高中英语写作扩句

扩句的方法在学习扩句法从前，先对学生进展五个简单句句型，并列句和复合句的专项训练，打好基础。扩句是在根本句型的根底上，增加各种修饰成分，使句子获取扩展，即依据表达的需求增加定语，状语，同位语等成分，也许举例子增补细节内容，也许增加谚语俗语等。1.WearrivedinSanya.-----WearrivedinSanya,happilyandexcitedly.(

增加副词)2.Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates.------Iliketomakefriendswithmyclassmates,whohavethesameinterestasmine.(增加定语从句)3.Wewerehappyandreturnedhome.-------Wewerehappyandreturnedhomeafterwehadfinishedcollectingalltherubbish.(增加状语从句)4.Ilikereadingbooks.-------Ilikereadingbooks,suchasnovels,shortstories,magazinesandnewspapers.(经过举例增补细节)5.Weshouldstudyhard.--------Asweallknow,“Practicemakesperfect〞.Soweshouldstudyhard.〔增加谚语〕6.Ioftenjoininmanyactivities.--------Ioftenjoininmanyactivitiesinordercommunicatewithotherstudentsandbroadenmymind.(

to添加目的状语

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详细应用试题要求：假设你是一名中学生，请以Mycolorfulschoollife为题，写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。重点提示：1：上课认真听讲2：课后完成作业3：常常参加体育锻炼4：去图书室阅读I’mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI’mstudyingfor.Ihavebeenworkinghard._______________________________________________________________________________Maytherealwaysbecolorfullifearoundmyschool.学生的习作：I’mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI’mstudyingfor.Ihavebeenworkinghard.Ilistentotheteachercarefully.Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass.Ioftentakeexercise.Ioftenreadintheschoollibrary.Maytherealwaysbecolorfullifearoundmyschool.评论：该学生能完满的写出各个重点，没有出现太大的语法错误，表达通畅，单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够，没有到达100个字左右，字数不够是很多学生面对的共同问题。其次，句子的表达过于平凡无奇，没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇，固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。并且，没有使用连接词，上下文的连接不够顺畅。改良方法：步骤一：列重点把要写的内容重点化，做到重点齐全。Listentotheteachercarefullyfinishmyhomework3:takepartinexercise4:oftenreadinthelibrary步骤二：造简单句充分利用五个简单句句型对各个重点进展增补，使其变为一个完满的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完满性，语法能否正确，说法能否吻合英语表达习惯。Ilistentotheteachercarefullyintheclass.Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass.Ioftentakepartinexercisewithmyclassmates.Idosomereadingintheschoollibrary.步骤三：扩展句子1:IlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclasssothatIcanunderstandwhattheteacherssay.(增加目的状语从句)Ifinishmyhomeworkafterclass,whichisapieceofcakeforme.〔增加定语从句〕Ioftentakepartinexercisewithmyclassmates,suchasplayingfootball,goingswimmingandplayingbadmintonetc.〔举例说明〕IoftendosomereadingintheschoollibrarywhenIhavenothingtodoafterclass.〔增加时间状语从句〕步骤四：润饰句子依据高考〔海南〕英语作文评分细那么，第五档的要求：24-25分，最少有3个复杂句，2种从句形式，语气自然，敬语得体，无中式英语，语言根本功扎实，词汇丰富。这就要求我们在谴词造句方面下时间。“润饰句子包含词语的选择与句型的运用。〞比方可以用高级词汇，短语和固定搭配来交换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式，倒装句，it当形式主语和形式宾语，非谓语动词等，使用多种句式，使其多样化。ItisnecessaryformetolistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclasssothatIcanunderstandwhattheteacherssay.(把第一句换成it当形式主语的用法，使句式多样化。)2:Itakehomeworkseriouslyandfinishitintime,whichisapieceofcakeforme.(增加了takeseriously和intime两个短语，是句子更加生动)3:Inordertostrengthenmybody,Ioftentakepartindifferentkindsofexerciseswithmyclassmates,suchasplayingfootall,goingswimmingandplayingbadmintonetc.〔增加了inordertodosth目的状语和differentkindsof使句子的意思更完满。〕Interestedinreadingbooks,Idevelopthehabitofgoingtothelibraryanddosomereadingonmyfavouritebooks.〔使用过去分词短语当状语，再增加短语developthehabbitof使文章增加亮点〕步骤五：连句成篇“过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用，

它好似一座桥梁，能将全文各句有机地联系在一起，从而使句子不再是孤立的独立的个体。〞使用表示转折，并列，递进，因果关系等连词把句子连接起来，“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文构造紧凑〞使上下文更加通畅，逻辑性更强。I’mahighschoolstudentandIunderstandwhatI’mstudyingfor.Ihavebeenworkinghard.〔原文已给〕Firstofall(过渡词),itisnecessaryformetolistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclasssothatIcanunderstandwhattheteacherssay.What’smore(过渡词),Itakehomeworkseriouslyandfinishitintime,whichisapieceofcakeforme.Inaddition(过渡词),Inordertostrengthenmybody,Ioftentakepartindifferentkindsofexerciseswithmyclassmates,suchasplayingfootall,goingswimmingandplayingbadmintonetc.Finally(过渡词),Interestedinreadingbooks,Idevelopthehabitofgoin