2023年CET4大学英语四级备考作文

V作文篇【题型概述】四级考试中作文占试卷总分的1５%，旨在考察学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力。规定考生在30分钟内写出一篇不少于12０词的短文，做到“内容切题,表达清楚,意义连贯，文理通顺,语言对的”。作文内容涉及平常生活、科技、社会、文化等方面的一般知识,通常由汉语提纲、图表、关键词等形式加以限定。四级作文评分标准：四级作文采用总体评分（GlｏbalSｃoring)方法，从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判,既考虑作文是否切题和充足表达思想,也考虑语言错误是否导致理解障碍。阅卷人员就总的印象给出分数,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。１3-15分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。（几乎全对)10-1２分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。（对中有错）7－9分:基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相称多，其中有一些是严重错误。（对错相称)4-６分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误。（错中有对）1-3分:条理不清，思绪紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。(几乎全错）0分:白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。注：字数局限性应酌情扣分。【解题思绪】作文是整个考试过程中规定考生一方面完毕的题目,因此考生须注意把握好答题节奏。考虑届时间紧张,不推荐考生打草稿再誊写的答题方式，建议考生采用以下答题环节:1）在１分钟内完毕审题，拟定文章思绪。2）在头脑里大体拟出文章提纲。3)下笔成文。此外,考生须注意以下事项:审题细致：内容紧扣主题，涵盖提纲要点。表达清楚：结构一目了然，句子完整，句子间逻辑明朗、层次清楚。语法对的:用词得体、恰当，句法结构对的，避免重大语言错误。定位合理：7—９分只需切题和大体对的;10—12分需少犯语法错误，且具有一定的句式变化；13—１5分需要内容丰富,语言准确，有亮点。卷面整洁:笔迹清楚，尽量避免错误连笔、草书或涂改。一定使用黑色笔迹的钢笔或中性笔书写。【考点剖析】很多时候，真题最能显示命题规律和趋势。回顾历年四级作文真题，其话题侧重考生熟悉的校园热点和社会热点,题型大至可分为以下5类:观点对比型此类作文题目规定学生针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其利弊，或通过比较两种不同观点来阐明自己的观点，表白自己对该事物或现象的见解。如:ＳpringＦestivaｌGaｌaonＣCＴV(2０2３年1２月CEＴ-4)１.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会２．但有些人提出取消春节晚会3．我的见解ＳhｏuldtheUnｉveｒｓｉｔyＣamｐｕsBeOｐentoTｏｕｒism?(2023年１２月CET－4）１.名校校园正成为旅游新热点2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们见解不同3.我认为……IsａTesｔｏｆSpokｅnEnglisｈＮeｃessａｒy?（2０23年6月CEＴ-4）１.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是……2．也有人持不批准见……3．我的见解和打算ReadiｎgSelectiｖｅlｙｏrＥxtensively(19９9年6月ＣET-4)1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的见解B.问题阐释型（modeｌtest7,8)该类型作文的基本模式是，提出一种现象，规定对其加以分析、或阐释该现象带来的问题，并提出解决方法。重心通常在对现象的分析这一环节,规定对问题的成因或后果做比较具体的阐释。如：CrｅatｉnｇaGreｅnＣaｍpus（２023年１2月ＣEＴ-4)１.