高中英语写作示范课 完整版课件

1、English Composition Writing() Introducing the basic knowledge of English writing 英语写作基本知识介绍It affects our study.It has a bad effect / influence /impacton our study. 1. It effects our study.Revision: Correct the common mistakes we made last time.一、(词性)搭配2. In the other hands, 20% students dont agree

2、with it. On the other hand, 20% students dont agree with them. On the other hand, other students have different ideas.3.On the country, some student againsted the programme.On the contrary, some students are against the programme., some students are not in favour of this programme.Let the young/the

3、youth build up / gain self-confidence.4. Let the younger to find more self-confident.equip the young with self-confidenceHelp the young be more self-confident.二、高级(句式)There are 80% students who support the Super Girl.There are 80% students supporting the Super Girl.There are 80% students support the

4、 Super Girl.2.There have 80% students agree the Super Girl. It give the stage to young people to show our talents.80% students agree that the Super Girl provides young people with a stage (where they can demonstrate their talents).引导宾语从句引导定语从句Before or after writing you should consider this ASSESSME

5、NT.StructureIs the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?ContentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切题)?LanguageDoes the essay contain any linking words? Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）?

6、Guide:Make improvement by self-check.What makes a good essay?Question 1 A good essay is usually made up of a beginning paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph. A beginning paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Body para.S Supporting Paragraph 2 A concluding paragraphWhat makes a

7、good paragraph?Question 2A good paragraph is one that consists ofa topic sentence and supporting sentences. There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make their nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other species make their nests in holes in the ground. Ther

8、e are also varieties that do not live in groups at alltopic sentenceSupporting sentences I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a g

9、reat many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.Revision: some c

10、ommon linking words1.时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while 2.转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless.3.因果关系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that4.让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact tha

11、t5.递进关系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand6.条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 7.表 列 举：for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows8.表 总 结：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been state

12、dA good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.丰富多变句式的作用：利用不同的句型来表达同一个主题能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is ! How disappointed he was ! 感叹句强调句e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible. e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There co

13、mes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句省略句with短语 e.g.In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place

14、where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help at present.名词性从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm,

15、 we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.状语从句1. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (用倒装句)2. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (用强调句型) 3. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）Pr

16、actice 按要求转换句型（句意不变）Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 4. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)5. They sang and laughed as the

17、y went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)6. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, so

18、me supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.Practice makes perfect！ 某英文网

19、站正开展填报志愿时首先考虑专业还是学校的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，并将此文在该网站的BBS上发表。 首先选择专业首先选择学校 你的看法1可以学习自己感兴趣的东西；2便于将来从事自己喜爱的工作。1学习环境对人的成长很重要；2名牌大学的毕业生在求职时常会受到青睐。(内容由考生自己拟定) 注意：1词数不少于120个。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇：工作前景 job prospects Every student will be faced with the problem after the National College En

20、trance Examination: Should I choose a good major or a good university?（讨论型作文）第一段：句型模板Some people agree to NO. One, because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition.Guide:Some people think that A is right because .Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fa

21、ct that.Whats more.Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .（讨论型作文）第二段：句型模板On the other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think .But many more people dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that.On the contrary, some people hold that .Some peo

22、ple think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also. 提示：在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。（讨论型作文）第三段：提出自己的见解并加以论证In my opinion ，B is better than A. There is no doubt that .It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything has both its positive and negative

23、 sides. We should keep an open mind. As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally.I support A. The reason goes as follows: 1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. 3.Youd better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.Suggestions:Bye - bye!Thank you for your attention!Homework1.Review what we learnt today.2.Finish the composition and then hand in your exercise books by 6：00pm.One possible version: Every student will be faced with the problem after the National College Entrance Examina