2021年中考英语书面表达 写作技巧专项讲解课件

ReadingandWritingReadingandWritingteacherdoctorengineerscientistgrowupinthefuture achieveone’sdreamtravelaroundtheworld工程师实现梦想科学家在将来教师长大周游世界医生TranslatetheChineseintoEnglish.Gameteacher工程师实现梦想科学家在将来教师长大周游世界医生Let’sreadandwriteA.信息归纳（5分）：请阅读下面文章，完成表格。

Yourjuniorschoolyearsarecomingtoanend.Afterthisterm,youwillstudyinaseniorschool.Whatareyourexpectingfromseniorschool?Let’shearwhatsometeenreadersthinkthefuturewillbe.ChenGang,14,fromDongguan,GuangdongIhearthatalthoughSenior3isahardyear,Senior1andSenior2arelessstressful.Ihopethere’llbetimethentoenjoysports.

ZhouJie,16,fromHarbin,HelongjiangIreallyenjoyscience.IamalsointerestedinUFOs.I’mcrazyaboutmakingmodelplanes,althoughI’mnotverygoodbecauseIdon’treallyhavethescienceknowledge.I’lllearnmorescienceinseniorschool.Anyway,sometimeinthefutureI’mgoingtobuildanamazingmodelplanes!WangLin,15,fromXiamen,FujianIhopeIcanbetallerinseniorschool.Iamonly155cm.ManychildrengrowfasterinseniorschoolandIhopealso.Iwanttobe162cm.ButIamnotsure,sincemostgirlsinmyfamilydon’tgrowanytallerthan160cm.IhopeIamdifferent.ZhangChen,14,Puyan,HenanIexpectthatI’llmakemorefriendsinseniorschool.Istudyinamiddleschoolaffilitiatedto(’llmeetpeoplefromdifferentareas.Icanlearnnewthingsfromthem..Let’sreadandwriteChenGang,HowoldisChenGang?81.______________________________WhereisWangLinfrom?82.______________________________WhatdoesZhouJielike?83.______________________________What’sthenameoftheoldestkid?84.______________________________WhatdoesZhangChenhopetodo?85.______________________________InformationCard14yearsoldXiamen.Science.ZhouJie.Tomakemorefriendsinseniorschool.HowoldisChenGang?81.WhereB.书面表达（15分）：热门话题—“中国梦”。最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动，每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解。请写一篇80字左右的短文，说说班会的情况及自己的感受。内容要点：1.谈谈自己的梦想。2.为什么有这个梦想。3.如何实现自己的梦想。EveryonetalkedabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdream__________________________________B.书面表达（15分）：写作方法指导

一、审题，找要点。1．对中国梦的理解①2.自己的梦想②3.为什么有这个梦想③4.如何实现这个梦想④

最少要写到上述四点！二、怎样写？第一点：EveryonetalkedabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdreamwillcometrueinthefuture.第二点：Ialsotalkedaboutmyowndream.（过渡句子）Mydreamistobe____________.第三点：LetmetellyouwhyIhavethisdream?（过渡句子）____________.（可以多些几个原因来拓展字数，可以写一两件事来说明原因。）第四点：HowwillImakemydreamcometrue?（过渡句子）Iwill______________.（可以多写几条来拓展字数。）

结尾：IbelieveI’llbeagood…inthefuture.写作方法指导一、审题，找要点。范文

EveryonetalkedabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdreamwillcometrueinthefuture.Ialsotalkedaboutmyowndream.Mydreamistobeadoctor.LetmetellyouwhyIhavethisdream?WhenIwasinGradeSeven,Iwassickandoftentoseedoctors.Thedoctorswereveryfriendlytomeandtheyoftencheeredmeup.Withthehelpofthem,Iwasgettingbetter.NowI’mveryhealthy.SincethenIhavehopedtobecomeadoctor.HowwillImakemydreamcometrue?Iwillstudyhardtogetgoodgrades.I’llreadmorebooksaboutmedicine.IbelieveI’llbeagooddoctorinthefuture.范文EveryonetalkedaboLet’sreadandwriteA.信息归纳(5分)：阅读下面短文，完成表格。Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresources(资源)ontheearthgetfewerandfewer.Inordertoprotectthem,somethingmustbedone.Savewater.Wateristhesource（源泉)oflife.Nowater,nolife.Soit’sveryimportantforustodoso.Notonlyshouldweprotectdrinkingwaterandstoppollutingit,butalsomakefulluseofit.Saveelectricity:Itisveryimportant.Wecan’timaginewhatthelifewillbelikewithoutit.Everyoneshoulddohisbesttosaveelectricity.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightsorotherelectricmachineswhenwefinishworking.Saveforests:Theyareuseful.Pleasestopcuttingthemdownanduserecycledpaperinstead.Makeourworldagreenonetolivein.Recycleusefulrubbish.Plentyofrubbishcanberecycledlikecans,paper,bottles,andsoon.Wecansaveresourcesinthisway.

