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IELTSWritingTask2Daisy,DINGSessionTask2Essay(250精简分类

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WordChoiceenjoy/embracehighpopularityplishbehappytoget Opinion+Step2:SupportingDetailsThesechangesperhapsofferpeopletheopportunitytobroadentheirsight,accumulateexperiencesandemoreOpinion+Step2:SupportingDetailsdifferentbackgrounds.Opinion+Step2:SupportingDetailsdifferentbackgrounds.SentenceImprov.Acraftsman,ifhemeanstodotheworkwell,mustfirstsharpenthetools.一、删从句主语，改谓语动词为分词（介词短语、形容词Acraftsman,ifattemptingtodotheworkwell,mustfirstsharpenthetools.SinceinShanghaiweneedto形容词IfhandsomehewillOpinion+Step2:SupportingSentencesdifferentbackgrounds.[66Body:Opinion+Thebenefitsofmovingtonew cesorchangingcareerscannotbeignored.Thesechangeswillperhapsofferpeopletheopportunitytobroadentheirview,accumulateexperiencesand emoresophisticatedinlife.Manypeoplehavesuchexperienceintheirteensthattherewereoneortwotransferredstudentsintheclass.Thesestudentswerenotonlyusuallyadmiredfortheirfirst-handknowledgeaboutothercitiesorevenforeigncountries,butalsoevenenviedwhenreceivinglettersandpostcardsfromtheirfriendsfaraway.Moreover,