建设绿色校园十分重要2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境3.为了建设绿色校园我们应当……FreｅAdmissｉｏｎｔoＭuseumｓ(２０23年6月CＥT-4)1．越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么2.也会带来一些问题3.你的见解LimitingtheUseｏfDispoｓalBags(202３年１2月CET-4)１.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛地使用2.导致的问题3.限制使用的意义WhａtEｌｅｃtiveｓtoChoose（2023年12月CＥT-４)１.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2.学生由于各种因素选择了不同的选修课3.以你自己为例……Ｃ.图表描写型(4，９）四级写作规定单纯描写的也许性不大,但完全也许结合说明、议论等多种体裁进行考察。图表描写型作文题目规定学生看懂图表含义,描写图表呈现的内容，分析图表所表现出的问题或规律；最后得出结论或对其趋势做出预测。如：StuｄｅntUseofComputｅrｓ（20２3年6月CET-4)1.上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间:19９０年(2hｏurs）、1995年（4hｏuｒｓ)、２023年（14hourｓ),请描述其变化；2.请说明发生这些变化的因素（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）;3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。D.图片描述型这一类型的作文一方面规定考生一方面要简短描述图片内容,找出图片中的重点。其实,规定考生能就突出的这一重点发表自己的见解。如modｅltｅst２的作文题:根据规定，可以列出如下Outｌine：第一段：简短描述图片内容,引出主题:学习基本技能重要第二段:多角度出发，论述为什么要学习基本技能。第三段：再次呼应主题，强调其重要性。E.分析型（moｄeltest6）这一类考题,规定考生能理解某一观点及其引申出的主题,做出进一步的阐述。其特点通常为onｓth．如６中Onｍaiｎtaｉniniｇtrust翻译成中文为：论建立信任。审题的环节应当是:为什么要建立信任?由于要维持一段良好的人际关系。也就是建立信任的重要性。如何才干建立信任？这就是本文的主体部分how规定考生能从多角度出发，论述自己的对于如何建立信任的见解。最后，总结全文,再次突出其重要性。【谋篇布局】写作文,谋篇布局非常重要：如何提出问题，如何说明前因后果，如何承上启下，又如何下结论，提建议,表达自己的见解。每一种类型的作文都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。这就像画一棵大树。整体的框架句型好比一棵树的大树干和大树枝;段落中用于扩展句子的连接用语,好比大树枝上的小枝条(如举例说明、逐项阐释、描述图表等)；而文章的具体内容就是叶子、花或果实。假如能把握四级作文的基本命脉，熟记几套不同的框架句型，应试时就能花更多心思在内容上，使其丰富、充实,并尽量避免语言错误。尽管添加的叶子也许有枯萎的，花也不很美丽，但掌握了文章谋篇布局的规律,有了框架句子作底，好比一棵大树的枝干已竖于眼前，写作时就能从被动到积极，把“望而生畏”的作文变成轻松快乐的“填空练习”。基于上述对作文题型的划分，以下分别对每种题型的常用句式予以归纳，并给出了模版示例,供参考:观点对比型作文常用句式开篇句型：1)Reｃentlytｈｅproblemｏf_＿_____＿ｈaｓcａｕsedwiｄepｕｂlicconcern．Ｏpinionsvaryｆroｍpersｏntopｅrsoｎ.２)Ｔheｒｅisｍuｃｈｄisａｇｒeemｅnｔ/arａgiｎgdｅｂate/anargｕｍｅntamｏnｇpeoplｅconcernｉng/over／asｔo/on____＿__＿_.3)Nｏｗadays,thｅreisagrowingｃoｎｃerｎｏver________,whileｐｅｏpleａｒedividｅdｏntｈequestioｎasｔｏwhethｅr…４)Whenaskｅdａbout_____＿_＿_，differenｔpｅｏplewillｏffeｒdifferentaｎswers.5)Ｔheissueｏfwhethｅr＿_______＿_hasbeeｎwiｄｅｌyarguｅd／debａｔeｄcurrently．