雅思剑7小作文范文

经典word整理文档，仅参考，双击此处可删除页眉页脚。本资料属于网络整理，如有侵权，请联系删除，谢谢！7求大神改一改我的雅思作文,剑桥7t1的小作文Thistableillustratesthe[data](normallywesayillustratethechangesorthesituation,orshowyouthedata)ofconsumersspendingonvariousitemsin[thefollowingfivecountries,](omitthem!)Ireland,Italy,Spain,SwedenandTurkeyin2002.Accordingtothetable,it'sobviousthatIrelandandand(!)Turkeyspent(I'dratheruseaccountfor)the[most](highest)percentageofmoney,[while](with)28.91%forIrelandand32.14%forTurkey,onfood,drinksandtobacco.Theother3countrieshad[similar](nearlyeven.Heresimilarwillraiseconfusion.)percentageatanaverageofnearly17%,whichisfarlowerthan(thatof)thepreviouscountries.ThenintheitemofclothingandfootwearItalystoodoutwitha9%andtherestofthecountriesrangefrom5%to7%.[Differentfrom](incontrastwith)theformer2items,[countries](thecountries')spendingdidn'tvarytoomuchfromeachotherintheitemofleisureandeducation.Italywentto4.35%andSpainsitat1.98%.[Everycountryhasitsuniquewayoflife](It'sthepeoplenotthecountrythathavetheirwayoflife.I'drathersayPeopleindifferentcountrieshavedifferentlifestyles.).Wecanjudgethemonlythroughconsumersspending[,but](.But)1itmaybebetterif[we](they)spendmoremoneyoneducationandleisure.注：中括号里的内容是觉得有问题的部分，之后括号内的内容是给出的替换.时间关系只能说这么多了，盼望能帮到你.。【关于剑7作文的参考价值本人11月将烤鸭,最近次要看写作.都说剑我建议你不要一上来就看剑LZ应当去买本稍廉价的剑4来做或者更廉价的剑剑7确2确的意思，这是一个好句型的标准，然而范文究竟很少，范文的思路来制造本人的文字.其实不管你要考多少分，实在的讲剑系列这套书就足够了，能把这套书消化好，多少分都没有问题。剑桥雅思7test1表格作文,盼望高手予以批改,20分不多,但保证送出Thedataindicatesthatconsumerspendingondifferentitemsfromfivedifferentcountriesin2002,includingIreland,Italy,Spain,Sweden,andTurkey.ThefirstsectionconsistsofFood,Drinks,andTobacco.Specially,Turkeyisaccountedin32.14%andTurkeyspendsmoremoneyonFood,Drinks,Tocbaccothanothercountries.ThestatisticsfromItaly,Spain,andSwedenweresimilarinthefirstsection.Accrodingtothedata,thesecondsectionismadeupofClothingandFootwear.9%fromItalyisthehighestpercentageandthelowestpercentageisSweden.ThethirdsectionisLeisureandEducation.ThepercentageofItalyandSwedenare3.20%and3.22%.TurkeyspendsmoneyonLeisureandEducationis4.35%whichisthehighestpercentageinthethirdsection.Asthetableshown,mostpeoplewouldliketospendmoremoneyonFood,Drinks,andTobaccoandspendlessmoneyonLeisureand3Education.修改完毕！请LZ给分吧⊙﹏⊙。剑7test1小作文求修改Thegraphicinformationinthetableshowshowtheconsumersspendtheirmoneybetweendifferentitems,inthefollowingfivecountriesby2002:Ireland,Italy,Spain,SwedenandTurkey.Accordingtothetable,mostofthepeopleinIrelandandTurkeyweremorelikelytospendtheirmoneyonfood,drinksandtobacco.ForIrelandandTurkey,thepercentageofthemoneyspendwere28.91%and32.14%,buttheotherthreecountriesincomparisonhadapercentagethatwasrelativelylow,whichwasatanaverageof17%orso.However,theconsumerexpenditureforclothingandfootwearinItalywerethehighest,whichwasaround9.00%.Still,there'snodoubtthatSpainwasthecountrywiththelowestpercentagefornationalconsumerexpenditureofleisureandeducationthatwasonly1.98%;whileTurkey,wasmorethantwiceofwhatSpainhad.Yet,thecostforleisureandeducationinIreland,ItalyandSweden,accordingtothedata,wereat2.21%,3.2%and3.22%.Inconclusion,consumersinTurkeywerepreferredtopourtheirmoneyintobothFood/Drinks/TobaccoandLeisure/Education,asagainstthehighestconsumerexpenditureinotherEuropecountrieswas4一下，这样读起来比较顺口，还有你那个Food/Drinks/Tobacco和逗号，而且也不要大写。我30号考雅思,很担忧小作文,写了一篇剑桥雅思7上的,考过的前1.请检查拼写和谓语动词搭配2.文章结构很好，个别句子可删减3.过去的数据用过去时，检查时态4.