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刘蕾小作文字数要求：100words所占分值：10分建议时间：20分钟

LastFridayyoutookaninterviewforthefurtherpostgraduatestudyforyourMaster'sdegreeinpsychologyinHarvardUniversity.Writealettrtotheprofessorswhoconversedwithyouto1expressyourgratitudeinbrief2explain2/3reasonsfortheappreciationDearprofessors,目的段细节段（2-3个原因）期待段Yourssincerely,LiMing小作文–目的段Dearprofessors,ThisisaletterfromLiMing,anintervieweeofMasterofPsychologyinHarvarduniversitylastFriday.anChinesestudentwhoparticipatedin/attendedaninterviewyouresteemeduniversity小作文–目的段Dearprofessors,ThisisaletterfromLiMing,anintervieweeofMasterofPsychologyinHarvarduniversitylastFriday.Iamwritingtoextendmyappreciationforthevaluable/invaluable/preciouschancegiventome.小作文–目的段表达感激Iamwritingthisletterto____________showhowgratefulIam…expressmygratefulthanks…expressthefullmeasureofmygratitude…1情况描写为什么写这封信2采取行动我们该干嘛小作文–细节段小作文–细节段感激的原因1亲切的态度Intheinterview,asanexpert/authorityinpsychology,youwerekind/friendly/generousenoughastotalkwithmelikeafriend2提供建议

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小作文–细节段感激的原因1亲切的态度Intheinterview,asanexpert/authorityinpsychology,youwerekind/friendly/generousenoughastotalkwithmelikeafriend,whicheasedmypressureandanxieties.2提供建议3给予鼓励

小作文–细节段感激的原因1亲切的态度2提供建议Whatismore,varioususefulsuggestionswereprovidedtomeconcerningmyacademicperformance,小作文–细节段感激的原因1亲切的态度2提供建议Whatismore,varioususefulsuggestionswereprovidedtomeconcerningmyacademicperformance,whichwouldcontributetomyfutureimprovements.小作文–细节段感激的原因1亲切的态度2提供建议3给予鼓励Mostimportantly,yourgenerousencouragementstrengthened/boostedmyconfidence,小作文–细节段感激的原因1亲切的态度2提供建议3给予鼓励Mostimportantly,yourgenerousencouragementstrengthened/boostedmyconfidence,whichwouldinspiremetopursuesuccessinthefuture.小作文–期待段重申感激Isincerelyappreciateyourkindnessandconsideration,andlookingforwardtocommunicatingwithyouinthefuture.大作文字数要求：160-200words所占分值：20分建议时间：40分钟35分钟审题1分钟12分钟2分钟234提纲写作检查审题要点1看懂2引申3总结正确审题图片，文字核心词社会化，群体化WhoWhatWhereAttendtheuniversityentranceexamAnagedmanintheclassroomAyoungstudent1看懂老头参加高考在教室里

在不同年纪阶段的人2引申学习新知识在竞争的社会3总结学无止境.考研作文结构描写图片寓意说明原因解释举例说明建议措施是什么为什么怎么样图画描写2结尾套话4点明主题31提示语翻译331句（可无）1-2句1句1句（可无）描写图片段描写图片段第一句：不管什么年纪，学习好！Inacompetitivesociety,regardlessofage,nothingismorebeneficialthanlearning

soastoachievegreatersuccess.

点明主题31描写图片段第二句：宏观概述一个老头和一个年轻人坐在教室里，参加高考Asissubtlyrevealedintheportrayal,sittinginthebrightclassroomareanagedmanandayoungstudent,attendingtheuniversityentranceexam.第三句：细节描述图画描写32描写图片段第二句：宏观概述第三句：细节描述和年轻人一样，老人全神贯注，笑。Justliketheyoungster,thebaldingandgrey-hairedelderlymanfullyconcentratesonthetest,withaconfidentsmileonhisface.图画描写32描写图片段第四句：nevertoooldtolearnThecaptionunderthepicturereadsthatnevertoooldtolearn.提示语33描写图片段这个图片传递了一个有意义的信息Examiningthepicturesymbolicallyleadsustoathought-provokingconclusionthat学无止境。knowledgeisinfinite.结尾套话34原因分析段（消极类）举例说明段（积极类）利弊分析段（利弊类）扩展段第一句：在竞争社会，无论什么年纪的人都应该学习新知识Inafast-pacedsociety,nevershouldpeopleofdifferentagesstoppursuingnewknowledge.扩展段寓意说明31第一，学习可以扩展视野。Foronething,learningleadsustoabroaderhorizon.第二，学习保证我们跟上社会发展。扩展段原因+论证32第一，学习可以扩展视野。Foronething,learningleadsustoabroaderhorizon.Forinstance,foreignculturesandhistoriesaredeliveredinanEnglishclassroom,andlearningtocookenrichesourdailylife.第二，学习保证我们跟上社会发展。扩展段原因+论证32第一，学习可以扩展视野。第二，学习保证我们跟上社会发展。Foranother,studyenablesustokeepupwithsocialadvancement.Consequently,hardlywillwebeeliminatedbythesociety,扩展段原因+论证32第一，学习可以扩展视野。第二，学习保证我们跟上社会发展。Foranother,studyenablesustokeepupwithsocialadvancement.Consequently,hardlywillwebeeliminatedbythesociety,andwilltheelderlyfeelisolated.扩展段原因+论证32第一，学习可以扩展视野。第二，学习保证我们跟上社会发展。Foranother,studyenablesustokeepupwithsocialadvancement.Failingtousecomputers,manymiddle-agedpeoplecannotmeettheworkrequirementsinaninformationera,扩展段原因+论证32第一，学习可以扩展视野。第二，学习保证我们跟上社会发展。Foranother,studyenablesustokeepupwithsocialadvancement.Failingtousecomputers,manymiddle-agedpeoplecannotmeettheworkrequirementsinaninformationera,andarereplacedbyyoungergenerationsasaresult.扩展段原因+论证32Take_____asanexample.Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingoneof_____,Isuppose,wouldsuffice扩展段举例论证33鲁迅晚年都在学习，掌握多门语言Beinginfluentinseverallanguages,LuXun,themosthonoredandrespectedwriterinChinesehistory,evendevotedhislastyearsintostudy.扩展段举例论证33老年人也要学会使用冰箱，洗衣机等才能保证生活质量。Onlybylearningtousemodernfacilitiessuchasfridgeandwashingmachinecantheelderlyensuretheirlifequality.扩展段举例论证33正如一个中国古代诗人所说，学无止境AsanancientChinesepoetputsit:“Knowledgeisinfinite.”

扩展段名言论证34采取措施2过渡句31表明期待331句1-2句1句建议措施段积极：继续发扬Accordingly,itishightimethatalearningspiritshouldbeenhancedamongpeople,eventheagedones.建议措施段过渡句31个人措施父母措施学校措施政府措施社会措施建议措施段采