6)Inｒｅcenｔlyyｅａrｓ，tｈeissueof＿＿____＿＿＿hasbeenｂroughtｔｏｐublｉcattｅnｔion,ｂuｔattｉｔudeｓtowaｒdsiｔdifｆerfroｍpeｒsｏnｔoperｓon.陈述正方观点的句型:1)Oｂvｉｏuｓly,totｈegeneralpubｌic/ｔoｔhemaｊoｒityofpｅoｐｌｅ,＿＿____＿___．２)Sｏｍepｅopleａｒgue/suｇｇeｓｔ/ａppreciａte/ｍａintainthat_＿＿＿__＿_.3)Ｓｏmepeopleａrｅinclineｄｔo/tｅｎdtoｔhinkthａt＿＿__＿_＿＿.４)Ｔｈoｓｅwhｏａdvocate/ａrｅinfａvｏｒoｆ_＿_______ｂeｌieveｔｈat＿__＿____＿．5)Theｒecanbeｎodｏubｔthaｔ__＿＿___＿_ｈasitsaｄvantages/pｏsitiveｅfｆｅcts.6)Itgoeswｉthoutsayｉngthattｈisｂenｅfｉtsuｓｉnmanywayｓ/asｐeｃｔｓ.Firstly,__＿___;seconｄｌy，______；lastly，＿_＿＿_＿__.陈述反方观点的句型：1）Howｅｖｅr,noteｖeryｏｎeｓharesｔheopｉｎioｎ.Ｔhｏｓｅwhocrｉticizｅ/objｅｃttｏ/oｐpoｓe_＿＿__＿_deemthaｔ_＿＿_____.2)Hｏｗeveｒ/But/Yｅｔ／Neveｒtheless/Whileoｔherpｅoplehｏldadｉffｅrentpoiｎtoｆvｉeｗ.Ｔheｙinｓisｔ/ａｒgｕe/prefer／claｉｍ／beliｅvethａt____＿＿＿_.3)Ontheｃontrarｙ/Inｃontrast,thｅrｅareｓtillmaｎypeoｐlewhoｄonotagree,ａndtｈeytｈｉｎk___＿____isabetterｃhｏice．4）Buｔwhiｌｅwｅadｍｉｔｔheaｄvantagesoｆ______ｗｅｃannoｔigｎoｒeitsdｉsaｄvantａges.Ｆｏroｎething,______＿_;forａｎoｔher,___＿_＿＿_.5)Meaｎwhｉｌｅ,supeｒioras＿___＿＿__ｉs,therｅexｉstsomeｓiｄe-effectswｈichweshoｕldpaycloｓeatteｎｔionｔｏ/beawareｏf.６）Hｏweveｒ,ｔheｎegaｔｉveaｓpecｔsof_____＿__areaｌsoappareｎt／obvious/ｅｖident.Tobｅgiｎwｉth,____＿＿__.Ｔomakematｔerswｏrsｅ,________．Wｏrstoｆall,__＿______.结论句型:1)Inｍyopiｎｉon／Aｓformｅ/Froｍmyｐointoｆvieｗ/AsfaｒａｓIａmｃｏncｅrned,ｂｏthsidesarepａrｔｌyｒiｇｈt/ｔheｒｅｉssｏmetrｕthinｂothsideｓ.2）Toｍe,theｆｏrｍer（／latter)opinioｎismoreattraｃtｉveinｔhａt__________＿_．3)Formypaｒt，Ｉtｈinktheadvantagｅｓoutwｅigｈtheｄisadｖａntagｅs.4)Takｉngｉｎtoａｃcountａllthｅsｅfａctｏrs,Iaminfavoｒｏf/onthesｉdeoｆ_＿＿＿＿____＿_.5)Ｆromwhａthaｓｂeenｄisｃｕssedabｏｖe,wemayrｅasonablycｏmeto/ｄｒawtheｃｏnｃｌusionｔhat__＿__＿____＿．6)Ｉnspｉteofaｌlｔheｐroblｅｍｓ,Ｉｓtillhold_＿_＿＿_＿hasmoreadｖantagestｈanｄisａdvaｎtaｇes．模版示例:Foｒｍanｙｙｅaｒs,ｔｈeｒｅ’sgrｏｗｉnｇconｃernover____＿＿_______,.Peｏｐlｅhoｌddｉffｅrｅｎtideａｓfｒoｍdiffeｒentangｌeｓ．Eｖenamｏngtｈoｓｅ＿＿___＿＿_＿__＿_tｈeｒｅｉsnｏｃompletｅagrｅｅｍｅntastowhetｈeｒ__＿______＿__＿__＿___＿＿_.Ｆorｓomｅ,itis___＿___＿.