GRE写作的黄金定律

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GRE写作的黄金定律

新GRE写作定律之一：清楚

文章的清楚体现在读者能够很简单理解叙述的内容。为保证所写文章清楚明白，写作时有两点肯定要加以留意：

一是越准确详细越好。在这一方面，首先应明确了解自己所要传达的信息、读者的范围及特点，然后再选择相关信息，采纳某种文体格式传递给读者。也就是说，写作必需要以特定读者为对象，以让读者能够明确接受所传递的信息为宗旨。尽量以客观陈述为主，少主观臆测推断;尽量明确无误表达，少模棱两可评论，这是使文章清楚准确的写作准则。

二是组织结构富有规律性。文章结构富规律性会让读者很轻松地读懂要表达的思想内容。文章的这种规律性可以通过采纳从一般到详细、从“全景”到细节、从问题的定义到分析再到提出解决方案等多种方式来体现。

新GRE写作定律之二：精确

要使文章语义表达精确，首先要尽量不要在学术文章中消失“也许、或许”之类模棱两可的词语，避开消失简单让人困惑和误会的词语和表达法;其次，要尽量避开使用那些有多种含义的词语和表达法。例如：Singaporeisafinecountry这句话中的fine一词有多种含义，如“好的、细小的、罚款”等。日常生活中这样使用没有问题，但在写作时肯定要避开使用这种简单产生歧义的多义词。

新GRE写作定律之三：简洁

直截了当、切中要点是保证文章简洁的最好写作形式。与中文写作相比，英文写作特别强调直奔主题、简洁明快的写作风格。例如，在写作一个段落时，经常将概括段落主要内容的主题句(topicsentence)作为段落的首句，以便让读者快速明确本段要叙述的内容。另外，写作时尽量将每个句子写得简短一些，少用或不用冗长的复合句。切记：短小精练的句子表达的意思才强而有力。

GREissue写作优秀实例：技术进步之社会影响

题目：

Technologiesnotonlyinfluencebutactuallydeterminesocialcustomsandethics.

技术不仅仅影响而且实际上是打算了社会传统和道德规范。

正文：

Takingabriefglanceathistoryofhumanexistence,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthattechnology,definedastheapplicationofscienceandknowledge,hasplayedanimportantroleinbringingtransformationandimprovementtosociety.Iagreewiththeabovesayinginthetopicthattechnologyshouldberegardedasadeterminativefactorwhichnotonlyinfluencesbutalso,andmoreimportantly,determinesthesocialcustomandethics.

People,generallyspeaking,wouldnotdoubttheperspectivethattechnologyexercisesenormousinfluenceonthecustomandethicsofmankind.BeforetheIndustrialRevolution,womeninBritainwerenotallowedtoworkoutsideapartfromsomecomparativelyenlightenedplaces;yetwavesofwomenwentintospinneriesascottonspinnerafterthejennywereuniversallyutilizedaroundEurope.ThereasonwhyfactoriespreferredwomenratherthanmenintheIndustrialRevolutionliesinthedevelopmentoftechnology,whichdecreasedthephysicalweaknessofwomen,raisedthesocialawarenessoftheadvantageofwomenworkersuchasmorecarefulnessandpatience,changedthetraditionalindustrialconfigurationintheproportionoffemalesandmales,thereforetransformedtheclichebanofwomensoutsideworking.Sameanalysiscouldbeappliedonfeminismcampaign.Withthepurposeofsexualequalityandpersonalityliberation,feminismcampaignisbasedonthedevelopmentandbettermentoftheequipmentfromthispointofview.Inaword,allthesechangesinsocialcustomandethicsowetothedevelopmentoftechnology.

Butwhy,someonemayask,shouldtechnologybementionedasthedeterminatefactor,notmerelyaninfectiveingredient?Theanswercomesfromthedifferencebetweenquantityofeffectsthatinfluenceanddeterminationseparatelyraise.Asdictionaryrefers,theeffectofinfluenceisindirectandcomparativelyweaker;whilethatofdeterminationisdirect,basicandstrong.Fromtheexamplesgivenintheaboveparagraph,agreementmaynotbedifficulttoreachthattheimpactoftechnologyonsocialcustomisdirectandenormous.Withouttechnologyinmedical,peopletodaymightstillholdthebeliefthatspreadofplagueisthepunishmentfromGodandthesickareunforgivablesinners;inindustry,thepopularconceptofglobalvillageandthesocialconsciousnessofracialequalitymightneverexist;insociology,womencannotgettheopportunitytorealizetheirownvaluesasanindependentindividualthroughworking.Tosumup,technologyisthedeterminativefactortochangethesocialcustomandethics.

However,questionmaystillberaisedwhyitisthetechnologydeterminesthesocialcustomandethics,ratherthanhumanbeingsorotherfactors.Admittedly,itseemsmuchmoreofsensethathumanbeingsmakethesocialcustomandethicsbythemselves.Butitdoesnotimplythathumanbeingsdeterminethetrendofsocialcustom,sincetheformationofasocialcustomandaprincipleofethicsisbasedontheleveloftechnologyatthattimebywhichmajorityofpeoplecanmeasurewhatcanbedonewhileotherscannot.Admittedly,oftenhumanactivitiessuchasRenaissanceandWorldWar2seemtoinfluencethesocialcustommoreobviouslyandtoagreaterextentthantechnologydoes.Butwhenconsideringwhysuchactivitieshappenedonaspecifictimeinaspecificplace,onestillhavetoturntotechnologyforfurtherunderstanding.Thus,thesocialcustomactuallyshouldberegardedasfruits,ifthehumanactivitiesaretakenastrunk;technologyshouldbeconsideredastherootsofthetreewhichdeterminewhetherthetreecanliveandwhatitcanproduce.

