered my head, unable to utter even a single word (一个字也说不出来). (2021.6浙江高考高分作文)2) A mixture of excitement and gratitude (激动和感激交织在一起) took hold of Ryder Killam. (

28、22.3 济南一模兴奋/开心/骄傲/满意1) I was sad that I would miss her but at the same time was really happy for her (同时，为她感到开心).2) Our principal assigned me my first mission in my political career- raising money to build a coffeehouse on the campus. I was thrilled and ambitious about it (我非常兴奋，雄心勃勃). (2022年浙江高中强基联

29、盟)3) I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me (我爸爸以我为豪) and I felt very manly. ( 汕头一模)4) So delighted was I that (如此开心以至于: so 引起的部分倒装)I wanted to yell out and share my feelings with my dad. (2022.1汕头一模)5) I lived a more content life (我过着一个更满意的生活) where I only spent money based on m

30、y income (根据我的收入) and never buy anything unnecessary. (2022.3 燕博园定制)6) “Well, it certainly fooled me!” she said, with a satisfying expression spreading across her face (脸上洋溢着满意的表情). (2022.3 潍坊尖子生)7) My debts gradually becoming less and less, I felt free like a bird (我感觉小鸟一样自由). (2022.3 燕博园定制)4、 成长的动

31、作链描写1、成长前1) 学校活动严格的老师行为 (2022.3 潍坊尖子生)：Miss Baugh allowed no nonsense(胡言乱语).She drilled us and taught us to take school seriously (教我们认真对待学校). She also introduced to us the concept of “extra credit” for a correct response (正确的回答) to a random question - and a frown for an incorrect one (对错误的答案皱眉). Mi

32、ss Baugh had been teaching for a long time and knew how to frighten (如何吓唬) even the naughty boys in the back row, including me. She managed to scare us all (她设法吓住了我们全部).2) Paul was with me in the kitchen helping me out with the dishes(帮我洗碗)。From his facial expression and his unmistakable body langua

33、ge (从他的面部表情和明显的肢体语言) I knew he wanted to ask something. As I was about to switch off the kitchen light (我正要关掉厨房的灯), Paul came near me with pleading eyes. （济南112、成长中1) 骑自行车 (2022.1汕头一模)：Sweat welling on my forehead (我满头大汗), I tried my utmost to keep the balance (保持平衡) by controlling the handle.2) 赛马活

34、动 (2022.1 T8)：On hearing the signal (一听到信号), we dashed toward the first barrel and quickly finished the first circle. With perfect accuracy (非常准确), we rounded the second and thundered on to the third (轰隆隆地快速移动到第三圈). After a smooth and swift turn, we shot for the finish line (我们冲向终点线).3) 爷爷送礼物给孩子 (成长

35、动机)：Once he brought me a little plastic cup. I looked inside, expecting to see something special (期待看到一些特别的东西). But there was only some loose soil in it, which made me disappointed (这使我很失望). He smiled at me affectionately (他疼爱地向我微笑). (2022.4 月 青岛一模)4) 努力工作：The tractor fired up and we were off, ridin

36、g down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals (寻找杂草,喷洒化学药剂). It was tiring work(这是一项累人的工作), but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to (我不确定总共有多少). ( 2021.6浙江高考)5) 努力工作，偿还债务I worked several part- time jobs, struggling to make ends meet (努力

37、使收支相抵). I slept less, eat less and even sacrificed all my relaxations (牺牲了一切消遣). Thankfully/ Mercifully (谢天谢地), my hard work proved to be effective. (2022.3 燕博园定制)3、成长后1) 团队合作：Gary persuaded dozens of students into donating (说服数十名学生捐钱). He helped me organize our group meetings, discussing and distri

38、buting tasks in great detail (非常详细地分配任务). When the team members met obstacles and lost heart (遇到障碍并灰心丧气) on the edge of giving up，he made the best of his humor to cheer everyone up (他充分利用自己的幽默使大家高兴起来). Gradually, all of us who participated felt like we were part of something much bigger than we were

39、. We were building a community and it felt great. 2) 树立了正确的金钱观：When I finally paid every last cent, I made a decision. I would stop using a credit card (不再用信用卡). Instead, I would pay for my daily expenses in cash (用现金支付我的日常开支). More importantly, I would learn to form the habit of keeping a record of

40、 the money I spent (养成习惯，记录我花的钱) and save some money for a rainy day (以备不时之需)/ in case of any emergency. (2022.3 燕博园定制)3) I'm glad you will be contributing to the household (为家庭做出贡献). ( 2021.6浙江高考)5、 成长的有效对话1、成长前：(父母有条件地答应孩子的请求)（2022.2济南十一校联考）So, I said to him, “Paul, I need to talk to Dad (我要和爸

41、爸谈谈). Can I tell you tomorrow morning?” “Thanks, Mom.” After talking with my husband, we agreed to let him go but make him earn the money (我们同意让他去，但他要自己挣钱). “Paul, Dad and I thought about your trip. Yes, in principle its okay for us(原则上我们同意). But you have to earn it. You said that you have more than