Ｏtｈｅrｓseｅmｔobelievethatiｔiｓ_______＿,andstresｓtheinfｌuｅncｅof_＿___＿_＿__＿_upoｎ＿_＿_________.Tｈeｙmaintainthａt__＿_＿_＿＿___＿＿＿__＿__＿＿＿___＿____.Aｓfarasmｙopiｎioniscｏncerneｄ,ｏnlyａftｅrwehavetakｅnintocoｎsideraｔｉoｎalｌasｐectｓｏfthｅprｏblｅmcaｎwemakｅｔherigｈtｄeｃiｓｉon．Iftｈｏｓeｗhoargueagainst＿＿_＿_____＿_＿arecｏrreｃt,ｔhepｒoblｅmsｔhｅｙmentiｏncａnnotbeiｇnoｒed.Ｔｏfinｄasoluｔion,____＿___muｓｔpayclosｅａtｔｅnｔiontothｅｓｅprｏbｌeｍs.问题阐释型作文常用句式开篇句型:１)Cｕrrentｌy,ｔhｅｐrｏｂｌemof____＿＿_＿_＿_＿hasａｒouｓed/cａpｔurｅd/ｄrawn／caughｔｗoｒｌdwidｅattention.2)Itｉsundeniａbｌe/Ｔｈereiｓnodeｎyingthefactthaｔ__________haｓbecoｍetｈｅutmostconｃernamonｇpeopleｎｏｗadａys．3）Ｉnthepasｔｄecaｄｅ／feｗyeａrstherｅhasbｅeｎａgrｏｗｉnｇtendencyｔhat＿___＿＿___.4)Noｗadaｙs,anｉｎcreasingnumbeｒofpeｏｐlecｏmetｏreａlｉzetheimｐoｒtanceof__＿＿________＿.5）Inrecentyearｓ,ｍaｎｙｃitｉeｓ/ｎatｉonｓ／peｏplｅhavｅbeｅnfacｅd/troｕbｌeｄwｉththeｓｅriｏusprobｌeｍｏｆ___＿____＿__.6)＿____＿_＿___＿isverｙcoｍｍonlysｅｅninouｒlifｅ,andｍoreandｍoｒｅattentｉｏnhａsbｅeｎfocｕsｅdｕpｏnthｅｐroblemｏf_________＿__.阐释因素或后果的句型：1）Ｉｔｉsnoeasｙjobtoｆiｎdoｕtthereａsonsfｏrtｈｅproｂlem,wｈｉchinvoｌveｓｓeveraｌdiffｅｒｅｎtfaｃtorｓ．Ontheｏnehand,__＿_____＿_＿____．Oｎｔheotherｈand,_____＿_＿___＿___.Finallｙ,__＿_＿___＿______＿_＿_＿__.2)Anuｍｂeｒoｆfactorｓcｏｕldacｃｏuntfortheｃhａnge/ｄecreaｓe/increaｓe/succｅsｓ／ｆａiluｒe／ｄｅveｌopｍenｔin＿_________.Firsｔ,__＿__＿____.Morｅovｅr,_________.Lastbｕtｎｏtleast，__＿__________＿_＿_＿＿___.3)Tｈereasoｎsbｅhinｄthｉsｐheｎomenoncanbelisｔeｄasfoｌlows.Fｏronethｉng,___＿_________.Foranｏther,_＿________＿___＿_.4)Ｔheｍoｓtprｉｍaｒyｒeａsonｉsthat_＿＿＿＿__________，and_______＿_ｉsａｌsopaｒtｌｙrespｏｎsibｌｅforｔheｐrobｌｅm．5）Clearｌy,ｉfweａrebliｎｄtｏ/turｎaｄｅaｆeartothｅprobｌem,theconseqｕeｎcesof___＿_____＿_＿ｗoｕldbeseｒｉoｕs.6)Theimmｅdiateresuｌtｉtprｏdｕcesis___＿＿____＿_,andaｎyperｓonwhoigｎoｒesiｔｗｏuｌdpayaheaｖｙｐriｃｅ.结论句型：１）Itiｓｈightimｅthａtｗeｆigｕreｄoutwaystodealwｉthtｈeprｏｂleｍ.Ｈereａresomemeａｓuresthaｔmighｔbｅtakeniｍmｅdiaｔely.2）Byandlaｒｇe,theｒeisnｏeasyapｐｒoacｈtothisiｓsue,ｂut＿＿_＿______mｉghtbeheｌpful/ｂeneficial/ofsomｅhelp.3)Aｓthiｓpｒobｌemisveｒｙcomplicａted，pｅoplｅcａnｈardlyrｅlyｏnonewａｙｔosolveｉｔcｏｍpletｅly.Bｕｔonｌｙｗhｅnwe__＿______ｃanｗe___＿_＿__＿___．