Infact,socialcustomandethicsfeedbackwiththedevelopmentoftechnology,resultingineitherpromotionorrestriction.Foraninstance,acquirementforlongerlifenowadaysisanincreasinglypopularsocialcustom.Thischallengesthemedicaltechnologyatpresent,thusstimulatestheresearcherstospeeduptheirdiscoveryfornewmedicaltreatment.Humancloning,foranotherinstance,islegallyabandonedinmanycountriesduetothediscordancewiththeethnicsofsocietytoday.Thereforethefurtherdevelopmentofcloningtechnologyinmanycountriesalmosthalts.Theinfluenceofsocialcustomandethicsontechnologycannotbeignored.

Inconclusion,thisissueassertsthatthetechnologyinfluencesthesocialcustomandethicssomarkedlythatcanberegardedasadeterminativefactor.Meanwhile,thesocialcustomandethicscanreflectfeedbacktowardtechnology.Technologycanbemetaphorizedintoaflowingriver,whilethesocialcustomandethicsintothebanks,onwhichpreserveshumancivilizationandcultures.Theriverdeterminesthepositionofbanks;whilethebankscontrolthedirectionofflow.

GREissue写作优秀实例：国家领土

题目：

Governmentshouldpreservepubliclyownedwildernessareasintheirnaturalstate,eventhoughtheseareasareoftenextremelyremoteandthusaccessibletoonlyafewpeople.

政府应当保留国家领土中公共拥有的荒芜地区，即使这些地区往往人迹罕至。

正文：

Conflictsbetweenprolonginghumanexistenceandsolvingcurrentsocietalproblemlieingovernmentalissuesconsistently.Inordertokeepbiologicaldiversityandnaturalbalance,itplacesemphasisonenvironmentalpreservationwhichincludesissuesonwildernessareas.InsofarasprotectingsuchareaspermitsamorecomfortablesurvivalofoffspringIconcedethenecessityofpreservation.However,whenthenationisshortofeconomicalandpoliticalself-sufficientabilityandcurrentissuesaboundinnumber,governmentwouldsethigherprioritytoathandproblems.

Preservationofwildernessareasconductedbygovernmentassuresaneffectivemethodofprovidingdescendantsaccesstocomfortableprospectivenaturesystem.Creatures,directlyorindirectlyinstrumentalforpeople,sufferedfromanescalatedscaleofextinctionasaresultofhumanindustrialization.Moreover,alongwithrapidlyaccruingpopulation,startlingdevelopingtechnologiesand,perhapsmostimportantofall,continuouslyinflatinghumandesirethesizeandamountsofsuchareasshrankgravelyoverperiods.Graduallyappearingphenomenarevealedthreatsofdisastrousconsequencestomorrow.ScarcityofplantswithphotosynthesismechanismincreaseCO2inatmosphereandthereforeresultinginglobalwarmingtrendswhichmoltenseaicetowaterandhasinundatedsomeoftheterritory,forexample.Awarenessofsomepeopleintheleadingpositioncallsforgovernmentalpoliciesthatprotectenvironmentfrombeingexcessivelytrampledbyhumanbehavior.Toprotectwildernessareasbyforcesofgovernmentisoneoftheavailableandeffectivemeasures.Creaturestherecouldaffordafreelandscapeandsecuresurroundingtogrowandrearoffspring.Possibly,certainkindsofrarespecieswouldbepreservedfromextinction.

However,agovernmenttakesresponsibilitiesnotprimarilyforthemoraljusticebutforwell-beingofpopulaceandstrengthofthenationasawhole.Oncetheprotectionofsuchareasrequiretoomucheconomicalorpersonnelsupport,thepriorityneedsconfirmation.Resourcesofanygovernmentarelimited,anddeficitoccursfrequentlyevenifitplaceslittleemphasisonsuchrelativelymarginalissues.Thisdoesnotentaileschewingfromaccountabilityfordestinyofprospectivecitizensorhumanbeingsaltogether.Itmeansconcernforbeingresponsibleforitslivingresidentstoguaranteetheadventofprospectivesociety.Canapopulationwhichsufferedandissufferingfrommassstarvation,unemploymentanddestructivewarfarebutfocusedonsymbiosisrelationshipwithotherspeciesexistlong?Inthissense,humanneedstobesomewhatselfishratherthancompletelygenerousattheriskofselfsacrificing.

Grantedthatpreservationofwildernessareasvalidateinallowingbiologicaldiversityandbetternaturalenvironmentalsituationforourprogeny,itislikelythatwecannotsatisfytheminlightofthedeclineinhumanevolution.HadourpredecessorsintensivelyfocusedinpreservationanddistributedmuchmorefinancialbudgetstotheseareasratherthantheydidexploitAlaskaforpetroleum,wewouldnotreproducesomanyinstrumentsthatfacilitateusindailylifeandcommunicationandmakerealizationofgeneticstructureinourselvespossible.Suchcaseholdstruetowhomliveafterus.Althoughbyconcentratingmoreontechnologicalandeconomicaldevelopmentharmsenvironmentinfuture,wemayhaveworkedoutsolutionssuchascloningdisappearedspecies,recreatingadaptableclimateandcolonizingtootherplanets.Afterall,purposesofallpolicies,nomatterprotectingtheenvironmentorreinforcingeconomicalandtechnologicalstrength,serveultimatelytothewell