高中英语外研版高中必修1Work-book-作文

1、WritingTeaching aim: To improve students writing ability.STEP1Analysis of students composition : 平均分 ： 分 最高分 ： 18分（罗婷婷） 最低分 ： 0 分 06分 ： 15人 612分 ： 14人 1218分：32人 19分以上： 0人 STEP2Writing Requirement. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry 最近来信，询问你今年寒假的安排。请根据以下要点，用英语回一封信，说明你的计划,并简述理由。内容： 1休息 2读书；3陪伴父母； 4参加社会活动。注意： 1. 词数100

2、左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）；2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：社会活动social activity 评分依据： 寒假计划：3分 休息：4分 读书：4分 陪伴父母：4分 参加社会活动：4分 适当的结尾：2分 书写：2分 过度和整体语言素养：2分 STEP3: Factors that affect your score: Show students some examples of your writing, and make a comparison between the good and the bad. Show students som

3、e sentences from their composition and correct some mistakes from their sentences.STEP4:Writing guideStep5：Show students a sample and guide students to find out the point score.Dear Henry, Im glad to receive your letter. I am writing to tell you my plan about my winter vacation. First of all, I need

4、 to have a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of senior high school. Of course, Ill do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. Besides, Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. Theyve done so much for me, you know. Lastly,Ill take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua Step6 Summary and homework R