4)Itｉｓhopedｔhaｔｇrｅａtｅfｆorｔsshoｕｌdbemadeｔｏcontrol／promotｅｔheｇｒowthof＿__＿___＿____．Ｆｏｒexａmplｅ,bｙdoing_____＿____，wｅcａnnoｔoｎlｙ_____＿______,butalsｏ__＿__＿__＿__＿_.５)Tｈeｒeisnｏdeｎyｉngthatｃonsiderableａtteｎｔｉｏnmｕstbeｐaｉdtothｅsｈortage/ｄecreaｓe／change/decｌｉneof__＿____＿__.6）Alｌｉｎall，ｗedonotｈaｖeaperfｅctsoｌutｉoｎatｐresｅnt，buｔaslｏngaswｅdｏｉtｗｉｔhｏurbrａinsaｎdhａnｄs,wewiｌlreｓoｌvetheproｂlemeventｕａｌly.模版示例:＿________＿__hasbｅcomeaseriousｐrobleｍｗehavetofａｃｅ.Althoｕghiｔｈasbrouｇhtconvenienceｔous,maｎypeoplehａvebegｕｎtorealizethatitisthesｏurcｅoftｒoubleａswｅll.Thecausesｆortｈatarecoｍpleｘ.Soｍｅａttrｉbｕｔｅittｏ__＿_____＿____＿＿__＿.Othｅｒspｌａceｔheblaｍeoｎ___＿__＿＿＿＿_＿_＿_____.Ｓtｉｌlotｈerscompｌainof_＿____________＿____.Inmyｏpiｎiｏn,ｐｅｒhapsｔｈepriｎｃｉpａlｒeasonisｔhat_＿____＿＿__＿__________＿___＿＿_．Ｈowever,itｓeｅmsｔomethatnoｑuicksoｌutioncanbeathandtｏtacklｅtheproｂlem,ｂuｔtｈegeneralawａｒenesｓofｔhesｉｇnｉficａnceoｆitｍigｈｔｂeｔhefirｓtｓteｐintheriｇhtdirｅctiontowaｒdｓｃｈａngｉngthｅsituaｔｉｏn.图表描述型常用句式开篇句型:１)Ａsｃanbesｅeｎfｒｏｍ/isshｏwnｉｎthechaｒt／pictuｒe/diagraｍ/gｒaｐｈ／tablｅ,＿__＿＿＿_____＿＿.2)Thｅｐｕｒpｏseｏfthｉsｃhａrt/piｃture/dｉａgｒａm/ｇrapｈ/tａbleiｓtoshowｔhat_＿＿＿_____＿____.3)Fromｔｈｅｃharｔ,ｗｅcａnseeinthｅsurｖey/poll,_＿＿＿_________＿__．４)Thebarchaｒtshowｓ／ｉndicateｓ/dｉｓplaｙｓ／ｒeflｅcｔｓ／reveaｌsthａｔ＿___＿_______＿.5）Ｉtisｃleaｒ/aｐpareｎtfrｏmｔhepiecｈartｔhat___＿____________.6）Aｃｃordｉnｇtｏthefigｕres／stａtistｉcs/ｄatagivenｉnｔheｃharｔ,___＿_＿__＿___________．描写数据的句型：1)Onthｅtｏpｏｆ/Aｔｔｈeboｔtoｍｏfthelisｔis＿__________,wｈichacｃｏｕntｓfoｒ/tａｋesｕｐ5０%．２)_＿_____＿iｓrankedfirst,ｆollｏweｄbｙ____＿_＿_＿at20％and_＿_______at1５%.3）Thefigurereａｃｈedtｈeｈighesｔ/loweｓｔpｏｉnｔin＿＿__＿______.4)Ｄuring２02３-20２3,ｔｈｅrewasasｕdden/rapid/ｄramatic/ｓｕbｓtａntiaｌ／sharp/consideｒableriseinthenuｍberｏf_________＿from＿_＿__＿＿_tｏ______＿_＿_.５）Theｔenｙeaｒsfｒom2023－2023witnessed/ｓawａsteaｄｙｇｒｏwthｏf_________＿_fｒom___＿＿＿_＿_ｔｏ＿_＿______．6）Thｅｎuｍber/ratｅｏｆ_＿_＿＿＿_ｗaｓａbout/apprｏximateｌｙ/alｍoｓtdouｂled/tripleｄ，asａgainｓt/ｃｏmpareｄwiththatiｎ２0２3.７)Ｔｈenuｍbeｒｏｆ__________iｎcreａsed/rosｅ/ｆｅlｌ/ｄroppｅd/deｃlined／ｄｅcｒｅａsｅdby1５%．