Let’sreadandwriteInformationCard

Howabouttheresourcesontheearth?81.____________________________.Howtosaveelectricitywhenwefinishworking?Turnoffthe82.______________________.Howtosavewater?Protectdrinkingwater,stoppolluting,andalso83._______________________.Howtodealwithusefulrubbish?84._______________________________.Howmanythingsmustbedone?85.___________________________.Getfewerandfewer lightsandmachinesmakefulluseofit

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HowabouttheB．书面表达（15分）2013年1月上旬，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重的污染。造成这一现象的主要的原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳，保护环境。从我们身边做起。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironment”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。内容包括：1.重要性：只有一个地球。2.主要问题：污染、致病、灾难。3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然。Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironment_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B．书面表达（15分）范文Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironmentWeallliveontheearth.Theearthisourhome.Wehaveonlyoneearth.Wemusttakecareofit.Itgivesusthebestenvironment.Ifweharmit,itwillbeangry.Andthenwehaveaterribleend.Therearethreeproblemsinourearth.,theyarepollution,disasterandillness.It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Sowemustplantmoretrees,protecttheflowersandtrees,saveenergy,reducethepollution.Weshouldaskourgovernmenttocontrolthepollutionfromthefactories.Protectthenatureisveryimportant.It’sourdutytokeepenvironmentcleanandtidy.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.范文Let’sDoSomethingtoS写

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一、审题，找要点。1．只有一个地球。（1）2．主要问题：污染、病、灾难。（2）3．停止污染，保护大自然的措施。（3）最少要写到这三点！二、怎

样写？开头：Weallliveontheearth.Theearthisourhome.第一点：Wehaveonlyonehome._______________________________.第二点：Therearethreeproblemsontheearth,theyare______________________.第三点：It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.（过渡句子）Sowemust__________________.(可以多写几条措施来拓展字数。)结尾：Ifeveryonemakeacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.写作方法指导一、审题，找要点。

1.读写综合要求先读后写。同学们要解答好A部分的InformationCard，首先要阅读当中的问题，然后带着问题读材料，最后进行回答。填写时要注意写的格式、字母的大小写、词数的限定等。2.中考的书面表达评分一般以点为主，同学们要想在书面表达中取得高分，在下笔之前，一定要明确当中需要包含几个点，然后选择用于表达这些内容的语言，切忌漏点，也不能随意发挥，加进无关的内容。3.要注意找出书面表达的要求和材料的不同点，要适当的提炼材料中的信息及要点，但不是原封不动地照搬抄材料。而是要“聪明”地“抄”。Summary1.读写综合要求先读后写。同学们HomeworkReadandwrite.A.信息归纳（5分）：请阅读下面短文，完成表格。SydneyisontheeasternseaboardofAustralia,nearthePacificOcean.SydneyisthemostcrowedcityinAustralia.Itisoftenknownasthehostoftheyear2000OlympicGames.SinceSydneybeatBeijingin1993fortherighttothehosttheMillennium（千年）Olympic,millionsofdollarshavebeenspentonthe110,000-seaOlympicstadiumknownastheStadiumAustralia.ThethreeoutstandingaspectsofSydneyareitsexcellentsandybeaches,friendlyandmulticulturalresidentsandatmosphere.Theparticulartouristattractions（旅游名胜）inSydneyareSydneyOperaHouse,SydneyHarborBridgeandBondibeach.SydneyOperaHousewhichisforboththepoorandtherichlookslikeashipsailing.SydneyHarborBridgewhichisknownas“thecoathanger（衣架）”isthelargestsinglearch（拱形）bridgeintheworld.InformationCardHomeworkReadandwrite.Thelocation81._____________________________ThemoneyspentontheStadiumAustralia82._____________________________ThethreeaspectsofSydney83.______________________________TheparticulartouristattractioninSydney84.___________________________Thelargestsinglearchbridgeintheworld85.___________________________Thelocation81.______________B．书面表达（15分）

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1．有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行；

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3．你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么？.

