【高中英语读后续写】情感描写

第五部分写作第三节读后续写：具象描写突破五、情感描写（一）“感到开心happy”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：当妈妈亲吻他时，他开心极了。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,hewascheerful.具象描写1：当妈妈亲吻他时，他开心极了，似乎他是在世界上最开心的人。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,hewasfullofjoyasifhe

werethehappiestpersonintheworld.具象描写2：当妈妈亲吻他时，他开心极了，脸上堆满笑容，灿烂的笑容照亮了整个房间。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：当妈妈亲吻他时，他开心极了，欢欣雀跃地跳起舞来。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,hewascheerfulthathisface

beamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.Whenthemotherkissedhimonthecheek,

hewascheerfulanddancedwithjoyandsweetness.2.概括描写：他被这个表演逗乐了。Hewasamusedbytheperformance.具象描写1：看了这个表演，他笑得合不拢嘴。(face)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写2：看了这个表演，他咯咯地笑着，兴奋得尖叫起来。(voice)________________________________________________________________________________(face)Afterwatchingtheperformance,hissmilebroadenedfromeartoear.(voice)Afterwatchingtheperformance,hegiggledandsquealedwithexcitement.具象描写3：看了这个表演，他拍了拍手，高兴得跳上跳下。(body)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(body)Afterwatchingtheperformance,heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.（二）“感到满意satisfied”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：他看着我，满意地笑了。Helookedatmeandsmiledwithsatisfaction.具象描写1：他看着我，满意地笑了，比我期望的要多。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写2：他看到我把任务完成了，满意地笑了。________________________________________________________________________________Helookedatmeandsmiledwithsatisfaction.ThatwouldbemorethanIhaveexpected.Seeingmytaskfinishedgavehimasenseofsatisfaction.具象描写3：他满意地笑了，拍了拍我的肩膀，说：“好样的！”________________________________________________________________________________Hesmiledwithsatisfaction,pattingmeontheshoulderandsaid,“goodjob!”（三）“感到兴奋thrilled”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.具象描写1：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了，不知道该说什么好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描写2：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋得心怦怦直跳。___________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltsothrilledthat

shedidn’t

know

what

to

say.具象描写2：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋得心怦怦直跳。________________________________________________________________________________Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.（四）“感动moved”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：听了这故事，她非常感动。Shewasmuch

moved

atthestory.具象描写1：听了这故事，她感动得一句话都说不出来。________________________________________________________________________________Shewastoomovedatthestorytospeakaword.具象描写2：听了这故事，她感动得哭了，一句话也没说。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：听了这故事，她太感动了，以致于眼眶中充满泪水。________________________________________________________________________________Movedtotearsatthestory,shefailedtoutteraword.Shewassotouchedatthestorythathereyeswerefulloftears.（五）“感到希望hopeful”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：我再次充满自信和希望。Iamfullofconfidenceandhopeagain.具象描写1：有时，当我坐下来举头看一看，内心再次充满自信和希望。________________________________________________________________________________SometimeswhenIsitaroundandlookup,Iamfullofconfidenceandhopeagain.具象描写2：展望明天，我们共创美好未来。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：但当我站在匹兹堡，我对未来充满了希望。________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtotomorrow,wewillcreateabetterfuturetogether.ButbeinghereinPittsburgh,I’mhopefulaboutthefuture.（六）“感到悲伤sad”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.具象描写1：一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已，默默地站在那里，眼泪顺着脸颊往下流。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Uponhearingthebadnews,

shefeltextremelysadandstoodtheresilently,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.具象描写2：一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已，大哭起来，跑出了房间。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已，抽泣着，双手捂着脸。________________________________________________________________________________Uponhearingthebadnews,

shefeltextremelysad,burstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.Uponhearingthebadnews,

shefeltextremelysadandsobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.（七）“感到生气angry”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：Sheldon听了我的话很生气。Sheldonfeltveryangryatmywords.具象描写1：Sheldon听了我的话很生气，他用灼热的目光怒视着我。________________________________________________________________________________Sheldonfeltveryangryatmywordsandheglaredatmewithburningeyes.具象描写2：Sheldon听了我的话很生气，气得冲出房间，狠狠地摔门而去。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：Sheldon听了我的话很生气，气得说不出话来。________________________________________________________________________________Sheldonfeltsoangryatmywordsthathe

stormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.

Filledwithanger/furyatmywords,Sheldonwas

unableto

utterasingleword.2.概括描写：她对我说的话很是生气。ShewasveryangryatwhatIsaid.具象描写1：她的脸颊变红了，眉毛也缩了起来。(face)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写2：她咬牙切齿向我咆哮。(voice)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：她握紧拳头，揣在身体两侧，使劲地蹬脚。(body)________________________________________________________________________________(face)Hercheeksturnedredandhereyebrowsnarrowed.(voice)Shegrowledatmethroughclenchedteeth.(body)Sheclenchedherfists,jammingthemintohersidesandstampedherfeetheavily.（八）“感到担忧worried”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：他一直担心英语考试。HehasbeenworriedabouttheEnglishtest.具象描写1：他看完英语试卷，愁眉不展地抬起头来。________________________________________________________________________________AfterreadingtheEnglishtestpaper,heraisedhisheadwithaworriedfrown.具象描写2：他为英语考试紧张得半宿都没睡着，忧心忡忡。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：面对英语考试，他表面上很镇静，内心却十分担忧。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HewassonervousabouttheEnglishtestthathelayawakehalfthenight,worrying.FacingtheEnglishtest,hehadanoutwardappearanceofcalm,butdeepdownhewasreallyworried.（九）“感到害怕frightened”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：一看到狼，Mac害怕极了。（2017年浙江高考卷）Atthesightofthewolf,Macfeltveryscared.具象描写1：一看到那只凶恶的狼，Mac吓得嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macfeltsoscaredthat

histhroattightenedandhiskneesfelt

weak.具象描写2：一看到那只凶恶的狼，Mac吓呆了，不敢动弹。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：一看到那只凶恶的狼，Mac有一种强烈的恐惧感，手掌都在冒汗，心怦怦直跳。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Macwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror,hispalmssweatingandhisheartpoundingwildly.（十）“感到绝望hopeless”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：Tony感到很绝望。Tonyfelthopeless/desperate.具象描写1：Tony感到很绝望，慢慢抽泣起来。________________________________________________________________________________Tonyfelthopeless/desperateandsobbedslowly.具象描写2：Tony感到很绝望，觉得上帝把他遗弃在世界的一个角落里。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：听到这个消息，Tony托尼非常绝望，他把悲伤淹没在酒里。________________________________________________________________________________Tonyfeltsohopeless/desperatethathefeltGodabandonedhimatonecorneroftheworld.Hearingthenews,sodesperatewasTonythathedrownedsadnessinwine.（十一）“感到震惊shocked”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：她吃惊地看了他一眼。Shegavehimashockedlook.具象描写1：她眼睛瞪得大大的，吃惊地盯着他。________________________________________Hereyeswidenedandstaredathiminshock.（十一）“感到震惊shocked”的具象描写练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：Shegavehimashockedlook.她吃惊地看了他一眼。具象描写1：她眼睛瞪得大大的，吃惊地盯着他。________________________________________