8)Ｔhenumbｅｒof____＿_____＿ｉn202３waｓ3tiｍesｍｏrethanthaｔin2023.结论句型:1)Ｆｒomtheanａlｙsiｓａbove,wecaｎｃonclｕｄethat___＿____＿__＿.２)Fｒomtｈedaｔawegatheredfromtheaｂovechart,wｅｃａnreacｈtheconcluｓioｎthat＿______＿__.３)Ａccｏrdinｇtotheｉnｆormatiｏｎgａｔheredabｏvｅ,wｅmaycometｏthecｏncｌｕsionthaｔ___＿___＿__＿.４)Wｅcaｎdrawaconcｌｕｓｉｏnｆrｏmthｅabｏvethat＿___＿___＿___＿.5)Judｇｉngfromａllevｉdeｎceofferｅｄ,wｅｍayｒｅaｓonａｂly/safelyaｒrivｅatthecoｎclusｉｏｎtｈat＿______＿__＿_．6)Theａnaｌysiswehavemａdｅｃoｎｆｉｒms/ｓuｐｐortsｔhｅviewthａt____＿______.模版示例：Aｃcorｄiｎgtｏtｈechaｒt,aninvｅｓｔｉgatｉoncondｕｃtedbｙ_＿___＿_＿＿_indiｃaｔestｈａｔ＿___＿_＿_____hasｒｅacheｄ___＿＿__＿＿ｉｎtｈepast１0yｅaｒsｃomparedｗiｔｈ_＿__＿__＿____ｉｎ2023.Ｅｓpｅcialｌｙiｎrecenｔ３yeaｒs，thenumｂｅrrｏｓｅdｒamatｉcalｌyfrom______＿ｔo______＿.Inmyopinion,tｈeｒeａrｅaｔｌeastｔｈreereaｓｏnsfortheserｅｍａrｋａbｌechａngeｓ.Tobeginｗiｔｈ,＿_______＿___＿__＿＿＿．Seconｄly，＿_____＿_＿_________.Ｌaｓtly_＿＿＿_________．Alltｈｅsereｓultｉn_＿___＿___＿_____．Fｒoｍtheaｂovedisｃｕsｓiｏｎ，wehａvｅenoughrｅａｓontopredｉcｔｗhaｔwillｈａppenintheneaｒfｕtｕre.Thｅtrenｄinthechａrtｗｉllcoｎtｉｎuｅfoｒquｉtealｏngtimeandｗｅｃanｉmａgｉｎethaｔ＿_＿____＿__＿___＿__.【错误示例】四级应试作文可以没有什么华丽的词藻，但一定不能有严重的语言错误。作文评分标准注重语言的准确性,某些看似可原谅的错误累积起来也会直接影响最终得分。因此,考生在力所能及的范围内应尽也许地避免语言错误,拿到本该属于自己的分数。下面所选的语料均源于考生们在作文中中常犯的基本语言错误，望大家引认为戒。时态错[误］IstｕdiedEnｇｌishformoｒeｔｈａn1０ｙearｓ．[正］I’ｖebｅenｓｔudyｉngEnglisｈfoｒmoｒｅtｈaｎ１０ｙeaｒs.[误]Whｅｎｔheａcｃidenthappｅｎed，therewａsａｌmoｓtnoothercarsoｎtherｏad,ｓoｔhｅdriｖermuｓｔbedrunｋ.[正]Wheｎtｈeacｃideｎｔhaｐpｅｎed，thｅrｅwasalmoｓtnocaｒoｎtheｒoadaｔtｈetｉmｅ,sothedrｉvermustｈavebeendrunk．错误解析:随意使用时态,如将过去时与表达一段时间的词连用，或用现在时描述过去发生的事情，使得句意不合逻辑,令人费解。语态错[误]Shｅwasveryanｇｒyａtnｏtｔeｌlｉｎgtｈetｒutｈwheｎsｈｅｌiｓｔeｎeｄtｏhｉsaccoｕnｔ.[正]Shｅwａsｖerｙangryatｎotbeｉｎgｔｏlｄｔhｅtｒutｈｗhensheｌistｅｎｅｄtoｈisacｃount.[误]Ｔhebｏｏkhａsｔoｒeturnaｔthｅendoftheｗeeｋ.[正］Tｈebookhastｏｂereturｎedａttheenｄoｆthｅweek.错误解析:混淆被动语态和积极语态的使用。词性错[误]Fｒeｓhａirｉｓbenｅfｉttｏouｒｈeaｌth.[正]Freshairｉｓbenefiｃiａltｏｏurhealｔh．[误]Ｔｈeoldmanwaｓｋｎocｋeddｏwnｂyaｃaｒｗhenｈeaｃrosstheｓtｒeet.［正]Theoldｍanwasknocｋeｄdownｂyaｃarｗhenhewａscrossiｎgthｅstreet.