更多体现饼图percentage的特征5.更多的比较，不是只做数据陈设6.最好留意英式拼写与美式拼写的不同以下是修改过的，不肯定全对。我也看过范文，觉得语言和写作风格能学习，但是规律结构每个要面面俱到，语言不用很简单都可以。修改后共219，考场上还是简单写够的。Thefollowingchartsillustratethefuelsourcescontaininunitsofelectricityfortwocountries–AustraliaandFrance.Bothofwhichwere,beyonddoubt,thetotalproductionsofelectricityclimbedupdramaticallyfrom1980to2000.Specifically,thefigureofAustraliaincreasedfrom100to170units,andforFrance,itshowedadoublegrowthfrom90to180units.InAustralia,bytheyear1980,coalmadeagreatcontributiontothefuel5productionwith50%,anditkepttheleadingpositionin2000,holdingapproximately75%.Similarly,thehydropowerincreasedslightlyfrom20to36units.Whilebothnaturalgasandoilexperienceddeclinesfrom20and10unitstoonly2unitsrespectively.IncomparisonofFrance,however,thehydropowerdroppedfrom5to2unitsbeingtheminorsource,whilsttheoilascendedfrom20to25units.Itisnotablethatcoalandnaturalgaswerethemainelectricitysourcesin1980,withthesamefigureof25%.Specially,thenuclearpower,whichwasnotusedatallinAustralia,hadasteadyraisefrom15to126unitsofelectricity,rankingthefirstamongallelements.Overall,itisclearthatby2000thesetwocountriesreliedondifferentprincipalfuelsources:AustraliareliedoncoalandFrancereliedonnuclear这个是剑桥7test4的小作文,请大家帮忙改一下,感谢啦Thegivenpiechartsillustrateunitesofelectricityproductionbyfuelscore(coal,oil,naturalgas,hydropowerandnuclearpower)inAustraliaandFrancein1980and2000.这里没能完全描述出图表的次要特征。且首段过于简洁，记住首段是面子，肯定要写的美丽。Ascanbeseenfromthesecharts,theunitsofelectricitybydifferent6categoriesoffuelwerevariousintwocountriesinthedifferentyears.Specifically,in1980,approximatelyhalfoftheelectricityunitswereproducedbycoal,whichsharedthesameproductionwithnaturalgas(only25units)inFrance.Theelectricityunits/deleteproductionbynaturalgaswere20unitsinAustralia.Intermsof//用词不精确，和后byoilandhydropower,theunitsofelectricityproducedbyhydropowerwere20units,whichwerefourtimes/加greater/thanthoseinFrance,however,only10unitsofelectricityweremade/generatedbyoilinAustralia,whichwerehalfofthoseinFrance.Tooursurprise,nuclearpowermade15unitsofelectricityinFranceandnoneofany/theotherscontributed/asmuchtotheelectricity/powersupplyinFrance.In2002,themajorityof//不能这样用electricitywasproduce/dbycoal(130units)inAustralia,whichstillmadethesamequantity/units/删掉（25units）inFrance.Clearly,thedominantproductionofelectricitywasbynuclearpowerinFrancewiththeamountof126units.Naturalgasandoilproducedvery书面语少用very//electricity(only2units)inAustralia.TheFrancehadthe/asimilarquantitybynaturalgasandhydropower.Overall,thesefiguresleadusto/the/conclusionthat7coalisthemajorsourcetoproduceelectricityinAustraliawhilenuclearpowerplayedasignificantroleinproductionofelectricityinFrance.我始终不晓得小作文要怎样才能进步，每次25请各位指点一下我，该怎样在不到一个月的时间内提高小作文。如何避开在把信息点都描述清晰后字数不会超。表作文的套话，或者说写作模板预备不够，其次，对小作文的要求理解不到位，当然也有可能是你对如何抓住图表的mainfeatures的技像我们的宏大祖国一样，大而漏洞百出问题多多。小作文就是要求短小精悍，150词能处理就不需要200或更多。多了反而更简单出错，所谓言多必失。针对这样的问题，你可以首先多看些小作文的范文，把握一些通要特征进行描述就好，无需太过在意次要细节。拿高分，完全不需要描述全部的信息点。这个文章抓住电力增长很快，同时澳洲次要靠煤，法国次要靠核能这两个点就好了。假如你不确定是不是看图分析力量还不够的话，8提下能否完成了描述图表次要特征的任务。假如没有，那你首先要考虑提高看图力量。信任在你理解了小作文的得分点和技巧后，会很快上手的。剑7雅思英语作文,高分求修改看法,不剩感谢都足够8分水平，应当已经足够了吧简洁提些小看法，仅供参考，有些纯粹是个人说话习惯，人跟人也有分别，大可看看而已2.开场白，两方论点，总结，条理清楚明白3.句法严禁，语法普遍精确缺点1.某些地方仍旧有中式思维的残留，只挑一个例子来说We,humanbeings,havemercyonthesekindsofcrimesandeveryonecouldunderstandandallowcertainvariationsexisting.9allowcertainvariationsexisting明显是“允许一些