42、 a month to pay the money.” “Thanks a lot, Mom. I shall surely save the money well before the due date (我一定会在期限前把钱存够).” 2、成长中1) 爷爷告诉孩子如何做I looked at him doubtfully and asked, “Do I have to water it every day? What will happen (会发生什么)?” He nodded to me with encouragement (鼓励地向我点点头), “Yes, every day,

43、dear.”2) 朋友之间的交流She then shared with me something very moving (和我分享了感人的某事). “Do you remember the first day of school when you came over(当你走过来) and sat down with me during lunch? ” she asked. “Of course (当然)! Why do you ask (你为什么问)? ” I replied.3、 成长后：家长表扬孩子)：Smiling, my dad started, “I am proud that

44、 you have accomplished your first job(我为你完成了第一份工作而自豪). It is something worth celebrating (值得庆贺).” (2021.6浙江高考高分作文)六、个人成长主题升华句1. From that day on, I grew bigger and more real. By working hard (通过努力工作), I learned to be responsible, contributing my fair share to my family (为我家贡献我应出的一份力). (2021.6 浙江高考)2

45、. Not only did this experience strengthen his positive attitude (这次经历不仅强化了他的积极态度), it also offered him a chance to learning the meaning of hard work. (2022.2 济南十一校联考)3. It turned out to be a rewarding experience (这证明是一次有益的经历), where he not only harvest joy, but also learned the value of efforts. (20

46、22.2 济南十一校联考)4. One thing is for certainhe earned the trip through his hard work and benefited from this experience (从这次经历中受益), which will go a long way with him. (2022.2 济南十一校联考)5. It is through this embarrassing experience (是通过这次尴尬的经历:强调句型) that I learn not to escape from my duty and keep a record

47、 of my money, valuing every cent. (2022.3燕博园定制)6. But for the hard work to pay off my credit debts, I wouldnt have made the best of that painful experience (不可能充分利用那次痛苦的经历) and learned how to manage my money wisely(明智地管理我的钱). 7. Thanks to the power of perseverance (多亏了毅力的力量), I understand that I, ev

48、en an ordinary person, can work wonders (创造奇迹). (2022.4 青岛一模) 8. It was hard work and determination that made me the master of my own destiny(正是努力工作和决心使我成为自己命运的主人), despite our appearance, especially my unique Cowboy.(2022.1 T8)周练24同类话题范文 I was given countless responsibilities along with my studies.

49、 I had to check students uniform, keep an alert mind for bullies, and maintain order when students queue up for meals. My energy and the excitement drained out of me as I realized that with a position comes burdens. As a result, my marks dropped dramatically and I eventually broke down. One day, I f

50、ound myself in the principals office, telling her with deep sorrow that I could no longer be the head girl. The principal listened attentively, her concern clearly written on her face. She put her hand on my shoulder and expressed her understanding. She suggested I turn to the former head girl and f

51、ind some assistants. I was doubtful at first, but my doubts vanished as the suggestions proved very helpful. Now I felt I would be able to do this and at the same time I was excellent at my studies. When you ask for power, you should be prepared to accept the responsibilities that come with it too.

52、周练26：同类话题范文At lunch, my friend Kate who had been invited came over to me, trying to show off. She said with pride, “Bridget's party will definitely be awesome!" I didn't look at Kate, because if I saw any pity in her eyes, I'd start crying so I pretended to look for something seemin

53、gly important in my backpack until she left. I hated Bridget, for she had made my life miserable. Why did I have to change myself to please her? As I changed classes, I averted（转移） my eyes from everyone I knew. I determined that I wouldn't pretend to be the one I wasn't. I was about to let i

54、t go when Bridget invited me as a substitute for a girl who couldnt come. After class, Bridget headed toward my line, weaving through the crowd. I pretended not to notice and looked straight ahead at the blackboard. I felt a hand on my arm. Bridget held out an invitation. “Will you come to my party?

55、" I looked at the small envelope, relishing（享受，憧憬） the moment. But my mind was a jumble（一团乱）. Now she wanted me to come to her party, but I was just filling a ce. "Take it," 1 thought. "You know you want to go." I hesitated and finally said no. I had already found the pleasu

56、re of being myself.适应性考试1： My heart was crazy with panic. I held on to the tree and shouted, “You cant cut it down!” But they didnt listen. Instead they called the police. Neighbors gathered and then came my parents. I begged my father to stop them, but in vain. My father got me down and took me hom

57、e. I could do nothing to save the tree. Hearing the sound of chain saws in the distance, I cried, and cried. I must have cried for two weeks straight. Then one evening my father handed me a painting. “I want the spirit of that tree to be with you always,” he said. There was my beautiful sycamore tree! Through the branches hed painted the fire of sunrise, and a tiny girl looking