错误解析:混淆词性。代词错［误]SolｏｎｇａsyoｕhaveｔheＩntｅrnｅｔａcｃeｓs,anyｏnｅcanreceiveedｕｃatiｏｎwhereｖerhｅｌivｅsin.[正]SoｌｏnｇasyoｕhavetheIｎteｒnetaccess,yｏucanｒｅcｅiveｅducatiｏｎｗhereｖeryｏulｉveｉn.[误]Ｉftheｈuｍansｗanｔtoleavｅａgoodiｍｐressiononothｅｒs,wｅ’dbeｔterfoｌlowｔheserules.[正]Ifthｅｈuｍanｓwanttｏleaｖｅaｇoodiｍpreｓsiｏnonotｈerｓ,tｈey’dbeｔtｅｒfｏlｌowtｈｅsｅｒｕｌeｓ.错误解析:代词指代不明或随意转换。介词错［误]Despitｅｏfadｖancedｙeaｒｓ,ｈeｉslｅarnｉngtｏｄrｉve.[正］Ｄesｐiｔeadvanceｄｙeaｒｓ，ｈeiｓleａrｎingtodrive.［误]Ｉnthｅotｈｅrｈaｎd,sｃｉenceａndｔechnｏloｇyｃanaｌsobriｎgaｂoutｓomedｉsastｅrs．[改]Oｎｔｈeoｔhｅrhand,sｃienceanｄtecｈnoloｇｙcａnａlsｏｂｒiｎgaboｕtsｏmedｉsasters.错误解析:介词或介词短语的搭配错误。比较级错[误]Withtｈeadｖａncementofｓciencｅandｔecｈｎology，Ibeliｅvethａtwewｉllｂecomemorｅandmoｒｅhaｐpier.[改]Withthｅａdvancｅmｅnｔｏfscienceandtecｈnology,Ibeliｅvethatwewｉllbecoｍeｈａｐpierａｎdhaｐｐier.[误]ChiｎaiｓｌａrgerｔｈatanyｃounｔryiｎＡsia.[改]ＣｈinaislargerthａnａｎyotｈercoｕnｔriesｉnAｓiａ.错误解析：反复使用比较级，或将主语含在比较对象中。从句错[误]Iｆanyｏｎewaｎtstogｏｂaｃktoａncienttｉｍes，ｗhichhaｄｎoelｅｃｔｒiｃity,clothａndroom，almoｓteverｙoneｗoｕldsayheiscrazy.[正］Ｉfａｎyoneｗanｔstｏgobａcktｏａｎcientｔiｍeｓ,inwhｉｃｈtｈerewasnoｅｌeｃtｒｉｃitｙ,clotｈorroom,aｌmoｓｔeverｙonewouldｓａｙｈeｉscrazｙ．[误］It’stｈemａjｏrｔhinｇaffecｔｓpeople’ｓfrieｎｄshｉp.［正］Ｉt’ｓｔheｍajｏrｔｈinｇtｈataffｅctspeoｐlｅ’sｆriendshｉp．错误解析:关系代(副）词漏用或误用。赘述句[误]Fｏrthepeopleｗhoarediｌigｅnt,moneyisｊusttｈetｈｉngtobeｕsｅdtｏbuythethｉngthｅynｅeｄ．[正]Dｉligｅntｐeoｐleｕsemｏneｙonlytobuｙwhatthｅｙｎｅeｄ．[误]Ｗehaｄasｅrioｕsｃrｉｓisaｔｓchoｏｌyesteｒｄａywhｅnourchemｉｓｔrylabｏｒatorycaughtfｉｒｅ.［误]Weｈadaｃrｉｓisatschooｌyeｓterdａｙwｈeｎｏurchｅmiｓtrylaｂｏrａtoｒｙcaｕｇｈｔｆiｒe.错误解析:表达不简洁，语意冗长累赘。悬垂句[误]Tｏｄoｗｅlｌiｎcｏlleｇｅ,ｇｏoｄｍarksareｅssｅntial.[正]Todowelliｎcｏｌlege,astｕdｅntnｅedsgoodmａrks．[误］Toｇeｔreａdｙforthetriｐ,allｔｈethｉngｓsheｎeededwereputintoaｓuitcase.[正]Toｇｅtreａdyfｏrthetrｉp,sheputaｌlｔhｅthiｎgsshenｅｅdedｉｎｔoasuiｔcase．错误解析:句首短语和后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。连动句［误]Therｅarｅsｏｍｅpeoplethinkoｎeshouldneverhesitatetosayno．[正］Therｅaｒeｓomeｐeopleｗｈoｔhinkthatoｎesｈouldneverｈeｓiｔaｔetosaynｏ．[误]Ｔｈｅmostｉmpoｒtrｅａｓoniｓtheyｌoｓttheiｒｓtuｆｆchosｅｔokeeｐsｉleｎt.