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2021年中考英语书面表达写作技巧专项讲解课件Thanksandhaveagoodtime!Thanksandhaveagoodtime!ReadingandWritingReadingandWritingteacherdoctorengineerscientistgrowupinthefuture achieveone’sdreamtravelaroundtheworld工程师实现梦想科学家在将来教师长大周游世界医生TranslatetheChineseintoEnglish.Gameteacher工程师实现梦想科学家在将来教师长大周游世界医生Let’sreadandwriteA.信息归纳（5分）：请阅读下面文章，完成表格。

Yourjuniorschoolyearsarecomingtoanend.Afterthisterm,youwillstudyinaseniorschool.Whatareyourexpectingfromseniorschool?Let’shearwhatsometeenreadersthinkthefuturewillbe.ChenGang,14,fromDongguan,GuangdongIhearthatalthoughSenior3isahardyear,Senior1andSenior2arelessstressful.Ihopethere’llbetimethentoenjoysports.

ZhouJie,16,fromHarbin,HelongjiangIreallyenjoyscience.IamalsointerestedinUFOs.I’mcrazyaboutmakingmodelplanes,althoughI’mnotverygoodbecauseIdon’treallyhavethescienceknowledge.I’lllearnmorescienceinseniorschool.Anyway,sometimeinthefutureI’mgoingtobuildanamazingmodelplanes!WangLin,15,fromXiamen,FujianIhopeIcanbetallerinseniorschool.Iamonly155cm.ManychildrengrowfasterinseniorschoolandIhopealso.Iwanttobe162cm.ButIamnotsure,sincemostgirlsinmyfamilydon’tgrowanytallerthan160cm.IhopeIamdifferent.ZhangChen,14,Puyan,HenanIexpectthatI’llmakemorefriendsinseniorschool.Istudyinamiddleschoolaffilitiatedto(’llmeetpeoplefromdifferentareas.Icanlearnnewthingsfromthem..Let’sreadandwriteChenGang,HowoldisChenGang?81.______________________________WhereisWangLinfrom?82.______________________________WhatdoesZhouJielike?83.______________________________What’sthenameoftheoldestkid?84.______________________________WhatdoesZhangChenhopetodo?85.______________________________InformationCard14yearsoldXiamen.Science.ZhouJie.Tomakemorefriendsinseniorschool.HowoldisChenGang?81.WhereB.书面表达（15分）：热门话题—“中国梦”。最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动，每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解。请写一篇80字左右的短文，说说班会的情况及自己的感受。内容要点：1.谈谈自己的梦想。2.为什么有这个梦想。3.如何实现自己的梦想。EveryonetalkedabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdream__________________________________B.书面表达（15分）：写作方法指导

一、审题，找要点。1．对中国梦的理解①2.自己的梦想②3.为什么有这个梦想③4.如何实现这个梦想④

最少要写到上述四点！二、怎样写？第一点：EveryonetalkedabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdreamwillcometrueinthefuture.第二点：Ialsotalkedaboutmyowndream.（过渡句子）Mydreamistobe____________.第三点：LetmetellyouwhyIhavethisdream?（过渡句子）____________.（可以多些几个原因来拓展字数，可以写一两件事来说明原因。）第四点：HowwillImakemydreamcometrue?（过渡句子）Iwill______________.（可以多写几条来拓展字数。）