[正]Themostimpｏrtrｅaｓoｎｉｓthaｔtｈosewｈｏlosttheirstｕffcｈosetokeepｓiｌent.错误解析:简朴句中连续使用两个或以上的谓语动词,如theｒebe句型后直接跟动词原形。破碎句［误］Thｅyoｂjecｔtocｈaｎgingjｏbfrequｅntlｙ.Ｂecausefreｑuentjoｂ-hoppingwillgonｏwhere.[正]Thｅｙｏｂjecttoｃhaｎgingjoｂfrｅquently,ｂecauseｆreｑuｅnｔjoｂ－hoｐｐiｎｇwillgonowｈere.［误]Bｕtcｌoneisalsoatwo－eｄgesｗord，ifｕsesiｍproperlywiｌlbeｄeｓtｒucｔivetohumａnbeiｎg．[正]Bｕtcloｎeisａlsｏａdouble-edｇｅdsword,whichmiｇｈｔbedｅstrｕcｔｉveｔoｈｕｍaｎbeingifusｅdimpｒopeｒly．错误解析:句子缺少主语或谓语，如用bｅcaｕsｅ引导独立句子等。流水句［误］Wｉththedｅvelopmeｎtofeconｏmy,tｈecosｔｏfacariｓｌowｅｒinｇdowninrecentyeａrs，manyｆamｉｌiｅscouldaffordapｒivａtｅcａr．[正]Withtheｄeｖelopmｅntｏｆeｃoｎomy,thｅcostofaｃaｒiｓlｏweｒingｄｏｗniｎｒecentyeａrssothaｔmａnyfamilｉｅscouldａffoｒdaｐrivaｔecaｒ.[误]Tｈerｅareｍaｎyboｏｋｓｐoｉsoｎｏustoourmind,wｅshｏuldnｏtreadthem.[正］Ｔheｒearｅｍａnｙｂｏokｓpoisonoustooｕrｍiｎｄ.Weshouldnotreaｄｔhem.错误解析:两个或以上的独立句子用逗号相连。汉式句[误］Ｔhemainreasonsｆｏｒthiscａrｃrashhaｖetｗoｐoiｎts．［正]Tｈereａｒeｔwomainreasonsｆoｒthiscaｒcrash.[误］Itmadｅmecａnnotｆorgetｍygrandｍothｅr．［正]Ｉｔｍaｄemeunaｂletofoｒgetmｙgrandmother.[误]Ａtcｏllｅge，ｗesｈouldleaｒnasmuchkｎｏｗleｄgeａspossibleｓothatwecanｂeweｌlpｒepａredfｏrourfutureｃareｅr.[正]Ａtｃollege,weshouｌdaｃquｉreasmuｃhknowlｅdｇeaspossｉblｅsｏtｈatwecanbewellprｅｐaｒｅｄforourfｕtｕrecaｒeｅr.[误]Leftaｌoｎｅiｎthejunglｅatniｇht,ｓhｅｆｅltｖeryｄangｅroｕs.［正]Leｆtaloｎeinthejｕngleatniｇht，ｓｈｅｆｅlttｔｈａtsｈewasinｇreatdangeｒ.错误解析:受汉语表达习惯影响而出现的不规范英语或不符合英语文化习惯的英语。过关练习A.观点对比型1．Diｒｅcｔionｓ：Fｏrthisparｔ,ｙｏｕarｅaｌｌowed3０miｎutesｔoｗriteacomposｉtioｎonthｅtｏpｉcShouldUnｉveｒsiｔiesLoweｒAdmissioｎＲeqｕirｅmｅntｓfｏrCｅlebritiｅs?Ｙｏｕsｈouldwrｉteａｔleast1２0ｗorｄｓ，aｎｄbaｓeyoｕｒcomｐosｉtionontheoutｌinｅ(gｉｖenｉnChineｓe)bｅloｗ:1)近年来很多大学减少标准招收名人学生2)人们对此现象见解不一3)你的观点【参考范文】ShouldＵｎivｅrsitiesＬoｗerAdｍissiｏｎＲequireｍentsforCeｌebrｉties？Ｎoｗadayｓ,thｅrearｅｍoreanｄｍoｒｅｕnｉversｉtiｅsｌoｗeriｎgadmissｉonrequireｍeｎtsfoｒceleｂｒities．Maｎyｃelebｒｉtiｅs，eｓpeciallysportsstars，ｈａｖｅbeenaｄｍittｅｄtｏrenowneduniverｓiｔiｅseｖｅnwiｔhoutaｎentｒancｅexａminatiｏn.Thｉsphenｏmeｎonｈasarousedwidespreadcontroveｒsy.

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