结尾：IbelieveI’llbeagood…inthefuture.写作方法指导一、审题，找要点。范文

EveryonetalkedabouthisunderstandingoftheChineseDream.Weallbelievethatthisdreamwillcometrueinthefuture.Ialsotalkedaboutmyowndream.Mydreamistobeadoctor.LetmetellyouwhyIhavethisdream?WhenIwasinGradeSeven,Iwassickandoftentoseedoctors.Thedoctorswereveryfriendlytomeandtheyoftencheeredmeup.Withthehelpofthem,Iwasgettingbetter.NowI’mveryhealthy.SincethenIhavehopedtobecomeadoctor.HowwillImakemydreamcometrue?Iwillstudyhardtogetgoodgrades.I’llreadmorebooksaboutmedicine.IbelieveI’llbeagooddoctorinthefuture.范文EveryonetalkedaboLet’sreadandwriteA.信息归纳(5分)：阅读下面短文，完成表格。Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresources(资源)ontheearthgetfewerandfewer.Inordertoprotectthem,somethingmustbedone.Savewater.Wateristhesource（源泉)oflife.Nowater,nolife.Soit’sveryimportantforustodoso.Notonlyshouldweprotectdrinkingwaterandstoppollutingit,butalsomakefulluseofit.Saveelectricity:Itisveryimportant.Wecan’timaginewhatthelifewillbelikewithoutit.Everyoneshoulddohisbesttosaveelectricity.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightsorotherelectricmachineswhenwefinishworking.Saveforests:Theyareuseful.Pleasestopcuttingthemdownanduserecycledpaperinstead.Makeourworldagreenonetolivein.Recycleusefulrubbish.Plentyofrubbishcanberecycledlikecans,paper,bottles,andsoon.Wecansaveresourcesinthisway.

Let’sreadandwriteInformationCard

Howabouttheresourcesontheearth?81.____________________________.Howtosaveelectricitywhenwefinishworking?Turnoffthe82.______________________.Howtosavewater?Protectdrinkingwater,stoppolluting,andalso83._______________________.Howtodealwithusefulrubbish?84._______________________________.Howmanythingsmustbedone?85.___________________________.Getfewerandfewer lightsandmachinesmakefulluseofit

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HowabouttheB．书面表达（15分）2013年1月上旬，全国中东部地区17省市持续雾霾，陷入大范围的重度和严重的污染。造成这一现象的主要的原因是工厂排出的废气和汽车尾气等。绿色低碳，保护环境。从我们身边做起。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，以“Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironment”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。内容包括：1.重要性：只有一个地球。2.主要问题：污染、致病、灾难。3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然。Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironment_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B．书面表达（15分）范文Let’sDoSomethingtoSaveOurEnvironmentWeallliveontheearth.Theearthisourhome.Wehaveonlyoneearth.Wemusttakecareofit.Itgivesusthebestenvironment.Ifweharmit,itwillbeangry.Andthenwehaveaterribleend.Therearethreeproblemsinourearth.,theyarepollution,disasterandillness.It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Sowemustplantmoretrees,protecttheflowersandtrees,saveenergy,reducethepollution.Weshouldaskourgovernmenttocontrolthepollutionfromthefactories.Protectthenatureisveryimportant.It’sourdutytokeepenvironmentcleanandtidy.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.范文Let’sDoSomethingtoS写

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一、审题，找要点。1．只有一个地球。（1）2．主要问题：污染、病、灾难。（2）3．停止污染，保护大自然的措施。（3）最少要写到这三点！二、怎

样写？开头：Weallliveontheearth.Theearthisourhome.第一点：Wehaveonlyonehome._______________________________.第二点：Therearethreeproblemsontheearth,theyare______________________.第三点：It’sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.（过渡句子）Sowemust__________________.(可以多写几条措施来拓展字数。)结尾：Ifeveryonemakeacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theearthwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.写作方法指导一、审题，找要点。

1.读写综合要求先读后写。同学们要解答好A部分的InformationCard，首先要阅读当中的问题，然后带着问题读材料，最后进行回答。填写时要注意写的格式、字母的大小写、词数的限定等。2.中考的书面表达评分一般以点为主，同学们要想在书面表达中取得高分，在下笔之前，一定要明确当中需要包含几个点，然后选择用于表达这些内容的语言，切忌漏点，也不能随意发挥，加进无关的内容。3.要注意找出书面表达的要求和材料的不同点，要适当的提炼材料中的信息及要点，但不是原封不动地照搬抄材料。而是要“聪明”地“抄”。Summar